高考英语一轮复习高分突破练习专题43 应用文写作之咨询信和推荐信（含解析）

专题43 应用文写作之咨询信和推荐信

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第一部分：说明写信的目的

套语：

(1) 我是……，暑期计划到贵校学习。

I am …and planning to study in your university this summer.

(2) 我是一名中国学生，想到贵校学习。我计划下个学期开始上课，如果您能告知一些必要的信息，我将不胜感激。

I am a Chinese student who wishes to study at your university. I will start my course from the next term, and I would be grateful if it’s so kind of you to give me some essential information.

(3) 我写信是要询问……

I’m writing to ask if …

第二部分：介绍背景

套语：

(1) 我获得……高校的……学士学位。毕业后便开始在……工作。

I received a bachelor’s degree in…After graduation, I began working….

(2) 是我的朋友建议我写这封信的。他去年毕业于贵校，热情地向我推荐贵校。

I am writing at the suggestion of a friend who graduated from your university last year and has warmly recommended it to me.

(3) 我已经取得了生物学学士学位，并希望能在贵校继续学习。

I have had a bachelor’s degree in biology and wish to continue my study at your university.

第三部分：询问详情

套语：

(1) 您能向我介绍一下贵校的……情况吗？

Could you please tell me something about… of your college?

(2) 能否寄给我一份申请表及与申请有关的其他必要的材料？

Would you please send me an application form and other materials necessary for my application?

(3) 您能尽快告知这些信息并邮寄给我相关表格吗？非常感谢！

Would you please send me all the information and the forms as soon as possible? Thank you very much.

(4) 如果你能告诉我那些必要的程序，我将不胜感激。

I would be much obliged to you if you tell me the necessary procedures.

第四部分：表示谢意，期盼回复

套语：

(1) 很抱歉打扰您，对您的友善帮助不胜感激。

Sorry to bother you, your kind help would be greatly appreciated.

(2) 如果您能回复，我将感激不尽。

I will appreciate it very much if you can give me a reply.

【分析】

1．假设你是美国纽约市的一名高中生 Chris, 打算暑假来天津学习汉语，来信向你在天津 一中的笔友李津咨询他们学校的国际班汉语课程。请你根据以下提示给李津写一封咨询 信。

内容要点：

1. 想学汉语的原因（中国文化；个人发展……）

2. 咨询国际班汉语课程的情况（班级大小；是否侧重听说；能不中国学生交流）

3. 询问是否提供食宿。

注意：

（1） 词数不少于 100；

（2） 可适当加入细节，使内容充实，行文连贯；

（3） 开头已给出，不计入总词数。

Dear li Jin,

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Yours

Chris

【参考范文】

Dear li Jin,

  It's my pleasure to tell you about my plan for studying Chinese in Tianjin this summer vacation. Could you possibly provide me with some information about the Chinese courses for international classes in your school?

  You know I am always interested in Chinese culture and a very important reason for me to learn Chinese is that learning Chinese could bring better career prospects for young people. I want to know how many students there will be in each class and if the courses focus on listening or speaking practice. Besides, can I have the opportunity to take part in some activities and to communicate with Chinese students? That will surely be a good chance for me to learn more about China. Also, I would be grateful if you could tell me whether accommodation is included.

 I am looking forward to your response at your earliest convenience.

Yours

Chris

【写作步骤】

第一步：审题：确定时态和人称。这封信主要是Chris向你（李津）咨询学校的国际班汉语课程，所以时态应以一般现在时为主，人称以第一人称为主。

第二步：列提纲 （重点词组）

provide me with some information about…（给我提供一些关于……的信息）；the Chinese courses for international classes（国际班的汉语课程）； learning Chinese could bring better career prospects（学汉语能带来更好的职业前景）；focus on listening and speaking practice（注重听说练习）；have the opportunity to…（有机会做某事）；a good chance for me to…（对我做什么是一个很好的机会）等。

第三步：遣词造句：同学们在写作时不能逐句翻译，可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯，同时要点表述要完整，文章要通顺，准确使用时态和语态。

第四步：连句成文：写作时要适当使用连词、过渡词和插入语，使文章浑然一体。同时恰当而合理地使用一些高级词汇和句型，如定语从句等，以提高文章档次。

【写作亮点】

范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了较多句式，如：第一段第一句使用了It’s my pleasure to do sth. 的句型，使用It作形式主语，不定式作真正的主语。第二段第一句使用了省略了that的宾语从句及that引导的表语从句。第二段第二句也使用了宾语从句。第二段第五句使用了if引导的条件状语从句。此外本文还使用了一些高级词汇，如provide me with some information about…；learning Chinese could bring better career prospects；focus on listening and speaking practice；have the opportunity to…；a good chance for me to… 等。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。

