高考英语写作专题 社会服务

这是一份高考英语写作专题 社会服务，共6页。学案主要包含了高分范文，参考范文，写作指导等内容，欢迎下载使用。
感谢信
(2019·浙江卷6月)假定你是李华，经常帮助你学习英语的朋友Alex即将返回自己的国家。请给他写一封邮件，内容包括：
1. 表示感谢；
2. 回顾Alex对你的帮助；
3. 临别祝愿。
注意：1. 词数80左右；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。






【高分范文】
Dear Alex，
①Learning that yu're leaving fr the United States sn, I'm eagerly writing t express my heartfelt gratitude t yu fr yur help.
Hnestly speaking, it's s nice f yu t ffer me a class f practical learning skills. Under yur prfessinal guidance, I have made unbelievable prgress in English. It's indeed a pleasant surprise fr me t even rank first in a recent English speech cntest. ②Whenever I encunter difficulties, yu always cheer me up and help me ut, which fuels my enthusiasm and cnfidence. ③N wrds are strng enugh t cnvey hw grateful I am.
Thanks again and wish yu a pleasant jurney hme.
Yurs，
Li Hua
点评：
1. 词汇美：文章运用了很多高级词汇，如leave fr, eagerly, express ne's heartfelt gratitude t, hnestly speaking, under ne's prfessinal guidance, make prgress, unbelievable, rank first, encunter, cheer sb. up, help sb. ut, fuel, enthusiasm, cnvey等。
2. 句式美：①句Learning that ... 是动词­ing形式短语作状语。
②句Whenever引导让步状语从句，which引导非限制性定语从句。
③句enugh后接不定式作结果状语，同时运用了hw引导宾语从句，这两处表达增强了感情色彩。
练习：
假定你是李华，国庆节期间参加了Angela公司的旅游团。你感到该公司的旅行路线物有所值，你对导游Lily的服务感到尤其满意。请给Angela公司写一封感谢信，内容包括：
1. 自我介绍；
2. 表示感谢。
注意：1. 词数80左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。





【参考范文】
Dear Angela，
I'm Li Hua. I jined a grup tur prvided by yur cmpany during the Natinal Day hliday. My experience with the tur is really gd. I am particularly impressed with the high standard f service and the attentin t detail given t us by yur guide Lily. I think it is well wrth the mney and it is a tur I will never frget. I will be quite ready t recmmend yur cmpany t my friends wh want t take a trip t the same attractins. I'm sure they will enjy it t.
Thank yu.
Yurs sincerely，
Li Hua
Ⅱ. 读后续写
(2020·新高考Ⅰ卷)阅读下面材料， 根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段， 使之构成一篇完整的短文。
The Meredith family lived in a small cmmunity. As the ecnmy was in decline, sme peple in the twn had lst their jbs.[悬念1] Many f their families were struggling t make ends meet. Peple were trying t help each ther meet the challenges.
Mrs. Meredith was a mst kind and thughtful wman. She spent a great deal f time visiting the pr. She knew they had prblems, and they needed all kinds f help. When she had time, she wuld bring fd and medicine t them.
One mrning she tld her children abut a family she had visited the day befre. There was a man sick in bed, his wife, wh tk care f him and culd nt g ut t wrk, and their little by. The little by — his name was Bernard — had interested her very much.
“I wish yu culd see him，” she said t her wn children, Jhn, Harry, and Clara. “He is such a help t his mther. He wants very much t earn sme mney, but I dn't see what he can d.”[悬念2]
After their mther left the rm, the children sat thinking abut Bernard. “I wish we culd help him t earn mney，” said Clara. “His family is suffering s much.”
“S d I，” said Harry. “We really shuld d smething t assist them.”
Fr sme mments, Jhn said nthing, but, suddenly, he sprang t his feet and cried, “I have a great idea! I have a slutin that we can all help accmplish (完成)．”
The ther children als jumped up all attentin. When Jhn had an idea, it was sure t be a gd ne. “I tell yu what we can d，” said Jhn. “Yu knw that big bx f crn Uncle Jhn sent us? Well, we can make ppcrn (爆米花), and put it int paper bags, and Bernard can take it arund t the huses and sell it.[悬念3]”
注意：续写词数应为150左右。
When Mrs. Meredith heard f Jhn's idea, she thught it was a gd ne, t.



With everything ready, Bernard started ut n his new business.


