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2022-2023学年小升初英语易错专项-书面表达（沪教牛津版深圳用）

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这是一份2022-2023学年小升初英语易错专项-书面表达（沪教牛津版深圳用），共16页。试卷主要包含了图画作文，提纲作文，命题作文等内容，欢迎下载使用。

名师精编：2022-2023学年小升初英语易错专项-书面表达（沪教牛津版深圳用）

一、图画作文

1．健康的孩子往往拥有良好的饮食习惯。假如你是Peter，请简单描述一下自己昨天一日三餐的饮食情况，然后参照标准的“食物金字塔”来判断自己的饮食习惯是否健康，并写出调整措施。60个单词左右，注意书写规范。

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2．选择一组图片写一写你的周末计划，可以包含以下内容：打算去哪里，去做什么，怎么去，和谁一起去。不少于5句话。

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3．根据图片写一写Jenny周六一天的安排。

要求：语句通顺，条理清楚，没有语法错误，不少于50个单词。

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4．远安鸣凤山风景区位于远安县城西南3.5公里处，袁中道形容此山“如凤之将啸”，是与武当齐名的仙山，也是国家4A级旅游景区。去年暑假，你和家人也去了鸣凤山，请你根据所给图片，以A pleasant journey (一次愉快的旅行) 为题，写一写自己的活动和心情。

要求：1、文章内容至少要包含以下几个方面：A．Where did you go? B．How did you go there? C． What did you do there? D．How was your journey?

2、图片内容仅供参考，可以自由发挥。

3、条理清楚，语句通顺, 书写规范、美观。

by bus Mingfeng mountain row a boat take photos happy

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5．假如你是Zhang Peng,今年十岁了。你每天坐公交去上学，本周末你打算去栖凤公园(Qi Feng Park)玩，然后去看电影。请你根据图片及表格提示，以“My weekend”为题，写一写本周末的活动和出行计划，注意：条理清晰，表达准确，字迹工整。写一篇50词左右的作文。

Name	Age (年龄)	Where	When	How
Zhang Peng	10	Qi Feng Park Cinema	Saturday	by bus

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6．请根据图片提示写一写这个周末你将要跟爸爸去哪里，去干什么，怎样去，你们的爱好，你们的心情。

要求：书写规范工整，语句通顺，不少于5句话。

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7．根据图片提示，写出Lily的周末计划。

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8．看图写话。不少于5句，注意要符合图意，语句通顺，语法规范。

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二、提纲作文

9．根据提示，给朋友写一份毕业派对的邀请函。

1. 根据内容把句子补充完整。

2. 说明派对的时间和地点。

3. 介绍3项派对上开展的活动。

4. 写出3种派对上提供的食物。

Dear Friends,It is time to leave our school. We will say ______ to each other. Let’s have a farewell ______.

Place: ______ Time: ______

Activities:

We will _______________________________________________________________________________________

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Food: We will have __________________________________

See you at the party!

10．作文：同学们，世界万物都在不断地变化，我们自己、身边的人和环境也一直在变化中。请根据提示，围绕changes这个主题，介绍某一个人或某一个地方从过去到现在的变化。（要求：文中不要出现自己的真实姓名和学校，不少于6句，40词）

提示：Before …, but now …

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11．假如你交了一个新笔友，他名叫Mike。请你根据表格中的信息，介绍你的新笔友。要求：语句通顺、意思连贯、语句通顺，语法正确，不少于5句话。

姓名：Mike国家：Australia(澳大利亚)

上学方式：骑自行车

最喜欢的运动：踢足球

爱好：唱歌，跳舞，听音乐

职业愿景：想成为一名科学家

I have a new pen pal. _________________________________________________________

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12．同学们，我们度过了愉快的六年小学生涯，你的小学生活肯定给你留下了深刻的印象。请根据思维导图的提示，选择至少2个方面，完成写话。

要求：1. 契合主题，句式正确，表达流畅。

2. 书写规范，注意标点。

3. 字数50词左右。

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13．同学们都喜欢暑假，回忆一下，上个暑假你去了哪里？怎么去的？做了什么？要求：字迹工整，语句通顺，不少于5句话。

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三、命题作文

14．上周末你过得怎么样？你做了些什么呢？请写一写吧！

要求：1. 词数：不得少于5句话。2. 注意：书写规范，卷面整洁。

My last weekend

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15．请运用所学知识谈谈你的理想，以及你怎样努力去实现它。

