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专题16 应用文写作模板（二）感谢信、推荐信、申请信、求助信（解析版）-【口袋书】2023年高考英语必背知识手册（思维导图+背诵手册）（全国通用版）
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这是一份专题16 应用文写作模板（二）感谢信、推荐信、申请信、求助信（解析版）-【口袋书】2023年高考英语必背知识手册（思维导图+背诵手册）（全国通用版），共38页。试卷主要包含了thank sb，in truble 陷入困境等内容，欢迎下载使用。
专题16 应用文写作模板（二）
感谢信、推荐信、申请信、求助信
感谢信
1. 必备词汇
1.thank sb. for sth. /doing sth. 因某事而感激某人
2. be grateful to sb. for sth. 因某事而感激某人
3. show/express/extend/convey my sincere thanks/gratitude to sb. for sth. 向某人表达我诚挚的谢意
4.in trouble 陷入困境
5. make great／good progress 取得很大的进步
6.in/during/over the past/last four years 过去四年
7. be admitted to/into a university 被一所大学录取
8.say thanks to you for helping me 谢谢你帮助我
9. How time flies! 时间过得真快！
10．As time goes on/goes by/with time going on/going by 随着时间的推移
11. thanks to/owing to/because of your help 多亏了你的帮助
12.enjoy myself 玩得高兴
13.pay a visit to. 去参观，拜访
14. have a better understanding of… 对……有更好的理解
15.a place of interest 名胜
2. 高分句式
首段：表达真挚谢意
1. Thank you so much for your generous help.
非常感谢您慷慨的帮助。
2.1 am sincerely grateful to you for your timely help.
我真诚地感谢你及时的帮助。
3.1t was so kind of you to treat me as your own sister.
谢谢你把我当作自己的妹妹。
4.1 am so grateful to you for what you have done for me.
我很感谢你为我所做的一切。
5.1 would like to convey my thanks to you for your kind help.
我想感谢你的帮助。
6. I’m writing to thank you for the few wonderful days in London.
我写信感谢你帮我在伦敦度过的快乐日子。
7.1 am writing to express/show/convey my sincere thanks to you for your help.
我写信真诚地感谢你的帮助。
8. For this reason, I am writing this letter to express my sincere thanks to you.
为此，我写这封信是为了表达我对你真诚的感谢。
中间段：解释感谢的原因或对方的帮助给自己带来的好处
1.Thanks to your help, I have made rapid progress in my English.
多亏了你的帮助，我的英语有了飞速的进步。
2. Without/But for your help(lf it were not for your help) ,I would not have made so much progress in my English.
要是没有你的帮助，我的英语不会取得如此大的进步。
3.1 extend you again a thousand thanks for the great favor.
我太感谢你的帮助了。
结尾段：再次感谢
1.Thanks again for helping me.
再次感谢你对我的帮助。
2.Thank you again for your generous help.
再次感谢你的慷慨帮助。
3. 1 would appreciate it if you could accept my sincere thanks.
如果你能接受我诚挚的感谢，我将不胜感激。
4. Your kindness and help will always be remembered.
我将永远铭记你的善意和帮助。
5.1 deeply/greatly appreciate your hospitality（款待）．
我深深感谢你们的盛情款待。
3. 满分模板
模板①
Dear ________(对象),
I am writing to extend my sincere gratitude for________________________________(感谢的原因). If it had not been for your assistance in________________________________(对方给你的具体帮助), I fear that I would have been________________________________(没有对方帮助会产生的后果).
Everyone agrees that it was you who ________________________________(给出细节). Again, I would like to express my sincere thanks to you. Please accept my sincere thanks.
Yours Sincerely,
Li Hua
模板②
Dear ______,
How about your life/ study/ work? I’m writing to express my thanks for your _____(感谢的原因). If it had not been your assistance in _____(对方给你的具体帮助), I fear that I would have been_____ (没有对方帮助时的后果).
During the ______, you gave me generous help and continuous guidance by _____. First, you _____.What’s more, you ______. There is still one thing that I can’t forget. That is _______. (原因)
Thanks a lot for your kindness again. (再次致谢)
Give my best regards to ______. (祝愿)
Yours sincerely
Lihua
推荐信
1. 必备词汇
1.recommend sb./ sth.to sb. 推荐某人/某物给某人
2.present sb./ sth.to sb. 介绍某人/某物给某人
3.take great pleasure in. 以……为乐
4.afford me much pleasure to do sth. 做某事给我很多快乐
5.in search of 寻找
6.an ideal candidate 一个理想的候选人
7.without reservation 毫无保留
8.be convinced of.. 确信
9.give full play to..… 充分发挥
●表达“能力”
1.have a gift for 对……有天赋
2.be skilled in… 擅长……
3.be experienced in… 有……的经验
4.be an expert in... 熟练于
5.speak fluent English 说一口流利的英语
6.a boy with great ability 有才能的男孩
7.have a good knowledge/command of... 精通
8.be competent for...胜任
●表达“经历”
1.graduate from... 从……毕业
2.be a graduate from.. 毕业于
3.major in.… 主修
4.gain/win/get the first grade scholarship 获得一级奖学金
5.get good grades 取得好成绩
6.an all-around student 一个全面的学生
7.with excellent grades in all subjects 各科成绩优异
8.be given the title of... 被授……称号
9. gain/win the first prize/place 赢得第一名
10. win a gold/silver/copper medal 赢得金牌/银牌/铜牌
●表达“性格”
1.be enthusiastic about 对……热心
2.be easy to get along with 好相处
2. 高分句式
首段：说明推荐对象
1.I am writing to you to recommend.
我写信给你推荐……
2.It is with a great pleasure that I recommend to you.
非常高兴向你推荐……
3.It affords me much pleasure to recommend…to you.
我非常乐意向你推荐……
4.Itake great pleasure in recommending to you...as an ideal candidate.
我很高兴向你推荐……作为一个理想的候选人。
5.I would like to present…for your consideration in your search for a qualified manager.
我想推荐……作为你招聘合格经理的候选人。
中间段：具体介绍被推荐者的个人信息
1.He is an all-around student with excellent grades in all subjects.He has been given the title of the “excellent student”.
他是一个所有学科都成绩优秀的学生。他曾获得了“优秀学生”称号。
2.As a boy with great potential, he is good at solving difficult problems.
作为一个有巨大潜力的孩子，他擅长解决疑难问题。
3.Li Ming, a graduate from Peking university, majors in computer software design.
李明，毕业于北京大学，主修计算机软件设计。
4.He has enjoyed the reputation/title of the Excellent Graduate
他享有“优秀毕业生”声誉和头衔。
5.Therefore,Ido not hesitate to recommend her as an ideal candidate for the post you advertised.
you advertised.
因此，我毫不犹豫地推荐她作为你招聘职位的理想候选人。
结尾段：希望推荐，期待回信
1.In a word, he would be a good choice. I would be grateful if you could consider my recommendation.
一句话，他将是一个不错的选择。如果你能考虑我的建议，我将不胜感激。
2.1 strongly recommend him to you without reservation.I am confident/convincedthat he will be competent for the position.
我毫无保留地强烈向你推荐他。我相信他能胜任这个职位。
3.Therefore,without any hesitation I recommend.…as the right person for your consideration.
因此，我毫不犹豫地推荐……作为合适人选。
4.I would appreciate it if you could consider my recommendation and kindly offer him/her the position.
我希望你能考虑我的建议，给他/她提供这个职位。
5.If you have any further questions regarding his ability or this recommendation,please do not hesitate to contact
me. Please call at 123456.
如果您对他的能力或推荐有任何进一步的问题，请不要犹豫联系我，拨打电话123456。
3. 满分模板
模板①
Dear ______ ,
①It affords me much pleasure to recommend ______(要推荐的人)to you.②During his/her graduate years he/she was my ______ . ③As his/her ______ I found him/her ______. (介绍与此人的关系)
④His/Her performance in the school years was outstanding. ⑤First, he/she had been and showed great talents in ______ . ⑥In addition, he/she has a very pleasant personality. ⑦He/She has developed a strong sense of ______, and working with him/her is always pleasant. ⑧I can state that he/she has all the qualities of being ______.(介绍此人的能力)
⑨Therefore, I here recommend him/her to you with all my heart. ⑩Should you favor him/her with a position in your company/Should you accept him/her in your university？I am sure that his/her future work will prove worthy of your trust. I look forward to hearing from you at the earliest possible moment.
Yours Sincerely,
Li Ming
模板②
Dear______,
I take the pleasure in recommending to you __________(被推荐的人或物). I hope you will be interested in _______（him/her）.
There are several reasons why I think ______ is a good choice. Firstly, _______(理由一). Secondly, ________（理由二）. Last but not least, ________（理由三）. In a word, _______（总结）. I would be most grateful if you would like to consider my recommendation.
申请信
【篇章结构】
1. 说明写信目的，说出招聘信息来源和所申请的职位。
2. 简述个人信息。介绍自己的学历或者经历，本人特长，成绩等。
3. 表示感谢和期待对方优先考虑自己的申请。注意礼貌和自信。
【必备词汇】
1. apply vt.申请
2. master vt.掌握
3. patience n.耐心
4. knowledge n.知识
5. enthusiastic adj.热情的
6. selfless adj. 无私的
7. suitable adj.适合的
8. responsibility n.责任心
9. experience n.经验
10. competent adj.足以胜任的
11. be expert in擅长于
12. be qualified for胜任
13.obtain the precious opportunity获得这个珍贵的机会
14. be capable of doing sth有能力做某事
15 .have the ability to do sth有能力做某事
16.have experience in doing sth/be experienced in在做……上有经验
17.have a good command/knowledge of精通/对……能运用自如
18.major in主修……专业
19.good interpersonal relationship良好的人际关系
20. last but not least最后但也很重要的一点
【高分句式】
一 凤头
1. Learning from the advertisement you have posted that you're in need of...to do sth, I'm writing for a chance to work as...
从你发布的广告中得知你需要……，我写信给你是为了应聘……。
2. I am writing to you in the hope that I may obtain the precious opportunity to....
我写信给你是希望我可以获得……的宝贵机会。
3. I'm writing to request a valuable chance to be... The following are my advantages.
我写信申请……的宝贵机会。以下是我的优势。
二 猪肚
1. As an outgoing.., I feel it easy to get along well with others and I can….
作为一名外向的……,我感觉与真他人友好相处很容易，我能……
2. As an outgoing student, not only can I get along well with interviewees but also I have a sense of duty and cooperation.
