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展开专题11 读后续写
▲命题特点
读后续写作为高考新题型,是一种将阅读与写作紧密结合的考查形式。该题型的阅读部分多为350词以内的记叙文,旨在考查学生对篇章的把握与理解能力,续写部分为150词左右的两段文章,旨在考查学生对所学语言知识的运用能力以及学生的想象力和创造力。纵观近几年的读后续写,篇篇好故事,或遇险,或趣事,但无论内容是什么,故事读起来都引人入胜,续写写起来也并非易事。
读后续写多是故事性很强的记叙文,文章的难度不大,但是取材非常广泛,它不仅涉及学生的日常生活,还会涉及广泛的其它领域。出题人的设题大同小异,通过完整故事的叙述,考查学生用英语叙事和描写的能力,尤其是对动作、情感和环境的细节描写。每篇文章都遵循一定的时空线、情节线和情感线,因此我们的续写内容必须沿着原文已给的“三线”进行合情合理地想象,并通过对人物动作、外在表情、内在心理和环境等细节描写使之“有血有肉、生动形象。”
▲技巧点拨
1.理清已知信息
精读文章,关注细节和脉络。阅读是读后续写的起点,起点的高低直接影响着续写能达到的高度,因此考生要通过阅读梳理文中主要人物之间的关系、主要人物的性格特点、故事发展线索,以便把握故事的走向,构建情节。厘清主要信息不仅可以帮助考生理解故事情节,推断故事发展方向,同时对续写时的人物描写有指导作用。
2. 研判续写方向
(1)定文章基调
在读完文章后,考生要根据各段落的主旨,明确文章的整体构架和中心思想。此外,考生需要通过文中的细节描述来确定续写内容的基调,如分析描写人物的形容词和人物发出的动作、文中的对话、所给的两个续写段首句来确定续写的基调,寻找续写的切入口,从而展开合理的情节想象。
(2)定文章走向
所给续写段落开头语对故事发展有提示、衔接、引导和限制作用。续写时,考生要站在作者的角度,继承原文写作思路,需要注意续写内容应积极向上,设计的结局应是正向的,如意外事件类的续写结局应是事情得以解决。此外,续写第二段的开头往往暗示着第一段的故事走向。
(3)定续写框架
在读后续写中,细读是起点,写作则是重点,而建构是难点。考生可将梳理出的信息和拓展的细节结合形成故事发展的要点,从而构建简单的续写故事框架。另外,在写作时,考生应注意句子结构的多样性、词汇的丰富性,利用储备的语言知识,根据内容慎重选择词汇、词块和句式,且有意识地使用高级句式,使表达富有感染力。此外,考生还应该注意续写内容与所给段落首句的衔接程度。
3.推测后续情节
续写每个段落时,考生可以用倒推的方式构思四个情节,可以用“四问法”呈现续写内容,围绕主旨推断情节发展。续写第一段以续写第一段与第二段衔接内容为起点,倒推第一段的情节;续写的第二段以问题圆满解决、正能量的传递为宗旨,倒推第二段的故事内容。两段内容聚焦主要人物的所看、所听、所感、所想、所说、所做,以及人物之间的互动,关注主次人物之间的交流,尽量不要唱独角戏。考生续写时对每段设四问,围绕这四问作答,既能凸显主旨,又能关照全文,使续写文章整体协调、情节合理。或者,考生在考场写作时,可以构建“四步倒推法”思维导图,以便建构续写的情节,从而快速成文。
4.续写精彩华章
(1)抓住关键信息,构思续写框架。通读全文,理清记叙文六要素脉络。掌握记叙文的三大线索即时间线、情节线和感情线。把握文章主旨和故事的发展方向,确保续写的内容和原文要有逻辑上的一致性,并能回应原文的信息。
(2)根据两段首句和“五所”——所见,所闻,所说,所思,所做,对此进行设问,可以有效地丰富续写的情节。
(3)注意四个顺畅呼应,进行有效衔接。注意续写首句与给出的首段首句的衔接、续写首段尾句与给出的次段首句的衔接、给出的次段首句与续写次段首句的衔接和文章结尾升华与文章主题意义的衔接。
5. 烘托故事情节
(1)充分利用环境描写。不仅可以揭示故事发生的背景,还可以渲染气氛、衬托人物的内心世界。当人物在碰到困难时候,我们往往要加大笔墨来描写故事环境的险恶,恐怖和不安,衬托角色的内心,从而推动故事情节到高潮。
(2)学会分解动作,形成一个完整的动作链,让描写更加丰富生动。动作链可以和情感,环境,心理,语言等结合,形成动作面。
(3)放大角色的内心冲突,有助于建立紧张和不确定的时刻。
(4)运用合适的修辞手法,如明喻、暗喻、拟人、夸张等,让续写更加生动传神。
▲模拟演练
一
(2023·山东·高一校联考期中)阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
The story started when the Marches were driving home on a cold winter evening.
It was almost 11:00 pm. They were waiting at a red traffic light when they spotted a middle-aged man walking across the road. He dragged his leg, wrapped up his overcoat and hurried by, looking tired and depressed.
The couple felt a need to give him a hand. Then they pulled over and offered him a lift. The man felt surprised at first but soon he accepted their offer and showed his appreciation.
On the way home, they had a chat. They learned the man called Bill was a security guard of a company, which was on the other side of the city. Every day it would take him about 3 hours to travel there by public transportation and the same time back home. The long trip left him only time for work and sleep. Sometimes if he missed the last bus, just as that day, he would have no time to sleep. He had had a car, but because of several hardships in his family, he had to sell it for money.
The Marches didn’t return until they sent Bill to his home. That might have been the end of the story, but they couldn’t take Bill’s 6-hour daily trip and his hardship off their minds. His experience reminded the couple of their own previous struggles in their early life. Short of money, they counted every coin to cover the cost. In order to support life, they walked to the office in the distance, despite hot or cold. Hopelessness and disappointment clouded their life. This time, they thought the trip with Bill wasn’t over.
