浙江高考英语写作分类训练：邀请信

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邀请信
1．假定你是李华，想邀请外教Tom一起参观校园摄影作品展（photography exhibition).请给他写封邮件，内容包括：
1. 展览时间、地点；
2. 展览内容、意义；
3.表达期待。
注意：1. 词数80左右；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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2．假定你是李华，本周末你班计划去农业生态园活动。请你给你校外教Tim写一封邮件。具体内容包括：
1.邀请他参加；
2.时间、集合地点、出行方式；
3.活动安排。
注意：1).词数 100左右；
2).可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考词汇：ecological garden 农业生态园
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3．假定你是学生会主席李华，在高三毕业前夕邀请你们学校的外籍家长来校参加毕业典礼，请你写一封电子邮件，内容要点如下：
1. 毕业典礼时间地点；
2. 主要安排。
参考词汇：文凭：diploma
注意：1. 词数80左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Father/Mother,
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Yours,
Li Hua
4．假定你是李华，曾交换去英国学习，现已回国三个月。你想念在英国的老师Mrs. Smith，请根据以下要点给她写一份封信：
1. 感谢他曾经对你的帮助；
2. 介绍自己现在的学习情况；
3. 邀请他端午节来中国感受中国文化。
注意：1. 词数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Mrs. Smith,
I'm writing to
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Yours,
Li Hua
5．假定你是李华，得知外教Mr. Smith喜欢中国传统文化，想邀请他到你家过端午节。请给他写一封信，内容包括：
1. 时间；
2. 一同过节的家人；
3. 活动。
注意：1. 词数80左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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6．假定你是李华。疫情期间，你校“文艺周”（Art Week）闭幕汇演将通过APP平台bilibili进行直播。你的外国笔友Jack对中国文艺节目很感兴趣，请用英语写一封信，邀请他在线观看。要点如下：
1. 提出邀请；
2. 观看的时间、方式和汇演的内容。
注意：1. 词数80左右；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 参考词汇：疫情期 epidemic period； 新冠病毒 novel coronavirus
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7．假如你是李华， 你班交换生Mike 这两天因身体不适， 未能到校上课，请给她写一封邮件，要点如下：
1. 表示安慰；
2. 询问他是否能参加下周六学校举行的足球比赛；
3. 邀请他下个月到你家共度端午节（the Dragon Boat Festival）
注意：1. 词数80左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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8．假定你是李华，想邀请你校交换生Jonah 一起参加你校“中国文化节”活动。请你用英语给Jonah写一封邀请信，内容包括：
1. 活动时间和地点；
2. 活动内容；
3. 活动目的。
注意：1. 词数80词左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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9．假设你是James，你的加拿大笔友Jessie想了解一下你将要参加的2015年全国英语夏令营（National English Summer Camp）的有关信息，请你根据下面的内容给她写一封信，谈谈有关情况和活动意义，并邀请她参加你们的活动。
活动地址：浙江杭州
时间：2015年7月底，共4天
参加人员：来自全国各地的英语爱好者：中、美、英、澳四国的英语老师
活动内容：举行英语演讲比赛，交流学习英语经验，观看学生表演，游览杭州等。
注意：
1. 内容必须包括以上提供的内容要点，可以适当增加细节，使内容连贯；
2. 词数100左右。
Dear Jessie,
Nice to hear from you again!
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Best wishes!
Yours truly,
James
10．假设你是新华中学的学生会主席李华，你们学校将在4月23日举行活动庆祝“世界读书日”。请你以学生会的名义邀请你们校报的外籍编辑Mr. Smith来参加活动，内容包括:
1. 时间: 4月23日下午3点至5点;
2. 地点: 学校图书馆205室;
3. 内容: 举行经典诵读，分享读书心得。
注意:1. 词数80左右;
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考词汇: 世界读书日World Reading Day经典诵读classic reading
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1．Dear Tom,
Learning you have a keen interest in taking photos, I am writing to invite you to attend the photography exhibition to be held in our school lecture hall at 9 a.m. next Sunday.
