网购 热点06 -备战中考英语高分作文（广东专用版）

备战中考英语高分作文

热点06 网购

一、材料作文

1．随着网络的发展，人们消费观念转变，购物方式也在悄然地发生变化。“网购”成为一种时尚，越来越多的学生也正加入到网购群体中。请你根据以下提示，写一篇网上购物的文章。

优点：

1. 足不出户；节约时间；避免拥挤、劳累。

2. 价格通常比较便宜。

3. 可供选择的范围广，品种多。

缺点：

1. 只能看到图片，看不到商品本身。

2. 容易购买大量不太需要的东西，造成浪费。

注意：

1. 所表述的内容必须包含以上所有方面；

2. 词数80—100，开头文章已给出，不计入总词数。

参考词汇：

网购 shopping online；避免做某事 avoid doing sth；商品 goods；导致 cause

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【参考范文】

With the development of the Internet, many people are used to shopping online. It has become a fashion in our daily life. Some of us students also join the group.

Shopping online has many advantages. Just by a click of the mouse, you can buy what you’re interested in without going outdoors. You can avoid getting tired and being trapped in the crowded people and cars and save time. When shopping online, you can choose from more varieties of goods, whose prices are generally lower.

Every coin has two sides. Its disadvantages are obvious, too. On the one hand, it’s very easy for you to buy goods different from the pictures you see on the Internet. On the other hand, shopping online may cause people to buy goods that are not badly needed. That’s a waste of money.

All in all, I love shopping online.

【详解】[总体分析]

① 题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文；

② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；

③ 提示：根据所给中文提示，写一篇作文介绍网上购物的优点和缺点。

[写作步骤]

第一步，介绍网购的优点；

第二步，介绍网购的缺点。

第三步，最后介绍自己的感受。

[亮点词汇]

①be used to doing sth习惯做某事

②be interested in对……感兴趣

③on the one hand...on the other hand一方面……另一方面……

[高分句型]

①you can buy what you’re interested in without going outdoors.（what引导的宾语从句）

②When shopping online, you can choose from more varieties of goods, whose prices are generally lower.（when引导的时间状语从句以及whose引导的定语从句）

2．随着网络的发展，人们消费观念转变，购物方式也在悄然地发生变化。“网购”成为一种时尚，越来越多的学生也正加入到网购群体中。请你根据以下表格所给的提示信息，以 “Shopping online” 为题写一篇关于网上购物的文章。

要求: 1.所表述的内容必须包含表格中的所有方面，可以适当自由发挥。

2.条理清楚，表达得当，字迹工整，书写规范。

3.文中不得出现本人真实的学校、班级和姓名。

4.词数在100左右，文章开头已经给出，不计入总词数，但要抄写到答题卡上。Shopping online

With the development of the Internet, many people are used to shopping online. It has become a fashion in our daily life. Some of us students also join the group.

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【参考范文】：

Shopping online

With the development of the Internet, many people are used to shopping online. It has become a fashion in our daily life. Some of us students also join the group.

Shopping online has many advantages. Just by a click of the mouse, you can buy what you’re interested in without going outdoors. You can avoid getting tired and being trapped in the crowded people and cars and save time. When shopping online, you can choose from more varieties of goods, whose prices are generally lower.

Every coin has two sides. Its disadvantages are obvious, too. On one hand, it’s very easy for you to buy goods different from the pictures you see on the Internet. On the other hand, shopping online may cause people to buy goods that are not badly needed. That’s a waste of money.

All in all, I love shopping online.

【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文，要求按照表格内要点提示介绍网络购物的优缺点，写作时需要涵盖表格中的全部要点，切忌遗漏。

2.写作指导：文章以一般现在时，第三人称为主，注意主谓一致问题；写作时注意按照要点分段叙述，第一段点明主题；第二段介绍网络购物的优点；第三段介绍网络购物的缺点；最后一段总结全文或发表个人感悟。

3．随着社会的发展，网上购物成为一种新型的便利的购物方式。 但它与实体店购物体验的比较依然是人们热衷的话题。 请根据下表提示，写一篇英语短文，谈谈网上购物的利与弊。

写作要求：

1. 语句流畅，书写规范。

2. 包含提示内容，并可适当发挥。

3. 词数80—100，首句已给出，不计入总词数。

Shopping online is quite popular in our daily life now. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

【参考范文】

Shopping online is quite popular in our daily life now. It is a new way of shopping. Many things are offered and wait for your choosing. Convenience is the most important advantage. You can buy anything that you like. You don’t have to queue with other shoppers. Meanwhile, it is often open for 24 hours a day.