作为一名外向的学生，我不仅能与面试者相处融洽，而且我有很强的责任心和合作精神。
3. Sociable and honest, I have a gift for communication with others.
善于交际，有责任心，我的确相信我自己完全符合志愿者工作的条件。
4. What satisfies me most is that I have no difficulty communicating with others in English.
最使我满意的是我用英语和别人交流起来毫不费力。
5. With responsibility and patience, I'll show passionate enthusiasm toward this job.
我有责任心和耐心，会对这份工作表现出满腔热忱。
6. What makes me confident is that I have learned a lot on different fields, which broadens my horizons.
让我感到自信的是我已经在不同的领域学到了很多，这使我拓宽了视野。
6. Having been learning English for many years, I have a good command of English, especially spoken English.
已经学了很多年的英语，我精通英语，尤其是英语口语。
7. I am confident that I’m suitable for the job./I'm qualified to do../I'm equal to doing...
我相信这份工作适合我。/我有做……的资格。/我能胜任做……
8. First of all,I love art and have been learning the traditional Chinese painting in the last few years. Moreover, my English is good enough for communication. Thus, I can help visitors better understand Chinese paintings. Also,I can even show them how to paint with Chinese writing brushes.
首先，我热爱艺术。并且在过去的几年里，我一直在学习中国传统绘画。此外，我的英语很好可以进行交流。这样，我就能帮助游客更好的了解中国绘画。同时，我自己甚至也可以用画笔向他们展示中国画。
三 豹尾
1. I would appreciate it if my application could be favorably considered.
如果我在申请能够被积极的考虑，我将感激不尽。
2. I will be more than grateful if I am given a chance and I am convinced that I will perfectly live up to your expectations.
如果给我一个机会，我将感激不尽。我也相信我不会辜负你们的期望。
3. I am sure I will do well if you give me the chance to be a member of your company.
如果您给我一个机会成为公司的一员的话，我相信自己会做的很好。
4. I would greatly appreciate it if you could take my application into consideration.
如果您能考虑我的申请，我将不胜感激。
5. Should you treat my application favorably, I would spare no effort to offer my best service.
如果您能看中我的申请，我将不遗余力地提供我的最佳服务。
【满分模板】
Dear Sir/Madam,
I'm 自我介绍. I am writing to apply for the opportunity 说明写信的目的.
I'm kind, easy-going and always ready to help others. I 描述个人的相关优势. So I think that I am qualified for the position.
I plan to 对这一职位的的规划及设想.
I'd appreciate it if you could give me the opportunity.
Yours sincerely,
_____________
【模板范文】
晨欣希望学校现需要招聘志愿者，暑假期间教小学生英语。请写一封申请信，简述自己的申请理由，并简述自己的计划。
Dear Sir,
I’m Li Hua from Class One, Senior Two. I am writing to apply for the opportunity to help the students in Chen Xin Hope School with their English. Thus they can improve their English during the summer vacation. Meanwhile, I can learn how to get along well with the students.
I'm kind, easy-going and always ready to help others. I do well in English and English is my favorite subject. In addition, I have won several prizes in English contests. So I think that I am qualified for the position.
I plan to communicate with students first to know what they need. Besides, I'll try to get them more interested in English by telling stories, singing songs, playing games and so on.
I'd appreciate it if you could give me the opportunity.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
求助信
【篇章结构】
1. 自我介绍，点明写作目的
2. 具体陈述所需要哪方面的帮助或者自己遇到的困难
3. 恳请对方帮助并表达谢意
【必备词汇】
1. challenge 挑战
2. facing 面临 (常置于句首作状语)
Facing so much pressure she didn't know what to do
3. faced with面临(常置于句首作状语)
Faced with so much pressure, she could hardly stand it.
4.beg sb.to do sth. 恳求某人做某事
5.beg sb.of sth.恳求某人提供某物
Can I beg you of your help?
6. beg sb.for sth.向某人恳求某物
7. average一般的
8.follow one's advice 采纳某人的建议
I'll follow your advice and try to do my work well.
9. make progress 取得进步
I'm sure with your help I'll make greater progress in my English study.
10. have difficulty in doing sth.做某事有困难
I have much difficulty in my English study.
11 .have trouble in doing sth.做某事很费力
12. help sb.out of difficulty帮助某人摆脱困境
13. would like sb.to do sth.请某人做某事
【高分句式】
一 凤头
1. I’m writing to ask for your help.
我写信是为了寻求你的帮助。
2. I’m writing to ask whether you could do me a favor.
我写信想问您是否可以帮我个忙。
3. I’m writing in the hope that you will be kind enough to do me a favor.
我写信希望您能给我帮助。
4. I’m writing in the hope of your assistance in preparing for the approaching singing talent show.
我写信是希望您能帮我为即将到来的唱歌才艺大赛作准备。
二 猪肚
1. I am poor in overcoming the difficulties in the English study on my own.
我不擅长自行解决英语学习中遇到的困难。
2. I have some difficulties in writing the articles about how Americans spend their holidays and festivals.
我在撰写有关美国人如何度过节假日的短文上遇到了一些困难。
3. I can’t be passionate and energetic in English class so as not to make every moment meaningful and splendid.
我英语课上没有激情不活跃，这样不能让每一分钟有意义和令人满意。
4. I have trouble in mastering the advanced grammar rules and putting them into use in my speaking and writing, which has been annoying me for a long time.
我在掌握高级语法方面有困难，而且不能运用到说和写中，这困扰了我很长时间。
5. I'm not sure whether I have got my ideas across, so I have no choice but to turn to you in the hope that you can correct the mistakes as well as give me some favorable advice on writing.
我不确定我的想法是否已经表达清楚了，所以我只好向您求助，希望您能帮忙纠错，同时针对写作给我一些可行的建议。
6. As it is getting close to the end of the semester, we need to find a parttime job for social practice. I intend to apply for one position in a company.
随着本学期的结束，我们需要找一份社会实践的兼职工作，我打算申请一家公司的职位。
7. Because it is the first time that I have written an application, I wonder if there is anything to pay attention to. So, I'm writing you the letter, hoping you can do me a favor.
因为这是我第一次写个人申请，不知道该注意些什么。所以我写信求助，希望您能帮忙。
8. It is the first time for me to apply for a job, and I'm not quite familiar with the format of the resume and the job application, which I have prepared. So would you please do me the favor to correct the mistakes of the words and format in these materials?
这是我第一次申请工作，我对我准备的个人简历以及工作申请的格式不是很熟悉。所以您能帮我纠正材料中措辞和格式方面的错误吗？
三 豹尾
1. I would appreciate it if you could give me some advice on how to prepare myself for college life.
如果你能给我一些关于如何为大学生活做准备的建议，我将不胜感激。
2. It would be of great help if you can offer me some valuable suggestions on how to make a wonderful English speech.
如果您能帮我提一些关于英语演讲的建议，那将会是很大的帮助。
3. I'd be very grateful if you could do me a favor.
如果您能帮忙，我将感激不尽。
4. If possible, when can I come to meet you at your earliest convenience? Will Friday afternoon do?
如果可能的话，您什么时候方便我去见您？星期五下午行吗？
【礼貌升华练一练】
1. if...could
Please polish my draft. 请润色一下我的草稿。
It would be very nice of you if you could have my draft polished at your convenience.
2. appreciate
Please polish my draft. 请润色一下我的草稿。
It would be greatly appreciated if you could have my draft polished at your convenience.
I would greatly appreciate it if you could have my draft polished at your convenience.
3. possible
Please polish my draft. 请润色一下我的草稿。
Is it possible if you could have my draft polished at your convenience?
【满分模板】
模板①
Dear ______ ,
I am writing to formally request to ______（请求的内容）.The reason for _____________is that_____________（给出原因）. I___________ , so I _____________（给出细节）.I would also like to request ___________（提出进一步的要求）. I am sorry for any inconvenience I have caused. Thank you for your attention to these requests. If you have any questions, do not hesitate to contact me at __________（电话号码）.
I look forward to a favorable reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
模板②
Dear________,
My name is _______________(自我介绍). I’m writing a letter to you to ask for some help. I have met difficulty in _______________(求助内容). First, I find ___________(困难1). Besides, ________(困难2). What’s more, __________(困难3).
Faced with so much difficulty, I have to ask you for some help. Would you like to ____________(委婉提出请求)？In the meanwhile, I beg you to (请求内容) so that ___________(请求目的). Also, I would like you to (请求内容).
I’m sure that I can make great progress in _____________(表达期待).
Yours,
Li Hua
一、申请信
1．（2023春·安徽·高三统考阶段练习）假定你是李华，你校的英语报正在校内招募“中国传统文化”专栏的编辑。请你写封电子邮件申请，内容包括。
1.表明意图；
2.自身优势；
3.表达期望。
注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考词汇:专栏column
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
2．（2023·云南·云南师大附中校考模拟预测）假定你是李华，看到英国留学生David 在网上发帖，希望有人能一对一帮助他提高汉语普通话水平，请给他回一封电子邮件，内容包括：
1. 希望来应聘这份工作；
2.有关个人信息；
3. 提高普通话的具体建议。
注意：1. 字数80左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 开头和结尾已给出，且该部分不计入总词数。
一对一：one-on-one
Hi David,
This is Li Hua
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Yours,
Li Hua
3．（2023·天津滨海新·校联考一模）假设你是红星中学学生会主席李华。你从官网得知，亚洲青年文化节(Asian Youth Cultural Festival) 中国赛区组委会正在招募今年英语演讲比赛的承办学校。请你代表学校给组委会写一封邮件，申请承办该活动，内容包括：
1. 承办条件；
2. 初步计划；
3. 希望获准。
注意：1. 词数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Sir/ Madam,
I am Li Hua, president of the Student Union in Hong Xing High School.