续写要求:
1.续写词数应为150左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
The Marches thought of ways to raise money.
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Then they handed the keys of the car to Bill.
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【解析】文章以人物为线索展开,讲述了一个寒冷的夜晚Marches一家在开车回家的路上看到了疲惫的Bill,Marches主动让Bill搭便车,并且在聊天的过程中了解到Bill的艰难,尤其是在路上花费的时间。回想自己当初遭遇的难处,Marches夫妇决定给Bill提供帮助。
【详解】1. 段落续写
①根据第一段首句“Marches一家想办法筹集资金”可知,下文可描写他们筹钱的过程,以及结果——筹到钱给Bill买了一辆车。
②根据第二段首句“然后他们把车钥匙递给Bill”可知,下文可描写Bill收到车钥匙后的反应,以及Marches解释为什么要买车,和Bill的感激。
2.续写线索:决定筹钱——发布到网络——得到人们的支持——筹到买车的钱——送车钥匙——惊讶——解释——感激——分享
【精彩范文】
The Marches thought of ways to raise money. First, they blogged about their experience to make their friends know about it. Then they posted their plan on Facebook and started a special website, hoping to get support from the public. Within 3 days, more and more people replied and thought highly of the couple’s act of kindness. Soon, with the money donated by warm-hearted people, the couple bought a new car for Bill and paid a visit to Bill’s home. The moment Bill opened the door, he recognized the kind couple, feeling surprised.
Then they handed the keys of the car to Bill. He stared at the keys, his mouth wide open out of curiosity. “A new car for you. We hope it can help you have a sound sleep.” said Mr. March, smiling warmly and pressing the keys in Bill’s hand. Bill could hardly believe his ears, with his eyes shining brightly. He held the keys tightly and bowed to the Marches to show his gratitude. Later, the Marches posted the emotional moment online, sharing the sense of pride and happiness that kindness brought.
二
(2023·浙江·高一校联考期中)
阅读下列材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
I was hit on my back as I walked down the hall. I turned around angrily, only to discover a lovely cat. His name was Oscar and he was born at the shelter I was visiting. The volunteer let me know that the mother was abandoned by her owner. She and the rest of the litter (幼崽) had been adopted quickly, but Oscar remained.
I could tell he was just what we needed. We were just married, full of love and hope, but we were also facing a few unexpected trials. Just weeks after our wedding, my husband was injured in an accident at work, which not only broke his body but his spirit. Hours of physical treatment led to sleepless nights. I hoped that this little cat would cheer up my husband.
When I brought Oscar home, I asked my husband to shut his eyes and open his hands. I handed him the cat, who reached up and rubbed his paws (爪子) against my husband’s face. It had been months since I saw my husband smile like this, and Oscar himself couldn’t stop purring .
Years passed, and our sweet Oscar continued to bring us comfort. He had an ability to know if someone was having an emotional moment; he would always try to help.
One day, I received a phone call from my mother telling me that my father had cancer. I swore to do everything I could to help him. Feeling upset, I took a bath to try to collect my thoughts. Oscar reached up, opened the closed door, and jumped directly into the bathtub with me. Hearing the loud noise, my husband ran into the bathroom to find Oscar all wet just inches from my face. That little guy was all heart.
Fortunately, my father beat cancer and recovered fully. Following his final treatment, he was given two weeks of rest at home. He asked if he and my mother could “babysit” Oscar for those weeks. We were more than happy to share.
注意:1. 续写词数应为150左右;2. 段落开头已给出。
On the final day of Oscar’s visit, my father decided to bake cookies for me and my husband to thank us for “lending” him our cat.
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“Did you add these paw prints on the cookies?” I asked my dad surprisingly.
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【解析】本文以人物为线索展开,讲述了作者在收容所收养了一只叫Oscar的小猫,想让受伤的丈夫开心,当作者把Oscar带回家时,丈夫笑了,多年过去了,可爱的Oscar继续给作者他们带来安慰,有一天,作者得知父亲得了癌症,Oscar以自己的行动安慰了作者,作者的父亲战胜了癌症,完全康复了,在最后一次治疗后,他被允许在家休息两周,他问作者是否可以和作者妈妈在那几周“照看”奥斯卡,作者非常乐意。
【详解】1.段落续写:
①由第一段首句内容“Oscar来访的最后一天,父亲决定为我和丈夫烤些饼干,以感谢我们“借给”他我们的猫。”可知,第一段可描写作者一家吃饼干的情形和作者发现饼干上有爪印。
②由第二段首句内容““这些爪印是你放在饼干上的吗?”我惊讶地问爸爸。”可知,第二段可描写作者发现关于爪印的真相和作者跟爸爸喝茶聊天以及作者的感受。
2.续写线索:进入家门——爸爸忙着把饼干装盘——作者看见饼干上有爪印——意识到真相——喝茶聊天——感悟
【精彩范文】
On the final day of Oscar’s visit, my father decided to bake cookies for me and my husband to thank us for “lending” him our cat. I was so grateful since cookies were my favourite dessert. The moment we entered the house, the familiar smell of warm chocolate cookies hung heavily in the air. Father was engaged in placing them on the delicate silver plates one by one. “You are so sweet, Dad.” I stepped forward, grabbing one plate and digging in. It was only when I was on my third cookie that I noticed an adorable detail. There was a paw print on each of the cookies.
“Did you add these paw prints on the cookies?” I asked my dad surprisingly. “What do you mean?” he leaned forward in wonder. So did my husband. For a split second, realizing what had happened, we three erupted into laughter. It was Oscar that had added his own touch as usual. That afternoon, I sat leisurely in the sofa, sipping tea and talking merrily with my father while Oscar nestled softly on my husband’s chest. He shared his love and joy with everyone. Not only had he left paw prints on the cookies, but he also left paw prints on our hearts.