However, there are many disadvantages about shopping online. You can’t actually see the real products. So you may be cheated easily. Also, many people will miss the best opportunity to get along well with their friends and share the joy of shopping.

In conclusion, we should make proper use of online shopping.

【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于议论文写作。要求根据所给的要点提示来谈谈网购的利与弊。注意要点齐全。

2.写作指导：本文应该用第三人称和一般现在时来介绍。第一段写网购的优点；第二段写网购的弊端；第三段总结。在介绍内容时，力求语言准确，内容完整，保证行文连贯，条理清晰。做到无语法和标点错误。

4．随着网络的发展，人们消费观念转变，购物方式也在悄然地发生变化。“网购”成为一种时尚，越来越多的学生也正加入网购群体中。请根据表格内容，以 “The Opinions of Shopping Online”为题写一篇英语短文。

注意：1. 词数80～100。

2. 所表述的内容必须包含表格中的所有方面，可适当增加自己的观点。

3. 文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称。

4. 文章开头已给出，不计入总词数。

参考词汇：advantage （优点）   avoid doing sth （避免做某事）   real object （实物）   goods （n. 商品）   cause （v. 导致）The Opinions of Shopping Online

With the development of the Internet, many people are used to shopping online. It has become a fashion in our daily life.

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【参考范文】

The Opinions of Shopping Online

With the development of the Internet, many people are used to shopping online. It has become a fashion in our daily life.

Some of us students also join the group. Shopping online has many advantages. Just by a click of the mouse, you can buy what you’re interested in without going outdoors. You can avoid getting tired and being trapped in the crowded people and cars and save time. When shopping online, you can choose from more varieties of goods, whose prices are generally lower.

Every coin has two sides. Its disadvantages are obvious, too. On the one hand, it’s very easy for you to buy goods different from the pictures you see on the Internet. On the other hand, shopping online may cause people to buy goods that are not badly needed. That’s a waste of money.

All in all, I love shopping online.

【详解】题干解读：这篇作文要求学生们介绍人们对现在非常受欢迎的“网购”这一现象的不同观点，并陈述自己的看法。题目中用表格列出了网购的优点和缺点，学生们应将这些内容用正确的英语表达出来，并进行适当的补充，发表自己的看法。

写作指导：审题可知，这篇短文应用一般现在时态、第三人称和第一人称叙述。写作时应注意将表格中的内容都包括在内，不要遗漏要点；注意英语句式结构的特点和汉语的不同，使用正确的词汇、短语和句型进行表达，可以简单句结构为基础，穿插并列句、复合句和其他复杂句式的使用，提升文章档次。同时注意上下文的衔接，使文意连贯、表达流畅。

5．随着社会的发展，网上购物在我们的日常生活中成为一种流行的购物方式。请你根据下表提示，谈谈网上购物的利与弊。

提示：

要求：

1.参考提示信息，可适当发挥；

2.语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；

3.文章不得出现任何真实信息（姓名、校名和地名等）；

4.词数：不少于70词。

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【参考范文】：

With the development of society, shopping online is quite popular in our daily life now. It’s a new way of shopping. Many things are offered and wait for your choice. It’s convenient for us to shop online. You can buy anything you like. You don’t have to wait in line with other shoppers. Besides, it’s often open for 24 hours a day.

However, there are many disadvantages about shopping online. You can’t actually see the real products. So you may be cheated easily. Also, many people will miss the best chance to get along well with their friends and share the joy of shopping.

In a word, we should make proper use of the Internet shopping.