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Yours,
Li Hua
二、感谢信/祝贺信
4．（2023·辽宁·校联考一模）假定你是李华，即将参加以“My Dream University”为主题的校英语演讲比赛。请给你的外国好友Jack写封邮件，内容包括：
1. 征求备赛意见；
2. 表示感谢。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Jack,
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Yours,
Li Hua
5．（2023春·四川内江·高三四川省内江市第六中学校考阶段练习）假如你是光明高中的学生会主席李华。上周加拿大威斯菲尔德中学(Westfield Secondary School)学生会向你校图书馆捐赠了一批图书，请你给WSS 中学的学生会主席Peter 写一封
信，要点如下：
1.感谢对方捐赠图书。
2.通过EMS国际快递寄去由同学们亲手制作的传统礼物，请对方注意查收。
3.再次表示感谢并希望今后更多地开展两校之间的交流活动。
注意：
1. 词数100左右;2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Peter,
I’m Li Hua,
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Yours,
Li Hua
6．（2023·安徽淮北·统考一模）假定你是红星中学高三学生李华。近期，你校外教Steve做了一场关于读后续写的在线讲座（A Lecture on Continuation Writing）。请你用英文给他写一封电子邮件，内容包括：
1. 表达感谢并简述你的收获；
2. 说明你在读后续写中的困惑并寻求帮助。
注意：
1. 词数80左右；
2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Steve,
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Yours,
Li Hua
三、推荐信
7．（2023春·江苏南通·高三海安高级中学校考开学考试）假设你是李华，你的英国朋友Chris想到中国读大学，学习并体验中国文化。请给他回一封电子邮件，内容包括：1. 推荐大学；2. 你的理由；3. 你的期待。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Chris,
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Yours,
Li Hua
8．（2023·山东烟台·统考一模）假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Peter发来邮件，请你推荐一部中国电影。请回复该邮件，内容包括：
1．电影介绍；
2．推荐理由。
注意：
1．写作词数应为80左右；
2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Peter,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
9．（2023·广西南宁·统考一模）假定你是李华。你的外国朋友Mike即将到你的家乡旅游，请你给他写一封邮件，向他推荐家乡的民俗文化馆（Folk Culture Museum）。邮件内容包括：
1．阐明写信事由；
2．介绍文化馆特色；
3．表示欢迎。
注意：
1．词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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四、其他应用文
10．（2023·重庆·统考模拟预测）假定你是李华, 准备参加学校组织的Singing English Songs Competition 活动。请给外教Todd写封邮件求助,内容包括：1. 活动简介；2.请他推荐英文歌曲；3.请教英文歌演唱技巧。
注意：1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Todd.
I’m writing to ask for your help.
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Yours,
Li Hua
11．（2023春·重庆·高三重庆巴蜀中学校考阶段练习）假定你是李华，正在规划自己的高中毕业旅行。请你写一封邮件，向英国好友Jack求助，希望他能帮你解答目前遇到的困惑，内容包括：
1. 写信目的；
2. 求助内容；
3. 希望回复。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为 80左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Jack,
How is it going?
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Yours,
Li Hua
12．（2023秋·河南郑州·高三郑州外国语学校校考阶段练习）假如你是李华，你的英国网友Forbes打算抽空到中国学习太极(Tai Chi)，他写信向你求助，请你根据下列要点给对方写一封回信：1.介绍学太极好处；2.负责联系学习地点和老师。
注意:1.词数100左右。
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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参考答案：
1．Dear Sir or Madam,
Knowing that the school English newspaper is looking for an editor responsible for the column “Traditional Chinese Culture”, I’m writing to apply for the position.
I think I’m qualified for it. To begin with, I have a good command of English, especially written English. Besides, I have taken the part-time job as an English editor, from which I have gained relevant experience. More importantly, I have a rich knowledge of traditional Chinese culture.
I would really appreciate it if I could be given the precious chance. I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hui
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假定你是李华，你校的英语报正在校内招募“中国传统文化”专栏的编辑。请你写封电子邮件申请。
【详解】1.词汇积累
寻找：look for→search for
职位：position→post
此外：besides→in addition
有关的：relevant→related
2.句式拓展
合并简单句
原句：I think I’m qualified for it. To begin with, I have a good command of English, especially written English.
拓展句：I think I’m qualified for it because I have a good command of English, especially written English.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Knowing that the school English newspaper is looking for an editor responsible for the column “Traditional Chinese Culture”, I’m writing to apply for the position. (运用了that引导宾语从句)
[高分句型2] Besides, I have taken the part-time job as an English editor, from which I have gained relevant experience. (运用了“介词+关系代词”结构非限制性定语从句)
2．参考范文
Hi David，
This is Li Hua. I learned from your post that you want to improve your Putonghua(Mandarin Chinese)one-on-one. If possible, I feel honored to have the chance to help you.
Please allow me to introduce myself. As a Chinese student, my biggest advantage is that I’ve been a broadcaster in school for years, which equips me with outstanding language proficiency. When it comes to how to learn Putonghua well, I suggest you get yourself involved in Chinese learning activities, such as exploring Chinese culture and learning Chinese history. Another suggestion is to practice listening and speaking every day. What about half an hour’s online video chat with me every evening? I’m right here and ready to help.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours，
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给英国留学生David写一封电子邮件，告知他应聘这份工作的意向，个人信息以及如何提高普通话的建议。
【详解】1.词汇积累
机会：chance →opportunity
允许：allow →permit
建议：suggest →advise
准备好：ready →well-prepared
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Another suggestion is to practice listening and speaking every day.
拓展句：Another suggestion is that you should practice listening and speaking every day.
【点睛】【高分句型1】As a Chinese student, my biggest advantage is that I’ve been a broadcaster in school for years, which equips me with outstanding language proficiency.（运用了that引导的表语从句和which引导的非限制性定语从句）
【高分句型2】When it comes to how to learn Putonghua well, I suggest you get yourself involved in Chinese learning activities, such as exploring Chinese culture and learning Chinese history.（运用了“疑问词+不定式”结构作宾语和省略that的宾语从句以及过去分词作宾补）
3．Dear Sir/ Madam,
I am Li Hua, president of the Student Union in Hong Xing High School. I am writing on behalf of our school to apply to host the English Speech Competition.
Our school stands out as the perfect candidate for its big campus and great facilities. Most importantly, we have years of experience holding the National English Speech Competition, with everyone including school leaders showing strong support. The preliminary plan of our school are as follows. First of all, our organizing committee will get down to work in no time and recruit more volunteers upon being chosen to host the competition. In addition, we will arrange detailed schedules to make the competition well-organized so that the participants can benefit from it and have a better performance. Above all, it’s a golden opportunity for us to show the advantages of our school.
I do hope you could grant us this honor and the festival will definitely turn out to be a success. Thank you for taking us into serious consideration, and your early reply will be highly appreciated.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生代表学校给亚洲青年文化节(Asian Youth Cultural Festival)中国赛区组委会写一封邮件，申请承办该活动。内容包括：1. 承办条件；2. 初步计划；3. 希望获准。
【详解】1.词汇积累
代表：on behalf of→in the name of
初步的：preliminary→initial
肯定地：definitely→surely
考虑：take sth. into consideration→take sth. into account
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Thank you for taking us into serious consideration, and your early reply will be highly appreciated.
拓展句：Thank you for taking us into serious consideration, and I would appreciate it if you could give me your early reply.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Most importantly, we have years of experience holding the National English Speech Competition, with everyone including school leaders showing strong support. (运用了“with+宾语+现在分词”的复合结构)
【高分句型2】In addition, we will arrange detailed schedules to make the competition well-organized so that the participants can benefit from it and have a better performance. (运用了so that引导目的状语从句)
4．Dear Jack,
How are you recently? I’m going to participate in an English speech competition themed My Dream University. With time going by, I’m getting increasingly nervous, so I’m writing to ask for your advice.
Knowing that you have taken part in many competitions, I’d appreciate it if you could give me some practical suggestions. For example, how can I adjust my mindset, improve my contents and hold the attention from audience?
I truly believe that with your help, I’ll have a better performance. Thanks a lot from the bottom of my heart. Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假定你是李华，即将参加以“My Dream University”为主题的校英语演讲比赛。请给你的外国好友Jack写封邮件。
【详解】1.词汇积累
参加：participate in/ take part in→join in
比赛：competition→contest
建议：advice/suggestion→tip
例如：for example→for instance
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：I truly believe that with your help, I’ll have a better performance.
拓展句：If you could offer your help, I’ll have a better performance.
【点睛】[高分句型1]With time going by, I’m getting increasingly nervous, so I’m writing to ask for your advice. (运用了with的复合结构)
[高分句型2]Knowing that you have taken part in many competitions, I’d appreciate it if you could give me some practical suggestions. (运用了that引导宾语从句)
5．Dear Peter,
I’m Li Hua, president of the student union of Guangming high school. On behalf of my school, I’m writing to express my sincere thanks for donating books to us last week.
Our schools have maintained good relationship with each other, and we have benefited a lot. It’s very kind and generous of you to donate a number of books to us, which are informative and helpful to our students. In return, we have sent you some beautiful Chinese knots made by us students by EMS. Please note to check.
I hope we can have more and better communication and cooperation in the future. Thank you again for the books you generally donated. Looking forward to your next visit.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】这是一篇说明文。文章要求考生给WSS中学的学生会主席Peter写信感谢他们捐赠的图书并告知他已经通过EMS国际快递寄去由同学们亲手制作的传统礼物，并希望今后更多地开展两校之间的交流活动。
【详解】1.词汇积累
诚挚的：sincere→genuine
表达：express→ convey
希望：hope→ wish
代表：on behalf of→ represent
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：In return, we have sent you some beautiful Chinese knots made by us students by EMS.
拓展句：In return, we have sent you some beautiful Chinese knots which were made by us students by EMS.
【点睛】【高分句型1】It’s very kind and generous of you to donate a number of books to us, which are informative and helpful to our students.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句）
【高分句型2】 I hope we can have more and better communication and cooperation in the future. （运用了省略从属连词that的宾语从句，作动词hope的宾语）
6．参考范文
Dear Steve,
Thank you very much indeed for the wonderful lecture you gave on continuation writing. I’ve learnt really a lot, because you helped me overcome the bottleneck—how to increase the reading and writing speed.
However, I am still puzzled by some difficulties in it. For example, I find it hard to grasp the gist of the passages, and I also feel it hard to continue when confronted with new words. What can I do? Would you please give me some advice? I would be really grateful if you could help me out.
Thank you very much again. Your earliest reply would be appreciated.
Yours,
Li hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给外教Steve写封电子邮件，对他为学生做的读后续写的在线讲座表达感谢并简述你的收获，说明你在读后续写中的困惑并寻求帮助。
【详解】1.词汇积累
然而：however→nevertheless
困惑的：puzzled→confused
困难的：hard→difficult
感激的：grateful→thankful
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Your earliest reply would be appreciated.
拓展句：I’d appreciate it if you can give me your earliest reply.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Thank you very much indeed for the wonderful lecture you gave on continuation writing. (运用了that/which引导的限制性定语从句，省略了that/which)
[高分句型2] I’ve learnt really a lot, because you helped me overcome the bottleneck—how to increase the reading and writing speed. (运用了because引导的原因状语从句)
7．Dear Chris,
Hearing that you are eager to study in university in China and experience in person our time-honored civilization, I am more than delighted to offer you some advice.