要求: (1)条理清晰，语句通顺，标点正确，书写规范。

(2)不少于35个单词。

My dream

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16．以My best friend为题，介绍一下你朋友的外貌、性格、学习及兴趣爱好，不得出现真实姓名和地址哦。

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17．2022年的春天，我国举办了冬奥会，世界各地的运动员们来到了北京。他们对中国充满了好奇和向往。如果你是冬奥会的一名志愿者，你会如何向国外的友人们介绍我们的中国呢？请你以“Welcome to China”为题介绍一下我们伟大的祖国吧！

要求：1. 书写规范，占格正确；2. 语言连贯，条理清晰； 3. 不少于35个单词。

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18．请以“Our School Rules”为题写一篇短文，介绍一下你们应该遵守哪些规则。

要求：1.语句通顺，条理清晰。

2. 不少于20个单词。

Our School Rules

1. Don’t __________________ school.

2. Be quiet _____________________.

3. ___________________________

4. ____________________________

5. ____________________________

参考答案：

1．范文：

I am Peter. Yesterday, I had an egg, some bread and milk for breakfast. At noon, I ate some rice, vegetables and meat for lunch. For dinner, I had some ice-cream and vegetables. We all know health is the most important for us. We should eat lots of fruit and vegetables, because they are healthy food. So I shouldn’t eat ice-cream, it is too sweet. I should eat some fruit.

【详解】1.题干分析：该题目要求介绍自己喜欢昨天的饮食情况。可以写一写昨天早饭，午饭和晚饭吃了些什么以及自己的饮食习惯是否健康，并写出调整措施等。注意文章为一般过去时和一般现在时时态，单词数量要符合要求。

2.参考词汇与句型：

参考词汇：had吃；some bread一些面包；milk牛奶；for breakfast对于早饭，vegetables蔬菜；important重要的；

参考句型：I had…；I ate…；For dinner, I had…；We all know…；

2．范文：

Tomorrow is Saturday. I'm going to the book shop. I want to buy Snow White. I'm going to the bookshop by bike. I will go there with Wang Hong.

【详解】1. 题干解读：选择一组图片写一写周末计划，要包含以下内容：打算去哪里，去做什么，怎么去，和谁一起去。注意文章为一般现在时态并要符合句子数量要求。

2. 参考词汇与句型：

参考单词：Saturday星期六，the book shop书店，Snow White白雪公主，by bike乘自行车，go there去那儿

参考句型：Tomorrow is …； I want to buy …；I'm going to …； I will go …；

3．

Jenny is going to make her bed on Saturday morning. She is going to have rice and vegetables for lunch. On Saturday afternoon, she is going to sweep the floor. After that, she will read a book. On Saturday evening, she will watch TV.

【详解】1. 题目解读：这是个看图作文，叫介绍珍妮周六一天的安排，要用一般将来时，主语是第三人称单数。

2. 参考词汇及句型：

参考词汇：make the bed整理床铺，have lunch吃午饭，sweep the floor扫地，read a book读书，watch TV看电视

参考句型：She is going to...；She will....

【点睛】

4．范文：

A pleasant journey

Last summer holiday, I went to Mingfeng mountain in Yuan’an with my family. It’s not far from my home, so we went there by bus. We rowed a boat on the lake and took lots of photos there. I was so happy.

【详解】1. 题干解读：该题目要求根据图片，描述去鸣凤山的旅行。包括怎么去的，在那里做了什么，以及此次旅行的感受。

2. 参考词汇与句型：

参考单词：summer holiday暑假，family家庭，far from远离，row a boat划船，take photos拍照

参考句型：Last summer holiday, I went to...with...；It's..., so...；I was so...

5．参考范文：

My weekend

Hi, I’m Zhang Peng. I’m 10 years old. I go to school by bus every day. I’m going to Qi Feng Park in the morning this Saturday. I’m going there by bus. And then I’m going to see a film in the afternoon with my sister. I will have a wonderful weekend.

【详解】1.题干解读：该题目是假如你是Zhang Peng，今年十岁了。你每天坐公交去上学，本周末你打算去栖凤公园(Qi Feng Park)玩，然后去看电影。请你根据图片及表格提示，以My weekend为题，写一写本周末的活动和出行计划，时态以一般将来时为主，注意：条理清晰，表达准确，字迹工整。写一篇50词左右的作文。

2.参考词汇及参考句型：

参考词汇：go to school去上学，by bus坐公交车，go to Qi Feng Park去栖凤公园，see a film看电影

参考句型：I’m going to…；I will…

6．范文：

This weekend, I will go to the bookstore with my father. I want to buy some stories books. I like reading stories books. I am going there by bike. I like riding my bike. But my hobby is swimming. My father’s hobby is playing the violin. He also likes to read some books about history. We will have a great time this weekend.