【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文，题目要求我们根据所给表格的内容提示，谈谈网上购物的优缺点。

2.写作指导：时态主要为一般现在时，人称主要为第二人称。本文分为三部分，首段介绍网上购物的优点，第二段介绍了网上购物的缺点，第三段点明了对待网上购物的看法。写作过程注意分层次，条理要清晰，把观点阐述清楚。要保证表达准确，语法正确。

6．随着网络的发展,人们消费观念转变,购物方式也在悄然地发生变化。“网购” Online Shopping成为一种时尚与便捷,越来越多的学生也正加入网购群体中。请你根据以下提示,写一篇以网购Online Shopping的短文。

优点:

1. 生活便利；2.有更多时间和精力专注于学习和工作。

2.价格通常比较便宜。

3.避免劳累,越来越受欢迎。

缺点:

1.只能看到图片,看不到商品本身也检查不到质量。

2.容易购买大量不太需要的东西,造成浪费。

参考词汇:网购 shopping online；避免做某事 avoid doing sth； 商品 goods； 导致 cause

写作要求:

1. 短文应包括所提供的所有内容,尽可能使用所给的参考词汇,可以适当发挥,行文连贯；

2. 不得出现真实的人名、地名及能够透露你个人身份的信息；

3. 词数:80词左右。开头已给出,不计入总词数。

Online Shopping

With the development of the Internet,many people are used to shopping online. It has become a fashion in our daily life. Some of us students also join the group. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

【参考范文】

Online Shopping

With the development of the Internet，many people are used to shopping online. It has become a fashion in our daily life. Some of us students also join the group.

Shopping online has many advantages.  Shopping online has made our daily life more convenient and comfortable . You can concentrate more time and energy on study and work .You can avoid getting tired. So it is becoming more and more popular.Every coin has two sides. It also has disadvantages. On the one hand， you only can see the pictures ,you can’t see the goods or check their qualities . On the other hand, shopping online may cause people to buy goods that are not needed. That’s a waste of money.

All in all， I love shopping online .

【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于议论文写作，写作时要按议论文格式写。在写作时应承接短文开头；第二段叙述网购的利与弊；第三段表达我对网购的观点。

2.写作指导：本文应该用第二、三人称来叙述内容；时态采用一般现在时为主，描述网购成为时尚时，人们使用网购的情况应描写细致；并且网购的优点、缺点以及我的看法等需要叙述完整，保证条理清晰。

7．Your teacher asks you to discuss the advantages and disadvantages of online shopping. Please make a speech(about 80 words)according to the form:

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【参考范文】

Online shopping is a new way of shopping. It offers a lot of advantages. The most important one is convenience. You can shop whenever you like as the online shops are open 24 hours a day, and you do not have to queue with others. Secondly, it is often cheaper to buy goods through the Internet and it is also easy to find what you are looking for.

There are some disadvantages, too. You can not see the products or check their quality. Besides, you can not enjoy walking around the shops and talking with your friends.

【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。你的老师让你讨论一下网上购物的利弊。请按以下表格发言（约80字）。注意时态的使用,并灵活运用所学单词、短语以及句型，使文章更加生动形象。

2.点评：本文时态为一般现在时，人称主要为第二人称。文章紧扣题目要点，内容完整，表述准确，语言的表述符合语法的结构，造句符合英语的表达习惯。

3.高分亮点：

短语：a new way of shopping；queue with others；through the Internet；are open 24 hours a day；enjoy walking around the shops；talking with your friends等。

句型：宾语从句；it is+形容词+to do sth.句型。

二、电子邮件

8．近年来，科技的进步正在逐步影响着人们的日常生活。 中国的“新四大发明”：高铁、支付宝、共享单车和网购使得人们的出行与生活更加便捷。假如你是李华，你的朋友Lisa是英国的一名初中生，她对我们的“新四大发明”很感兴趣。请你给她写一封电子邮件，具体内容如下：

1.介绍共享单车和网购的基本情况并谈谈你的看法和评价；

2.邀请她下个月参加你校科技节，将展出学生制作的各类材质的小模型。

注意：

1.词数80词左右,

2.可适当增加细节，使行文流畅。

参考词汇：共享单车：shared bikes

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【参考范文】

Dear Lisa,

I'm glad to hear that you're so interested in our “Four New Inventions”. Let me tell you about them. They are high-speed railways, electronic payments, shared bicycles and online shopping. We travel by high-speed railways. They are very quick. We use electronic payments when we use online shopping. When we want to go somewhere by bike, we use shared bicycles. We use our mobile phone to unlock the shared bicycle. It is convenient and cheap. There is no pollution and oil cost. We can also keep healthy when we ride it. There will be a Science Festival in our school. It will show all kinds of models that students make. I hope you will come to visit them.