Given your above-mentioned requirements, Peking University is an excellent choice, which is located in our capital Beijing. Regarded as one of the top universities in China, this historic institute of learning boasts good educational resources, ranging from countless distinguished professors to the ideal academic atmosphere, which feeds your need of studying. Plus, Beijing possesses scenic spots like the Imperial Palace, an epitome of our history, which will gain you a deeper insight into our splendid and profound culture.
I sincerely hope that your dream of experiencing China in person one day will come true.
Yours,
Li Hua
Dear Chris,
Delighted to learn that you’re coming to learn in Chinese university, I’m writing to express my warmest welcome to you.
Given your keen interest in Chinese culture, I recommend you apply for Nanjing University, which is one of the first to enroll international students in China. With its profound culture, high-quality instruction, rich variety of courses, wide-range majors and abundant research opportunities, Nanjing University attracts students and scholars from all over the world. Moreover, it is located in Jiangsu, which will attract you with its beautiful scenery and harmonious cultural environment.
I sincerely hope your dream will come true. If you have further questions, don’t hesitate to contact me.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假设你是李华，你的英国朋友Chris想到中国读大学，学习并体验中国文化。请给他回一封电子邮件，内容包括：1. 推荐大学；2. 你的理由；3. 你的期待。
【详解】1.词汇积累
渴望：be eager to do→long to do
实现：come true→fulfill
高兴的：delighted→glad
灿烂的：splendid→brilliant
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：Given your above-mentioned requirements, Peking University is an excellent choice, which is located in our capital Beijing.
拓展句：After I learned your above-mentioned requirements, I think Peking University is an excellent choice, which is located in our capital Beijing.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Hearing that you are eager to study in university in China and experience in person our time-honored civilization, I am more than delighted to offer you some advice. (运用了that引导宾语从句)
[高分句型2] Plus, Beijing possesses scenic spots like the Imperial Palace, an epitome of our history, which will gain you a deeper insight into our splendid and profound culture. (运用了which引导非限制性定语从句)
8．Dear Peter,
Learning you’re interested in Chinese films, I’m glad to share with you one of my favorites. The Wandering Earth II, which was released during the Spring Festival, is an awesome science fiction film starring Jason Wu and Andy Lau.
What appeals to me are the grand scenes and touching plots. Faced with the solar crisis, the Chinese government and scientists shoulder the responsibility of protecting the earth, making joint efforts to keep human civilizations alive. The presented advanced technologies also impressed me and filled me with pride.
I strongly recommend you to enjoy the film which won’t let you down.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给英国朋友Peter写信推荐一部中国电影。内容包括：电影介绍；推荐理由。
【详解】1.词汇积累
上映：release→ put on
了不起的：awesome→ amazing
吸引：appeal to→ attract
建议：recommend→ advise
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Learning you’re interested in Chinese films, I’m glad to share with you one of my favorites.
拓展句：Because I learn that you’re interested in Chinese films, I’m glad to share with you one of my favorites.
【点睛】【高分句型1】The Wandering Earth II, which was released during the Spring Festival, is an awesome science fiction film starring Jason Wu and Andy Lau.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】 Faced with the solar crisis, the Chinese government and scientists shoulder the responsibility of protecting the earth, making joint efforts to keep human civilizations alive. (运用了过去分词作时间状语以及现在分词作伴随状语)
9．Dear Mike,
How is everything going? Knowing that you are going to travel in my hometown, I am writing to recommend the local Folk Culture Museum.
There is a lot to do in the museum. First, what will impress you most is that a variety of cultural handicrafts such as musical instruments, farming tools and so on are exhibited in different halls. Here, you can be involved in making crafts like paper umbrellas and Chinese knots. What’s more, with the help of the guides who is professional , you will have a better understanding of the history and development of our folk culture.
You’re warmly welcome to visit the museum. I’m sure you’ll immerse yourself in the folk culture and fall in love with it.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给外国朋友Mike写一封邮件，向他推荐家乡的民俗文化馆
【详解】1.词汇积累
介绍：recommend→introduce
各种各样的：a variety of→all kinds of
展示：exhibit→show
涉及：be involved in→relate to
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：Knowing that you are going to travel in my hometown, I am writing to recommend the local Folk Culture Museum.
拓展句：Because I know you are going to travel in my hometown, I am writing to recommend the local Folk Culture Museum.
【点睛】【高分句型1】First, what will impress you most is that a variety of cultural handicrafts such as musical instruments, farming tools and so on are exhibited in different halls. (运用了what引导的主语从句和that引导的表语从句)
【高分句型2】What’s more, with the help of the guides who is professional , you will have a better understanding of the history and development of our folk culture.(运用了who引导的定语从句)
10．Dear Todd,
I’m writing to ask for your help.Our school is going to have Singing English Songs Competition next month.Greatly interested in singing, I want to take part in it. Any participant is required to sing an English song for the competition. I am wondering whether you could recommend an English song to me. I would like to sing an English song about young people’s life or dream. Can you find one for me by next Friday? At the same time,could you please help me practise singing the song and show me some useful singing skills?
Thank you for your help.
Yours.
Li Hua
【导语】这是一篇应用文。要求考生给外教Todd写封邮件求助，请他推荐英文歌曲及英文歌演唱技巧。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
参与：take part in → participate in
要求：require → demand
推荐，建议：recommend → suggest
帮助：help → assist
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句： I would like to sing an English song about young people’s life or dream.
拓展句： I would like to sing an English song, whose theme is about young people’s life or dream.
【点睛】【高分句型1】
Greatly interested in singing, I want to take part in it.（运用了过去分词作状语）
【高分句型2】
I am wondering whether you could recommend an English song to me. （运用了whether引导的宾语从句）
11．Dear Jack,
How is it going? I want you to know I’m graduating very soon, and that I’m planning a trip after Gaokao. I’d like to hear your opinions on two critical matters.
First, I’m still wandering between my travel destinations, which are Thailand and Sanya haven’t been abroad before so I have concerns like safety, accommodations and travel. However, I hear travel cost in Sanya has skyrocketed, and I don’t have a big budget. Besides, I’d like you to recommend affordable restaurants with local features. My mouth is already watering at the thought of all sorts of delicacies!
A thousand miles begins with the first step, as Laozi put it. I believe you feel so too and I’m looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
LiHua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假定你是李华，正在规划自己的高中毕业旅行。请你写一封邮件，向英国好友Jack求助，希望他能帮你解答目前遇到的困惑。
【详解】1.词汇积累
意见：opinion→recommendation
然而：however→nevertheless
此外：besides→what's more
各种各样的：all sorts of→varieties of
2.句式拓展
合并简单句
原句：Besides, I’d like you to recommend affordable restaurants with local features. My mouth is already watering at the thought of all sorts of delicacies!
拓展句:Besides, I’d like you to recommend affordable restaurants with local features,where I can enjoy all sorts of delicacies!
【点睛】【高分句型1】First, I’m still wandering between my travel destinations, which are Thailand and Sanya haven’t been abroad before so I have concerns like safety, accommodations and travel. （运用了which引导非限制性定语从句，so连接并列句）
【高分句型2】A thousand miles begins with the first step, as Laozi put it.（as引导非限制性定语从句）
12．Dear Forbes,
It is amazing for me to know that you show great preference for Tai Chi and are willing to learn it soon. I’ m quite sure that I can give you a hand gladly.
Tai Chi is not only an ancient martial art, but has also been widely acknowledged as an effective health exercise. Famous for its graceful and well-balanced movements, Tai Chi provides the mental relaxation and physical fitness that are so essential in our modern stressful lives. Concerning your learning location and instructor, I’m so proud to tell you that I have the ability to recommend the best school and best trainer in our city to you, for actually my uncle is a master of Tai Chi who is always invited to instruct others all over the country. As a result, you can rely on me.
Looking forward to your coming!
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文, 要求写一封回信，告知Forbes学太极相关的情况。
【详解】第一步：
审题: 回信 告知Frobes学太极相关的情况
人称：第三人称
时态：一般现在时
结构：总分法，分三部分，第一部分表示愿意帮助Forbes，第二部分说明学太极的好处和负责联系学习地点和老师，第三部分期望Forbes的到来。
要点：
1. 表示愿意帮助Forbes
2．学太极的好处：是一种有效的健身运动、动作优雅、让人放松
联系学习地点和老师：会介绍最好的太极学校和老师
3．期待Forbes的到来
第二步：列提纲（重点词汇、短语 ）
show great preference for；be willing to；give sb. a hand；an ancient martial art；be widely acknowledged；be famous for provides；mental relaxation；physical fitness ；essential； instructor；recommend；trainer；introduce… to；invite
第三步：连词成句
(1) You show great preference for Tai Chi.
(2) I can give you a hand gladly.
(3) Tai Chi is an ancient martial art.
(4) Tai Chi has been widely acknowledged as an effective health exercise.
(5) Tai Chi is famous for its graceful and well-balanced movements.
(6) Tai Chi provides the mental relaxation and physical fitness .
(7 ) I recommend the best school and best trainer in our city to you.
(8) My uncle is a master of Tai Chi .
(9) My uncle is always invited to instruct others all over the country.
根据提示和关键词进行遣词造句,适当地运用句型，注意时态和主谓一致问题。
第四步：连句成篇(衔接词、亮点词汇)
用not only… but also 连接下面的两个句子
(3)Tai Chi is an ancient martial art.
(4) Tai Chi has been widely acknowledged as an effective health exercise.
→ Tai Chi is not only is an ancient martial art but also has been widely acknowledged as an effective health exercise.
用形容词短语作状语连接下面两个句子
(5) Tai Chi is famous for its graceful and well-balanced movements.
(6) Tai Chi provides the mental relaxation and physical fitness .
→Famous for its graceful and well-balanced movements，Tai Chi provides the mental relaxation and physical fitness .
用定语从句连接下面的两个句子
(8) My uncle is a master of Tai Chi .
(9) My uncle is always invited to instruct others all over the country.
→(8) My uncle is a master of Tai Chi who is always invited to instruct others all over the country.