三.
(2023·湖北·高一校联考期中)阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Grandma got Grandpa out of bed and helped him to the kitchen for breakfast. After his meal, she led him to his armchair in the living room where he would rest while she cleaned the dishes. Every so often, she would check to see if he needed anything.
This was their daily routine after Grandpa’s latest stroke. Although once a very active, strong and healthy man, his badly damaged left arm, difficult walking and slurred speech now kept him housebound. For nearly a year he hadn’t even been to church or to visit family. Grandpa filled his hours with television. He watched the news and game shows while Grandma went about her day. They made an agreement—he was not to leave his chair or his bed without her assistance.
Grandma was friendly, outgoing and unselfish; Grandpa was reserved and devoted to his family. But he didn’t like giving gifts. He held the belief that if you treated your wife well throughout the year, presents weren’t necessary; so he rarely bought gifts for her.
It was Valentine’s Day, a typical cold winter morning in New York. As always, Grandma walked Grandpa to his chair. “I’m going to take a shower now.” She handed him the television remote. “If you need anything, I’ll be back in a little while.”
注意:
1.续写词数应为 150 左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答.
After her shower, she glanced towards the back of Grandpa’s chair but noticed that his walking stick was not in its usual place.
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As she stood alone on the street desperately, Grandpa walked around the corner.
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【解析】故事以人物为线索展开。爷爷因为严重受伤的左臂、说话含糊不清,不能独自出门,奶奶耐心的照顾并陪伴着他。因为爷爷认为“如果一整年对妻子好,就没必要给她买礼物”,所以奶奶从来没有收到过礼物。在情人节的早晨,奶奶把遥控器给爷爷,让他看会儿电视看会电视,因为她要去洗澡,并且一会儿就回来。
【详解】1.段落续写
①由第一段首句内容“洗完澡后,她看了看爷爷的椅背,发现他的手杖不在原来的位置。”可知,第一段描写发现爷爷不在后,奶奶赶紧出门寻找不会独自走路的爷爷。
②由第二段首句内容“当她孤身一人绝望地站在街上时,爷爷走到了拐角处。”可知,第二段描写爷爷出现在奶奶面前,因为今天是情人节,爷爷出来是为了给奶奶买礼物。
2.续写线索
奶奶发现爷爷和他的拐杖不在了——奶奶出门找爷爷,很着急——爷爷出现了——奶奶责怪他——爷爷给奶奶买了礼物
【精彩范文】
After her shower, she glanced towards the back of Grandpa’s chair but noticed that his walking stick was not in its usual place. Sensing something strange, she walked toward the chair. He was gone. Fear ran down her spine. Grandma threw a coat over her bathrobe and ran outside. Small piles of snow and ice covered the sidewalks. Upon the thought that Grandpa could barely walk on his own, her heart was pulling up. Wringing her hands, she hardly felt the freezing air as she watched traffic rush by. Where could he be? Why would he leave the house all by himself?
As she stood alone on the street desperately, Grandpa walked around the corner. Head bowed, eyes focused on the sidewalk, he took small, cautious steps. His walking stick and a brown bag filled his good arm. Relieved to see that he was okay, she started to scold, “I only left you alone for a short while. What did you need so badly that you couldn’t wait? I was so worried about you!” Confused and curious, she reached into the brown bag. Before Grandpa had a chance to explain, she pulled out a heart-shaped box. “It’s Valentine’s Day,” Grandpa explained. “I thought you might like a box of chocolates. I haven’t bought you a gift in a long, long time.” His stroke-impaired words warmed the winter wind. Tears flooded Grandma’s eyes as she hugged his arm to her chest and led Grandpa back home.
四.
(2023·河南·高一校联考期中)阅读下面材料, 根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段, 使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Today I was walking along the street when a homeless woman asked me for some change. I gave her some money and stopped to talk to her for a while.
I asked her about how she ended up on the street and if there was a shelter she could go to. She told me about some of her struggles. She told me that she left home at seventeen and had been homeless since then. She said that her bag with all her clothes and possessions was stolen the night before, while she was sleeping outside a church. Shesaid that she went to the day centre every day and they made calls to try to find her a shelter but nothing was available, as all shelters for women were full up. It had been like this for months. I listened to her and said a few kind words to her. After we spoke, I told her that it was really nice to meet her and wished her all the best.
I left feeling really sad and frustrated that there was nothing I could do to ease her situation. I have spoken to a few other homeless people and I have heard about how difficult it is to get a place in a shelter, or sometimes some shelters can be so unsafe that it is better for them to sleep on the streets.
I was on my way to my flower store. While trimming(修剪)these kinds of beautiful flowers, I thought about the lady I had just met and other homeless people I had spoken to. I thought it must be frustrating not to be able to experience so many of the day-to-day things that I and many others take for granted such as a roof over our heads, a bed to sleep in, money to buy food and even money to buy presents for a dear one.
注意:
1.续写词数应为150左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
I decided that I could do something for her.
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She raised her head suddenly, with her eyes full of surprise.
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【解析】本文以人物为线索展开,讲述了作者走在街头,遇到一个无家可归的女人向自己要零钱,在交谈过后,作者了解到女人不去收容所的原因,对她的遭遇感到难过和沮丧。作者最终决定帮助这个女人并且去慈善机构做志愿者,帮助更多的人。
【详解】1.段落续写
①由第一段首句内容“我决定为她做点什么。”可知,第一段可描写作者帮助那个女人的方式以及女人的感激之情。
②由第二段首句内容“她突然抬起头,眼里充满了惊讶。”可知,第二段可描写接受作者提供的工作后,女人努力工作并且主动帮助别人传递善意,作者也决定做志愿者,帮助更多的人。
2.续写线索:打包物品,前往女人所在的地方——女人感到高兴——递给她物品——询问是否愿意来店里工作——声音颤抖,表示愿意——努力工作,传递善意
【精彩范文】
I decided that I could do something for her. I went home after a while and packed up some food and clothes that were not fit any more for my family. And then I headed for the place where we had met. Luckily, she was there. Seeing me appearing again, she seemed delighted, with a bright smile on her face. When I handed her all the stuff I had prepared for her, she cried, burying her face in her hands. I came up to comfort her and ask her whether she would like to work in my store.
