专题22 应用文写作：五年（2019-2023）高考英语真题分项汇编（解析版）

五年（2019-2023）年高考英语真题分项汇编

专题22  应用文写作（新高考）（解析版）

〖2023年高考真题题组〗

【2023▪新高考I&II卷】

假定你是李华，外教Ryan准备将学生随机分为两人一组，让大家课后练习口语，你认为这样分组存在问题。请你给外教写一封邮件，内容包括；

1. 说明问题；

2. 提出建议

注意:

   1. 写作词数应为80个左右：

   2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

Dear Ryan,

I’m Li Hua from Class 3.

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Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【答案】

Dear Ryan,  

I’m Li Hua from Class 3. I think it’s not a good idea to randomly pair up students for the spoken English training after class. The reasons are as follows.

To begin with, randomly pairing up students may lead to unbalanced language abilities within the groups. This can hinder the progress of students as the more advanced one may dominate the conversation, leaving little room for the other students to improve. Besides, students may feel uncomfortable or less motivated if paired with someone who they don’t get along with or have difficulty communicating with.

My suggestion is to group students based on their language abilities or to let students choose their own partners. This way, everyone can feel more comfortable practicing and improving their spoken English together.

Thank you for considering my suggestion.

 Yours sincerely,

 Li Hua

【解析】

【导语】本篇是应用文写作，要求考生给外教写一封邮件，告诉他将学生随机分为两人一组，让大家课后练习口语，你认为这样分组存在问题。

【详解】1. 词汇积累

首先：to begin with → first of all

提高：improve → progress

建议：suggestion → advice

选择：choose → select

2句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：My suggestion is to group students based on their language abilities or to let students choose their own partners.

拓展句：My suggestion is that we are supposed to group students based on their language abilities or to let students choose their own partners.

【点睛】[高分句型1]

This can hinder the progress of students as the more advanced one may dominate the conversation, leaving little room for the other students to improve.（运用了现在分词作状语）

[高分句型2]

Besides, Students may feel uncomfortable or less motivated if paired with someone who they don’t get along with or have difficulty communicating with.（运用了省略句和who引导定语从句）

【2023▪浙江1月卷】

上周末你参加了校学生会组织的“认识我们身边的植物”活动。请为校英文报写篇报道，内容包括：

1. 活动的过程；

2. 收获与感想。

注意：

1. 写作词数应为80左右；

2. 请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。

Getting to Know the Plants Around Us

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【答案】

Getting to Know the Plants Around US

Last weekend, I participated in a “Getting to Know the Plants Around Us” activity organised by our Students’ Union.   

The activity began with a lecture by a local botanist, who taught us about the different characteristics and uses of various plant species. We then went on a natural walk to observe and collect samples of different plants. Throughout the event, I was struck by the incredible variety of plants that exist in our world and learned about plants that are used for medical purposes, as well as those that provide food and shelter for animals. I also gained a greater appreciation for the role that plants play in maintaining the balance of our ecosystem.
    Overall, it was a valuable and enriching experience.

【解析】

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生为校英文报写篇报道，介绍上周末校学生会组织的“认识我们身边的植物”活动。

【详解】1. 词汇积累

参与：participate in → attend

开始：begin → start

观察，调查：observe → survey

震惊：strike → astonish/surprise

2. 句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句： Last weekend, I participated in a “Getting to Know the Plants Around Us” activity organised by our Students’ Union.

拓展句： Last weekend, I participated in a “Getting to Know the Plants Around Us” activity organised by our Students’ Union, which benefited me a lot.

【点睛】【高分句型1】The activity began with a lecture by a local botanist, who taught us about the different characteristics and uses of various plant species.（运用了who引导的非限制性定语从句）

【高分句型2】Throughout the event, I was struck by the incredible variety of plants that exist in our world and learned about plants that are used for medical purposes, as well as those that provide food and shelter for animals.（运用了一般过去时的被动语态和定语从句）

【2023▪安徽省、云南省、吉林省、黑龙江省四省联考卷】

你刚观看了你校与英国一所友好学校联合在线上举办的音乐会。请在线上留言板上写一则评论，内容包括：

1. 音乐会特点；

2. 观看感受；

3. 意见建议。

注意：1. 写作词数应为80左右；

2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

This online concert is absolutely fantastic.

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【满分作文一】

This online concert is absolutely fantastic.

    The performers from the two schools have done their best in entertaining the audience with one song after another. Their performances are undoubtedly of high quality, which makes the concert almost no different from a live one. I enjoyed every second of the concert and was particularly attracted when the boys and girls from Britain started to sing the traditional Chinese song “Liang Zhu”. They performed the song in a way that touched my heart and gave me a feeling of connection.

I hope there will be more opportunities in the future for us Chinese students and our international friends to learn about and from each other.

【满分作文二】

This online concert is absolutely fantastic. 

