中华美食 热点05 -备战中考英语高分作文（全国通用版）

备战中考英语高分作文

热点05 中华美食

一、话题作文

1．年夜饭是中国文化中最重要的团圆饭。年夜饭菜肴丰富、美味，像年糕（New Year cake）、鱼等都还带有美好的祝愿。

请以 The Family Dinner on Spring Festival Eve为题，写一篇约100词的短文，向外国朋友介绍自己家乡的年夜饭，让他们更好地了解中国丰富多样的文化习俗。

注意：文中不可出现人名。标题已经给出，不计入总词数。

The Family Dinner on Spring Festival Eve

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【参考范文】

The Family Dinner on Spring Festival Eve

The family dinner on Spring Festival Eve is the most important dinner in traditional Chinese culture. On Spring Festival Eve, family members get together to enjoy the dinner.

There are all kinds of delicious food and drinks. Many of them usually have great meanings. For example, in Wenzhou, New Year cake is often the first dish, which means "having more luck and becoming better in Chinese pronunciation. Another dish is fish, which means "having more than we need". Children all like this family dinner. At dinner they receive not only best wishes but also lucky money from their parents.

It is a Chinese tradition that we have kept for thousands of years.

【详解】题干解读：这是一篇话题作文。要求根据题目“The Family Dinner on Spring Festival Eve”和提示的内容完成作文。写作时要注意语句通顺，语意连贯，紧扣要点，注意句子之间的连接与过渡，要注意涵盖所给提示。

点评：采用三段式；时态以一般现在时为主；将题目要求的要点都很好地融入到文章当中，适当发挥部分也很好地展示了对文章主题的理解，表达出自己的观点态度。

高分亮点：

短语：get together；all kinds of；For example；thousands of等。

句型：For example, in Wenzhou, New Year cake is often the first dish, which means "having more luck and becoming better in Chinese pronunciation.

At dinner they receive not only best wishes but also lucky money from their parents.

二、材料作文

2．习近平总书记在4月8日的北京“冬奥会残奥会总结表彰大会”上的重要讲话中提及到了受表彰的中国自由式滑雪运动员谷爱凌特别喜欢吃中国馅饼的趣事。你从中可以想到传统美食中还有哪些带馅的美味食品？请以“I like the Chinese _______ best”为题按以下提示和要求写一篇不少于 80词的文章，文章的开头已经给出，不计入总词数。

提示：1.首先补全题目，介绍你最喜欢的带馅食品；

2. 简单说明喜欢的理由；

3. 你是否曾经尝试着在家人或朋友的指导帮助下制作过；

4. 简要说明中国传统美食的意义。

5. 可能用到的词语：包子 steamed stuffed bun 馄饨 wonton 元宵 glutinous rice balls 地方的 local

要求：1.根据所给题意和提示可以适当发挥；

2. 结构清晰，层次分明，用词简练、准确；

3. 语法正确，表达流畅；

4. 书写规范工整，没有涂抹。

I like the Chinese ________ best

From Gu Ailing’s favorite food—Chinese pie, I can think of _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

【参考范文】

I like the Chinese dumplings best

From Gu Ailing’s favorite food—Chinese pie, I can think of my favorite food—Chinese dumplings. They are the most delicious among the traditional Chinese food, I think. When I make dumplings and eat them, I enjoy myself a lot from them. Last year I learned how to make Chinese dumplings from my mother. Now I have made them quite well. I often invite my friends and relatives to my home and we make them happily together. All of us enjoy ourselves in my home. Actually, traditional Chinese food can show the local history and culture differently. It can also remind us of our different memories of the old times. So it is with the Chinese dumplings.