She raised her head suddenly, with her eyes full of surprise. She said with a trembling voice, “I certainly would love to, but am I suitable for the job?" I immediately responded that she could surely do well in my store! From then on, she worked pretty hard. In addition to her own job, she even helped others to go through their hard times. I felt more than delighted to see my kindness spread. I made up my mind to volunteer in local charities to help more people in need.
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(2023·河北保定·高一定州市第二中学校考期中)阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Catherine’s nine-year-old son, Chirag, won his first silver prize at a swim meet. It seemed like he could swim before he could walk. His dad is a competitive swimmer and a former champion, so many people think it is surely in his genes.
That’s wrong! Until a few years ago, Chirag was afraid of water. It wasn’t his fault. His dislike came from Catherine’s childhood phobia (恐惧症).
One summer when Catherine was a child, she and her brother went to a pool to learn basic swimming skills. All that went well and soon it was time for class. A coach was hired and he agreed to do a trial round. He took children to the deep end and asked then to swim across the breadth of the pool. While Catherine’s brother stayed calm and made it, she, however, immediately disliked the task. It was Catherine’s first time in such deep water, and the bottom of the pool seemed so far away that she felt really frightened. She felt she was going to drown (淹死) for lack of air. At that moment, she thought that swimming wasn’t for her. After being rescued from the water, she didn’t swim again.
Fast forward to her thirties, she was a mother of a child and living in an area with a lot of rivers and beaches. Then her son, Chirag, started school, and swimming was a compulsory course. Every Wednesday, the day for the weekly swimming lesson was Chirag’s bad dream. From the previous evening, he would be anxious and teary-eyed about going to school. It turned out that Catherine had passed on her anxiety about swimming to her little boy.
She was always worried about keeping her child safe around water and was starting to realize that the best way to do that was making him learn how to swim. Words of comfort were of no use to Chirag. He still sat outside the pool during his classes. It was obvious that he needed professional lessons to help build his confidence. She needed to challenge herself to encourage her son.
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So Catherine signed up for swimming classes with her son.
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To Catherine’s amazement, she didn’t drown!
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【解析】本文以人物为线索展开,讲述了九岁的奇拉格在游泳比赛中赢得了他的第一个银奖,但是在当初,妈妈凯瑟琳对游泳的焦虑曾严重影响到奇拉格,导致游泳课成为奇拉格的噩梦,为了帮助孩子重建信心学会游泳,凯瑟琳和儿子一起报名参加了游泳课,凯瑟琳战胜自我,成功潜水,为奇拉格树立了榜样,勇敢跳入水中。
【详解】1.段落续写:
①由第一段首句内容“所以凯瑟琳和她儿子报了游泳班。”可知,第一段可描写凯瑟琳和儿子奇拉格一起参加游泳培训,奇拉格依旧不愿下水,害怕游泳的凯瑟琳为儿子做表率,勇敢入水。
②由第二段首句内容“令凯瑟琳惊讶的是,她没有淹死!”可知,第二段可描写凯瑟琳的举动鼓励了奇拉格,他也进了泳池,俩人都克服了对水的恐惧。
2.续写线索:母子报游泳班——俩人参加训练——妈妈入水做表率——奇拉格克服恐惧——感悟
【精彩范文】 So Catherine signed up for swimming classes with her son. For the first few lessons, Catherine came to watch. Luckily, the coach was patient. Chirag still chose to sit outside the pool. After a few days, the coach felt that Catherine was skilled enough to dive into the water. Her fear washed over her again. She stood at the edge of the pool as if frozen. Just then, she found Chirag watching her. If she didn’t make it, he would do the same thing. She took a deep breath, and jumped into the water.
To Catherine’s amazement, she didn’t drown! No one was more proud of her jump than Chirag. Soon after, her once-hesitant son stopped sitting outside the pool during his classes, and plunged into the water. Now, Catherine isn’t worried about swimming across the pool. Fear has given way to achievement. If she feels nervous when swimming, Chirag is always there to encourage her. The power of maternal love has allowed her to overcome her childhood phobia, and even the scariest unknown bottom of the pool doesn’t seem so frightening.
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(2023·河南·高一校联考期中)阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
As I stood in line waiting to pay for the things I bought at my favorite supermarket, I studied the customer in front of me who was reading the magazines to our left. She was young, maybe in her early twenties, but she looked tired-as if life had beaten her down too many times.
The things in her cart included the cheapest cuts of meat, rice, and potatoes. Powdered milk, day-old bread,bargain soap, and inexpensive shampoo completed the things she bought-well, almost. There were also lots of instant noodles and a pretty dress that was 50 percent off.
She continued to look at the magazines as we waited, and more people lined up behind us. She finally took one out and turned it over several times,trying to find a price before finally turning to me.
“I’m sorry to trouble you,“she said.“But can you tell me how much this is? I left my glasses at home. ”“Of course,” I said with a laugh.
When I finally found the small print and told her, she sighed quietly and put it back.“They’ve become so expensive, haven’t they?”I said in a low voice.
“Next!”The cashier called before she could answer, and she moved forward to begin her tun. When the store employee finally told her the cost, the woman’s face paled(变苍白).She opened an old purse and began counting small bills and change. It was clear that she didn’t have enough,and she examined her things to see what she could do without.