适当地运用高级词汇、复杂句式提升文章的档次 ，增加文章的可读性。
【点睛】范文要点全面，结构清晰，层次分明，上下文连贯，在表达时用到了很多高级词汇，如 show great preference for；be willing to；give sb. a hand；an ancient martial art；be widely acknowledged；be famous for；provides；mental relaxation；physical fitness；essential；instructor；recommend；introduce … to；invite等；复杂句式的运用提升了文章层次，如it作形式主语的运用It is amazing for me to know that you show great preference for Tai Chi and are willing to learn it soon；用并列连词not only… but also连接的句子Tai Chi is not only an ancient martial art, but has also been widely acknowledged as an effective health exercise；定语从句的运用my uncle is a master of Tai Chi who is always invited to instruct others all over the country等。
专题16 应用文写作模板（二）
感谢信、推荐信、申请信、求助信
感谢信
1. 必备词汇
1.thank sb. for sth. /doing sth. 因某事而感激某人
2. be grateful to sb. for sth. 因某事而感激某人
3. show/express/extend/convey my sincere thanks/gratitude to sb. for sth. 向某人表达我诚挚的谢意
4.in trouble 陷入困境
5. make great／good progress 取得很大的进步
6.in/during/over the past/last four years 过去四年
7. be admitted to/into a university 被一所大学录取
8.say thanks to you for helping me 谢谢你帮助我
9. How time flies! 时间过得真快！
10．As time goes on/goes by/with time going on/going by 随着时间的推移
11. thanks to/owing to/because of your help 多亏了你的帮助
12.enjoy myself 玩得高兴
13.pay a visit to. 去参观，拜访
14. have a better understanding of… 对……有更好的理解
15.a place of interest 名胜
2. 高分句式
首段：表达真挚谢意
1. Thank you so much for your generous help.
非常感谢您慷慨的帮助。
2.1 am sincerely grateful to you for your timely help.
我真诚地感谢你及时的帮助。
3.1t was so kind of you to treat me as your own sister.
谢谢你把我当作自己的妹妹。
4.1 am so grateful to you for what you have done for me.
我很感谢你为我所做的一切。
5.1 would like to convey my thanks to you for your kind help.
我想感谢你的帮助。
6. I’m writing to thank you for the few wonderful days in London.
我写信感谢你帮我在伦敦度过的快乐日子。
7.1 am writing to express/show/convey my sincere thanks to you for your help.
我写信真诚地感谢你的帮助。
8. For this reason, I am writing this letter to express my sincere thanks to you.
为此，我写这封信是为了表达我对你真诚的感谢。
中间段：解释感谢的原因或对方的帮助给自己带来的好处
1.Thanks to your help, I have made rapid progress in my English.
多亏了你的帮助，我的英语有了飞速的进步。
2. Without/But for your help(lf it were not for your help) ,I would not have made so much progress in my English.
要是没有你的帮助，我的英语不会取得如此大的进步。
3.1 extend you again a thousand thanks for the great favor.
我太感谢你的帮助了。
结尾段：再次感谢
1.Thanks again for helping me.
再次感谢你对我的帮助。
2.Thank you again for your generous help.
再次感谢你的慷慨帮助。
3. 1 would appreciate it if you could accept my sincere thanks.
如果你能接受我诚挚的感谢，我将不胜感激。
4. Your kindness and help will always be remembered.
我将永远铭记你的善意和帮助。
5.1 deeply/greatly appreciate your hospitality（款待）．
我深深感谢你们的盛情款待。
3. 满分模板
模板①
Dear ________(对象),
I am writing to extend my sincere gratitude for________________________________(感谢的原因). If it had not been for your assistance in________________________________(对方给你的具体帮助), I fear that I would have been________________________________(没有对方帮助会产生的后果).
Everyone agrees that it was you who ________________________________(给出细节). Again, I would like to express my sincere thanks to you. Please accept my sincere thanks.
Yours Sincerely,
Li Hua
模板②
Dear ______,
How about your life/ study/ work? I’m writing to express my thanks for your _____(感谢的原因). If it had not been your assistance in _____(对方给你的具体帮助), I fear that I would have been_____ (没有对方帮助时的后果).
During the ______, you gave me generous help and continuous guidance by _____. First, you _____.What’s more, you ______. There is still one thing that I can’t forget. That is _______. (原因)
Thanks a lot for your kindness again. (再次致谢)
Give my best regards to ______. (祝愿)
Yours sincerely
Lihua
推荐信
1. 必备词汇
1.recommend sb./ sth.to sb. 推荐某人/某物给某人
2.present sb./ sth.to sb. 介绍某人/某物给某人
3.take great pleasure in. 以……为乐
4.afford me much pleasure to do sth. 做某事给我很多快乐
5.in search of 寻找
6.an ideal candidate 一个理想的候选人
7.without reservation 毫无保留
8.be convinced of.. 确信
9.give full play to..… 充分发挥
●表达“能力”
1.have a gift for 对……有天赋
2.be skilled in… 擅长……
3.be experienced in… 有……的经验
4.be an expert in... 熟练于
5.speak fluent English 说一口流利的英语
6.a boy with great ability 有才能的男孩
7.have a good knowledge/command of... 精通
8.be competent for...胜任
●表达“经历”
1.graduate from... 从……毕业
2.be a graduate from.. 毕业于
3.major in.… 主修
4.gain/win/get the first grade scholarship 获得一级奖学金
5.get good grades 取得好成绩
6.an all-around student 一个全面的学生
7.with excellent grades in all subjects 各科成绩优异
8.be given the title of... 被授……称号
9. gain/win the first prize/place 赢得第一名
10. win a gold/silver/copper medal 赢得金牌/银牌/铜牌
●表达“性格”
1.be enthusiastic about 对……热心
2.be easy to get along with 好相处
2. 高分句式
首段：说明推荐对象
1.I am writing to you to recommend.
我写信给你推荐……
2.It is with a great pleasure that I recommend to you.
非常高兴向你推荐……
3.It affords me much pleasure to recommend…to you.
我非常乐意向你推荐……
4.Itake great pleasure in recommending to you...as an ideal candidate.
我很高兴向你推荐……作为一个理想的候选人。
5.I would like to present…for your consideration in your search for a qualified manager.
我想推荐……作为你招聘合格经理的候选人。
中间段：具体介绍被推荐者的个人信息
1.He is an all-around student with excellent grades in all subjects.He has been given the title of the “excellent student”.
他是一个所有学科都成绩优秀的学生。他曾获得了“优秀学生”称号。
2.As a boy with great potential, he is good at solving difficult problems.
作为一个有巨大潜力的孩子，他擅长解决疑难问题。
3.Li Ming, a graduate from Peking university, majors in computer software design.
李明，毕业于北京大学，主修计算机软件设计。
4.He has enjoyed the reputation/title of the Excellent Graduate
他享有“优秀毕业生”声誉和头衔。
5.Therefore,Ido not hesitate to recommend her as an ideal candidate for the post you advertised.
you advertised.
因此，我毫不犹豫地推荐她作为你招聘职位的理想候选人。
结尾段：希望推荐，期待回信
1.In a word, he would be a good choice. I would be grateful if you could consider my recommendation.
一句话，他将是一个不错的选择。如果你能考虑我的建议，我将不胜感激。
2.1 strongly recommend him to you without reservation.I am confident/convincedthat he will be competent for the position.
我毫无保留地强烈向你推荐他。我相信他能胜任这个职位。
3.Therefore,without any hesitation I recommend.…as the right person for your consideration.
因此，我毫不犹豫地推荐……作为合适人选。
4.I would appreciate it if you could consider my recommendation and kindly offer him/her the position.
我希望你能考虑我的建议，给他/她提供这个职位。
5.If you have any further questions regarding his ability or this recommendation,please do not hesitate to contact
me. Please call at 123456.
如果您对他的能力或推荐有任何进一步的问题，请不要犹豫联系我，拨打电话123456。
3. 满分模板
模板①
Dear ______ ,
①It affords me much pleasure to recommend ______(要推荐的人)to you.②During his/her graduate years he/she was my ______ . ③As his/her ______ I found him/her ______. (介绍与此人的关系)
④His/Her performance in the school years was outstanding. ⑤First, he/she had been and showed great talents in ______ . ⑥In addition, he/she has a very pleasant personality. ⑦He/She has developed a strong sense of ______, and working with him/her is always pleasant. ⑧I can state that he/she has all the qualities of being ______.(介绍此人的能力)
⑨Therefore, I here recommend him/her to you with all my heart. ⑩Should you favor him/her with a position in your company/Should you accept him/her in your university？I am sure that his/her future work will prove worthy of your trust. I look forward to hearing from you at the earliest possible moment.
Yours Sincerely,
Li Ming
模板②
Dear______,
I take the pleasure in recommending to you __________(被推荐的人或物). I hope you will be interested in _______（him/her）.
There are several reasons why I think ______ is a good choice. Firstly, _______(理由一). Secondly, ________（理由二）. Last but not least, ________（理由三）. In a word, _______（总结）. I would be most grateful if you would like to consider my recommendation.
申请信
【篇章结构】
1. 说明写信目的，说出招聘信息来源和所申请的职位。
2. 简述个人信息。介绍自己的学历或者经历，本人特长，成绩等。
3. 表示感谢和期待对方优先考虑自己的申请。注意礼貌和自信。
【必备词汇】
1. apply vt.申请
2. master vt.掌握
3. patience n.耐心
4. knowledge n.知识
5. enthusiastic adj.热情的
6. selfless adj. 无私的
7. suitable adj.适合的
8. responsibility n.责任心
9. experience n.经验
10. competent adj.足以胜任的
11. be expert in擅长于
12. be qualified for胜任
13.obtain the precious opportunity获得这个珍贵的机会
14. be capable of doing sth有能力做某事
15 .have the ability to do sth有能力做某事
16.have experience in doing sth/be experienced in在做……上有经验
17.have a good command/knowledge of精通/对……能运用自如
18.major in主修……专业
19.good interpersonal relationship良好的人际关系
20. last but not least最后但也很重要的一点
【高分句式】
一 凤头
1. Learning from the advertisement you have posted that you're in need of...to do sth, I'm writing for a chance to work as...
从你发布的广告中得知你需要……，我写信给你是为了应聘……。
2. I am writing to you in the hope that I may obtain the precious opportunity to....
我写信给你是希望我可以获得……的宝贵机会。
3. I'm writing to request a valuable chance to be... The following are my advantages.
我写信申请……的宝贵机会。以下是我的优势。
二 猪肚
1. As an outgoing.., I feel it easy to get along well with others and I can….
作为一名外向的……,我感觉与真他人友好相处很容易，我能……
2. As an outgoing student, not only can I get along well with interviewees but also I have a sense of duty and cooperation.