The joint performance organized by our school and a friendly school in the UK showcased a variety of musical styles from different cultures. As an audience member, I was deeply impressed by the talented musicians and singers who performed flawlessly. The concert created a sense of unity and connection among the viewers, despite the distance between us. However, I think it would have been better if there were subtitles or translations for the lyrics of the songs to make it more accessible for international viewers.

Overall, it was an amazing event, and I look forward to more such collaborations in the future.

【满分作文三】

This online concert is absolutely fantastic.

With top-quality sound and video production, it created an immersive and unforgettable viewing experience. What kept me utterly spellbound were the sheer brilliance of the performers and seamless transition between each song. It is not hard to see that each music piece was carefully selected and each performance was filled with extraordinary/remarkable passion and professionalism. The only drawback is that information about the performers and their backgrounds, particularly for those who are not familiar to the audience, is not provided enough.

It would be better to know more about their experiences and how they honed their musical skills to reach this level of excellence, enhancing the audience’s appreciation of their artistry.

【解析】

【导语】本篇书面表达属于开放作文。要求考生就学校与英国一所友好学校联合在线上举办的音乐会，在线上留言板上写一则评论。

【详解】1.词汇积累

确定无疑地：undoubtedly→without doubt

尤其地：particularly→ especially

感动：touch→ move

希望：hope→ expect

2.句式拓展

同义句

原句：Their performances are undoubtedly of high quality, which makes the concert almost no different from a live one.

拓展句：There is no doubt that their performances are of high quality, which makes the concert almost no different from a live one.

【点睛】【高分句型1】Their performances are undoubtedly of high quality, which makes the concert almost no different from a live one.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句）

【高分句型2】I enjoyed every second of the concert and was particularly attracted when the boys and girls from Britain started to sing the traditional Chinese song “Liang Zhu”. （运用了when引导的时间状语从句）

【2023▪浙江1月卷】

上周末你参加了校学生会组织的“认识我们身边的植物”活动。请为校英文报写篇报道，内容包括：

1. 活动的过程；

2. 收获与感想。

注意：

1. 写作词数应为80左右；

2. 请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。

Getting to Know the Plants Around Us

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【答案】                                                     Getting to Know the Plants Around Us
   Last weekend, I participated in a “Getting to Know the Plants Around Us” activity organised by our Students’ Union.
   The activity began with a lecture by a local botanist, who taught us about the different characteristics and uses of various plant species. We then went on a natural walk to observe and collect samples of different plants. Throughout the event, I was struck by the incredible variety of plants that exist in our world and learned about plants that are used for medical purposes, as well as those that provide food and shelter for animals. I also gained a greater appreciation for the role that plants play in maintaining the balance of our ecosystem.
    Overall, it was a valuable and enriching experience.

【解析】

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生为校英文报写篇报道，介绍上周末校学生会组织的“认识我们身边的植物”活动。

【详解】1. 词汇积累

参与：participate in → attend

开始：begin → start

观察，调查：observe → survey

震惊：strike → astonish/surprise

2. 句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句： Last weekend, I participated in a “Getting to Know the Plants Around Us” activity organised by our Students’ Union.

拓展句： Last weekend, I participated in a “Getting to Know the Plants Around Us” activity organised by our Students’ Union, which benefited me a lot.

【点睛】【高分句型1】The activity began with a lecture by a local botanist, who taught us about the different characteristics and uses of various plant species.（运用了who引导的非限制性定语从句）

【高分句型2】Throughout the event, I was struck by the incredible variety of plants that exist in our world and learned about plants that are used for medical purposes, as well as those that provide food and shelter for animals.（运用了一般过去时的被动语态和定语从句）

〖2022年高考真题题组〗

【2022新高考I&II卷】

假定你是校广播站英语节目“Talk and Talk”的负责人李华，请给外教Caroline写邮件邀请她做一次访谈。内容包括：

1. 节目介绍；

2. 访谈的时间和话题。

注意：

1. 写作词数应为80左右；

2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

Dear Caroline,

__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

Dear Caroline,

This is my first time that I have invited you to attend our program —Talk and Talk. It is ten years since Talk and Talk was established. This is an amazing program where you can share your ideas with students.

Now, when having trouble in learning English well, plenty of students urge to know how to deal with it. As our distinguished foreign language teacher, your aid can help us a lot. If you are available on this Sunday, I together with the whole Talk and Talk staff am waiting for your coming.

I’d appreciate it if you take my invitation into consideration.

Yours,

Li Hua

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，假定你是校广播站“Talk and Talk”的负责人李华，请给外教Caroline写邮件邀请她做一次访谈。

【详解】1.词汇积累

建立：establish→set up

了不起的：amazing→fabulous

帮助：aid→assistance

许多：plenty of→a lot of

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：As our distinguished foreign language teacher, your aid can help us a lot.

拓展句：You are our distinguished foreign language teacher, whose aid can help us a lot.