One by one, she took things out, but she still came up short. She continued taking things out while the cashier waited patiently. The man right behind me complained loudly enough for all to hear, and the young woman’s face reddened with awkwardness. I wanted to pay for her things outright,but I knew that would embarrass(使尴尬) her even more.
“Take your time,”I added gently as she tried to decide what other things she could return.“I’m in no hurry.
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The woman finally paid and my turn came to pay the bill.
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Then I caught up with the woman at the gate of the supermarket.
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【解析】本文以人物为线索展开,讲述了作者目睹了一位贫穷的女士在超市购物,她所购的物品均是打折廉价物品,即便如此,这位女士所带现金依然不够,后来她得到作者、收银员及另外一位顾客暗中相助的故事。
【详解】1.段落续写:①由第一段首句内容“那位女士终于付了帐,轮到我付帐了。”可知,第一段可描写作者悄悄帮助那位女士结账的经过。
②由第二段首句内容“然后我在超市门口赶上了那个女人。”可知,第二段可描写作者把那位女士买不起的物品给她,那位女士感动。
2.续写线索:结账——帮助——递给——惊讶——感谢——感悟
【精彩范文】
The woman finally paid and my turn came to pay the bill. By then,I had rearranged my own purchases. I moved forward,added all my meat and fresh milk and put the magazine into my cart. Then,I pointed to the pile of things the woman had taken out and whispered“Separate bags,same bill please”to the cashier. Seeming to know what I was planning to do, she nodded, smiled, and quickly packed them.
Then I caught up with the woman at the gate of the supermarket.“This is for you-all the things you took out just now I handed the bag to her.“How can I accept this?”she stared at me in great surprise.“It’s nothing. To be frank, we have all been in such an embarrassing situation at one time or another”I replied warmly and firmly. The woman then accepted the bag,tears welling up in her eyes.It was at that moment that I realized we make a living by what we get but we make a life by what we give.
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(2023·四川泸州·高一四川省泸县第一中学校考阶段练习)阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
It was the last practice before the big gymnastics competition in Burlingville. The gymnastics team of Springtown High School had been training every day in the school vacation. They tried harder and wanted to do better. They had competed with the team from Maidstone High School several times. The competitions allowed the two teams to admire each other for their excellent performance and players’ qualities. They respected the game; they respected each other’s team more.
Today, the players of Springtown went home earlier. They would pack some food and water to have along the way to Burlingville. Before they went home, they went to their teacher to see their new uniform. Springton High School was in the countryside. The team made cookies and sold them at the market to get money to buy the uniform. They loved it very much, even though they were impressed with the uniforms of the team from Maidstone. Maidstone High School was a rich private school. It usually prepared two sets of uniforms for the competition — one for the morning and the other for the afternoon.
Early the next morning, the team of Springtown High School and their teacher got on a minibus to start their long trip. They would reach the railway station in Travers at about two o’clock and then take a train to Burlingville. They must be there by six o’clock and register for the competition.
The bus driver drove the bus through the country roads. Then suddenly, he parked the bus at the side of the road. There was something wrong with the engine. Unluckily, the driver couldn’t fix it in a short time. He called the company and asked them to send another bus for the gymnastics team. It was 90 minutes before another minibus came. Everyone jumped onto the bus. “Please hurry,” said the teacher.
When they finally arrived at Travers railway station, the bus driver helped the team carry the bags into the station. As soon as they got on the train, it started to move. Looking out of the window, the teacher saw the bus driver running towards the train door.
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1.续写词数应为150左右;
2.开头已给出。
“Oh, no!” the teacher shouted. “The driver has our uniform bag!”
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Caught in complete hopelessness, the team from Springtown saw the players of Maidstone walking towards them.
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【解析】本文以人物为线索展开,讲述了来自农村的斯普林敦高中队和来自富有私立学校的迈德斯通高中队将进行大型体操比赛。来伯灵顿的路上,斯普林敦队刚上火车,却发现他们辛苦购得的队服落在了公共汽车上,而火车已经开动,公共汽车开走了。
【详解】1.段落续写:
①由第一段首句内容““哦,不!”老师喊道。“司机拿着我们的队服包!””可知,第一段可描写学生们非常失望,想再次购买队服的计划没能实现,学生们只能穿平时的衣服去参加比赛。
②由第二段首句内容“在完全绝望的情况下,来自斯普林敦的队伍看到了来自迈德斯通的队员向他们走来。”可知,第二段可描写迈德斯通的队员被对手的努力感动,将自己的另一套队服借给对手,斯普林敦的队员换好队服后,两队开始比赛。
2.续写线索:队服丢了——打算重新买,钱不够——穿平时衣服比赛——迈德斯通的队员借出队服——解释借出队服的原因——开始比赛
【精彩范文】
“Oh, no!” cried the teacher. “The driver has our uniform bag!” The students were very disappointed to see the bus driving away. They lost their new uniforms, which made them unable to wear uniforms to participate in the competition. Finally, the students reached Burlingville. The team sold the cookies they had made with the hope of buying new uniforms again. But the money was not enough. The big day finally arrived. The students could only wear their usual clothes to go to the playground.
In complete desperation, the team from Springtown saw the players from Midstone coming to them. Each player had a uniform in his hand, which was for the players in Springtown. Mindstone’s players were moved to see the efforts made by the players in Springtown to get uniform. That was why they were willing to lend their spare uniforms. After the Springtown team changed uniforms, the game between the two teams began.
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(2023·辽宁·高一校联考阶段练习)阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Cory had a quarrel with his mother for his study and left home in the morning. He had been wandering on the streets for almost a whole day, feeling so depressed and hopeless.
It was freezing cold at dusk on such a winter day. And the sky was dark. He was walking down an empty street where there were no passers-by, because people must have been at home for warmth. Cory was walking to a crossroad when suddenly he came across a little boy stuck in the middle of the road alone like him.