作为一名外向的学生，我不仅能与面试者相处融洽，而且我有很强的责任心和合作精神。
3. Sociable and honest, I have a gift for communication with others.
善于交际，有责任心，我的确相信我自己完全符合志愿者工作的条件。
4. What satisfies me most is that I have no difficulty communicating with others in English.
最使我满意的是我用英语和别人交流起来毫不费力。
5. With responsibility and patience, I'll show passionate enthusiasm toward this job.
我有责任心和耐心，会对这份工作表现出满腔热忱。
6. What makes me confident is that I have learned a lot on different fields, which broadens my horizons.
让我感到自信的是我已经在不同的领域学到了很多，这使我拓宽了视野。
6. Having been learning English for many years, I have a good command of English, especially spoken English.
已经学了很多年的英语，我精通英语，尤其是英语口语。
7. I am confident that I’m suitable for the job./I'm qualified to do../I'm equal to doing...
我相信这份工作适合我。/我有做……的资格。/我能胜任做……
8. First of all,I love art and have been learning the traditional Chinese painting in the last few years. Moreover, my English is good enough for communication. Thus, I can help visitors better understand Chinese paintings. Also,I can even show them how to paint with Chinese writing brushes.
首先，我热爱艺术。并且在过去的几年里，我一直在学习中国传统绘画。此外，我的英语很好可以进行交流。这样，我就能帮助游客更好的了解中国绘画。同时，我自己甚至也可以用画笔向他们展示中国画。
三 豹尾
1. I would appreciate it if my application could be favorably considered.
如果我在申请能够被积极的考虑，我将感激不尽。
2. I will be more than grateful if I am given a chance and I am convinced that I will perfectly live up to your expectations.
如果给我一个机会，我将感激不尽。我也相信我不会辜负你们的期望。
3. I am sure I will do well if you give me the chance to be a member of your company.
如果您给我一个机会成为公司的一员的话，我相信自己会做的很好。
4. I would greatly appreciate it if you could take my application into consideration.
如果您能考虑我的申请，我将不胜感激。
5. Should you treat my application favorably, I would spare no effort to offer my best service.
如果您能看中我的申请，我将不遗余力地提供我的最佳服务。
【满分模板】
Dear Sir/Madam,
I'm 自我介绍. I am writing to apply for the opportunity 说明写信的目的.
I'm kind, easy-going and always ready to help others. I 描述个人的相关优势. So I think that I am qualified for the position.
I plan to 对这一职位的的规划及设想.
I'd appreciate it if you could give me the opportunity.
Yours sincerely,
_____________
【模板范文】
晨欣希望学校现需要招聘志愿者，暑假期间教小学生英语。请写一封申请信，简述自己的申请理由，并简述自己的计划。
Dear Sir,
I’m Li Hua from Class One, Senior Two. I am writing to apply for the opportunity to help the students in Chen Xin Hope School with their English. Thus they can improve their English during the summer vacation. Meanwhile, I can learn how to get along well with the students.
I'm kind, easy-going and always ready to help others. I do well in English and English is my favorite subject. In addition, I have won several prizes in English contests. So I think that I am qualified for the position.
I plan to communicate with students first to know what they need. Besides, I'll try to get them more interested in English by telling stories, singing songs, playing games and so on.
I'd appreciate it if you could give me the opportunity.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
求助信
【篇章结构】
1. 自我介绍，点明写作目的
2. 具体陈述所需要哪方面的帮助或者自己遇到的困难
3. 恳请对方帮助并表达谢意
【必备词汇】
1. challenge 挑战
2. facing 面临 (常置于句首作状语)
Facing so much pressure she didn't know what to do
3. faced with面临(常置于句首作状语)
Faced with so much pressure, she could hardly stand it.
4.beg sb.to do sth. 恳求某人做某事
5.beg sb.of sth.恳求某人提供某物
Can I beg you of your help?
6. beg sb.for sth.向某人恳求某物
7. average一般的
8.follow one's advice 采纳某人的建议
I'll follow your advice and try to do my work well.
9. make progress 取得进步
I'm sure with your help I'll make greater progress in my English study.
10. have difficulty in doing sth.做某事有困难
I have much difficulty in my English study.
11 .have trouble in doing sth.做某事很费力
12. help sb.out of difficulty帮助某人摆脱困境
13. would like sb.to do sth.请某人做某事
【高分句式】
一 凤头
1. I’m writing to ask for your help.
我写信是为了寻求你的帮助。
2. I’m writing to ask whether you could do me a favor.
我写信想问您是否可以帮我个忙。
3. I’m writing in the hope that you will be kind enough to do me a favor.
我写信希望您能给我帮助。
4. I’m writing in the hope of your assistance in preparing for the approaching singing talent show.
我写信是希望您能帮我为即将到来的唱歌才艺大赛作准备。
二 猪肚
1. I am poor in overcoming the difficulties in the English study on my own.
我不擅长自行解决英语学习中遇到的困难。
2. I have some difficulties in writing the articles about how Americans spend their holidays and festivals.
我在撰写有关美国人如何度过节假日的短文上遇到了一些困难。
3. I can’t be passionate and energetic in English class so as not to make every moment meaningful and splendid.
我英语课上没有激情不活跃，这样不能让每一分钟有意义和令人满意。
4. I have trouble in mastering the advanced grammar rules and putting them into use in my speaking and writing, which has been annoying me for a long time.
我在掌握高级语法方面有困难，而且不能运用到说和写中，这困扰了我很长时间。
5. I'm not sure whether I have got my ideas across, so I have no choice but to turn to you in the hope that you can correct the mistakes as well as give me some favorable advice on writing.
我不确定我的想法是否已经表达清楚了，所以我只好向您求助，希望您能帮忙纠错，同时针对写作给我一些可行的建议。
6. As it is getting close to the end of the semester, we need to find a parttime job for social practice. I intend to apply for one position in a company.
随着本学期的结束，我们需要找一份社会实践的兼职工作，我打算申请一家公司的职位。
7. Because it is the first time that I have written an application, I wonder if there is anything to pay attention to. So, I'm writing you the letter, hoping you can do me a favor.
因为这是我第一次写个人申请，不知道该注意些什么。所以我写信求助，希望您能帮忙。
8. It is the first time for me to apply for a job, and I'm not quite familiar with the format of the resume and the job application, which I have prepared. So would you please do me the favor to correct the mistakes of the words and format in these materials?
这是我第一次申请工作，我对我准备的个人简历以及工作申请的格式不是很熟悉。所以您能帮我纠正材料中措辞和格式方面的错误吗？
三 豹尾
1. I would appreciate it if you could give me some advice on how to prepare myself for college life.
如果你能给我一些关于如何为大学生活做准备的建议，我将不胜感激。
2. It would be of great help if you can offer me some valuable suggestions on how to make a wonderful English speech.
如果您能帮我提一些关于英语演讲的建议，那将会是很大的帮助。
3. I'd be very grateful if you could do me a favor.
如果您能帮忙，我将感激不尽。
4. If possible, when can I come to meet you at your earliest convenience? Will Friday afternoon do?
如果可能的话，您什么时候方便我去见您？星期五下午行吗？
【礼貌升华练一练】
1. if...could
Please polish my draft. 请润色一下我的草稿。
It would be very nice of you if you could have my draft polished at your convenience.
2. appreciate
Please polish my draft. 请润色一下我的草稿。
It would be greatly appreciated if you could have my draft polished at your convenience.
I would greatly appreciate it if you could have my draft polished at your convenience.
3. possible
Please polish my draft. 请润色一下我的草稿。
Is it possible if you could have my draft polished at your convenience?
【满分模板】
模板①
Dear ______ ,
I am writing to formally request to ______（请求的内容）.The reason for _____________is that_____________（给出原因）. I___________ , so I _____________（给出细节）.I would also like to request ___________（提出进一步的要求）. I am sorry for any inconvenience I have caused. Thank you for your attention to these requests. If you have any questions, do not hesitate to contact me at __________（电话号码）.
I look forward to a favorable reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
模板②
Dear________,
My name is _______________(自我介绍). I’m writing a letter to you to ask for some help. I have met difficulty in _______________(求助内容). First, I find ___________(困难1). Besides, ________(困难2). What’s more, __________(困难3).
Faced with so much difficulty, I have to ask you for some help. Would you like to ____________(委婉提出请求)？In the meanwhile, I beg you to (请求内容) so that ___________(请求目的). Also, I would like you to (请求内容).
I’m sure that I can make great progress in _____________(表达期待).
Yours,
Li Hua
一、申请信
1．（2023春·安徽·高三统考阶段练习）假定你是李华，你校的英语报正在校内招募“中国传统文化”专栏的编辑。请你写封电子邮件申请，内容包括。
1.表明意图；
2.自身优势；
3.表达期望。
注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考词汇:专栏column
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2．（2023·云南·云南师大附中校考模拟预测）假定你是李华，看到英国留学生David 在网上发帖，希望有人能一对一帮助他提高汉语普通话水平，请给他回一封电子邮件，内容包括：
1. 希望来应聘这份工作；
2.有关个人信息；
3. 提高普通话的具体建议。
注意：1. 字数80左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 开头和结尾已给出，且该部分不计入总词数。
一对一：one-on-one
Hi David,
This is Li Hua
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Yours,
Li Hua
3．（2023·天津滨海新·校联考一模）假设你是红星中学学生会主席李华。你从官网得知，亚洲青年文化节(Asian Youth Cultural Festival) 中国赛区组委会正在招募今年英语演讲比赛的承办学校。请你代表学校给组委会写一封邮件，申请承办该活动，内容包括：
1. 承办条件；
2. 初步计划；
3. 希望获准。
注意：1. 词数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Sir/ Madam,
I am Li Hua, president of the Student Union in Hong Xing High School.