【详解】[总体分析]

① 题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；

② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；

③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，以第一人称为主。

[写作步骤]

第一步，首先补全题目，介绍你最喜欢的带馅食品；

第二步，说明喜欢这种食物的理由；

第三步，介绍你是否曾经尝试着在家人或朋友的指导帮助下制作过；

第四步，简要说明中国传统美食的意义。

[亮点词汇]

①enjoy oneself感到愉快

②traditional Chinese food中国传统食品

③remind sb of sth提醒某人某事

[高分句型]

When I make dumplings and eat them, I enjoy myself a lot from them（when引导的时间状语从句）

3．上星期天你和几个朋友去一家餐厅（Dream Restaurant）吃晚饭，请按照所给的内容提示写一则该餐厅的评价。

Wonderful Dream RestaurantLast Sunday, my friends and I had a dinner at Dream Restaurant. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

【参考范文】

Wonderful Dream Restaurant

Last Sunday, my friends and I had a dinner at Dream Restaurant.

The price was not so high. We paid about 70—80 yuan a person to have meals there.

The food was excellent. The beefsteak and salad tasted yummy though the banana pie was too sweet for me.

The wonderful environment made us feel relaxed. The service was excellent. The waiters were friendly and it took us only a short time to receive our food.

I would certainly recommend Dream Restaurant. In general, I feel great with the food of Dream Restaurant and I believe that I’ll go there to have meals again.

【详解】[总体分析]

① 题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；

② 时态：时态为“一般过去时”；

③ 提示：根据所给表格内容介绍对Dream Restaurant的评价。

[写作步骤]

第一步，介绍餐馆食物和价格的评价以及你的意见；

第二步，介绍餐馆的环境以及服务如何；

第三步，最后表达自己的整体感觉。

[亮点词汇]

①make sb adj.使某人……

②in general大体上

[高分句型]

①The beefsteak and salad tasted yummy though the banana pie was too sweet for me.（though引导的让步状语从句）

②I believe that I’ll go there to have meals again.（that引导的宾语从句）

4．请写篇短文介绍我们的家乡菏泽，要求语句通顺，包括以下内容，100词左右。

1、菏泽，位于鲁西南，包括七县两区。

2、以牡丹而著名，每年四月，来自全国各地的游客来赏花。

3、它也是中国戏曲、书法和绘画之乡。

4、武术在菏泽历史悠久，有很多名人，如孙膑、宋江。

5、菏泽美食很多，如单县羊肉汤，曹县烧牛肉，郓城烧鸡。

参考词汇：

县 county, 区 district, 牡丹 peony, 书法 calligraphy, 烧烤的 roasted

My Hometown-Heze

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【参考范文】：

My Hometown-Heze

My hometown Heze, is located in the southwest of Shandong Province, governing seven counties and two districts. It is famous for its peony and people from all over the world come to admire it every April. Beside, it is also known as the hometown of Chinese opera, calligraphy and painting. What’s more, Heze is well-known as the hometown of martial arts. Wushu has a long history in Heze. Since ancient times, there are a lot of celebrities, such as Sun Bin, Song Jiang, and so on. Last but not least, there is a lot of delicious food in Heze, such as Shanxian mutton soup, Roasted beef, Yuncheng roasted chicken, and so on.

All in all, it is a city full of traditional Chinese culture and I am so proud of it.

【详解】1. 题干解读：本文属于材料作文，写作时按说明文格式来写。按照题干要点，依次从地理位置、历史及文化等方面介绍菏泽这个城市。

2. 写作指导：本文采用第三人称，主要采用一般现在时来描述。按照题干提供要点，分点介绍这座城市，要注意保持条理清晰，内容完整，语言准确。

5．不同的地方有不同的风俗习惯，饮食也如此。现在某国外美食杂志向你约稿，请以“How we eat in China”为题，并参考要点写一篇短文，向西方读者介绍我们中国的饮食文化。90词左右。

要点：1. What time are lunch and dinner served in China?

2. How do people in China eat food?

3. How do people in China behave politely while eating with the old?

4. How do we know that a meal is over in China?

How we eat in China

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【参考范文】：

How we eat in China

Meals in China are different in some ways from meals in the West.

