山东省潍坊市潍城区2021-2023年中考英语二模试题分类汇编：书面表达

山东省潍坊市潍城区

2021-2023年中考英语二模试题分类汇编

书面表达

2023年山东省潍坊市潍城区中考二模英语试题

六、写作（满分20分）

Teens Around the World是一个国际青少年网站，近日，有人在网站发帖，讨论“Who helped me?”。生活中遇到困难时，我们的父母、亲人、朋友都会向我们伸出温暖的手。假如你是李华，请结合自己的生活经历，用英语跟帖。

要求：

1.包含提示中的内容，可适当增加细节；用词准确，意思完整，表达流畅；

2.不要出现考生本人信息。

3.词数：80词左右。

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2022年山东省潍坊市潍城区中考二模英语试题

七、材料作文

44．雏鹰在不断的尝试中才能学会飞翔；毛毛虫在一次次的努力后方可破茧成蝶。在学习技能、增长本领的道路上，同学们一定也做过很多尝试，如游泳、舞蹈、绘画、钢琴等，哪种尝试让你感受最深呢？请你以“I try, I succeed”为题，用英语写一篇文章讲讲你的故事，说说你的感受。

注意：

1. 不要出现考生本人信息；

2. 80 词左右

I try, I succeed

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2021年山东省潍坊市潍城区中考二模英语试题

七、电子邮件

45．近日你新结识的英国笔友David来信谈到他的困惑，他有很多爱好，他的父母认为发展爱好会影响学习；但是放弃爱好，整天学习，他又觉得厌倦，他不知道怎样处理二者的关系。假如你是李华，请你给他回复一封邮件，谈谈你对爱好的看法，并给出2-3条建议。80词左右，信的开头已给出，不计入总词数。

要求：

1. 内容全面，分析合理，并可适当发挥；

2. 语法正确，条理清晰，字迹工整；

3. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校。

Dear David,

Thank you so much for your email.

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How is it going now? Write to me soon, best wishes.

Yours,

Li Hua

答案：

2023年山东省潍坊市潍城区中考二模英语试题

44．例文

When I was in Grade 7, I was not good at English. I felt nervous when I spoke English in class and in public. I had some problems in pronunciation.

Some people helped me. One of them was my classmate Ma Hua. He was one of the best students in my class. He had a good pronunciation. He often helped me practice speaking. With his help, I have made great progress. I have made up my mind to catch up with him.

I am always thankful to him.

【详解】［总体分析］

①题材：这是一篇材料作文；

②时态：时态为“一般过去时”；

③提示：必须包含提示中的内容，不要逐词翻译，可适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺。

［写作步骤］

第一步，引出主题，点明生活中曾经遇到的困难；

第二步，描述是谁帮你解决了问题，是怎样解决的；

第三步，表达感激之情。

［亮点词汇］

①be good at 擅长……

②in public 当众，公开地

③make progress 取得进步

［高分句型］

①I felt nervous when I spoke English in class and in public. （when引导的时间状语从句）

②He was one of the best students in my class.（one of the +最高级+名词复数句型）

③I have made up my mind to catch up with him.（make up one’s mind to do sth.句型）

2022年山东省潍坊市潍城区中考二模英语试题

44．例文

I try, I succeed

Everyone has some unforgettable experiences. I had a very unforgettable experience when I was 11 years old. I had some training with my classmates. We went to Fengxian and we needed to live in a small dormitory for two days. We did everything ourselves. Our parents couldn’t help us, because they didn’t stay with us. We got up very early in the morning. We had to clean ourselves quickly. And then we stood in a line. We learnt a lot of things there, such as cooking, washing and even making beds. Every day, we had to practice for more than five hours. Now I think it was very hard for everyone, but it was very good for us. Because we are looked after by our parents, but in fact we should learn how to look after ourselves. What an unforgettable experience!

【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。要求以“I try, I succeed”为题，讲述自己的故事和感受。注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。

2.写作指导：写作时要以第一人称来行文，时态以一般过去时为主。作文要介绍哪次尝试让自己感受最深，并描述自己的感受。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。

2021年山东省潍坊市潍城区中考二模英语试题

45．例文：

Dear David,

Thank you so much for you email.

I think hobbies can make us grow as a person, develop our interests and help us learn new skills. But if we spend too much time on them. This may reduce our study time and influence our grades.

In my opinion, we should always keep our studies first. This means we must do our best to finish our schoolwork efficiently. That way we can have time to develop our hobbies. We also need to choose certain hobbies and forget others. Lastly, we need to show improvement in our chosen hobbies that our parents wouldn't say it is a waste of time.

How is it going now? Write to me soon, best wishes.

Yours,

Li Hua

【详解】1. 题干解读：本文属于电子邮件，题目要求是请你以李华的身份，根据提示内容给英国笔友David，回复一封邮件，谈谈你对爱好的看法，并给出2-3条建议。

2. 写作指导：本文给出了作文的开头和结尾。我们要做的就是承接开头，谈谈自己对爱好的看法，并给出建议（2-3条），内容可适当发挥。在写作中，要避免使用汉语式的英语，尽量使用我们熟悉的句子或短语；要注意时态、主谓一致等问题，不要出现语法错误；要保证语句通顺，意思连贯，条理清晰，字迹工整。