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Yours,
Li Hua
二、感谢信/祝贺信
4．（2023·辽宁·校联考一模）假定你是李华，即将参加以“My Dream University”为主题的校英语演讲比赛。请给你的外国好友Jack写封邮件，内容包括：
1. 征求备赛意见；
2. 表示感谢。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Jack,
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
5．（2023春·四川内江·高三四川省内江市第六中学校考阶段练习）假如你是光明高中的学生会主席李华。上周加拿大威斯菲尔德中学(Westfield Secondary School)学生会向你校图书馆捐赠了一批图书，请你给WSS 中学的学生会主席Peter 写一封
信，要点如下：
1.感谢对方捐赠图书。
2.通过EMS国际快递寄去由同学们亲手制作的传统礼物，请对方注意查收。
3.再次表示感谢并希望今后更多地开展两校之间的交流活动。
注意：
1. 词数100左右;2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Peter,
I’m Li Hua,
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Yours,
Li Hua
6．（2023·安徽淮北·统考一模）假定你是红星中学高三学生李华。近期，你校外教Steve做了一场关于读后续写的在线讲座（A Lecture on Continuation Writing）。请你用英文给他写一封电子邮件，内容包括：
1. 表达感谢并简述你的收获；
2. 说明你在读后续写中的困惑并寻求帮助。
注意：
1. 词数80左右；
2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Steve,
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
三、推荐信
7．（2023春·江苏南通·高三海安高级中学校考开学考试）假设你是李华，你的英国朋友Chris想到中国读大学，学习并体验中国文化。请给他回一封电子邮件，内容包括：1. 推荐大学；2. 你的理由；3. 你的期待。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Chris,
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
8．（2023·山东烟台·统考一模）假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Peter发来邮件，请你推荐一部中国电影。请回复该邮件，内容包括：
1．电影介绍；
2．推荐理由。
注意：
1．写作词数应为80左右；
2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Peter,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
9．（2023·广西南宁·统考一模）假定你是李华。你的外国朋友Mike即将到你的家乡旅游，请你给他写一封邮件，向他推荐家乡的民俗文化馆（Folk Culture Museum）。邮件内容包括：
1．阐明写信事由；
2．介绍文化馆特色；
3．表示欢迎。
注意：
1．词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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四、其他应用文
10．（2023·重庆·统考模拟预测）假定你是李华, 准备参加学校组织的Singing English Songs Competition 活动。请给外教Todd写封邮件求助,内容包括：1. 活动简介；2.请他推荐英文歌曲；3.请教英文歌演唱技巧。
注意：1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Todd.
I’m writing to ask for your help.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
11．（2023春·重庆·高三重庆巴蜀中学校考阶段练习）假定你是李华，正在规划自己的高中毕业旅行。请你写一封邮件，向英国好友Jack求助，希望他能帮你解答目前遇到的困惑，内容包括：
1. 写信目的；
2. 求助内容；
3. 希望回复。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为 80左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Jack,
How is it going?
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
12．（2023秋·河南郑州·高三郑州外国语学校校考阶段练习）假如你是李华，你的英国网友Forbes打算抽空到中国学习太极(Tai Chi)，他写信向你求助，请你根据下列要点给对方写一封回信：1.介绍学太极好处；2.负责联系学习地点和老师。
注意:1.词数100左右。
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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参考答案：
1．Dear Sir or Madam,
Knowing that the school English newspaper is looking for an editor responsible for the column “Traditional Chinese Culture”, I’m writing to apply for the position.
I think I’m qualified for it. To begin with, I have a good command of English, especially written English. Besides, I have taken the part-time job as an English editor, from which I have gained relevant experience. More importantly, I have a rich knowledge of traditional Chinese culture.
I would really appreciate it if I could be given the precious chance. I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hui
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假定你是李华，你校的英语报正在校内招募“中国传统文化”专栏的编辑。请你写封电子邮件申请。
【详解】1.词汇积累
寻找：look for→search for
职位：position→post
此外：besides→in addition
有关的：relevant→related
2.句式拓展
合并简单句
原句：I think I’m qualified for it. To begin with, I have a good command of English, especially written English.
拓展句：I think I’m qualified for it because I have a good command of English, especially written English.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Knowing that the school English newspaper is looking for an editor responsible for the column “Traditional Chinese Culture”, I’m writing to apply for the position. (运用了that引导宾语从句)
[高分句型2] Besides, I have taken the part-time job as an English editor, from which I have gained relevant experience. (运用了“介词+关系代词”结构非限制性定语从句)
2．参考范文
Hi David，
This is Li Hua. I learned from your post that you want to improve your Putonghua(Mandarin Chinese)one-on-one. If possible, I feel honored to have the chance to help you.
Please allow me to introduce myself. As a Chinese student, my biggest advantage is that I’ve been a broadcaster in school for years, which equips me with outstanding language proficiency. When it comes to how to learn Putonghua well, I suggest you get yourself involved in Chinese learning activities, such as exploring Chinese culture and learning Chinese history. Another suggestion is to practice listening and speaking every day. What about half an hour’s online video chat with me every evening? I’m right here and ready to help.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours，
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给英国留学生David写一封电子邮件，告知他应聘这份工作的意向，个人信息以及如何提高普通话的建议。
【详解】1.词汇积累
机会：chance →opportunity
允许：allow →permit
建议：suggest →advise
准备好：ready →well-prepared
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Another suggestion is to practice listening and speaking every day.
拓展句：Another suggestion is that you should practice listening and speaking every day.
【点睛】【高分句型1】As a Chinese student, my biggest advantage is that I’ve been a broadcaster in school for years, which equips me with outstanding language proficiency.（运用了that引导的表语从句和which引导的非限制性定语从句）
【高分句型2】When it comes to how to learn Putonghua well, I suggest you get yourself involved in Chinese learning activities, such as exploring Chinese culture and learning Chinese history.（运用了“疑问词+不定式”结构作宾语和省略that的宾语从句以及过去分词作宾补）
3．Dear Sir/ Madam,
I am Li Hua, president of the Student Union in Hong Xing High School. I am writing on behalf of our school to apply to host the English Speech Competition.
Our school stands out as the perfect candidate for its big campus and great facilities. Most importantly, we have years of experience holding the National English Speech Competition, with everyone including school leaders showing strong support. The preliminary plan of our school are as follows. First of all, our organizing committee will get down to work in no time and recruit more volunteers upon being chosen to host the competition. In addition, we will arrange detailed schedules to make the competition well-organized so that the participants can benefit from it and have a better performance. Above all, it’s a golden opportunity for us to show the advantages of our school.
I do hope you could grant us this honor and the festival will definitely turn out to be a success. Thank you for taking us into serious consideration, and your early reply will be highly appreciated.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生代表学校给亚洲青年文化节(Asian Youth Cultural Festival)中国赛区组委会写一封邮件，申请承办该活动。内容包括：1. 承办条件；2. 初步计划；3. 希望获准。
【详解】1.词汇积累
代表：on behalf of→in the name of
初步的：preliminary→initial
肯定地：definitely→surely
考虑：take sth. into consideration→take sth. into account
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Thank you for taking us into serious consideration, and your early reply will be highly appreciated.
拓展句：Thank you for taking us into serious consideration, and I would appreciate it if you could give me your early reply.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Most importantly, we have years of experience holding the National English Speech Competition, with everyone including school leaders showing strong support. (运用了“with+宾语+现在分词”的复合结构)
【高分句型2】In addition, we will arrange detailed schedules to make the competition well-organized so that the participants can benefit from it and have a better performance. (运用了so that引导目的状语从句)
4．Dear Jack,
How are you recently? I’m going to participate in an English speech competition themed My Dream University. With time going by, I’m getting increasingly nervous, so I’m writing to ask for your advice.
Knowing that you have taken part in many competitions, I’d appreciate it if you could give me some practical suggestions. For example, how can I adjust my mindset, improve my contents and hold the attention from audience?
I truly believe that with your help, I’ll have a better performance. Thanks a lot from the bottom of my heart. Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假定你是李华，即将参加以“My Dream University”为主题的校英语演讲比赛。请给你的外国好友Jack写封邮件。
【详解】1.词汇积累
参加：participate in/ take part in→join in
比赛：competition→contest
建议：advice/suggestion→tip
例如：for example→for instance
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：I truly believe that with your help, I’ll have a better performance.
拓展句：If you could offer your help, I’ll have a better performance.
【点睛】[高分句型1]With time going by, I’m getting increasingly nervous, so I’m writing to ask for your advice. (运用了with的复合结构)
[高分句型2]Knowing that you have taken part in many competitions, I’d appreciate it if you could give me some practical suggestions. (运用了that引导宾语从句)
5．Dear Peter,
I’m Li Hua, president of the student union of Guangming high school. On behalf of my school, I’m writing to express my sincere thanks for donating books to us last week.
Our schools have maintained good relationship with each other, and we have benefited a lot. It’s very kind and generous of you to donate a number of books to us, which are informative and helpful to our students. In return, we have sent you some beautiful Chinese knots made by us students by EMS. Please note to check.
I hope we can have more and better communication and cooperation in the future. Thank you again for the books you generally donated. Looking forward to your next visit.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】这是一篇说明文。文章要求考生给WSS中学的学生会主席Peter写信感谢他们捐赠的图书并告知他已经通过EMS国际快递寄去由同学们亲手制作的传统礼物，并希望今后更多地开展两校之间的交流活动。
【详解】1.词汇积累
诚挚的：sincere→genuine
表达：express→ convey
希望：hope→ wish
代表：on behalf of→ represent
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：In return, we have sent you some beautiful Chinese knots made by us students by EMS.
拓展句：In return, we have sent you some beautiful Chinese knots which were made by us students by EMS.
【点睛】【高分句型1】It’s very kind and generous of you to donate a number of books to us, which are informative and helpful to our students.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句）
【高分句型2】 I hope we can have more and better communication and cooperation in the future. （运用了省略从属连词that的宾语从句，作动词hope的宾语）
6．参考范文
Dear Steve,
Thank you very much indeed for the wonderful lecture you gave on continuation writing. I’ve learnt really a lot, because you helped me overcome the bottleneck—how to increase the reading and writing speed.
However, I am still puzzled by some difficulties in it. For example, I find it hard to grasp the gist of the passages, and I also feel it hard to continue when confronted with new words. What can I do? Would you please give me some advice? I would be really grateful if you could help me out.
Thank you very much again. Your earliest reply would be appreciated.
Yours,
Li hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给外教Steve写封电子邮件，对他为学生做的读后续写的在线讲座表达感谢并简述你的收获，说明你在读后续写中的困惑并寻求帮助。
【详解】1.词汇积累
然而：however→nevertheless
困惑的：puzzled→confused
困难的：hard→difficult
感激的：grateful→thankful
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Your earliest reply would be appreciated.
拓展句：I’d appreciate it if you can give me your earliest reply.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Thank you very much indeed for the wonderful lecture you gave on continuation writing. (运用了that/which引导的限制性定语从句，省略了that/which)
[高分句型2] I’ve learnt really a lot, because you helped me overcome the bottleneck—how to increase the reading and writing speed. (运用了because引导的原因状语从句)
7．Dear Chris,
Hearing that you are eager to study in university in China and experience in person our time-honored civilization, I am more than delighted to offer you some advice.
Given your above-mentioned requirements, Peking University is an excellent choice, which is located in our capital Beijing. Regarded as one of the top universities in China, this historic institute of learning boasts good educational resources, ranging from countless distinguished professors to the ideal academic atmosphere, which feeds your need of studying. Plus, Beijing possesses scenic spots like the Imperial Palace, an epitome of our history, which will gain you a deeper insight into our splendid and profound culture.