First, in China, lunch is usually served at about 12 o’clock. As for dinner, Chinese people eat it much earlier than people in the West. Second, chopsticks are used to eat most food. Third, it is impossible of the young eat first while eating with the old. You’re supposed to wait for the old to begin eating. Finally, Chinese people like to talk about food, so it’s a good topic during a meal.

When you’re in China, watch Chinese and do as they do! You will have a good trip in China!

【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文，以“How we eat in China”为题，根据题目所以提示要点，写一篇短文，向西方读者介绍我们中国的饮食文化。

2.写作指导： 本文以一般现在时为主，采用第二和第三人称；第一段介绍中国的饮食在有些方面和西方国家不同；第二段详细介绍中国用餐时间以及食物，包括餐桌礼仪等。最后一段对全文进行总结，可自由发挥，保证叙述完整。

6．兰州牛肉面是享誉全国的地方美食，也是兰州旅游的一张名片。请你根据以下表格和图片的提示，以Lanzhou Beef Noodles为题，写一篇英语短文。

要求：1.包括提示中所有的写作要点，条理清晰，行文连贯，可适当发挥；

2.短文中不能出现真实姓名、校名；

3.词数不少于80。

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【参考范文】

Lanzhou Beef Noodles

Lanzhou Beef Noodles are the most common food all over the city and have been one of its name cards throughout the country. Lanzhou Beef Noodles are hand-pulled noodles. They are described to be “1 clear, 2 white, 3 red, 4 green, 5 yellow” to show the clear soup, white radish, red chili oil, green coriander and garlic leek and yellow noodles .The cook can make noodles into different shapes, so tourists could order based on personal preferences. There are at least 7 types of noodles: thinnest, thinner, thin, thick, prism, thicker and wide. If you come to Lanzhou, be sure to have a big bowl of Lanzhou Beet Noodles.

【详解】1.题干解读：这篇作文要求学生们以Lanzhou Beef Noodles为题，介绍兰州的牛肉面。题目中用表格的形式列出了文章中应包括的要点：名称、特色以及类型，并给出了一些图片和单词，帮助学生们写作。学生们可以此为提纲，组织语言，用正确的英语进行表达。

2.写作指导：审题可知，这篇短文应用一般现在时态、第三人称叙述。写作时应注意：首先要点要全，将题目中要求的所有信息都包括在内，可以适当拓展；其次应注意英语表达习惯和汉语的不同，以简单句结构为基础，穿插并列句、复合句和其他复杂句式的使用，提升作文档次；最后应注意上下文的衔接，使文意连贯，表达流畅。

三、电子邮件

7．假如你叫张明，你的外国朋友John发来邮件，请你介绍中国的传统节日。请根据表格内容提示及要求给他写一封80-100词的回信。

参考词汇：pray for祈求；harvest丰收

要求：

1)描述节日1和节日2，并自主选择节日3进行介绍，包括节日名称、时间美食活动方式及意义等；

2)语言通顺, 要点齐全，意思连贯条理清楚，书写规范；

3)文章开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

Dear John,

Glad to receive your email. You asked me about festivals in China. Let me introduce some important ones to you.

First of all, I want to introduce the Lantern Festival, It comes in February or March.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

【参考范文】

Dear John,

Glad to receive your email. You asked me about festivals in China. Let me introduce some important ones to you.

First of all, I want to introduce the Lantern Festival, it comes in February or March. On that day, we eat yuanxiao, go to watch lantern shows and dragon dances to pray for health and happiness for the whole year．

The Mid-Auturnn Festival is in the middle of auturnn. It is time for the family to get together and celebrate harvest. At night, the whole family eat delicious mooncakes and tell the story of Chang'e while watching the big bright moon．

The Spring Festival is the most important for us Chinese. It's the beginning of a new year. We usually eat dumplings, meat and some other nice food. To welcome the new year, we do some cleaning, buy new clothes, set off fireworks and visit our relatives. Everyone, young or old, has a happy smile on their face.