In the exhibition, you can enjoy the pictures varying from students' school life to fantastic views of our campus. There many photography lovers will be present, with whom you can communicate and share your experience. I am sure you will have a great time there.
Looking forward to your favorable reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】这是一篇应用文。
【详解】第1步:根据提示可知,本篇为一封信; 假定你是李华，想邀请外教Tom一起参观校园摄影作品展（photography exhibition).请给他写封邮件，内容包括：1. 展览时间、地点；2. 展览内容、意义；3.表达期待。
第2步:根据写作要求,确定关键词(组) , 如: have a keen interest in 非常感兴趣；fantastic views美丽风景； varying from …to 从…到…的变化；looking forward to期待； favorable reply.佳音；communicate and share沟通和分享等。
第3步:根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第4步:连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【点睛】本文内容完整,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式,如Learning you have a keen interest in taking photos, I am writing to invite you to attend the photography exhibition to be held in our school lecture hall at 9 a.m. next Sunday.非谓语动词结构的运用；以及定语从句的使用There many photography lovers will be present, with whom you can communicate and share your experience. 全文中没有中国式英语的句式,显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外, 文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然,为文章增色添彩。
2．Dear Tim,
We're planning to pay a visit to an Ecological Garden this Saturday morning.I'm writing to invite you to join us.
We are to gather at the school gate and go there by bike at 7:30 am.It will take us 30 minutes to get there.The garden is known to have a wide variety of flowers,trees and plants,which you can fully indulge yourself in.Besides,we are allowed to go into the fields to pick fruit and vegetables,with which we are to make our lunch.You' ll certainly have great fun and get a good knowledge of modern agriculture.
Looking forward to your participation.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一封邮件，邀请外教Tim来参加农业生态园活动。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时。
要求：
1．邀请他参加；
2．时间、集合地点、出行方式；
3．活动安排。
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
plan to do sth; pay a visit to; invite; is known to do; a wide variety of; indulge yourself in; Besides; be allowed to do; have great fun; get a good knowledge of; looking forward to
第三步：连词成句
1. We're planning to pay a visit to an Ecological Garden this Saturday morning.
2. I'm writing to invite you to join us.
3. We are to gather at the school gate and go there by bike at 7:30 am.It will take us 30 minutes to get there.
4. The garden is known to have a wide variety of flowers,trees and plants,which you can fully indulge yourself in.
5. Besides,we are allowed to go into the fields to pick fruit and vegetables,with which we are to make our lunch.
6. You' ll certainly have great fun and get a good knowledge of modern agriculture.
7. Looking forward to your participation.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last
2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition, As well as, Not only…but (also)…, Including
3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, But, Although + clause(从句), In spite of + n/doing, On the one hand…,on the other hand…, Some…,while others…,As for, So…that…
4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰
第五步：润色修改
【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了一些地道的表达，如定语从句The garden is known to have a wide variety of flowers,trees and plants,which you can fully indulge yourself in以及Besides,we are allowed to go into the fields to pick fruit and vegetables,with which we are to make our lunch。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
3．Dear Father/Mother,
On behalf of all senior three graduates, I am writing to request the pleasure of your company at the graduation ceremony.
The ceremony is scheduled to take place in the lecture hall on Friday, June 21st, 2019, lasting for three hours, from 8:00 to 11:00. The grand occasion begins with an inspiring speech delivered by the principal, followed by a video featuring the unforgettable moments of our school life and the presentation of diplomas. Towards the end, your heartfelt congratulations to your children will be highly appreciated.