1．假设你是李华，你的外国朋友Tom的中文取得很大的进步，且对中国文学有着深厚的兴趣，他想买一本书，请你写一封e-mail，向他推荐一本书，并写出推荐的理由。

内容包括：

1. 推荐的书名；

2. 推荐这本书的三个主要原因；

3. 重申这本书的优点。

注意：

1. 词数100左右；

2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

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【参考范文】

Dear Tom,

I am happy to receive your last letter, in which you said that you had made rapid progress in Chinese and would like to buy a book to know more about Chinese culture. I will highly recommend this book Journey to the West, a masterpiece written by Wu Chengen.

I have three major reasons for the recommendation. To start with, it’s really an interesting book, telling many adventurous stories. In addition, we still can learn something from this book. We should be brave and confident in ourselves, no matter how many difficulties we meet. We should rely on each other. Last but not least, the book is one of the greatest masterpieces in China. It is well worth reading.

To sum up, It is the writer’s great imagination that has created us a wonderful ancient world full of adventures. This book gives you the chance to know some ancient tales of China.

Yours,

Li Hua

【写作步骤】

第1步：审题。确定时态和人称。本文要求你作为李华，向外国朋友推荐一本书。所以文章的人称应该使用第一人称，时态应该以一般现在时为主。

第2步：确定关键词（组），提炼写作要点。如：made rapid progress in…（在……方面取得很大进步），know more about Chinese culture（了解更多的中国文化），highly recommend（强烈推荐），many adventurous stories（许多冒险的故事），one of the greatest masterpieces（最伟大的杰作之一）、great imagination（伟大的想象力）等。

第3步：对写作要点遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第4步： 连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。

【写作亮点】

本文思路清晰，要点齐全，行文流畅，语言通顺连贯，用词准确，句式多变。高级词汇有made rapid progress in，masterpiece，rely on each other，well worth reading等；高级语法及句式有in which引导的的定语从句（in which you said…），让步状语从句（no matter how many difficulties we meet），强调句（It is the writer’s great imagination that ….），非谓语动词（telling many adventurous stories）等，提升了文章的档次。

2、假定你是育才中学的学生会主席李华，受美国亚特兰大ELCA高中(Eagle’s Landing Christian Academy) 学生会主席Peter邀请，计划下个月带领10位学生会成员赴该校进行为期一周的交流，请你给对方写一封邮件咨询相关准备工作。内容包括：

1. 感谢对方的邀请；

2. 询问相关事宜（最佳到达时间、具体日程安排、需要携带的物品）;

3. 期盼尽早得到答复。

注意：

1.词数100左右；

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3. 开头已给出。

Dear Peter,

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Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【范文】

Dear Peter,

I’m Li Hua, Chairman of the Student Union of Yucai Middle School. Thank you so much for inviting us to have a one-week communication activity at your school and I am writing to enquire about further details.

I am planning to take 10 members of our Student Union to go to your school next month, hoping to make good use of this opportunity to communicate and learn from each other. So I’d like to know what the best date of our arrival is. Above all, could you possibly send me a specific daily schedule of the activity in advance so that I can prepare better for the trip? Last but not least, this being our first experience to go to America, would you be kind enough to offer some suggestions on what necessities we specially need to take with us?

We are really excited and looking forward to the activity. I would appreciate it if you could give me a favorable reply at your earliest convenience.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

3．假设你是李华，你想参加剑桥大学（University of Cambridge）的夏令营活动。请写封信向夏令营负责人Smith教授咨询相关事宜，要点如下：

1、表达你的意愿；

2、咨询相关事宜。

注意：1、词数100左右；

2、可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Dear Mr. Smith,

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Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【参考范文】

Dear Mr. Smith,

I’m always dreaming of being admitted to the University of Cambridge. And your advertisement about the summer camp caught my attention.

I am a student in China. Would you be so kind as to tell me more information about the camp. First of all, I’d like to know when the course will start and how many class hours there are per week? Second, how much do I have to pay for the course and does the cost cover the accommodation? Besides, is there anything that I should pay special attention to?