Can you tell me something about the festivals in your country? I'm looking forward to hearing from you.

Yours,

Zhang Ming

【详解】题干解读：这是一篇书信作文。要求根据表格和提示的内容完成作文。写作时要注意语句通顺，语意连贯，紧扣要点，注意句子之间的连接与过渡，要注意涵盖所给提示。

点评：采用五段式；时态以一般现在时为主；将题目要求的要点都很好地融入到文章当中，适当发挥部分也很好地展示了对文章主题的理解，表达出自己的观点态度。

高分亮点：

短语：pray for；in the middle of；the beginning of；set off；looking forward to；hear from等。

句型：It is time for the family to get together and celebrate harvest.

To welcome the new year, we do some cleaning, buy new clothes, set off fireworks and visit our relatives.

四、书信作文

8．假如你是李华，你的英国朋友David对中国传统文化很感兴趣。请选择你喜欢的一种传统工艺品或者传统美食，用英语写一篇短文，与他分享中国传统文化。词数80词以上。

1.这种传统工艺品 (artwork) 或者传统美食是什么？

2.制作的材质，制作步骤或相关故事，象征意义等；

3.你使用/制作这种工艺品或这种传统美食的一次经历，感想。

要求：

1.参考提示信息，可适当发挥；

2.意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范；

3.请勿在文中使用真实的人名、校名和班级。

Dear David,

I’m pleased to know that you’re interested in Chinese culture. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Yours,

Li Hua

【参考范文】：

Dear David,

     I’m pleased to know that you’re interested in Chinese culture. China has a long history and colorful traditional culture. I introduce our typical food—dumplings to you today.

     We call dumplings jiaozi. We eat jiaozi on many holidays, such as the Spring Festival, the Winter Solstice and so on. Because jiaozi is a symbol of luck and happiness. How do we make it? Put the water and flour into a bowl and make a smooth dough. Then cut up the meat and vegetables we like and add all kinds of relish to it, mix them. Next put filling on the wrapper and fold it. Finally, boil jiaozi. Making it is not easy. I wasted all the flour and vegetables when I made it for the first time. I was so sad that I hadn’t try it for a long time. Now I can make it well. Jiaozi is very delicious. Welcome to my home to eat it.

                                                                                                                                                                    Yours,

 Li Hua

【详解】[总体分析]

① 题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文；

② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；

③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意弄清“信息提示”中“选择一种传统工艺 品或者传统美食”的要求，二选一即可，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。

[写作步骤]

第一步，表明写作意图。开门见山提出为对方介绍传统文化代表食物——饺子；

第二步，具体阐述为什么介绍饺子及它的意义和制作步骤；

第三步，介绍自己制作饺子的经历和感想，并邀请对方来中国吃饺子。

[亮点词汇]

① be interested in...对……感兴趣

②colorful traditional culture丰富的传统文化

③ such as例如

④ add...to...把……加到……里

[高分句型]

①Then cut up the meat and vegetables we like and add all kinds of relish to it. (含有定语从句)

②I was so sad that I hadn’t try it for a long time. (含有结果状语从句)

9．假设你是Tom，想要给美国的笔友Linda介绍一下中国饮食文化的变化，请根据提示写一篇英语短文。内容如下：

参考词汇：分餐制 individual portions  

要求：1. 表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；

2. 必须包括提示中的所有信息，并按要求适当发挥；

3. 词数100个字左右，文章开头已给出，不计入总词数；

4. 不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名。

Dear Linda, I am writing to tell you something about the changes in Chinese food culture. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Yours faithfully

Tom

【参考范文】

Dear Linda,

I am writing to tell you something about the changes in Chinese food culture.

In the past, too much food was ordered when we ate at restaurants. We liked to get together to have meals with chopsticks. But nowadays, we just order what we need. We don’t waste food any more. Some people prefer to choose forks and knives to have meals in individual portions.