Cory had meant to turn a blind eye to him at first. But the boy’s situation worried him. He approached the boy, asking, “Hey! Why are you alone here? Where is your mother?” “I want to find my mama and papa. Please take me home,” the boy replied, bursting into tears. Cory led him away from the crossroad. Then, he asked worriedly, “How did you come here? What’s your name?”
“I’m Simon. I was playing with my dog. The dog ran away, and I ran after him for a long distance. But when I wanted to go back home, I lost my way,” cried the boy. Feeling pity for the boy, Cory made up his mind to help the boy. He couldn’t have the little boy staying here alone.
Attempting to look for his home, Cory took the little boy to different neighborhoods. But things didn’t go that smoothly as he had expected. It was getting darker and darker, and Cory thought he had to help Simon find his home. He knocked on every door, but without luck. Worn out and starving, he realized Simon must be very hungry. He offered him the chocolate he had bought with his rest money. It began to snow and he removed his coat and put it around Simon. Luckily, there was still a bakery store with the door open. He borrowed a phone to call the police station.
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1. 续写词数应为150左右;
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After a while, a police car pulled up and Cory waved to it with excitement.
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Seeing the reunion of Simon and his parents, Cory was deeply touched.
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【解析】本文以人物为线索展开,讲述了Cory和父母吵架后离家出走,黄昏时他在街上遇见了一个迷路的小男孩,他决定帮助小男孩找到父母,Cory带着小男孩去了不同的社区也没找到,幸运的是,还有一家面包店的门开着,他借了一部电话报了警。
【详解】1.段落续写:
①由第一段首句内容“过了一会儿,一辆警车停了下来,Cory兴奋地向它挥手”可知,第一段可描写在警察的帮助下Simon和父母团聚。
②由第二段首句内容“看到Simon和他父母的团聚,Cory深受感动”可知,第二段可描写Cory想到自己的父母,为自己的行为感到内疚并跑回家去。
2.续写线索:
Cory向警察解释——警察寻找Simon父母并取得联系——感动——想起父母——内疚——跑回家
【精彩范文】
After a while, a police car pulled up and Cory waved to it with excitement. Two policemen came out of the police car and Cory couldn’t wait to explain what had happened to Simon. Then, the policemen checked for any missing person’s report without any delay. Meanwhile, they drove the two of them around the nearby neighborhood one by one to search for Simon’s home. Finally, they successfully contacted the little boy’s parents. Cory was more than glad to see Simon s reunion with his parents.
Seeing the reunion of Simon and his parents, Cory was deeply touched. He thought of his own parents, the warm home and his mother’s delicious supper. He thought his parents must have been as worried as Simon’s and they must have been anxiously searching everywhere for their son right now. The more he thought about it, the more guilty he felt for what he had done to his mother. All his anger died away in an instant and he rushed in the direction of his home.
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(2023·内蒙古赤峰·高一统考期末)阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落的开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Steve grabbed his bat and glove. “See you later, Mom. I’m going to Paul’s.” He raced out the door and slammed it behind him. Summer vacation just began. The boys planned to play baseball every day so they could make the freshman team.
Paul was waiting outside for Steve. “What are you doing? Where’s your stuff?” Steve lifted his bat onto his shoulder when catching sight of Paul.
Paul shook his head unhappily. “I have to clean Mr Thompson’s garage before I can go. With his broken arm, he can’t do it himself. My mom always volunteers me to help the Thompson’s. They’re kind of old.”
“OK” said Steve. “I’ll help you. We’ll get done quicker working together.”
The boys went down the block to the Thompson’s and got started. They found a couple of brooms and shovels(铲). Before they swept, they put boxes that were strewn(遍布) around the garage floor on shelves. As Paul put a big box on a shelf, it fell off and with it fell an envelope. He picked it up. It wasn’t sealed, so he opened it. There were lots of one-hundred-dollar bills.
“You’ve got to see this.” He pulled out a handful of bills and showed Steve with his eyes lit up. “Where did you get that?” said Steve. Paul pointed to the shelf. “It just fell down when the box fell. There’s got to be a couple of thousand box fell. There’s got to be a couple of thousand dollars here. If we take some, I bet no one will ever know.”
Steve furrowed his brow(皱眉) and shook his head. “Are you crazy? That’s stealing.” “Well, I do a lot of chores for them and don’t get paid. It’s not really stealing; it’s a kind of payment for my hard work,” Paul insisted. At that time, Steve was about to grab the money from Paul’s hand when they heard a sound.
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“Boys, I baked a chocolate cake,” Mrs Thompson walked into the garage.
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When they were about to leave, Mrs Thompson handed Paul a brand-new bat and glove.
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【解析】本文以人物为线索展开,讲述了Steve邀约Paul外出打棒球,而Paul答应妈妈帮Thompson夫妇打扫车库卫生,之后Steve提议一同干活然后再去玩。在打扫卫生时有信封掉落,孩子们发现大量现金,在Paul想据为己有时,Steve极力打消Paul的想法,之后Thompson太太为感谢孩子们的劳动送来了蛋糕,这让孩子们感到很羞愧,在即将离开时Thompson太太送给Paul一只崭新的球棒和手套来表达感谢,而Paul也终于意识到自己的错误从而还了钱。
【详解】1.段落续写:
①由第一段首句内容““孩子们,我烤了一个巧克力蛋糕,”汤普森太太走进车库。”可知第一段可描写Thompson和孩子们的对话以及两个孩子见到Thompson太太后的反应。
②由第二段首句内容“当他们准备离开时,汤普森夫人递给Paul一只崭新的球棒和手套。”可知第二段可描写Paul看到崭新的球棒和手套时的反应、还钱后Thompson太太的反应和对孩子们的感谢,最后是Paul的思想认识。
2.续写线索:做蛋糕→送蛋糕→孩子的担心→Thompson太太的反应→Paul的愧疚→送手套和棒球→还钱→感谢→认识
【精彩范文】
“Boys, I baked a chocolate cake,” Mrs Thompson walked into the garage. Catching sight of Mrs Thompson, the two froze with fear and followed her step with racing hearts. A few minutes later, they were served with large slices of cake. Delicious as the cake was, they didn’t have any appetite. Mrs Thompson seemed to notice something was wrong, “Boys, do you like the cake?” Paul nodded with his eyes dropping to avoid any eye contact and growing guilt crept into his heart.
