人教版八年级下册英语 Unit 1 -Unit 3 作文解析（含解析)

这是一份初中英语人教新目标 (Go for it) 版八年级下册本册综合达标测试，共16页。
八年级下unit1-unit3作文精讲Unit1Dear Tom,I am sorry to hear about your problems. As we know, health is very important to all of us.You shouldn't play the mobile phone games all the time. It is harmful to sit in the same way for too long without moving. Since you have some problems with your neck, you should stop playing the mobile phone games first. Then you should take breaks after you play with your phone. Besides, exercise can help you keep healthy. So try to take more exercise. If your neck still hurts,then go to a doctor.If you follow all these tips, you'll be better soon!Yours,Henry本单元话题为“health and first aid”要求根据某一健康或意外问题给出自己的建议。写作时，要根据提示描述问题；其次要给出合理化的建议；最后要表达祝愿。在给出建议时可以适当运用should/shouldn’t+动词原形；表达祝愿时可以使用祈使句或一般将来时。思路点拨：第一段：引出话题第二段：展开表述：指出问题并给出自己的合理建议第三段：结尾——表达祝愿
  第一段：引出话题be sorry to do ...       很遗憾做...As we all know/ As is known to us   众所周知As far as we know      众所周知It’s important/essential for sb to do...  对某人来说做某事是重要的/至关重要过渡句：here are some ways/suggestions to keep healthy  接下来说一下保持健康的方法仿写：1.众所周知，保持身体健康对人们是很重要的。_____________________________________________________________________ 这里有一些帮助你保持健康的建议。_____________________________________________________________________  第二段：展开表述：指出问题并给出自己的合理建议注意：在给出建议时，可以用衔接词连接几条建议，文章会更有层次和逻辑性。衔接词
第一，首先    Firstly/to begin with/first of all/ in the first place/at the beginning of第二，其次，更多  Secondly/besides/next/then/moreoverIn addition/additionally/what’s more/furthermore/after that/apart from this最后，简言之   Finally/eventually/in a word/all in all/to sum Up/on the whole/last but not the least/generally speaking/in conclusion/To conclude/to summarize/in brief/in short/in summary 指出问题：sb shouldn’t/ are not supposed to do ...   某人不应该...It’s harmful to do ...       做某事是有害的 表达建议的句型： personally speaking      就个人而言 As long as you .... , you will get better.  只要你...，你就会感觉更好了 need to do ...        需要做... It’s necessary for sb to do ...    对某人来说做某事是必要的 sb find/think it adj. to do ...     某人发现做某事是....的 sb had better do sth      某人最好做...
 （为了保持健康的）具体建议：have a balanced diet      有平衡的膳食eat less junk food       吃更少的垃圾食品take exercise (everyday/once a week/...)  做运动（每天/一周一次/...）get up early and go to bed early    早睡早起have a rest/break       休息一下get enough sleep       获得充足的睡眠eat more fresh vegetables and fruit everyday 每天吃更新鲜的蔬菜和水果only by exercising regularly can we keep our body at a proper weight and stay healthy只有通过定期运动才能让我们的身体保持健康，身材匀称never stay up late       从不熬夜learn to reduce pressure     学会减压stop playing the mobile phone games   停止玩手机游戏stay away from junk food     远离垃圾食品get into/develop a healthy living habit  养成健康的生活习惯注意：每个建议都是基于一定的理由给出的。每个建议对应的理由自己需要头脑风暴，赶紧练习吧！_____________________________________________________________________
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 第三段：结尾——表达祝愿As the old saying goes,/there is an old saying goes that...   俗话说health is wealth/health is happiness       健康就是财富/健康就是幸福physical health can help us to study better     身体健康是学习的保障let's do ...            让我们...if..., we will...           如果...，我们会...take action to do...          采取行动做...follow the tips           遵循建议lead/live a/an adj life          过着...的生活仿写： 首先，你不应该抽烟（smoke），抽烟有害健康。
_____________________________________________________________________ 就个人而言，有平衡的膳食对你来说是很重要的。_____________________________________________________________________ 只要你有了充足的睡眠，你会感觉更好的。_____________________________________________________________________ 学会减压也是很重要的。你会发现停止玩手机游戏可以帮助你放松。_____________________________________________________________________ 每天尽量吃新鲜的水果和蔬菜，少吃垃圾食品。只有这样你才能保持身体健康和身材匀称。_____________________________________________________________________ 俗话说，健康就是财富。_____________________________________________________________________ 因此，我们要行动起来，保持健康！_____________________________________________________________________ 如果你能遵循建议，相信一定会过上幸福健康的生活！_____________________________________________________________________ 希望你能尽快好起来！_____________________________________________________________________ 
Unit2Dear Tom,How's everything going? Last Sunday, I did some volunteer work in the neighborhood of our school with my classmates. And we were glad we could do something meaningful.In the morning, we helped to clean the street. And then we went to the old people's home to help them do housework. In the afternoon, we told stories to the kids in the children's home, I was excited about staying with them.That day, I was busy but very happy. I think it's great to be a volunteer. Helping others can bring happiness not only to others but also to ourselves.Yours,Henry本单元话题为“volunteering and charity”主要谈论如何提供帮助、宣传和倡导公益等。写作时，注意表述为他人提供帮助和服务的想法，可以用情态动词could表达如何为他人提供帮助。   思路点拨：第一段：开头——点明时间、地点及人物
