中考书面表达技巧课件

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作文是会呼吸的痛它活在试卷最后的角落看别人写会痛看自己写会痛反正都会痛
What are yur feelings abut English cmpsitins?
英语书面表达试题属综合性运用试题，是考查学生运用各项语法知识、正确进行书面表达的能力以及善于理解情景提示的内容，抓住要点和中心思想的能力，是“压轴题”，属中考英语重大题型。能否把书面表达题型做好对于英语成绩总成绩能否考好非常重要。
自己对于英语作文的真正的困难？
英语作文中常见的表达错误：
Chinglish现象
Give them scres!
卷面要象清爽的像小仙女1.Clean & Clear2.五官端正字体3.大小一致4.落在线上5.避免毛刺6.用一条横线修改7.字数不少也不多8.无标记
新的课程标准中关于五级水平（即初中毕业要求达到的水平）的要求是： A.能根据写作要求，收集、准备素材； B.能独立起草短文、短信等，并在教师的指导下进行修改； C.能使用常见的连接词表示顺序和逻辑关系； D.能简单描述人物或事件； E.能根据所给的图示或表格写出简单的段落或操作说明。
义务教育阶段 新课程标准 (简称“课标”) 中关于写作的要求
家与父母校园生活人物与地点介绍 喜好兴趣善人善举青少年健康与安全旅行与计划观点建议……
初中阶段高频写作主题
观点看法类说明介绍类咨询建议类叙事描写类
一、评分原则：1.本题总分为20分，按五个档次给分。2.评分时，先根据文章的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次，然后以该档次的要求来衡量，结合内容和语言表达，综合给 定分数。3.考生可以根据要点适当发挥，加入自己的观点。4.词数少于80的，从总分中减去1分。5.拼写错误多，书写较差以致影响表达，在所确定档次的分数范围内，减去1分。 二、各档次的给分范围和要求:第五档(很好): (20—17分)完全完成试题规定的任务，涵盖了所有内容要点，或在发挥时内容有新意或亮点:语言基本无误，行文连贯，表达清楚。第四档(好): (16—13分)完成试题规定的任务，涵盖了基本的内容要点:语言有少量错误，行文基本连贯，表达基本清楚。第三档(一般): (12—9分)基本完成了试题规定的任务，写出了一些内容:语言有一些错误， 行文不够连贯。第二档(较差): (8—5分)未能恰当完成试题规定的任务，只能写出个别要点:语言错误较多，未能清楚传达信息。第一档(差); (4—0分)未能完成试题规定的任务，只能写出与内容有关的一-些单词:语言错误很多，未能清楚传达信息。
同学们，你的作文在哪个等级呢？ 中考作文评分标准
Read make me happy
Reading make me happy.
Reading makes me happy.
Read help me learn mre abut the wrld.
Reading help me learn mre abut the wrld.
Reading helps me learn mre abut the wrld.
阅读不仅使我快乐而且使我了解更多知识。
看太多电视不仅伤眼睛，还影响学习。
★ Watching TV t much is nt nly bad fr ur eyes, but als gets in the way f ur study.
nt nly ……but als……
锻炼不仅有益身心，而且有助于学习
★ Taking exercise is gd fr nt nly my bdy and mind but als my study.
★ Reading nt nly makes me happy but als helps me learn mre abut the wrld.
(仿写1) 多锻炼对我们来说是很重要的
(仿写2) 上网课对我们来说是有必要的
(仿写3) 玩游戏对学生来说纯属浪费时间
It's imprtant fr us t take mre exercise.
It's necessary fr us t take nline lessns.
It's a waste f time fr students t play games.
difficult / easy / excitinginteresting / usefuldangerus / difficultwnderful / pssibleimpssible / unbelievableunexpected / necessary…
It is + adj. +fr sb + t d sth
★ Wash yur hands many times a day.
★ It is a gd habit t wash hands very ften.
★ Develp a gd habit f washing hands frequently.
When we talk abut……
When talking abut ……
When it cmes t ……
★ When we talk abut nline games, many students shw great interest in it.
★ When talking abut nline lessns, bth teachers and students say n.
★ When it cmes t nline shpping, different peple have different ideas.
一、 怎么把句子写“高级”——添词原则
l、在名词前面添上一个或多个形容词。Vanessa is a teacher.Vanessa is a kind, patient and knwledgeable English teacher.
2、 在名词后面加上同位语或定语从句。我们要学好英语。We shuld master English. 我们中学生要学好英语这门世界上最广泛使用的外语。We high schl students shuld master English, the mst widely used freign language in the wrld.
3. 在“助系情之后，实义动词之前”加“副词”I really/undubtedly lve yu.I can certainly d it.This is bviusly an excellent idea.•万能副词undubtedly; certainly; definitely; 4. 多使用短语I gt up quickly. I gt up as quickly as pssible. She always help thers. She is always ready t help thers./ She is always ffering a helping hand t thers.
二、 怎么把句子写“高级”——换词原则
The persn wh has influenced me mst is Spud Webb.
He is a great persn wh never gives up.
三、 怎么把句子写“高级”——扩句原则
Althugh he is t small, yet he has a big dream.
He was fighting fr his dream since his childhd. As a saying ges, “___________________________________” In 1985, he became an NBA player.
Where there is a will , there is a way.
I hpe I can be a persn like him ne day.
1.审（search）
1.一封信2. 邀请来北京3.介绍北京4.悠久的历史5.风景名胜
Beijing is China’s capital. It has a lng histry.2. There are many interesting places in Beijing. The Great Wall is famus. A lt f peple visit it every year.3. Beijing Duck is very delicius, peple all like t eat it very much.