When they were about to leave, Mrs Thompson handed Paul a brand-new bat and glove. Paul looked at them, his face blushing with shame. “Th... thanks so much.” Voice trembling, Paul then bravely poured out everything about the envelope and gave back the money he hid before, apologizing for his stealing. However, Mrs Thompson, instead of boiling with anger, came up to Paul, and said gently: “Oh, thank you for helping me find the envelope. I totally forgot where I had put it.” In that split time, it dawned on him that what really matters is simple honesty and simple kindness.
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(2023·湖南衡阳·高一统考期末)阅读下面的材料, 根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段, 使之构成一篇完整的短文。
After 22 years of marriage, I have discovered the secret to keep love alive in my relationship with my wife, Peggy. I started dating with another woman.
It was Peggy’s idea. One day she said to me, “Life is too short, you need to spend time with the people you love. You probably won’t believe me, but I know you love her and I think that if the two of you spend more time together, it will make us closer.”
The “other” woman my wife was encouraging me to date is my mother, a 72-year-old widow who has lived alone since my father died 20 years ago. Right after his death, I moved 2, 500 miles away to California and started my own life and career. When I moved back near my hometown six years ago, I promised myself that I would spend more time with Mom. But with the demands of my job and three kids, I never got around to seeing her much beyond family get-togethers and holidays.
Mom was surprised when I called and suggested the two of us go out to dinner.
“What’s wrong?” she asked.
“I thought it would be nice to spend some time with you,” I said. “Just the two of us.”
“I would like that a lot,” she said.
When I pulled into her driveway, she was waiting by the door with her coat on. Her hair was curled, and she was smiling. “I told my friends I was going out with my son, and they were all impressed. They can’t wait to hear about our evening,” Mom said.
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1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右;
2. 续写部分分为两段, 每段的开头语已为你写好:
Para 1: Minutes later, we arrived at a restaurant in the neighborhood.
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Para 2:“How was your date?” Peggy asked when I got home.
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【解析】本文以故事情节发展为线索。讲述了作者在步入婚姻二十二年后发现,让爱保持活力的秘密。在妻子的提议下,作者决定邀请他生命另外一个重要的女人——他的母亲——一起共进晚餐看,用更多的时间去陪伴他母亲,了解父母过去的故事,感谢对母亲对自己的养育之恩的故事。
【详解】1.段落续写:
①由第一段首句内容“几分钟后,我们来到了附近的一家餐馆。”可知,第一段可描写作者和母亲一起在餐厅吃饭的场景、经过。
②由第二段首句内容“‘你的约会怎么样?’我回家后佩吉问道。”可知,第二段可描写作者回家后,和妻子分享自己与母亲的约会。
2.续写线索:妻子提议作者和母亲约会——前去邀请母亲外出——与母亲共进晚餐——送母亲回家——与妻子聊天——感悟
【精彩范文】
Minutes later, we arrived at a restaurant in the neighborhood. Since Mom’s eyes could only see large shapes and shadows, I had to read the menu for both of us. “It is time to let me return the favor,” I said. We had a nice talk over dinner, catching up on each other’s lives. We had been talking for so long until the restaurant closed. “I’ll go out with you again,” my mother said pleasantly as I dropped her off. Kissing goodbye with Mom, I drove home later.
“How was your date?” Peggy asked when I got home. “Nice…nicer than I thought it would be,” I said. I hugged Peggy tightly, whispering “Thank you, darling. You taught me the importance of family bond.” Peggy smiled and replied, “Yes, as your wife, I am willing to expect your more dates with Mom, for I love you.” Peggy was right. Dating another woman has helped my marriage.
十一
(2023·山东临沂·高一统考期末)阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Sweat poured down Marquez’s face. He was preparing for a basketball game and he would win. That was a pretty sure thing. After all, he wasn’t just good; he was excellent.
Basketball was a way of life in Marquez’s family. His older brother Reggie was now playing at a top college. Marquez was ready to follow in his brother’s footsteps and make his family proud. But he had a secret. As good as he was at basketball, Marquez’s heart wasn’t in it anymore. He had another sport on his mind.
Wiping the sweat from his forehead (额头), Marquez jumped on a bus heading home. Through the bus window, he could see cheerleaders dancing and performing amazingly on the field. Marquez was attracted. He pulled out a sheet from his bookbag. Across the top in big block letters was the phrase: Cheerleading Competition (啦啦队比赛). That’s what Marquez really wanted to do. He longed for a new challenge.
Although it is accepted that cheerleading was girly, Marquez knew the meaning of cheerleading for a game. He also knew that cheerleading wouldn’t just be a physical challenge; it would be an emotional one, too.
Now, he knew it was time for him to tell his family.
As soon as he arrived home, his parents and Reggie were at the door. Marquez’s face grew bright as he hugged Reggie. “You’re home?” “Of course, little man. I planned to come to your game. You’re going to be a better player than me!”
Everyone in the family was smiling…except Marquez. His family had such high expectations for him when it came to basketball. But Marquez was tired of trying to keep up with his brother. He was ready to carve his own path. He wanted to tell his parents, but Reggie being there put much more pressure on him.
注意:
1. 续写词数应为150左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
However, Marquez knew what had to be done.
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Over the next few weeks, his family began to understand and support him for the big event.