第二段：展开表述：写出活动的具体内容第三段：结尾——表明自己对志愿活动的观点 第一段：开头——点明时间、地点及人物过渡句：sth plays an important part/role in my life and I did a lot of/different kinds of ... last term....在我的生活中扮演了重要的角色，因此上学期我做了各种各样的... 第二段：展开表述：写出活动的具体内容活动内容较多，用衔接词连接，会使文章更加有层次和逻辑性举个例子：for example/instance/such as/take ...for example表递进的连接词：What's more/in addition/besides/furthermore/moreover/ furthermore/ additionally总结的连接词：In conclusion/in a word/to sum up/in brief/in summary/to conclude to summarize/ in short转话题：by the way；when it comes to；As for...；when talking about...Apart from that；last but not least 
 志愿活动（列举）wash clothes/clean rooms    洗衣服/打扫房间tell many interesting stories to sb  给某人讲很多有趣的故事teach sb to do ...      教某人做某事give away sth to sb     把某物捐赠给某人clean up        打扫；清洁pick up and sort rubbish    捡垃圾并且分类help to fix up the broken ...    帮助修理坏掉的...还有什么活动吗？头脑风暴一下！____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
  （为了让自己的志愿活动描写地饱满起来，可以让自己在描述活动的同时，添加一些做这些志愿活动的对应理由） 仿写：比如说，我上周就在养老院扫地、清理窗户。__________________________________________________________________为了让他们开心起来，我会给老人们读有趣的故事。__________________________________________________________________既然你喜欢小动物，你也可以在宠物医院做志愿工作。__________________________________________________________________另外，你也可以去图书馆和博物馆去尝试一下。__________________________________________________________________要成为一名优秀的志愿者，最好提高自己的沟通技巧。__________________________________________________________________为了让他们开心起来，我会给老人们读有趣的故事。__________________________________________________________________  第三段：结尾——表明自己对志愿活动的观点
好词好句摘取： The real happiness is to share your happiness with others, ... is a good/perfect way to do it.真正的快乐是要和别人分享的，...就是很好的分享快乐的方式 ... can do what ... love to do and help others at the same time...可以让你同时做自己爱做的事和帮助人的事 Though we were ..., we felt very ... to ... 尽管我们...，我们感到很...去... serving/helping others can bring us happiness帮助别人可以给我们带来快乐 helping others is helping ourselves帮助别人就是帮助自己 It’s meaningful to do ...做...是有意义的试着用好词好句结尾：_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________    Unit 3Do you think a middle school student should do chores at home? In our daily life, some parents think that students should study in their free time. They don't let their kids do any chores. They think the only thing kids need to do is to study well. I disagree with it. I think it's good for kids to do some chores.Firstly, doing some chores at home can make us independent. We can't depend on parents forever. So we should learn to do some chores. Secondly, when we do chores at home, we can understand our parents better. Thirdly, we can also relax ourselves from hard work at school.In a word, I think students should do some chores in their free time.本单元话题“chores and permission”围绕这一话题，能用should/shouldn't 谈论自己对做家务的看法，学会分担家务，促进与家庭成员之间的情感交流。写作体裁以议论文为主。议论文有三要素：论点、论据和论证。首先在开篇部分，直接提出要讨论的问题；
然后在正文部分，对所提的问题进行论证；最后在结尾部分总结、归纳，并提出自己的观点。思路点拨：第一段：开篇点题——列出家长的做法并表明自己的观点——做家务对孩子有好处第二段：展开论证——论证做家务的好处第三段：总结归纳——再次表明自己的观点  第一段：开篇点题——列出家长的做法并表明自己的观点——做家务对孩子有好处1.people have different ideas/opinions about ...   人们对此有不同的看法2.some people think ...., some ...      有些人认为...,有些则...3.in my opinion/As far as I am concerned/from the point of my view/to my mind依我看来 it’s our duty/responsibility to do...     是我们的义务/责任去... 第二段：展开论证——论证做家务的好处可以套用的句型或短语： help sb (to) do sth    帮助某人做某事 help sb with sth    在某方面帮助某人 make sb adj.     使某人....
If..., will do...     如果..., 会.... not only, but (also)...   不仅，而且 teach sb to do sth    教会某人做某事 it’s adj for sb to do ...   对某人来说做某事是...的 a good way to do ...   一种...的好方式做家务的具体好处（例举） develop ones independence 培养某人的独立 get many life skills       获得很多生活技能 train ones abilities        训练某人的能力 build a sense of responsibility     养成责任感 get a （strong） sense/feeling of satisfaction 获得（强烈的）满足感 look after/take care of oneself     照顾自己 understand our parents better     更好地理解我们的父母 relax ourselves from hard work at school  从沉重的学业中放松自己 take good care of ourselves      好好照顾我们自己make us strong and healthy      让我们变得强壮和健康improve the relationship between ... and...  改善...和...之间的关系make the house clean and comfortable   使房子干净又舒适learn life skills        学习生活技巧understand the idea of fairness     理解公平的意义
仿写： 做家务可以帮助我们获得更多的生活技能，让我们能够更好地照顾自己。_____________________________________________________________________ 做家务是一种培养我们独立和责任感的好方式。_____________________________________________________________________ 做家务不仅能让我们从沉重的学业中放松自己，也能使我们变得健康和强壮。_____________________________________________________________________ 对学生来说做家务是必要的。它教会学生如何更好地照顾自己，并学习了更多的生活技巧。_____________________________________________________________________ 如果我们在家里做家务，我们能更好地理解自己的父母，从而改善父母和自己之间的关系。_____________________________________________________________________ 第三段：总结归纳——再次表明自己的观点the earlier we learn to be independent, the better it is for our future我们越早学会独立，未来就会更加美好 仿写：总之，我认为学生应该在空闲的时间中参与到做家务中。
__________________________________________________________________简而言之，做家务对我们来说是有必要的。__________________________________________________________________