【写作指导】
一、理清文章大意
关键：Wh: the Meredith family
Where: in a small cmmunity
When: ne mrning
What: The family wanted t help a pr family.
Hw: They decided t make ppcrn.
大意：善良的Meredith一家帮助一个贫困家庭的故事。Meredith的孩子想出了一个主意，让贫困家庭的孩子Bernard去卖爆米花。
二、挖掘文中悬念点
悬念1 思考：Meredith一家生活没有受到经济滑坡的影响吗？
悬念2思考：妈妈为什么回家跟孩子们说这些事情？
悬念3思考：孩子们的主意妈妈会同意吗？
三、分析段落开头语
段首句1思考：
①妈妈同意孩子的想法，他们会做哪些准备呢？
②到家做完爆米花之后会送到Bernard家吗？他们将怎样指导Bernard卖爆米花？
③Bernard一家收到爆米花会有什么反应？
段首句2思考：
①Bernard会怎样卖爆米花？会赚到钱吗？
②Bernard会自己做爆米花吗？
③Bernard长大后会成为成功人士吗？
通过以上思路，预设续写情节如下：
Paragraph 1：买装爆米花的纸袋→做爆米花→送到Bernard家→教Bernard如何卖→Bernard一家的感受
Paragraph 2：Bernard卖爆米花→开始自己做并且卖→成功→回报社会
【高分范文】
When Mrs. Meredith heard f Jhn's idea, she thught it was a gd ne, t. S, they went t the lcal supermarket t buy paper bags. When they gt hme, they made a lt f ppcrn and put it in the paper bags. With the ppcrn, they went t Bernard's hme. They tld Bernard hw t sell the ppcrn. Bernard and his parents were very grateful. And the Meredith family als felt very happy t help this family.
With everything ready, Bernard started ut n his new business. He tk the ppcrn arund t the huses and sld all his ppcrn. He earned a lt f mney. Then, he wanted t be self­dependent. Therefre, he asked Mrs. Meredith t teach him hw t make ppcrn. After that, nt nly did he sell ppcrn, but he als added cream and salt t the ppcrn t make it taste better. Bernard grew up t be a remarkable man. He did nt frget the help f the Meredith family, and he als did what he culd t help thse in need.
点评：
1. 使用恰当的修饰词让描写更加生动。
①第一段中副词very的运用凸显了当时人物的心情。
②第二段中形容词remarkable的运用形象表明了Meredith一家的帮助给Bernard带来的影响。
2. 词汇与语法结构丰富、准确。
①文章中高级词汇grateful, earn mney, add ... t ...的使用为文章的一大亮点。
②nt nly ... but als ... 倒装句的使用是文章的增分点。
③文章多处使用不定式，语言简洁明快。
练习：
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Over the years, I've been guilty f hurriedly shutting the frnt dr t many strangers when they came t my hme kncking with the intentin f selling things. I hated it when they tried their best t persuade me t buy the things they prmted. But earlier this year, a dear friend f mine, Linda, had an experience that changed my mind and attitude twards these “intruders”.
Last winter, Linda went thrugh a very messy divrce and was very depressed. S she quit her jb and left Ls Angeles, where she encuntered her ex­husband in cllege. She flew t Bstn n the east cast f the US. Later, she settled in a new neighburhd in East Bstn. Hwever, shrtly afterwards, the cmpany where she wrked went bankrupt (破产). Suffering a series f bitter blws, she fell ill, a severe case f flu. She had t stay at hme fr the whle week, feeling extremely bad and hpeless.
Early ne mrning, Linda lay in bed, feeling painful all ver. Then all f a sudden, there was an upsetting knck n her frnt dr. Struggling ut f the bed, she dragged herself t the windw. There, utside, she saw a yung lady carefully hlding sme leaflets (传单) and a TV set mdel. She knew f a large TV set establishment nearby and assumed a message was abut t be gently delivered. “This is the last thing I need tday，” she muttered t herself and hesitantly pened the dr.
Cughing bitterly, Linda stuck her head ut. “Excuse me, madam ...” the yung lady said with a smile. “I'm srry but I am nt the slightest bit interested in any TV whatever.” Linda interrupted her impatiently. “As a matter f fact, I am feeling terribly awful.” “Is there anything I can d fr yu, madam？” the yung lady asked with cncern. “N thanks, just leave me alne.” Linda then shut the dr in her face. The yung lady plitely turned and left in silence.
注意：续写词数应为150左右。
A few hurs later, anther knck.




Linda was surprised by this lvely actin.




【参考范文】
A few hurs later, anther knck. Linda glanced ut f the windw and t her surprise, there at the dr was the same lady, back again. Really annyed this time, Linda pened the dr but befre she culd speak, with a cncerned lk n her face, the yung lady handed Linda a warm pt, saying, “I'm s srry I disturbed yu earlier. I thught yu may like this hmemade chicken sup. Hpefully it might make yu feel a little better.”
Linda was surprised by this lvely actin. Being new t the area, she didn't knw any neighburs, s the gesture was all the mre appreciated. She culd nly smile embarrassedly and sincerely thanked her. With that, the lady left. After she related this stry t me, I thught abut hw tuching this deed really was. Especially in tday's wrld where, sadly, kindness and thughtfulness seem s rare. I als realised that thinking abut thers and shwing kindness is the real meaning f lve.