3.连（add & cnnect ） 加首尾，注意首尾呼应。使结构完整。可以采取总分总的结构，开头要直奔主题！
Beijing is China’s capital. It has a lng histry.There are many interesting places in Beijing. The Great Wall is famus. A lt f peple visit it every year. Beijing Duck is very delicius, peple all like t eat it very much .
Dear Liu Wei， Vacatin is cming. I hpe that yu can cme t Beijing.
Peple wh relax well wrk well. Welcme t Beijing. Yurs, Li Dan
中考作文评分标准 第一档： 包含所有内容要点；完全完成了试题规定的任务；有清晰的文本框架，较多的语法结构和词汇；有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑、行文连贯、表达清楚；语言基本无误。
第二档： 基本包含所有要点；遗漏少量次要点，较全面地完成了试题规定的任务；有较清晰的文本框架，比较多样的语法结构和词汇；行文基本连贯，表达基本清楚；语言有少量错误。
连接词（cnnectin wrds）
first, secnd, third, first f all, then, next, finally, at the same time, in the end, at last
thugh, althugh, but, hwever, while
s, , as a result, therefre
as fr, such as, like, fr example, fr instance
and, as well as, bth… and, what’s mre, nt nly.. but als
as we knw, in a wrd, all in all, generally speaking
Let’s have a try
1._________________I am tired, I keep n wrking till midnight.
2.We like ding kinds f sprts,___________ swimming, running and hiking.
3.__________,he std up. Then he gt ut. ________,he went back. _________________, he smiled.
Thugh/Althugh
like/such as
Finally/At last
3.连 （add & cnnect ）
As we knw, Beijing is China’s capital. It has lng histry .There are many interesting places in Beijing, what’s mre, the Great Wall is famus. A lt f peple visit it every year. As fr fd, Beijing Duck is very delicius, peple all like t eat it very much.
Beijing is China’s capital. It has a lng histry.There are many interesting places in Beijing. The Great Wall is famus. A lt f peple visit it every year. Beijing Duck is very delicius, peple all like t eat it very much .
Dear Liu Wei， Vacatin is cming. I hpe that yu can cme t Beijing.
Peple wh relax well wrk well. Welcme t Beijing. Yurs, Li Dan
4.改（crrect & beautify)---美
Dear Liu Wei, Vacatin is cming. I hpe that yu can cme t Beijing.
Peple wh relax well wrk well. Welcme t Beijing. Yurs， Li Dan
As we knw, Beijing is China’s capital .It has a lng histry .
There are many interesting places in Beijing,
what’s mre, the Great Wall is famus . A lt f peple visit it every year.
As fr fd, Beijing Duck is very delicius, peple all like t eat it very much.
the capital f China
places f interest
such as Beihai Park, Tian’an Men Square and the Palace Museum.
Eating Beijing duck is many peple’s favrite.
As the saying ges, “All wrk and n play makes Jack a dull by.”
写作必备万能句汇总： 1回信类作文句型
01开头部分Hw are yu? Hw's everything ging?Hw are things with yu? I'm writing t yu abut... I'm writing t tell yu smething nice t hear frm yu again.Let me tell yu smething abut the activity.I'm glad t have received yur letter.It is my great pleasure t hear frm yu.I'm pleased t hear that yu're cming t China fr a visit.I'm writing t thank yu fr yur help during my stay in America.
02结尾部分
I'm lking frward t yur reply.I'd appreciate it if yu culd reply earlier.Lking frward t yur early reply. Hpe t hear frm yu sn.Lking frward t seeing yu!Best wishes!
中考作文必备的实用句型
1. It is bvius that 不用说 / 很显然　2. Of all the … 在各种……之中3. There is n dubt that 毫无疑问4. As is knwn t all 众所周知5. Frm my pint f view 我个人认为6. Persnally 我个人认为7. As far as I am cncerned 在我看来8. As far as I knw 据我所知9. When it cmes t...，说到……10. With the increase/grwth f the ppulatin随着人口的增加……11. With the advance f science and technlgy随着科技的进步……
12. It is necessary (fr sb.) t d / that ………是必要的13. It is imprtant (fr sb.) t d / that ………是重要的14. It is prper (fr sb.) t d / that ………是适当的15. spend … n sth. / ding sth. 花费 　16. it takes sb. sme time t d sth.花费17. If yu dn't ..., yu'll ... 如果你不……，你就会……　18. s … that …如此……，以至于……19. I think / I dn't think that …我认为，…… / 我认为……不20. I wnder whether …　我想知道是否……21. I suggested that yu shuld (nt)… 我建议你……22. …is als a gd way fr yu. ……对你来说也是个好办法。
中考作文必备的谚语
1.Every cin has tw sides. 任何事物都有两面性。2.Failure is the mther f success. 失败是成功之母。3.Practice makes perfect. 熟能生巧。4.Actins speak luder than wrds. 事实胜于雄辩。5.A gd beginning is half dne. 良好的开端是成功的一半。6.Dn't put ff till tmrrw what shuld be dne tday.今日事，今日毕。 7.Time and tide wait fr n man. 时不我待。
目的在于重视自己记忆句子结构和句法规则，巩固词法知识，体现句意理解
在语境中，根据需要，进行内容替换，写出句式相同、语义不同的句子。
范围限定形式造句，自己可根据提示，在各种语境中根据图片、关键字、问题等写句。