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这是一份2024届高考英语复习写作专题13热点话题课件,共30页。PPT课件主要包含了应用文写作推荐信,读后续写等内容,欢迎下载使用。
(2020·北京卷)假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你们学校英语戏剧俱乐部外籍指导教师Jim因疫情滞留英国。复学在即,作为俱乐部负责人,你给Jim写一封电子邮件,请他推荐一名外籍指导教师,内容包括:1.条件及要求;2.表示感谢并提醒注意防护。注意:1.词数不少于50;2.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yurs,Li Hua
Dear Jim,Hw are yu ding? I hpe everything's OK with yu.Our schl's drama club plans t start practising.①Since yu're away in Britain, we need a drama teacher t be in yur place.②Wuld yu please recmmend ne fr us? He r she shuld be a native English speaker, currently in Beijing, and experienced in bth directing and teaching.
Thank yu fr yur help.Please take care f yurself.③Remember t wear a mask when necessary.Best wishes!Yurs,Li Hua
1.词汇美:文章运用了很多高级词汇,如be away, be in ne's place, recmmend, native English speaker, currently, experienced, take care f等。2.句式美:①句Since yu're away in Britain是Since引导的原因状语从句。②句Wuld yu please recmmend ne fr us?是委婉请求的高分句式。③句when necessary是when引导的时间状语从句的省略句,其中省略了it is。
假定你是李华,你的笔友Chris 想申请加入学校的汉语俱乐部,需要展示一项中国特色的才艺,他写信向你求助,希望你能推荐一项中国特色的才艺展示。请给他写一封回信。内容包括:1.推荐才艺;2.推荐理由;3.表达祝福。注意:1.词数80左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Chris,____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yurs,Li Hua
【参考范文】Dear Chris,I knw that yu want t participate in the Chinese club in ur schl, where yu need t shw talents with characteristics.And I am writing t advise yu t take up a cking curse full f the Chinese taste.Such a chice can aruse Chinese peple's great awareness t Chinese fd.As we all knw, ur Chinese peple attach great imprtance t eating.If yu can intrduce a dish, I believe they can be attracted a lt.Mrever, learning t ck is an amazing thing fr all f us.Best wishes t yu! I hpe yu can achieve it successfully.Yurs,Li Hua
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。I am a dctr, s I lve my jb.I always have, but I feel particularly prud t d it at the mment.[悬念1] With a pandemic sweeping thrugh the wrld, peple are aviding hspitals as pssible as they can.Hwever, pregnant wmen still need t cme int the hspital.Babies still need t be brn.
Right nw, it is even scarier fr these wmen, as they have t cme in n their wn, ften feeling frightened.Their families are separated frm them due t safety measures.We've always prvided physical supprt, but nw we are ding s n a different level — we als have t keep them cmpany and ffer emtinal supprt.Unfrtunately, sme f the wmen have caught crnavirus, and being at the hspital puts me at risk.Persnally, I feel prtected because we have full persnal prtective equipment, which we wear all thrugh ur 13-hur shifts.Yu dn't knw if smene is carrying crnavirus r nt.
I didn't want t put my family in danger by bringing the virus hme and pssibly passing it n t them.As a single parent t my children, Xiahua, 12 years ld, and Xiayng, 9, I realised I had t make a very tugh decisin abut my family's safety when the cuntry went int lckdwn.Giving up wrk wasn't an ptin fr me.I wanted t be able t lk after the wmen wh were feeling prly and very scared, but I culd nt leave my little children behind either.[悬念2]
At this pint, my sister suggested that the children stay with her and her husband fr the time being and leave me t my hspital duties.I thught it was a great idea, s we set a date fr her t pick them up.When I explained the situatin t my children and tld them they needed t stay with their aunt fr a while, they bth seemed upset, but agreed t g.On the day I saw them ff, they kept lking back at me until they were t far t be seen.[悬念3]
注意:续写词数应为150左右。After that, my wrklad increased because sme f my c-wrkers fell ill.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________A week later, it came t Xiayng's birthday.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
一、理清文章大意关键:Wh: a dctrWhere: in the hspitalWhen: while a pandemic sweeping thrugh the wrldWhat: During the epidemic perid, the authr had t make a chice.Hw: The authr left her children t her sister.大意:本文讲述了作者是一位有着两个孩子的单亲母亲,也是一位医生,在疫情期间,在工作和家人之间难以抉择,最后选择去医院工作,把孩子交给她妹妹一家照顾。
二、挖掘文中悬念点悬念1思考:作者此刻为什么感到当医生特别骄傲?悬念2思考:作者会想出两全的办法吗?悬念3思考:孩子会适应妈妈不在场的生活吗?
