甘肃高考英语作文专项训练

应用文

1．假设你是李华，准备参加学校举办的主题为“健康发展”的英语演讲比赛，主要内容包括：

1. 积极的人生态度

2. 努力学习

3. 参加体育锻炼

注意：1.词数80词左右;2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

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2．假设你是李华，自从进入高中后，为了不影响你的学习，你的父母就不让你做家务，在家里你父母也不敢大声说话，因此，你感到很压抑，但不知道如何解决该问题。请你据此给你校英文报编辑写一封信，寻求建议。

注意：词数80左右。

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3．假定你是李华，你在中国做交换生的美国朋友Jack来信说他在中国校园交友有点困难，特向你求助。请你给他回信，内容包括：

1. 表示安慰

2. 分析原因

3. 你的建议

注意：

1. 写作词数应为80左右

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

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4．2022年冬奥会在北京成功举办，奥运精神和热爱运动的精神也一直在中国传递。假如你是李华，请写一封信给你的笔友John，谈谈有关运动的话题。

内容包括： 1. 适量运动对人们的好处。

2. 举例说明你是怎么运动的。

3. 呼吁大家运动，传播奥运精神。

注意：1. 词数80左右；

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。(开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数)

Dear John,

There is no doubt that doing moderate exercise is helpful to us. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Yours,

Li Hua

5．假定你是李华，你校九月份举办了“尊师重学”系列活动，请给你的英国笔友Peter写一封电子邮件，介绍相关情况。内容包括：

1.活动目的；

2.活动内容（如演讲比赛等）

3.活动的收获和意义。

注意：1.字数80左右；

2.适当增加内容，以使行文连贯。

Dear Peter,

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Yours,

Li Hua

6．假设你是国际学校的学生李华，你的同学Tom写了一封邮件询问你暑假的安排，请给Tom回封邮件，告知你的计划，并邀请他来黄石游玩。

内容包括：1. 读几本好书；

2. 参加社会实践活动；

3. 帮父母做家务；

4. 和朋友一起锻炼；

5. 邀请Tom。

注意：1. 词数100左右；

2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3. 开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。

参考词汇：社会实践活动 social practice activities

Dear Tom,

I’m happy to hear from you.

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Yours,

Li Hua

7．假定你是李华，请你根据下面材料给你的朋友 Jenny写一封邮件表达歉意。上周末你本应该参加 Jenny 的生日晚会，但是由于要照顾生病住院的妈妈，你只好决定不参加晚会。你知道此举深深地伤害了她。为了表示歉意，你给 Jenny 邮寄一束鲜花。

注意：写作词数应为80左右。

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8．假如你叫李华，你的外籍老师Mr. White向你询问上周星期天如何与家人过父亲节(Father’s Day)的情况。请你通过e-mail的方式告知有关内容。

要点：

1.买礼物，送父亲；

2.打扫卫生、做家务等其他活动；

3.受到父母表扬；

4.你的感触。

注意: 1. 词数: 100左右；

2.要点完整，可适当发挥，以使行文连贯。

Dear Mr. White,

I hope everything is going on well with you.

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Sincerely Yours,

Li Hua

9．假如你是你校学生会主席李华，在你校“读书月”活动到来之际，为呼吁学生多读书、读好书，请你以学生会的名义，为学校“英语天地”宣传栏写一封倡议书，内容包括：

1．读书的好处；

2．发出倡议。

注意：

1．词数80左右；

2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

10．假定你是李华，你校外教Eric看了你的朋友圈后发来微信，对你上周帮助一个迷路的3岁小孩回家的事情很感兴趣。请你回复邮件，内容包括：

1.感谢关注；

2.助人经过；

3.你的感受。

注意：适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

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参考答案：

1．例文：

We all want to grow up happily and healthily, and for this goal we must do several things.

Firstly, we should develop a good attitude to life. Life consists of not only sunshine but also hard times. We should be brave in front of difficulties. Secondly, we must study hard because knowledge is power. If we have the power, we can help to build our country and enjoy life better. Lastly, in order to study well, we need to do sports so that we can keep fit. We can go running, play ball games or simply take a walk after a day’s study.

