湖北省襄阳市南漳县2021-2023年中考英语一模试题分类汇编：书面表达

湖北省襄阳市南漳县

2021-2023年中考英语一模试题分类汇编

书面表达

2023年湖北省襄阳市南漳县中考一模英语试题

七、书面表达 （本大题满分15分）

    亲爱的同学们，三年的初中学习生活即将结束，你一定有很多想要感谢的人，如父母、老师、同学、朋友等，现校刊英文专栏以“The person I want to thank most”为主题征稿，请根据提示，用英语写一篇短文投稿。

写作要点：1.—个你最想感谢的人及其性格特点；2.你和他(她)之间的一件事；3.你对他(她）的祝福或期望。

写作要求:1.短文要包含所有要点，可适当增加细节使行文连贯；2.文中不得透露个人信息，包括校名、班级、真实姓名等；3.词数90左右，文章开头已给出，但不记入总词数。

The person I want to thank most

My junior high school is coming to an end. Looking back at the past three years, the

person I want to thank most is                                                     

2022年湖北省襄阳市南漳县中考一模英语试题

七、书面表达 (本大题满分15分)

随着科技发展和人们生活水平的提高，越来越多的孩子们拥有了自己的智能手机，从而也诞生了越来越多的低头族，他们痴迷于打电子游戏、听音乐、看视频等自我世界，疏于锻炼，淡薄亲情交流。请你根据写作提示写一篇短文，来谈谈你对这种现象的看法。

写作要求：1. 作为中学生，你怎么看待这种现象?请发表你的观点;

2. 给出三个理由来支持你的观点;

3. 你想对同龄人说些什么呢?

写作要求：1、短文应该包含所有提示信息，要求层次清楚， 语法正确, 可适当增加情节使短文意思连贯、通顺、完整；

          2、文中不能出现真实的姓名和校名；

          3、词数90个左右。

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2021年湖北省襄阳市南漳县中考一模英语试题

九、材料作文

61．人生如旅，在你的成长过程中，许多人感动着你，影响着你，如：父母、老师、朋友、故事人物等，最近你们学校正在举行以“The man who has influenced me most”为题的中学生征文活动，请你写一篇文章参加这一活动。

写作提示：1、简要介绍对你影响最大的人的基本情况，如：外貌、年龄等基本信息；2、通过一件事情具体说明他对你的影响；3、表达你的感激之情。

写作要求：1、短文必须包含所有提示要点，可以适当增加情节使短文通顺、完整；2、文中不能出现真实姓名和校名；3、词数90个左右。

The man who has influenced me most___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

答案：

2023年湖北省襄阳市南漳县中考一模英语试题

76．例文：

The person I want to thank most

My middle school life is coming to an end. Looking back on the past three years, the person I want to thank most is my English teacher Mr. Lee. He is tall and thin. He has short black hair and wears glasses. He is always friendly and patient with us.

When I was in Grade 8, my English was very poor. One day, he asked me to take part in an English speech contest. He said, “Your pronunciation is really good. Try your best. I believe in you.” With the help of Mr. Lee, I got the first prize. My English improved a lot.

Mr. Lee has a great influence on me, I am grateful to him. I will work hard to become better. I think that’s the best gift for my dear teacher.

【详解】[总体分析]

①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；

②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；

③提示：写作要点已给出，结合要点介绍自己最想感谢的人，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。

[写作步骤]

第一步，表明写作意图。直入主题来引出自己最想感谢的人；

第二步，讲述自己和他之间的一件事；

第三步，表达自己的祝福和期望。

[亮点词汇]

①look back on the past three years回顾过去三年

②take part in an English speech contest参加英语演讲比赛

③has a great influence on me对我有很大影响

 [高分句型]

①the person I want to thank most is my English teacher Mr. Lee. (省略that的定语从句)

②I think that’s the best gift for my dear teacher. (省略that的宾语从句)

2022年湖北省襄阳市南漳县中考一模英语试题

76．例文

I disagree that teenagers use their mobile phones too often. It’s not good for their development.

On the one hand, using mobile phones often can hurt their eyes. Most teenagers have to wear their glasses. It’s very inconvenient for their lives and study. On the other hand, they will miss lots of chances to communicate with their friends which make them feel lonely. Besides, if teenagers depend on mobile phones too much, they will have no more time to chat with their family and relatives. They can’t enjoy the time with family.

I hope the teenagers can put down their mobile phones and spend more time with family and friends. Then they will find more enjoyable moments around them.

【详解】[总体分析]

①题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文；

②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；

③提示：中文提示已给出，考生结合所学知识，写一篇作文，可适当发挥，使行文连贯。

[写作步骤]

第一步，首先确定对这种现象的看法，发表自己的观点；

第二步，具体阐述自己的理由；

第三步，讲述对同龄人的希望。

[亮点词汇]

①On the one hand…On the other hand一方面……另一方面

②communicate with和……交流

③depend on依靠

④put down放下

[高分句型]

①On the one hand, using mobile phones often can hurt their eyes.（动名词作主语）

②On the other hand, they will miss lots of chances to communicate with their friends which make them feel lonely（动词不定式作定语）

2021年湖北省襄阳市南漳县中考一模英语试题

61．范文：

The man who has influenced me most

  Mr.Wang has influenced me a lot since he taught me English. Mr.Wang is in his forties. He enjoys reading in his spare time. He is very strict in his work. He never laughs at his students. Once I failed in an English exam and felt depressed. I lost confidence in learning. When he found out, he immediately talked to me and gave me encouragement and helped me find a good way to learn English. At last I got better grades. I was so grateful to Mr.Wang that he made me find my confidence and got good grades.

When I face difficulty in my studies, his spirit keeps me going and encourages me to study hard. He has had the greatest influence on me in my life.

【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于记叙文写作，在写作是要根据汉语提示的内容，叙述对你影响最大的人：先介绍此人的基本信息，然后通过一件事情具体说明他对你的影响，最后表达你的感激之情。

2.写作指导：本文应该用第一和第三人称来叙述内容；时态采用一般现在时和一般过去时为主；在叙述内容时，力求语言正确，叙述完整，保证行文连贯。