Looking forward to you witnessing our ceremony.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】这篇书面表达属于应用文，要求学生写一封邀请信，邀请外籍家长来校参加毕业典礼。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时和一般将来时。
结构：总分法
总分法是指先提出写信目的，然后具体阐述细节，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：1.写信目的
      2.毕业典礼具体安排
      1）此次毕业典礼的时间和地点
      2）毕业典礼的内容和流程安排
      3. 表达对受邀家长的期待
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
On behalf of; be scheduled to; take place; begin with; followed by; congratulations to; deliver; presentation; highly appreciated; look forward to
第三步：连词成句
1. On behalf of all senior three graduates…
2. The ceremony is scheduled to take place in the lecture hall on Friday
3. The grand occasion begins with an inspiring speech delivered by the principal, followed by a video featuring the unforgettable moments of our school life
4. your heartfelt congratulations to your children will be highly appreciated
5. Looking forward to you witnessing our ceremony.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last
2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,
3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…
4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，
第五步：润色修改
如词汇的升级、短语代替单词、从句和非谓语的运用等等
【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，用词比较高级，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了较多的非谓语动词，如The ceremony is scheduled to take place in the lecture hall on Friday, June 21st, 2019, lasting for three hours使用了动词不定式和现在分词；The grand occasion begins with an inspiring speech delivered by the principal, followed by a video featuring the unforgettable moments of our school life and the presentation of diplomas中使用了现在分词和过去分词；文中还灵活运用了被动语态，如The ceremony is scheduled to take place in the lecture hall on Friday和your heartfelt congratulations to your children will be highly appreciated；除此之外，文章的用词也比较高级，如on behalf of，deliver，feature，witness等，全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
4．Dear Mrs. Smith,
It has been three months since we parted last time. I’m writing to thank you very much for your kind help and care when I stayed in Britain. With your help, my English has improved a lot and I have learned more about your culture. Now my teachers and friends are surprised at my fluent English.
As you know, the Dragon Boat Festival is coming. It is an important traditional festival for us Chinese. I sincerely invite you to celebrate it in China with my family. Besides, I can also show you around some places of interest. It is a good chance for you to embrace the beauty of Chinese culture.
I am looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】这是一篇应用文。是按要求写一封表达回国后的感谢并邀请对方来中国过端午的回信。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时和一般将来时。
结构：总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：
1. 感谢他曾经对你的帮助；先描述离别三个月的情况，再写感谢他曾经给你的帮助和关照。It has been three months since we parted last time. I’m writing to thank you very much for your kind help and care when I stayed in Britain.
2. 介绍自己现在的学习情况；在他的帮助下，英语提高了很多，也了解到了他们的文化，现在老师和朋友们都很惊异我讲一口流利的英语。With your help, my English has improved a lot and I have learned more about your culture. Now my teachers and friends are surprised at my fluent English.
3. 邀请他端午节来中国感受中国文化。先介绍中国的龙舟节，是中国重要的传统节日。邀请他和我的家人一起庆祝这个节日。还可以带他游玩一些景点，这对于他来说是一个拥抱魅力中国的良好机会。As you know, the Dragon Boat Festival is coming. It is an important traditional festival for us Chinese. I sincerely invite you to celebrate it in China with my family. Besides, I can also show you around some places of interest. It is a good chance for you to embrace the beauty of Chinese culture.
4. 静候回复。I am looking forward to your reply.!
第二步：列提纲 （重点词组及句型）
since we parted last time；I’m writing to；With your help；improved a lot；are surprised at；my fluent English；As you know；traditional festival；sincerely invite you；to celebrate it；show you around； some places of interest；a good chance for you to； embrace the beauty of Chinese culture
第三步：连词成句
It has been three months since we parted last time.
I’m writing to thank you very much for your kind help and care when I stayed in Britain.
With your help, my English has improved a lot and I have learned more about your culture.
Now my teachers and friends are surprised at my fluent English.
As you know, the Dragon Boat Festival is coming.
It is an important traditional festival for us Chinese.
I sincerely invite you to celebrate it in China with my family.
Besides, I can also show you around some places of interest.
It is a good chance for you to embrace the beauty of Chinese culture.