Yours

Li Hua

【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇书信作文。要求根据所给出的材料提示，向你的英国朋友Lisa介绍我们的“新四大发明”；介绍共享单车和网购的基本情况并谈谈你的看法和评价；邀请她下个月参加你校的科技节。首先我们要认真审题，根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作。

2.写作指导：本文主要采用第一人称来展开写作，辅以第三人称。时态采用一般现在时和一般将来时，在介绍共享单车和网购的基本情况和看法时用一般现在时，邀请她下个月参加你校科技节时用一般将来时；文章要紧扣题目要点，围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，语言的表述要符合语法的结构，造句应符合英语的表达习惯；层次要分明、条理要清晰。

三、书信作文

9．假如你是李华，你两个星期前在网上订购的手机质量有问题，电池只能用半天，屏幕也有问题，时不时地不能看到显示内容。请你根据以下提示写一封信给网店的售后客服反映问题。

When and where did you buy the mobile phone?

What’s wrong with the mobile phone?

How would you like to solve the problem?

注意事项：

      1．信件必须包括所有要点，可适当发挥，要求语句通顺，意思连贯。

      2．词数90左右。信的首尾已给出，不计入总词数。

   3．不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名等相关信息。

提示词汇： 质量 quality      电池 battery

Dear Sir/Madam,

Order number 8043197725

Thanks for your attention. I’m writing to complain about your product.

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I’m looking forward to your early reply.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【参考范文】：

Dear Sir/Madam,

Order number 8043197725

Thanks for your attention. I’m writing to complain about your product.

Two weeks ago, I ordered a mobile phone from your online shop. However, the quality of this mobile phone is not up to standard.

First of all, its battery can last for half a day at most. I think it should last at least a whole day. Also, there is something wrong with its screen. From time to time, I can’t see what is on the screen.

I’m not satisfied with this mobile phone at all. I regret buying a mobile phone like this. I would like to get my money back.

I’m looking forward to your early reply.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【详解】[总体分析]

①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文；

②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；

③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏三个问题提示中涉及的内容，写信反映自己遇到的问题并希望得到解决。

[写作步骤]

第一步，表明写信目的；

第二步，介绍具体有什么不满的；

第二步，期望得到回复。

[亮点词汇]

①complain about 抱怨

②first of all 首先

③at most 至多

④be satisfied with 对……很满意

⑤regret doing sth. 后悔做了某事

[高分句型]

①I think it should last at least a whole day.（省略that的宾语从句）

②Also, there is something wrong with its screen. （There be句型）

四、日记

10．学校开展“小手拉大手，科技进生活”的交流活动，你结合Grandpa Green的需求，帮他一起在网上购买了一款智能手表，体验网上购物的便利。请你根据以下要点，用日记的方式写下这个体验和感受。

注意：

1. 词数80-120个左右(文章开头、结尾已给出，不计入词数，请根据要点提示适当发挥)

2. 不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。

Friday Sunny

This afternoon I taught Grandpa Green _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

【参考范文】

                                                            Friday Sunny

This afternoon I taught Grandpa Green to buy a smart watch online. We had a happy shopping experience. 

First, we typed “smart watch” on the shopping website and lots of goods appeared. Then we chose a perfect one after checking the details of the watches. It has such a big screen with big numbers that Grandpa Green can know the time easily.  More conveniently, if Granpa wears it, it can not only show where he is, but also lead him to where he wants to go. Grandpa can also make some phone calls when needed. Besides, it only costs 899 yuan. It is very popular and has been bought by 6,899 people with a five-star good review. We thought it was a good choice and paid it online finally. We were looking forward to receiving the watch.

Shopping online saves our time and makes our life more convenient and comfortable. And I feel happy to teach Grandpa to shop online successfully.

【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇日记。要求根据提示内容，写一下网上购物的体验和感受。注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。

2.写作指导：写作时要以第一和第三人称来行文，时态综合使用一般现在时和一般过去时。作文要分别介绍选购的过程以及感受。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。