I would be most grateful if you could send me the information. Looking forward to your immediate response.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hu

【写作步骤】

第1步：根据提示可知，假设你是李华，你想参加剑桥大学（University of Cambridge）的夏令营活动。请写封信向夏令营负责人Smith教授咨询相关事宜，要点如下：1、表达你的意愿；2、咨询相关事宜。

第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组）：dream of (梦想)；be admitted to(录取)；University of Cambridge (剑桥大学)；catch my attention(引起我的注意)；accommodation (住宿)等。

第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。此处文章主要应用一般过去时、现在进行时、一般现在时和一般将来时。

第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。

【写作亮点】

范文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式，如I’m always dreaming of being admitted to the University of Cambridge.非谓语动词的运用；I would be most grateful if you could send me the information.运用条件状语从句。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。

4、假定你是李华，自从迷恋上手机游戏和网路小说后你一直沉迷其中，你也很想痛下决心摆脱所困，但意志总是不够坚强。某日交际英语课后，你给来自美国的你校外教Joe写了一封短信，想咨询一下美国中学生是如何处理学习与娱乐的关系的，并试图从中获得启发.

信的内容包括：

1.你的苦恼；

2.咨询美国同龄人对待手机和学习的情况；

3.期盼好的建议。

注意：

1.词数100左右；开头与结尾已给出，不包含在总词数中；

2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

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【范文】

Dear Joe,

I’ve been indulged in the phone games and internet novels and I don’t know how to deal with it. Thus I’m writing to ask you for some advice.

Trapped into a virtual world, I can barely concentrate on my study, which has caused bad marks for several times. Aware of the harm they have done to me, I have made an effort to avoid these evil things. However, I failed without firm determination. I just can’t tear myself away from my smart phone. Then it struck me that I’d like to turn to you for help after your class, I will appreciate it a lot if you could tell me how American students strike a balance between study and entertainment and offer me some suggestions. I guess different methods may make a big difference.

I’m longing for your advice and sorry to bother you.

Yours,

Li Hua

 5．假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Peter打算这个寒假来中国旅游，让你推荐个城市，你想推荐杭州作为他旅游行程的首选。请用英语给他写封推荐信，内容包括：

1.推荐城市；

2.推荐理由；

3.你的祝愿。

注意：

1.词数80左右；

2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

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【参考范文】

Dear Peter,

I’m delighted to know you’re coming to China for your winter holiday. Personally, I’d like to recommend the city of Hangzhou to you.

When it comes to Hangzhou, the first thing that comes to mind is West Lake, which has been a scenic spot for hundreds of years. Besides, there are many tourist attractions in and around the city, such as Tiger-running Spring, The Lingyin Monastery and Spring Dawn at Su Causeway. Most importantly, Hangzhou is home to delicious food, such as Dongpo Pork and Longjing Shrimp.

I hope the nice weather and convenient transportation here can make your trip more enjoyable.

                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                              Yours,

                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                            Li Hua

【写作步骤】

第一步：审题

体裁：应用文

时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时，少量现在完成时。

结构：总分法

总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。

要求：

1. 介绍推荐城市；

2. 介绍推荐理由;

3. 表达你的祝愿。

第二步：列提纲（重点词组）

be delighted to do sth.; recommend sth. to sb.; come to mind; in and around the city; such as; be home to

第三步：连词成句

1. I’m delighted to know you’re coming to China for your winter holiday.

2. Personally, I’d like to recommend the city of Hangzhou to you.

3. When it comes to Hangzhou, the first thing that comes to mind is West Lake, which has been a scenic spot for hundreds of years.

4. There are many tourist attractions in and around the city, such as Tiger-running Spring, The Lingyin Monastery and Spring Dawn at Su Causeway.

5. I hope the nice weather and convenient transportation here can make your trip more enjoyable.

根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）

1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last(供参考)
2.表并列补充关系：besides, most importantly, and

3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing ,as for,(供参考)

4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result (供参考)

连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。

【写作亮点】

[高分句型1]When it comes to Hangzhou, the first thing that comes to mind is West Lake, which has been a scenic spot for hundreds of years.（由关系代词which引导非限制性定语从句）

[高分句型2]I hope the nice weather and convenient transportation here can make your trip more enjoyable.（由that引导宾语从句作hope的宾语，省略that）

[高分句型3]I invite you to visit Hangzhou, where you can enjoy the nice weather and delicious food.（由关系副词where引导非限制性定语从句）

6、假定你是李华，打算今年暑假去美国旅游。请你给Travel America国际旅行社写一封电子邮件进行咨询，内容如下:

1. 请其推荐合适的旅游路线；

2. 请其告知相关的旅游费用；

注意；

1. 词数80左右；

2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Dear Sir/Madam,

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Yours,

Li Hua

【范文】

Dear Sir/Madam,

I’m planning to travel to the USA in the coming July. Therefore, I’m writing to inquire about travel routes of your agency.