I am looking forward to your reply.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last
2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,
3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although + clause(从句), In spite of + n/ doing, On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…
4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result, not because…but because…
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，
第五步：润色修改
【点睛】文章思路清晰，语言规范，段落整齐，语篇连贯，层次清晰。使用了较为高级的句式和词汇：现在完成时态结构：It has been three months since we parted last time. 介词短语做状语：With your help, my English has improved a lot and I have learned more about your culture. 形式主语：It is a good chance for you to 高级词汇：embrace the beauty of Chinese culture.拥抱中国文化的美。高级句式和词汇的应用提升了写作的档次，整个短文显示出了作者高水平的英语表达能力。
5．Dear Mr. Smith,
Glad to know you are interested in Chinese culture, I’m writing to invite you to come to my home to celebrate the Dragon Boat Festival on May 5. It’s traditionally a time for family reunion, so my parents and my brother will all be there. We’ll make zongzi together and have a big dinner. We’ll also race dragon boats in memory of Qu Yuan, which will surely leave a deep impression on you. If you’re able to come, I’ll go and pick you up at your place.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇考查的作文类型是邀请信。
【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，假定你是李华，得知外教Mr. Smith喜欢中国传统文化，想邀请他到你家过端午节。请给他写一封信，内容包括：1. 时间；2. 一同过节的家人；3. 活动。
第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组）：be interested in (感兴趣)；invite sb. to do sth.(邀请某人做某事)；the Dragon Boat Festival (端午节)；reunion(团聚)等。
第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。此处文章主要应用一般现在时和一般将来时。
第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【高分句型一】The reason why I’m writing to you is that I would like to invite you to come to my home to celebrate the Dragon Boat Festival on May 5. 我给你写信的原因是我想邀请你来我家庆祝5月5日的端午节。运用表语从句。
【高分句型二】My parents and my brother will all be there because it’s traditionally a time for family reunion. 我的父母和哥哥都会去，因为这是家庭团聚的传统。运用because引导原因状语从句。
6．Dear Jack,
Knowing that you are enthusiastic about Chinese art, I’m writing to inform you of arrangements about Our school’s annual Art Week.
Due to the novel coronovirus, the closing ceremony is to be performed at 8:00 pm, this Friday on the APP bilibili. A wide range of fantastic performances, including choral, traditional dancing and programs related to our battle against the virus, will be given, thus making it a golden chance to get a deeper taste of Chinese culture. Please log on timely to enjoy the feast.
I would appreciate it if you could accept my invitation.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写封邀请信邀请笔友Jack在线观看“文艺周”闭幕汇演。
【详解】第一步：审题。
体裁：邀请信应用文
时态：根据提示，时态应为一般将来时为主。
要点：1 就外国笔友Jack对中国文艺节目的兴趣，提出观看文艺周闭幕汇演的邀请。
      2 汇演的时间，方式和内容
结构布局：总分总
第一段，针对外国笔友Jack对中国文艺节目的兴趣，邀请观看文艺周闭幕汇演。
      第二段，1 观看闭幕汇演的时间和方式。
              2 汇演的节目内容：歌唱，舞蹈，小品，武术等
      第三段，再次发出邀请。

第二步：列重点词语，词组（注意好词的使用）
如：bury oneself in, appreciate, take a view, closing ceremony ,be scheduled to, by means of, a vast amount of 等

第三步：连词成句（注意好句型的使用，如非谓语动词，复合句，注意拼写和时态问题）
如：Learning that you have buried yourself in appreciating Chinese arts for a long time, I’m writing to invite you to take a view of our school’s annual Art Week.等

第四步：连句成篇（注意衔接词的使用）
1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second…, Finally, In the end, At last;
2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition, As well as, not only…but (also);
3.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡。

第五步：润色修改。
【点睛】本文内容完整，要点齐全，语言规范，词数适当，段落分布合理。作者较多的使用非谓语动词结构，如“Knowing that you are enthusiastic about Chinese art, I’m writing to inform you of arrangements about Our school’s annual Art Week.”使用的是现在分词作状语，“A wide range of fantastic performances, including choral, traditional dancing and programs related to our battle against the virus, will be given, thus making it a golden chance to get a deeper taste of Chinese culture.”使用的是过去分词作定语，现在分词作状语。展现了作者对非谓语动词结构较好的驾驭功底，使得文章句式更加灵活，为文章的表达增添色彩。
7．Dear Amy,
I am terribly sorry to learn that you are absent from class as you suddenly fell ill. Hopefully you’ll soon be all right.