I sincerely hope that your dream of experiencing China in person one day will come true.
Yours,
Li Hua
Dear Chris,
Delighted to learn that you’re coming to learn in Chinese university, I’m writing to express my warmest welcome to you.
Given your keen interest in Chinese culture, I recommend you apply for Nanjing University, which is one of the first to enroll international students in China. With its profound culture, high-quality instruction, rich variety of courses, wide-range majors and abundant research opportunities, Nanjing University attracts students and scholars from all over the world. Moreover, it is located in Jiangsu, which will attract you with its beautiful scenery and harmonious cultural environment.
I sincerely hope your dream will come true. If you have further questions, don’t hesitate to contact me.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假设你是李华，你的英国朋友Chris想到中国读大学，学习并体验中国文化。请给他回一封电子邮件，内容包括：1. 推荐大学；2. 你的理由；3. 你的期待。
【详解】1.词汇积累
渴望：be eager to do→long to do
实现：come true→fulfill
高兴的：delighted→glad
灿烂的：splendid→brilliant
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：Given your above-mentioned requirements, Peking University is an excellent choice, which is located in our capital Beijing.
拓展句：After I learned your above-mentioned requirements, I think Peking University is an excellent choice, which is located in our capital Beijing.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Hearing that you are eager to study in university in China and experience in person our time-honored civilization, I am more than delighted to offer you some advice. (运用了that引导宾语从句)
[高分句型2] Plus, Beijing possesses scenic spots like the Imperial Palace, an epitome of our history, which will gain you a deeper insight into our splendid and profound culture. (运用了which引导非限制性定语从句)
8．Dear Peter,
Learning you’re interested in Chinese films, I’m glad to share with you one of my favorites. The Wandering Earth II, which was released during the Spring Festival, is an awesome science fiction film starring Jason Wu and Andy Lau.
What appeals to me are the grand scenes and touching plots. Faced with the solar crisis, the Chinese government and scientists shoulder the responsibility of protecting the earth, making joint efforts to keep human civilizations alive. The presented advanced technologies also impressed me and filled me with pride.
I strongly recommend you to enjoy the film which won’t let you down.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给英国朋友Peter写信推荐一部中国电影。内容包括：电影介绍；推荐理由。
【详解】1.词汇积累
上映：release→ put on
了不起的：awesome→ amazing
吸引：appeal to→ attract
建议：recommend→ advise
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Learning you’re interested in Chinese films, I’m glad to share with you one of my favorites.
拓展句：Because I learn that you’re interested in Chinese films, I’m glad to share with you one of my favorites.
【点睛】【高分句型1】The Wandering Earth II, which was released during the Spring Festival, is an awesome science fiction film starring Jason Wu and Andy Lau.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】 Faced with the solar crisis, the Chinese government and scientists shoulder the responsibility of protecting the earth, making joint efforts to keep human civilizations alive. (运用了过去分词作时间状语以及现在分词作伴随状语)
9．Dear Mike,
How is everything going? Knowing that you are going to travel in my hometown, I am writing to recommend the local Folk Culture Museum.
There is a lot to do in the museum. First, what will impress you most is that a variety of cultural handicrafts such as musical instruments, farming tools and so on are exhibited in different halls. Here, you can be involved in making crafts like paper umbrellas and Chinese knots. What’s more, with the help of the guides who is professional , you will have a better understanding of the history and development of our folk culture.
You’re warmly welcome to visit the museum. I’m sure you’ll immerse yourself in the folk culture and fall in love with it.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给外国朋友Mike写一封邮件，向他推荐家乡的民俗文化馆
【详解】1.词汇积累
介绍：recommend→introduce
各种各样的：a variety of→all kinds of
展示：exhibit→show
涉及：be involved in→relate to
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：Knowing that you are going to travel in my hometown, I am writing to recommend the local Folk Culture Museum.
拓展句：Because I know you are going to travel in my hometown, I am writing to recommend the local Folk Culture Museum.
【点睛】【高分句型1】First, what will impress you most is that a variety of cultural handicrafts such as musical instruments, farming tools and so on are exhibited in different halls. (运用了what引导的主语从句和that引导的表语从句)
【高分句型2】What’s more, with the help of the guides who is professional , you will have a better understanding of the history and development of our folk culture.(运用了who引导的定语从句)
10．Dear Todd,
I’m writing to ask for your help.Our school is going to have Singing English Songs Competition next month.Greatly interested in singing, I want to take part in it. Any participant is required to sing an English song for the competition. I am wondering whether you could recommend an English song to me. I would like to sing an English song about young people’s life or dream. Can you find one for me by next Friday? At the same time,could you please help me practise singing the song and show me some useful singing skills?
Thank you for your help.
Yours.
Li Hua
【导语】这是一篇应用文。要求考生给外教Todd写封邮件求助，请他推荐英文歌曲及英文歌演唱技巧。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
参与：take part in → participate in
要求：require → demand
推荐，建议：recommend → suggest
帮助：help → assist
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句： I would like to sing an English song about young people’s life or dream.
拓展句： I would like to sing an English song, whose theme is about young people’s life or dream.
【点睛】【高分句型1】
Greatly interested in singing, I want to take part in it.（运用了过去分词作状语）
【高分句型2】
I am wondering whether you could recommend an English song to me. （运用了whether引导的宾语从句）
11．Dear Jack,
How is it going? I want you to know I’m graduating very soon, and that I’m planning a trip after Gaokao. I’d like to hear your opinions on two critical matters.
First, I’m still wandering between my travel destinations, which are Thailand and Sanya haven’t been abroad before so I have concerns like safety, accommodations and travel. However, I hear travel cost in Sanya has skyrocketed, and I don’t have a big budget. Besides, I’d like you to recommend affordable restaurants with local features. My mouth is already watering at the thought of all sorts of delicacies!
A thousand miles begins with the first step, as Laozi put it. I believe you feel so too and I’m looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
LiHua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假定你是李华，正在规划自己的高中毕业旅行。请你写一封邮件，向英国好友Jack求助，希望他能帮你解答目前遇到的困惑。
【详解】1.词汇积累
意见：opinion→recommendation
然而：however→nevertheless
此外：besides→what's more
各种各样的：all sorts of→varieties of
2.句式拓展
合并简单句
原句：Besides, I’d like you to recommend affordable restaurants with local features. My mouth is already watering at the thought of all sorts of delicacies!
拓展句:Besides, I’d like you to recommend affordable restaurants with local features,where I can enjoy all sorts of delicacies!
【点睛】【高分句型1】First, I’m still wandering between my travel destinations, which are Thailand and Sanya haven’t been abroad before so I have concerns like safety, accommodations and travel. （运用了which引导非限制性定语从句，so连接并列句）
【高分句型2】A thousand miles begins with the first step, as Laozi put it.（as引导非限制性定语从句）
12．Dear Forbes,
It is amazing for me to know that you show great preference for Tai Chi and are willing to learn it soon. I’ m quite sure that I can give you a hand gladly.
Tai Chi is not only an ancient martial art, but has also been widely acknowledged as an effective health exercise. Famous for its graceful and well-balanced movements, Tai Chi provides the mental relaxation and physical fitness that are so essential in our modern stressful lives. Concerning your learning location and instructor, I’m so proud to tell you that I have the ability to recommend the best school and best trainer in our city to you, for actually my uncle is a master of Tai Chi who is always invited to instruct others all over the country. As a result, you can rely on me.
Looking forward to your coming!
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文, 要求写一封回信，告知Forbes学太极相关的情况。
【详解】第一步：
审题: 回信 告知Frobes学太极相关的情况
人称：第三人称
时态：一般现在时
结构：总分法，分三部分，第一部分表示愿意帮助Forbes，第二部分说明学太极的好处和负责联系学习地点和老师，第三部分期望Forbes的到来。
要点：
1. 表示愿意帮助Forbes
2．学太极的好处：是一种有效的健身运动、动作优雅、让人放松
联系学习地点和老师：会介绍最好的太极学校和老师
3．期待Forbes的到来
第二步：列提纲（重点词汇、短语 ）
show great preference for；be willing to；give sb. a hand；an ancient martial art；be widely acknowledged；be famous for provides；mental relaxation；physical fitness ；essential； instructor；recommend；trainer；introduce… to；invite
第三步：连词成句
(1) You show great preference for Tai Chi.
(2) I can give you a hand gladly.
(3) Tai Chi is an ancient martial art.
(4) Tai Chi has been widely acknowledged as an effective health exercise.
(5) Tai Chi is famous for its graceful and well-balanced movements.
(6) Tai Chi provides the mental relaxation and physical fitness .
(7 ) I recommend the best school and best trainer in our city to you.
(8) My uncle is a master of Tai Chi .
(9) My uncle is always invited to instruct others all over the country.
根据提示和关键词进行遣词造句,适当地运用句型，注意时态和主谓一致问题。
第四步：连句成篇(衔接词、亮点词汇)
用not only… but also 连接下面的两个句子
(3)Tai Chi is an ancient martial art.
(4) Tai Chi has been widely acknowledged as an effective health exercise.
→ Tai Chi is not only is an ancient martial art but also has been widely acknowledged as an effective health exercise.
用形容词短语作状语连接下面两个句子
(5) Tai Chi is famous for its graceful and well-balanced movements.
(6) Tai Chi provides the mental relaxation and physical fitness .
→Famous for its graceful and well-balanced movements，Tai Chi provides the mental relaxation and physical fitness .
用定语从句连接下面的两个句子
(8) My uncle is a master of Tai Chi .
(9) My uncle is always invited to instruct others all over the country.
→(8) My uncle is a master of Tai Chi who is always invited to instruct others all over the country.
适当地运用高级词汇、复杂句式提升文章的档次 ，增加文章的可读性。
【点睛】范文要点全面，结构清晰，层次分明，上下文连贯，在表达时用到了很多高级词汇，如 show great preference for；be willing to；give sb. a hand；an ancient martial art；be widely acknowledged；be famous for；provides；mental relaxation；physical fitness；essential；instructor；recommend；introduce … to；invite等；复杂句式的运用提升了文章层次，如it作形式主语的运用It is amazing for me to know that you show great preference for Tai Chi and are willing to learn it soon；用并列连词not only… but also连接的句子Tai Chi is not only an ancient martial art, but has also been widely acknowledged as an effective health exercise；定语从句的运用my uncle is a master of Tai Chi who is always invited to instruct others all over the country等。
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