I intend to stay in America for about 10 days, during which I hope t0 have a look at some unique natural scenery and have a taste of local customs. So, could you please recommend some suitable travel routes? In addition, I’d like to know the prices of the routes, covering all the traveling expenses.

A reply at your earliest convenience is highly appreciated.

Yours,

Li Hua

7．假定你是高三学生李华。随着高考的临近，你感到学习压力越来越大。晚上经常失眠，上课精力不集中，学习效率低下,现在对备考复习很茫然。你写信给心理学家Dr. Bloom, 咨询解决问题的方法。内容包括：

1.  写信目的；     

2. 咨询内容；  

3. 期待回复。

Dear Dr. Bloom,

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Yours Sincerely,

Li Hua

【参考范文】

Dear Dr. Bloom,

I'm Li Hua, a senior three student. I'm writing to ask you for some advice.
With the approach of the College Entrance Examination, I'm under great pressure, which greatly affects my life and study. I can't fall asleep at night and I often wake up suddenly at midnight. As a result, I can't focus on what the teacher says in class and it disturbs me a lot. At a loss, I don't know how to prepare for the College Entrance Examination. What should I do? Knowing you are an expert in it, I sincerely hope you can give me some valuable advice on how to solve the problmes.
    Looking forward to your reply.

Yours Sincerely,

Li Hua

【写作步骤】

第一步：审题

体裁：应用文

时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时和一般将来时。

结构：总分法

总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。

要求：

1. 介绍写信的目的；

2. 介绍咨询的内容；

3. 期待对方的回复。

第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）

ask sb. for advice; with the approach of; under pressure; fall asleep; wake up; as a result; focus on; at a loss; prepare for; solve the problem; look forward to; an expert in

第三步：连词成句

1. I’m writing to ask you for advice.

2. Knowing you are an expert in it, I sincerely hope you can give me valuable advice on how to solve the problems.

3. As a result, I can’t focus on what the teacher says in class.

4. Looking forward to your reply.

根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）

1. 表文章结构顺序：first of all, firstly/first, secondly/second and then, finally, in the end, at last(供参考)

2. 表并列补充关系：what is more, besides, moreover, furthermore, in addition, as well as, not only…but (also), including(供参考)

3. 表转折对比关系：however, on the contrary, but, in spite of+n/doing, on the one hand…on the other hand, some, while others, as for, so...that…(供参考)

4. 表因果关系：as a result

连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，

【写作亮点】

[高分句型1]As a result, I can't focus on what the teacher says at class.(what引导宾语从句)

[高分句型2]Knowing you are an expert in it, I sincerely hope you can give me valuable advice on how to solve the problems. (knowing you are an expert in it现在分词作状语，特殊疑问词how+动词不定式作宾语)

[高分句型3] I'm under great pressure, which greatly affects my life and study.(which引导非限制性定语从句)

8、假如你是星光中学高二的李华，你打算高中毕业后到美国某大学读书，所以写了一封信给该校了解情况。内容包括：

1. 介绍自己的情况，例如目前的学业水平，爱好，特长，参加社会实践活动等；

2. 咨询到该所大学留学的条件，如：外语水平、所需学费，申请奖学金条件等；

3. 希望得到更多关于该校的资讯。

注意：

1. 词数100左右；

2．信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

Dear sir/ madam,

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Yours,

Li Hua 

Dear sir/ madam,

I am a Senior Two student in Xingguang High school in China. I will graduate from high school in one year. I plan to study in your university after graduation. Now, my academic performance is pretty good and I competed in Nation Olympic Math Contest for High school students last year and won the first place. I love sports, especially ball games and I am a member of school basketball team. Also, I am a volunteer in Protection The Great Wall.

If I attend your university, what kind of English level should I have? How much the fee should I pay? What qualification do I need to apply for a scholarship?

I am looking forward to receiving your reply and more information about your university.

Yours,

Li Hua