【点睛】[高分句型1]This is an amazing program where you can share your ideas with students.(运用了where引导的限制性定语从句)

[高分句型2]Now, when having trouble in learning English well, plenty of students urge to know how to deal with it.(运用了状语从句的省略)

〖2021年高考真题题组〗

【2021新高考I&II卷】

你校英文报Youth正在庆祝创刊十周年。请你写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：

1. 读报的经历；

2. 喜爱的栏目；

3. 期望和祝福。

注意：

1. 写作词数应为80左右；

2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

第一节 这是一篇针对报纸创刊10周年投稿的文章。通过审题，我们可以确定，本文主要以第一人称进行展开和叙述。文章可以用三段式的结构。第一段简明表示对报刊创办10周年的祝贺。第二段是文章的主体，主要阐述阅读报纸的经历和喜爱的栏目。第三段表达对报纸的期望和祝福。

Dear Editor-in-Chief，

Congratulations on the 10th anniversary of Youth.

I have been a devoted reader since I subscribed to the newspaper. Obsessed with it, I read each issue from cover to cover. It boasts a variety of columns, of which Chinese culture is my favorite. The series of contents not only introduces abundant cultural knowledge but also values the inheritance of brilliant culture and strengthens our cultural confidence.

As a fan of Youth. I recommend that it will be better if it carries some articles about the life of foreign teens and I hope that it will become even more popular.

Sincerely yours,

Li Hua

Dear editor,

My name is Li Hua, a senior 3 student. I am writing to offer my sincerest congratulations on the 10th anniversary ceremony of YOUTH.

Since it was founded, YOUTH has been popular with many students including me, a regular reader of YOUTH. Thepaper’s broad content and rich knowledge have not only widened my horizons but also given me much enjoyment. I am fond of all its columns, but what impressed me most is culture, where I can read humorous stories, poems, fictions and so on to improve my oral English.

Please accept my sincere congratulations again and I best wish that YOUTH could achieve greater success and gain more popularity.

Yours,

Li Hua

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生向学校英文报Youth表达自己的经历，并送上自己的祝福。

【详解】1.词汇积累

建立：found→establish

沮丧的：depressed→upset

此外：besides→what’s more

得到：receive→obtain

2.句式拓展

同义句改写

原句：These stories can relieve my stress and broaden my horizon.

拓展句：Not only can these stories relieve my stress, but also they can broaden my horizon.

【点睛】[高分句型1] When feeling depressed, I often choose to enjoy the novel part which includes a lot of imaginative stories. (运用了状语从句的省略和which引导的定语从句)

[高分句型2] Refused as I was, I still received some great encouragement, which gives me confidence to be a writer. (运用了as引导的让步状语从句和which引导的非限制性定语从句)

〖2020年高考真题题组〗

假定你是李华, 上周日你校举办了5公里越野赛跑活动。请你为校英文报写一篇报道, 内容包括:

1. 参加人员；

2.跑步路线:从校门口到南山脚下；

3. 活动反响。

注意:

1. 写作词数应为80左右:

2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

A Cross-Country Running Race

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【答案】

A Cross-Country Running Race

Last Sunday witnessed an extraordinary cross-country running race, which nearly drew the attention of every student and teacher of our school.

The students selected from every class took part in the competition. The route measured five kilometers, from our school gate to the foot of Nanshan Mountain. Every runner tried their best to finish the task, with their classmates along the way giving them necessarily help as well as encouragement. At last, all the runners managed to arrive the finish line, receiving cheers from all the directions.

The activity was highly spoken of, because not only did it provide chance for us to exercise, but also made us more cohesive.

【解析】

【分析】

这是一篇应用文。本篇要求考生就上周日学校举行的5公里越野赛活动写一篇新闻报道。

【详解】体裁:应用文

时态:根据提示，时态应以一般过去时为主

结构:总分总

要求:

1. 参加人员

2. 跑步路线

3. 活动反响

第二步:列提纲(重点词组)

attend/witness/ draw one’s attention/ manage to do sth./ measure/ speak highly of/ provide sth. for sb.

第三步:连词成句

1. Last Sunday witnessed an extraordinary cross-country running race, which nearly drew the attention of every student and teacher of our school.

2. The students selected from every class took part in the competition.

3. The route measured five kilometers, from our school gate to the foot of Nanshan Mountain.

4. Every runner tried their best to finish the task, with their classmates along the way giving them necessary help as well as encouragement.

5. At last, all the runners managed to arrive the finish line, receiving cheers from all the directions.

6. The activity is highly spoken of, because not only does it provide chance for us to exercise, but also makes us more cohesive.

第四步:连句成篇(加入衔接词或从句)

表示并列的连词:and/but/or/so…

状语从句连词:because/ if/ though/ although…

定语从句连词:which/ that/ when/ where…

第五步:修改润色(加入高级词汇或短语)

【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了一些高分句型，例如:Last Sunday witnessed an extraordinary cross-country running race, which nearly drew the attention of every student and teacher of our school. 中which引导非限制性定语从句；The activity is highly thought of, because not only does it provide chance for us to exercise, but also makes us more cohesive.中使用了部分倒装。