If we do those things well, we will be able to grow up happily and healthily.

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以为“健康发展”主题，写一篇英语演讲稿，参加学校举办的英语演讲比赛。主要内容包括：

1. 积极的人生态度；

2. 努力学习；

3. 参加体育锻炼。

【详解】1.词汇积累

由……组成：consist of→be made up of

困难的：hard → tough

做锻炼：do sports→work out

保持健康：keep fit→keep healthy

2.句式拓展

陈述句变倒装句

原句：Life consists of not only sunshine but also hard times.

拓展句：Not only does life consist of sunshine but also hard times.

【点睛】【高分句型1】If we have the power, we can help to build our country and enjoy life better.（运用了if引导条件状语从句）

【高分句型2】Lastly, in order to study well, we need to do sports so that we can keep fit.（运用了动词不定式作目的状语）

2．Dear Sir/Madam,

I’m Li Hua, a Senior One student. I’m writing for your advice. Since I entered the high school, I’ve sensed some changes at home that really bother me. For one thing, whenever I try to help my parents with some housework, they’ll ask me to go back to my study. For another, they dare not make any noise at home, fearing it would make me unable to put my heart into my study.

I know how they feel, but I don’t expect our family life goes this way. What should I do?

Thank you for your time!

Yours,

Li Hua

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生因为在家感到压抑的事情给学校英文报编辑写一封信，寻求建议。

【详解】1.词汇积累

建议：advice→suggestion

感觉到：sense→feel

无论何时：whenever→no matter when

害怕：fear→be afraid

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：I’m Li Hua, a Senior One student.

拓展句：I’m Li Hua, who is a Senior One student.

【点睛】[高分句型1] Since I entered the high school, I’ve sensed some changes at home that really bother me. (运用了since引导的时间状语从句和that引导的限制性定语从句)

[高分句型2] For one thing, whenever I try to help my parents with some housework, they’ll ask me to go back to my study. (运用了whenever引导的让步状语从句)

3．One possible version:

Dear Jack,

I’m sorry to hear that you have trouble making friends with Chinese students. I’m writing to offer you some advice.

There are two main factors for your problem. On the one hand, you are surrounded by people speaking an unfamiliar language. So, you should be brave enough to talk with them. Of course, joining a club for exchange students is also a good choice. On the other hand, there are different cultures between China and the USA. Going to the library or joining in Chinese culture activities can make you better understand China and help you make more Chinese friends.

I hope my advice is helpful to you and wish you to make new friends soon.

Yours,

Li Hua

【导语】本篇书面表达属于建议信。在中国做交换生的美国朋友Jack来信说他在中国校园交友有点困难，要求考生李华给其回信进行安慰并提出建议。

【详解】1.词汇积累

问题：problem → trouble

提供：give → offer

交流：talk with→ communicate with

有帮助的：useful → helpful

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：On the one hand, you are surrounded by people speaking an unfamiliar language.

拓展句：On the one hand, you are surrounded by people who speak an unfamiliar language.

【点睛】【高分句型1】On the one hand, you are surrounded by people speaking an unfamiliar language.（运用了现在分词speaking作定语）

【高分句型2】I’m sorry to hear that you have trouble making friends with Chinese students（运用了that引导宾语从句）

4．Dear John,

There is no doubt that doing moderate exercise is helpful to us. We students can make ourselves more active and smarter by doing exercise in our daily life.

Personally, I think highly of jogging because it’s good for health. I often jog in the playground for half an hour. Each time I finish it, I feel refreshed. Taking regular exercise benefits us a lot. I hope that you can do some sports in your spare time rather than just stay at home.

Let’s go out to do more exercise and spread Olympic spirit!

Yours,

Li Hua

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给笔友John写一封信，谈谈有关运动的话题。内容包括： 1. 适量运动对人们的好处。2. 举例说明你是怎么运动的。3. 呼吁大家运动，传播奥运精神。

【详解】1.词汇积累

对……有帮助：be helpful to →be of help

运动，锻炼：exercise→ take exercise/work out

就个人而言：personally→ in one’s view/as for sb.

空闲的：spare →free

2.句式拓展

句式转换

原句：Let’s go out to do more exercise and spread Olympic spirit!