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【解析】本文以Marquez的运动计划为线索展开,主要讲述了Marquez是一个很优秀的篮球运动员,家里对他在篮球方面的发展抱有很大的期望,但是Marquez却酝酿着另外一项运动——啦啦队比赛,在回家的路上,Marquez觉得应该告诉家里自己的计划了,到了家里,父母以及自己的哥哥雷吉都在谈论着他在篮球上的发展,但是Marquez准备开辟新的道路。
【详解】1.段落续写:
①由第一段首句内容“然而,Marquez知道必须做什么。”可知,第一段可以描写Marquez将不想打篮球的想法公布出来后家人的反应。
②由第二段首句内容“在接下来的几周里,他的家人开始理解并支持他参加这个大事件。”可知,第二段可描写家人如何支持Marquez的,Marquez如何准备啦啦队比赛的和最终的结果是什么。
2.续写线索:Marquez说出自己的计划——家人很难理解——Marquez对他们质疑的反应——家人理解并支持——Marquez刻苦训练——参加比赛并取得成功
【精彩范文】However, Marquez knew what had to be done. “I don’t think I want to play ball anymore,” he announced. “I want to do something else.” The family stood confused. “Like what, son?” his father said, breaking the silence. “Cheerleading,” Marquez replied. Nervous, unbelievable laughter followed that word. They thought he was joking. “That’s what I really want to do.” Marquez said in a voice that came out louder than expected. When they saw he was serious, they were quiet.
Over the next few weeks, his family began to understand and support him for the big event. Over weeks of training, he could see that he was improving with practice. Maybe he even stood a shot at making the competition. A week later, it was time for the competition. From the sidelines, dad, mom, Reggie cheered Marquez on. As the music played, he hit every beat the best he could. The following Monday, results for the competition were posted. Marquez saw his name at the top of the list. He made it—of course he did. This time, he felt proud of himself.
十二。
(2023·广东湛江·高一湛江二十一中校考期中)阅读下面短文,根据其内容和所给段落开头续写两段,使之构成一个完整的故事。
Jenny was the only child in her home. She had a quarrel with her mother that afternoon and she ran out of the house angrily. She couldn’t help crying when she thought of the scolding (责骂) from her mother. Having wandered (徘徊) in the street for hours, she felt a little hungry and wished for something to eat. She stood beside a shop for a while, watching the middle-aged seller busy cooking noodles. However, she had no money.
The seller in the shop noticed the young girl and asked, “Hey, girl, you want to have the noodles?”
“Oh, yes...but I don’t have money on me,” she replied.
“That’s nothing. I’ll treat you today,” said the man.
“Come in.”
The seller brought her a bowl of noodles, whose smell was so attractive. As she was eating, Jenny cried silently.
“What is it?” asked the man kindly.
“Nothing, actually I was just touched by your kindness!” said Jenny.“Even a stranger on the street will give me a bowl of noodles, while my mother didn’t care for me. A stranger is much better than her!”
Hearing the words, the seller smiled, “Girl, do you really think so? I only gave you a bowl of noodles and you thanked me a lot. But it is your mother who has raised you since you were a baby. Can you count the times she cooked for you? Have you ever said “Thanks” to her?”
Jenny sat there, speechless and numb with shock. she remembered her mother’s familiar face and weathered (沧桑的) hands.“Why did I not think of that? A bowl of noodles from a stranger made me feel thankful, but I have never thanked my mum for what she has done for me.”
On the way home, Jenny decided to say sorry to her mother for her rudeness as soon as she arrived home.
注意:
1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右;
2. 续写部分分为两段,每段开头语已为你写好。
At the door, Jenny met her father, who just came back from work.
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At last, her mother came back home.
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【解析】本文以人物为线索展开,讲述了主人公Jenny因和妈妈吵架感到委屈,跑到街上徘徊了几个小时,一家面馆的店主好心地请身无分文的Jenny吃了碗面条,Jenny深受感动,但也因此对自己的妈妈有了埋怨,最终是善良的店主的一番言语点醒了Jenny,让她决定回家向妈妈道歉,并和爸爸一起亲手为妈妈准备了丰富的晚餐,感谢妈妈一直以来的付出,母女俩重归于好。
【详解】1. 段落续写:
① 由第一段首句内容“在门口,Jenny遇到了刚下班回家的爸爸。”可知,第一段可描写爸爸在得知事情的经过之后,建议Jenny亲自为妈妈准备晚餐,于是Jenny做好了晚餐,等候妈妈回家。
② 由第二段首句内容“最后,妈妈回来了。”可知,第二段可描写Jenny向妈妈道歉并感谢妈妈多年的付出,妈妈深受感动,二人重归于好,一家人幸福地享用晚餐。
2. 续写线索:遇到爸爸——向爸爸讲述事情经过——爸爸建议Jenny亲自为妈妈准备晚餐——Jenny做好晚餐等妈妈——妈妈回来——Jenny道歉并感谢——二人和好——幸福享用晚餐。
【精彩范文】
At the door, Jenny met her father, who just came back from work. Amazed and sad, she stood still, speechless. Having seen that situation, her father was shocked, too. “What’s wrong, my dear?” he asked and patted her back gently. She told her father the fact that she had argued with her mother. She was worried about that maybe her mother was too angry to forgive her. Her father tried to comfort her and advise that they should make dinner for her mother. She took the advice with a smile. One hour later, dinner was ready. She paced up and down in the living room, waiting for her mother.
At last, her mother came back home. Jenny rushed to her mother and said sorry again and again. “Here you come! I’ve been looking for you,” her mother said, tired and relieved. She felt rather ashamed, and tears began to roll down her cheeks. She couldn’t help throwing herself into her mother’s arms. “Mum, I’m so sorry and thank you for all you have done for me.” She expressed her sincere apology and great gratitude. Hearing this, her mother smiled and hugged her tightly in the arms. Her heart was as sweet as honey. Then, the whole family had dinner happily.
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