As scheduled, our football match will take place next Saturday. I wonder if you can be well enough to participate in it by then. How I wish you could play together with us! By the way, our traditional Dragon Boat Festival is approaching next month. As far as I know, you are interested in Chinese traditional culture. It is a good opportunity for you to catch a glimpse of the ways to celebrate Chinse traditional festivals. Therefore, my family and I are all expecting your arrival to enjoy the authentic festive atmosphere with us.
Don’t hesitate to tell me whether you could come or not. Wish you a quick recovery! Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文, 要求写一封邮件。
【详解】第一步：
审题：邮件    
人称：第一、二人称
时态：一般现在时
结构：总分法，分三部分，第一部分表示安慰，第二部分询问和邀请，第三部分祝Mike早日康复，期待得到回复。
要点：
1. 对Mike 身体不适表示安慰
2．询问和邀请
①询问他是否能参加下周六学校举行的足球比赛；
②邀请他下个月到你家共度端午节
3．祝Mike早日康复，期待得到回复。
第二步：列提纲（重点词汇、短语）
be absent from；fall ill；be all right；take place；participate in；approach；be interested in；traditional culture；opportunity；catch a glimpse of；celebrate Chinse traditional festivals；arrival；the authentic festive atmosphere；a quick recovery
第三步：连词成句
（1）You are absent from class.
(2) You suddenly fell ill.
(3) Hopefully you’ll soon be all right.
(4) Our football match will take place next Saturday.
(5) I wonder if you can be well enough to participate in it by then.
(6) How I wish you could play together with us!
(7) Our traditional Dragon Boat Festival is approaching next month.
(8) You are interested in Chinese traditional culture.
(9)It is a good opportunity for you to catch a glimpse of the ways to celebrate Chinse traditional festivals.
(10) My family and I are all expecting your arrival to enjoy the authentic festive atmosphere with us.
(11)Don’t hesitate to tell me whether you could come or not.  
(12)Wish you a quick recovery!
根据提示和关键词进行遣词造句,适当地运用句型，注意时态和主谓一致问题。
第四步：连句成篇(衔接词、亮点词汇)
用表示原因状语（从句）的连词连接下面两个句子
（1）You are absent from class.
(2) You suddenly fell ill.
→You are absent from class as you suddenly fell ill.
→You are absent from class because you suddenly fell ill.
→You are absent from class because of your sudden illness.
→You are absent from class due to your sudden illness.
→You are absent from class as a result of your sudden illness.

用多种形式表达“……活动”将要进行
(4) Our football match will take place next Saturday.
→Our football match is to take place next Saturday.
→ Our football match is scheduled to take place next Saturday.
→ It is scheduled that our football match will take place next Saturday.
→ As scheduled, our football match will take place next Saturday.
适当地运用高级词汇、复杂句式提升文章的档次，增加文章的可读性。
【点睛】范文要点全面，结构清晰，层次分明，上下文连贯，在表达时用到了很多高级词汇，如 be absent from ；fall ill；take place；participate in；approach；be interested in ；traditional culture；a good opportunity；catch a glimpse of；celebrate Chinse traditional festivals；the authentic festive atmosphere；a quick recovery等；复杂句式的运用提升了文章层次，如原因状语从句的运用you are absent from class as you suddenly fell ill；宾语从句的运用I wonder if you can be well enough to participate in it by then； 感叹句式的运用，增加感情色彩 How I wish you could play together with us!；it作形式主语句式的运用It is a good opportunity for you to catch a glimpse of the ways to celebrate Chinse traditional festivals等。
8．Dear Jonah,
Knowing you are interested in Chinese culture, I’m writing to invite you to join us in “Chinese Cultural Festival”.
It will be held in the school gym from December 10th to December 16th, which aims to arouse students’ enthusiasm for the Chinese traditional culture. A variety of activities will be organized, such as a Chinese poetry contest, an exhibition of paper-cutting and introduction to Chinese traditional festivals.