三、分析段落开头语段首句1思考:①工作量具体增加了多少? ②作者都做些什么?她有时间陪孩子吗?③作者还记得儿子小勇的生日吗?
段首句2思考:①作者在儿子生日时能回家吗?不能的话,是不是要拍照,和家人视频庆祝生日呢? ②家人会怎么安慰和鼓励作者?③作者有什么感受?通过以上思路,预设续写情节如下:Paragraph 1:工作量增加→全身心投入工作→没时间留给孩子→为孩子生日做补偿Paragraph 2:在医院和家人视频聊天→和同事一起为儿子唱生日歌→感想
After that, my wrklad increased because sme f my c-wrkers fell ill.We had t wrk duble shifts and my life was dedicated t nthing but wrk.Every day I came back hme cmpletely exhausted and fell fast asleep.As sn as I wke up, I needed t g t the hspital.I pured all my effrts int my patients, which was very rewarding.Hwever, it trubled me that I didn't have time fr my wn kids.Xiayng was ging t celebrate his birthday sn.I had t d smething t make up fr him.
A week later, it came t Xiayng's birthday.I made a vide call t them frm the hspital.I greeted them n the screen with mask and gggles n.Surprisingly, they recgnised me at nce, shuting excitedly.I tk the phne t the hall, where my c-wrkers sang “Happy Birthday, Xiayng!” They als encuraged him t be strng, and a grin appeared n his face.My children's understanding and my c-wrkers' supprt gave me a warm feeling, and I believe nthing culd ever truly separate me and my belved nes.We are sure t win.
1.使用恰当的修饰词让描写更加生动。①nthing but用得恰到好处,表现出主人公全力以赴投入工作。②cmpletely exhausted表明主人公工作辛苦。③warm一词用得精妙,概括了医生大家庭的温暖,人们互助、互爱,共渡疫情难关。
2.词汇与语法结构丰富、准确。①be dedicated t是be devted t的高级表达。②pured all my effrts int是一个增分点。③As sn as引导时间状语从句,which引导非限制性定语从句,that引导主语从句。④with mask and gggles n是with复合结构,是一个增分点。
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。As we get lder, there are certain gifts standing ut in ur memries fr a variety f reasns.One gift I was given and treasured mst was a dll named Patsy.She wasn't riginally mine but was my yunger sister's New Year gift, but n hlding Patsy I immediately fell in lve with her and culdn't bear t part with her.Luckily, my sister was quite happy t exchange dlls.Frm then n Patsy was my baby and I cntinued t lve her dearly.
Anther gift I ffered my Mum has been shining in my mind.On a Saturday, I was n my way t the lcal cinema when I happened t glimpse (一瞥) at the windw f the gift shp at the crner f ur street.There were lvely glves, pretty flwered handkerchiefs, and rse patterned teacups and saucers, all in pretty bxes.Seeing all these lvely gifts reminded me that it wuld sn be Mther's Day and my mther's birthday.Wuldn't it be nice, I thught, if I culd give my mther smething really special, smething I'd bught myself? S I stepped inside the shp and admired a dressing table set, which was a green cut glass with rnamental tray (装饰托盘) and several matching pieces.I was sure my mther wuld lve it.
The lady must have seen my disappintment when she tld me the price.But she had a suggestin which immediately lifted my spirits.She pulled ut a large ntebk and wrte my name in it and the gift I wanted t buy, and in return I paid her a penny frm my pcket mney.It meant n sweets that day but I didn't care.At the age f nine, I'd made my very first lay-by (分期付款) felt like a grwn-up.Frm then n, every Saturday I drpped in at the shp n schedule and paid a penny, which the lady dutifully recrded in her ntebk.
注意:续写词数应为150左右。The day befre Mther's Day I paid the last tw pence.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
T excited t wait till Sunday, I excitedly presented the gift t my mther._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【参考范文】The day befre Mther's Day I paid the last tw pence.As the lady wrapped the gift in brwn paper and tied it with string, I attentively signed the ntebk t say I had cmpleted my lay-by.I thanked her and excitedly left the shp.“Be careful nt t drp it,” she called after me.Securely, the gift tucked under my arm, I skipped the shrt distance hme.
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