拓展句：Let’s go out to do more exercise, spreading Olympic spirit!

【点睛】[高分句型1 ] Each time I finish it, I feel refreshed.(运用了时间状语从句)

[高分句型2 ] Taking regular exercise benefits us a lot.(运用了动名词作主语)

5．Dear Peter,

In order to improve the learning spirit, our school launched a series of “respecting teachers and valuing education” activities in September. Now I briefly introduce the contents of the activities to you.

Starting with ourselves, we respect teachers’ hard work by showing attentiveness towards study. In addition, we also participated in English speech and writing competitions with the title of “my favorite teacher”. Through the activities, the atmosphere of respecting teachers and valuing education in our school has become stronger. Getting close to our teachers and following their ways, we will study harder and get better.

Yours,

Li Hua

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生就学校九月份举办了“尊师重学”系列活动，给英国笔友Peter写一封电子邮件，介绍相关情况。

【详解】1.词汇积累

举行：launch→hold

参加：participate in→take part in

此外：in addition→what’s more

方法：ways→methods

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：In order to improve the learning spirit, our school launched a series of “respecting teachers and valuing education” activities in September.

拓展句：Our school launched a series of “respecting teachers and valuing education” activities in September, whose aim is to improve the learning spirit.

【点睛】[高分句型1] In order to improve the learning spirit, our school launched a series of “respecting teachers and valuing education” activities in September. (运用了动词不定式作目的状语)

[高分句型2] Getting close to our teachers and following their ways, we will study harder and get better. (运用了现在分词作状语)

6．Dear Tom,

I’m very happy to hear from you. During the holiday, I’m going to read some good books. I think reading can increase our knowledge and make us know more about the world. I also plan to take part in social practice activities. It can help me to learn things that I can’t learn in books. I plan to help my parents with the housework and learn how to cook. I wish I could cook for my parents. In addition, I plan to take exercise with my friends because health is the basis of getting good grades.

These are my plan for the summer vacation. What’s your plan for the summer?

If you have time, welcome to Huangshi. I am looking forward to your earliest reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

【导语】这是一篇应用文。要求考生给同学Tom回一封邮件，告知其暑假安排，主要包括读几本好书、参加社会实践活动、帮助父母做家务、和朋友一起锻炼等，并提出对Tom的邀请。

【详解】1.词汇积累

高兴的：happy →pleased

参加 ：take part in →participate in

此外：In addition→Moreover

回复：reply→ response

2.句式拓展

普通句变强调句

原句：I think reading can increase our knowledge and make us know more about the world.

拓展句：It is reading that I think can increase our knowledge and make us know more about the world.

【点睛】【高分句型1】It can help me to learn things that I can’t learn in books（运用了that引导的限定性定语从句）

【高分句型2】I wish I could cook for my parents.（wish后的宾语从句用了虚拟语气）

7．Dear Jenny,

How is everything going?

Last weekend when you held your birthday party, I could not make it. I know you are badly hurt, as you were expecting me to come. I am sorry for not coming to your party. I almost got ready to come for your party, but suddenly my mother got pain in her stomach and I had to rush to the hospital. I had to decide not to go to your party.

In order to express my apology, I am sending your favorite flowers along with my best wishes.

Yours truly

Li Hua

【导语】这是一篇应用文。要求考生给朋友Jenny写一封道歉信，就上周末未去参加她的生日派对表示歉意，并说明原因。

【详解】1.词汇积累

表达：express→convey

与……一起：along with→together with

非常：badly→extremely

突然：suddenly→all of a sudden

2.句型拓展

同义句

原句： I almost got ready to come for your party, but suddenly my mother got pain in her stomach and I had to rush to the hospital.

拓展句：I was about to come for your party when my mother got pain in her stomach and I had to rush to the hospital.

【点睛】[高分句型1]Last weekend when you held your birthday party, I could not make it. （运用了when引导的时间状语从句）

[高分句型2]I know you are badly hurt, as you were expecting me to come. （运用了as引导的原因状语从句）

8．Dear Mr. White

I hope everything is going on well with you. Last time you asked me how I celebrated Father’s Day in China. Now let me tell you something about it.