I would be looking forward to your coming with great pleasure.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一封信，向交换生介绍“中国文化节”活动并邀请他参加。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时和一般将来时。
结构：总分法
   总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：1. 表明写信意图
      2. 活动相关介绍
      1）活动时间和地点
      2）活动内容
      3）活动目的
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
be interested in；Chinese Cultural Festival；hold；traditional culture；activity；introduce；invite；look forward to
第三步：连词成句
1. I’m writing to invite you to join us in Chinese Cultural Festival.
2. Let me introduce the festival to you.
3. It will be held in the school hall from August 1st to August 7th.
4. Various activities will be involved in this festival.
5. You can feel the charm of Chinese traditional culture.
6. Looking forward to your coming.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last
2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,
3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…
4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，
第五步：润色修改
【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了主从复合句，如：It will be held in the school gym from December 10th to December 16th, which aims to arouse students’ enthusiasm for the Chinese traditional culture.这句话运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句；使用了一些固定词组，如be interested in ; aim to ; a variety of等。
9．Dear James,
    Nice to hear from you again! As you know, this summer vacation, at the end of July, 2015, we English-lovers from all over the country will go to a four-day English Summer Camp in Hangzhou, Zhejiang Province. Some English teachers from China, the USA, England and Australia will join us. In the camp, we will have an English speaking competition, watch some wonderful performances given by the students and visit some places of interest in Hangzhou. Besides, we will exchange our English learning experience and talk about our colorful school life in English. I think this summer camp will greatly improve my spoken English and I will make some new friends there. I do hope you will come and join us.
   Best wishes!
Yours truly,
James
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求写一封信。
【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，本篇为一封信件；假设你是James，你的加拿大笔友Jessie想了解一下你将要参加的2015年全国英语夏令营（National English Summer Camp）的有关信息，请你根据下面的内容给她写一封信，谈谈有关情况和活动意义，并邀请她参加你们的活动。内容包括：活动地址（浙江杭州），时间（2015年7月底，共4天），参加人员（来自全国各地的英语爱好者：中、美、英、澳四国的英语老师）和活动内容（举行英语演讲比赛，交流学习英语经验，观看学生表演，游览杭州等）。时态应为一般现在时、一般将来时。
第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如：summer vacation (暑假)，the end of July, 2015 (2015年7月底)，English-lovers (英语爱好者)，English speaking competition (英语演讲比赛)，exchange our English learning experience (交流学习英语经验)等。
第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【高分句型1】Some English teachers will join us, who are from China, the USA, England and Australia.使用who引导的非限定性定语从句。
【高分句型2】
Exchanging our English learning experience and talking about our colorful school life in English will greatly improve my spoken English and make us make some new friends there. 使用动名词短语。
10．Dear Mr. Smith,
I’m Li Hua, chairman of the Student Union of Xinhua High School. We are going to celebrate the World reading Day on Apr. 23. I’m writing to invite you to take part in the celebration.
The celebration to be held in Room 205 in our school library will last from 3:00 pm. to 5:00 pm. There will be classic reading in the activity and some students will share their opinions about what they have read as well.
We hope you will accept our invitation if it is convenient for you.
Sincerely yours,
Li Hua
【分析】这是一篇提纲类写作。
【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，假设你是新华中学的学生会主席李华，你们学校将在4月23日举行活动庆祝“世界读书日”。请你以学生会的名义邀请你们校报的外籍编辑Mr. Smith来参加活动，内容包括：1. 时间: 4月23日下午3点至5点；2. 地点: 学校图书馆205室；3. 内容: 举行经典诵读，分享读书心得。
第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组）：chairman (主席)；World reading Day (世界读书日)；take part in (参加)；classic reading(经典诵读)；last (持续)；as well (而且)等。    
第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。此处文章主要应用一般将来时。
第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【点睛】范文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式，如The celebration to be held in Room 205 in our school library will last from 3:00 pm. to 5:00 pm.非谓语动词的运用；There will be classic reading in the activity and some students will share their opinions about what they have read as well.运用了宾语从句。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。