【详解】1. 题干解读：该题目要求用第一人称来介绍这个周末自己和爸爸将要去书店做的事情及交通方式。然后再阐述自己和爸爸的爱好及心情。注意文章为一般将来时态和一般现在时态并要符合句子数量要求。

2. 参考词汇与句型：

参考单词：this weekend这个周末；bookstore书店；stories books故事书；by bike骑自行车；hobby爱好；swim游泳；play the violin拉小提琴；have a great time过得愉快；

参考句型：This weekend, I will...；I want...； I like...； I am going there ...；But my hobby is...；My father’s hobby is...；He also likes...；We will...；

【点睛】

7．例文

Weekend Plan

This weekend, Lily has a plan. On Saturday morning, Lily is going to the Children's Playground with her parents. In the evening, she is going to read some books. On Sunday, she will go to the park. And she is going to draw pictures in the park. After that, she will ride a bike with her friends. She hopes this weekend she can live very happily!

【详解】1.题干解读：该题目要求根据图片提示，写出Lily的周末计划。时态以一般将来时为主，人称是第三人称。要求语句通顺，写出图片所表达的内容。

2.参考词汇及参考句型：

参考词汇：the Children's Playground儿童乐园，read some books读书，go to the park去公园，draw pictures画画，ride a bike骑自行车

参考句型：She is going to…；She will…

8．范文：

It was sunny in the morning. Su Hai and I went to the park by bike. There were many people there. Some people had a picnic in the park. Then, the weather became windy and cloudy. We flew kites high in the sky. We were very happy. In the evening, I had a big dinner with my family at home.

【详解】1.题干解读：该题目要求看图写话，可以用一般过去时态描述你是如何度过一天的，句子数量要符合要求。

2.参考词汇与句型：

参考词汇：sunny晴朗的；by bike骑自行车；had a picnic野餐；windy有风的；cloudy多云的；flew kites放风筝；had a big dinner吃一顿丰盛的晚餐；

参考句型：It was...；I went to...；There were...；We were very...；In the evening, I...；

【点睛】

9．范文：

Dear Friends,

It is time to leave our school. We will say goodbye to each other. Let’s have a farewell party.

Place: Our classroom Time: Sunday, 9 a.m.

Activities:

We will sing and dance. We will play games. We will also give prizes to our good students.

Food: We will have apples, oranges, chocolate and milk.

See you at the party!

【详解】1. 题干解读：给朋友写一份毕业派对的邀请函，根据内容把句子补充完整，说明派对的时间和地点，介绍3项派对上开展的活动，例如唱歌、跳舞、玩游戏等，写出3种派对上提供的食物，例如苹果、橘子、巧克力等。注意文章为一般将来时。

2. 参考词汇与句型：

参考单词：party聚会；sing唱歌；dance跳舞；play games玩游戏；apples苹果；oranges橘子；chocolate巧克力

参考句型：We will…； We will have…

10．范文：

I’ve changed a lot in the last six years. I was short before, but now I am tall. Before I couldn’t ride a bike, but now I can go to school by bike. I used to be quiet and shy, but now I’m very active. I wasn’t good at English before, but now I am good at English.

【详解】1. 题干解读：要求以“Changes”为主题，介绍某一个人或某一个地方从过去到现在的变化。可以写自己的变化，从外貌的变化，能力的变化，性格的变化以及学习的变化等方面来写作。句子时态用一般过去时和一般现在时且符合句子数量和单词要求。

2. 参考词汇与句型：

参考单词：a lot许多；short矮的；tall高的；ride a bike骑自行车；by bike骑自行车；quiet安静的；active活跃的；be good at擅长

参考句型：Before I couldn’t...but now I can...；I used to...；I wasn’t...but now I am...

11．范文：

I have a new pen pal. His name is Mike. He lives in Australia. He often goes to school by bike. He likes playing football best. He likes singing, dancing and listening to music. He wants to be a scientist in the future.