Last Sunday was Father’s Day. I made a meaningful plan for the day. I went to the market and bought a nice gift for my father. When I got home, I began to clean the house, washed clothes and did other housework. I also learned to cook dinner. I was praised by my parents for this. They were proud of me. I think I have grown up now and I should help do something for my family. Caring for my parents is not only on “Father’s Day”.

Let’s get on well with our parents forever.

Hope to see you soon.

Sincerely yours,

Li Hua

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假如你叫李华，你的外籍老师Mr. White向你询问上周星期天如何与家人过父亲节的情况。请你通过e-mail的方式告知有关内容。

【详解】1.词汇积累

开始：begin→start

家务：housework→chore

赞美：praise→compliment

为……骄傲：be proud of→take pride in

2.句式拓展

合并简单句

原句：I was praised by my parents for this. They were proud of me.

拓展句：I was praised by my parents for this, who were proud of me.

【点睛】[高分句型1] When I got home, I began to clean the house, washed clothes and did other housework. (运用了when引导时间状语从句)

[高分句型2] I think I have grown up now and I should help do something for my family. (运用了省略that的宾语从句)

9．Dear boys and girls,

With the reading month approaching, I’m here to call on all of you to do more reading.

Reading can benefit us a lot. First, it can enrich our minds and teach us to distinguish between right and wrong, which lays a solid foundation for further learning. Furthermore, as a famous writer put it, “Reading a good book is like talking with a noble man.” By reading books, we can gain the wisdom helping us solve practical problems in our daily life. All in all, the advantages of reading are beyond description.

Let’s take action to do more reading. Only through reading can the soul be strengthened, ambition inspired and success achieved.

Students’ Union

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以学生会的名义，为学校“英语天地”宣传栏写一封倡议书，呼吁学生多读书、读好书。

【详解】1.词汇积累

呼吁：call on→appeal to

使受益：benefit→be beneficial to

著名的：famous→noted

获得：gain→obtain

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：By reading books, we can gain the wisdom helping us solve practical problems in our daily life.

拓展句：By reading books, we can gain the wisdom that can help us solve practical problems in our daily life.

【点睛】【高分句型1】First, it can enrich our minds and teach us to distinguish between right and wrong, which lays a solid foundation for further learning.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句）

【高分句型2】Only through reading can the soul be strengthened, ambition inspired and success achieved.（运用了“only+介词短语”置于句首，句子使用部分倒装结构）

10．Dear Eric,

Thanks for your attention! From your letter, I know that you are eager to get some details about my assistance. Here comes the story.

Last week, I met a little boy on the street, who seemed helpless in the crowd. Then, I got closed to him and asked what had happened to him. He told me that he had got lost and couldn’t find his parents. Immediately, I took the poor boy to the police station and sought help from the policeman. There, I sat to accompany him, waiting for the police to bring some good news. Half an hour later, an anxious woman came in with a bag in her hand. While seeing the boy, the woman burst into tears, saying: “Thank Goodness! I finally find you and you are safe.” Her boy pointed to me and said it was I who helped him when he did not know what to do on the street. After she calmed down, she turned around and expressed sincere gratitude to me and the police. “You are welcome”, I answered. Waving my hands to say goodbye, I left with relief.

In this experience, I realize that helping others is really a kind of pleasure, which not only helps the one in need, but also enriches my own mind.

                                                                                                              Yours,

Li Hua

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假定你是李华，你校外教Eric看了你的朋友圈后发来微信，对你上周帮助一个迷路的3岁小孩回家的事情很感兴趣，请你回复邮件。

【详解】1.词汇积累

渴望：be eager to→long to

靠近：get closed to→approach

快乐：pleasure→happiness

感谢：gratitude→appreciation

2.句式拓展

同义句转换

原句：Immediately, I took the poor boy to the police station and sought help from the policeman.

拓展句：Immediately, not only did I take the poor boy to the police station but also I sought help from the policeman.

【点睛】[高分句型1] From your letter, I know that you are eager to get some details about my assistance. (运用了that引导宾语从句)

[高分句型2] While seeing the boy, the woman burst into tears, saying: “Thank Goodness! I finally find you and you are safe.”(运用了省略句)