Various foods can be seen (can be available) in our lives today. We pay more attention to a healthy diet instead of eating more meat. For example, parents encourage their children to eat more fruit and vegetables.

People used to make a loud noise while eating. However, it is polite of us to keep our voice down in public today. On the other hand, I think children should avoid looking at (staring at) their mobile phones for long when eating.

I wish you can come to China and have a taste of all the delicious food here.

Yours faithfully

Tom

【详解】1.题干解读：该题目是写一封信，开头已给出。要求根据表格信息提示给美国的笔友Linda介绍一下中国饮食文化的变化，可适当发挥。

2.写作指导：本文主要用第一人称来描述过去和现在的饮食变化，用第三人称来证明这种变化；描述过去的饮食习惯，时态采用一般过去时，描述现在的饮食习惯，时态采用一般现在时；描述饮食变化时，应描写细致；信件需要叙述完整，保证条理清晰。

五、日记

10．上周末，我校的“厨艺小达人”李华给大家上了一节云家务劳动课。请写一则英文日记，记录这特别的一课。日记需包括以下要点；

1. 授课者：李华，15岁，福州八中学生，校厨艺大赛冠军；

2. 上课内容：鱼丸的制作和烹饪，福州美食的历史等；

3. 你的收获和感受。

参考词汇：鱼丸 (fish ball)、冠军 (champion)。

注意事项：

1. 开头已为你写好，不计人总词数；

2. 意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范；

3. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名及地名。

Monday, June 20

Dear Diary,

Last weekend, we had a special online lesson. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

【参考范文】

Monday, June 20

Dear Diary,

Last weekend, we had a special online lesson. The teacher was the champion of school cooking competition named Li Hua. He is 15 years old, and he is also a student of Fuzhou No. 8 Middle School. In the class, he explained the way of making fish balls and showed us how to cook them well. We were interested in making fish balls. He also introduced us to the history of Fuzhou cuisine. From this lesson, I learnt that cooking skills are not easy to master, and to become a master of cooking needs a lot of practice, practice makes perfect. What a special lesson we had!

【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于日记写作。在写作时应承接短文开头；讲述授课者的个人信息，上课的内容，最后讲述个人的收获和感受。

2.写作指导：本文应该用第三人称来叙述；时态采用一般过去时为主，讲述授课人的信息和课堂内容需要叙述完整，保证条理清晰。

六、讲稿

11．第31届世界大学生夏季运动会（31st FISU World University Games）将在成都举行。你现在是一名志愿者，请根据以下图示，用英语写一篇发言稿，介绍成都的美食、美景等情况，在接待外宾时使用。

要求：

1. 短文内容必须包括以上所有信息；

2. 可适当添加相关内容，使行文连贯；

3. 文中不得出现真实学校和姓名，词数100词左右。

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【参考范文】：

Hello, everyone. Welcome to Chengdu to attend the 31st FISU World University Games. I am a volunteer and I’ll offer you some local information.

Chengdu is rich in delicious food and tourist attractions. People who like history and culture can visit Sancha Lake, Xiling Snow mountain and Dujiangyan. And scenic spots include Du Fu’s Cottage, Shixianghu Park, Sanchahu Park, Yun Ding Mountain and so on. It’s convenient to travel by subway or shared bike. As for special food, Hot-pot, Tangyouguozi, Longchaoshou, Zhazha noodles are popular among visitors.

I hope you can have a great time during your stay here.

【详解】1.题干解读：该题目是一篇讲稿，根据图片提示，向外宾介绍成都的美食、美景等信息。

2.写作指导：该题目主要使用第三人称，时态以一般现在时为主；可以按照三段式结构完成短文，第一段表示欢迎，第二段详细介绍美食和旅游景点，第三段表示祝愿；保证内容完整，结构清晰条理，无单词拼写错误和语法使用错误。