【详解】1. 题干解读：该题目要求根据表格中的信息，介绍自己的新笔友Mike。然后再阐述姓名，国家，上学方式，最喜欢的运动，爱好和职业愿景。注意文章为一般现在时态并要符合句子数量要求。

2. 参考词汇与句型：

参考单词：Australia澳大利亚，by bike骑自行车，play football踢足球，listen to music听音乐，scientist科学家

参考句型：His name is …； He lives in …；He often goes to school …；He likes …；He wants to be ...；

12．范文：

My school is big and beautiful. There are many tall teaching buildings in it. There is a playground. We can run on the playground. There is a library. We often read books there. I have Chinese, Maths, English and so on. I like Music best. So I join the music club.

【详解】1. 题干解读：根据思维导图的提示，选择至少2个方面描述学习生活，包括学校设施、学校课程、学校时间表、俱乐部等。注意文章为一般现在时态并要符合句子数量要求。

2. 参考词汇与句型：

参考单词：beautiful漂亮的，teaching buildings教学楼，playground操场，library图书馆，read books读书，Chinese语文，Maths数学，Music音乐，join in加入

参考句型：My school is…；There are…；There is…； I have…

13．例文：

Last summer holiday I went to Qingdao with my parents. We went there by car. We visited Zhanqiao Park and then we went swimming. My parents took many pictures for me. We ate delicious food there. We had a good time.

【详解】1.题干解读：该题目要求写上个暑假的活动，包括去哪里，怎么去的以及所做的事情。注意文章为一般过去时态并要符合句子数量要求。

2.参考词汇和句型：参考单词：summer holiday暑假，by car乘汽车，visited参观，went swimming游泳，had a good time玩得很开心

参考句型：Last summer holiday I ... with …；We went there .…；We had a good time.

14．范文：

My last weekend

I was busy last weekend. I did my homework at home on Saturday morning. I went to the park on foot on Saturday afternoon. I cleaned my room on Sunday morning. On Sunday afternoon I visited my grandparents. At night, I watched TV with my parents. I was very tired but I was very happy.

【详解】1. 题干解读：该题目要求以“My last weekend”为题，写一篇作文。然后再阐述做了什么，和谁一起。注意文章为一般过去时态并要符合句子数量要求。

2. 参考词汇与句型：

参考单词：busy忙碌的，do my homework做作业，Saturday星期六，Sunday星期天，go to the park去公园，clean my room打扫房间，visit my grandparents拜访祖父母

参考句型：I was …； I … on …；On … I …； At night, I …；

15．范文：

My dream

Hello! I’m Lucy. I’m good at English. I want to be an English teacher in the future. I will pass my knowledge to the next generation. To make my dream come true, I will study hard and be strict with myself. I will build up my body in my spare time.

【详解】1.题干解读：该题目要求用第一人称写出自己的梦想以及怎样努力去实现梦想。注意文章为一般现在时和一般将来时，并要符合单词数量要求。

2.参考词汇与句型：

参考单词：be good at擅长，in the future将来，pass传递，knowledge知识，generation一代人，come true实现，strict严厉的

参考句型：I’m good at …； I want to be …；I will …； To make my dream come true, I will …

16．参考范文：

My best friend

This is my best friend. She is a beautiful girl. She has long hair. She is tall and thin. She is very friendly and clever. Her favourite subject is math. She is also good at English. She likes reading books, listening to music and drawing pictures. Our classmates all like her very much.

【详解】1. 题干解读：该题目是以My best friend为题，介绍一下你的朋友，写一写他/她的外貌、性格、学习及兴趣爱好等，时态是一般现在时。要求：语句通顺，文中不得出现真实姓名和地址。

2. 参考词汇及参考句型：

参考词汇：long hair长头发，tall and thin又高又瘦，friendly友好的，clever聪明的，math数学，English英语，reading books读书，listening to music听音乐，drawing pictures画画

参考句型：She is…；She likes…。

17．范文：

Welcome to China

Welcome to China. China is a big and friendly country. There are many famous buildings and delicious food. You can visit the Tian’anmen Square and the Great Wall. You can eat Beijing Roast Duck. It’s delicious. Chinese people are very kind. They will help you.

【详解】1. 题干解读：以“Welcome to China”为题介绍我们伟大的祖国，重点介绍中国的首都、名胜古迹、饮食、中国人民等。注意文章为一般现在时态并要符合单词数量要求。

2. 参考词汇与句型：

参考单词：friendly友好的，country国家，famous著名的，visit参观，kind善良的，delicious美味的

参考句型：China is …； There are…；You can …；Chinese people are…

18．例文

Our School Rules

1. Don’t fight with other students at school.

2. Be quiet in classroom.

3. Talk in a polite way and greet teachers.

4. Keep the classroom clean.

5. Don’t eat and drink in the classroom.

6. Don’t be late to school.