上海长宁区2020-2022年中考英语二模试题-作文

上海长宁区2020-2022年中考英语二模试题-作文

一、 话题作文

1．（2020·上海长宁·统考二模）Write at least 60 words about the topic "Online study makes me________"(请以"网上学习使我________"为题，写一篇不少于 60 个词的短文，标点符号不占格。)

二、 抗疫期间(during the anti-epidemic-period），你不得不在家上网课(have online classes)，这个特殊的经历使你在培养独立性、自信心……等方面也有所收获。请你结合具体事例谈谈自己某一方面的收获。

三、 (注意：文中不得出现姓名、校名及其他相关信息。)

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2．（2021·上海·统考二模）Write at least 60 words about the topic “Keep patient when facing difficulties” (请以“面对困难保持耐心”为题，写一篇不少于60 个词的短文，标点符号不占格)

阅读文章 (C) 篇告诉我们日常生活中不能缺乏耐心，还提出用 2 种方式来帮助我们克服这样的缺点。在我们的生活和学习中遇到的各种困难也很容易使人失去耐心，请你以一个具体的例子谈谈怎样面对困难保持耐心。

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二、书信作文

3．（2022·上海长宁·统考二模）为了提高学生英语学习能力，李老师想要调查了解一下学生课外在记忆单词、朗读/背诵课文、做书面作业、读英语书刊和故事，或者其他等等方面的学习情况。请你写一封信给他，谈谈以上几个方面你觉得哪个最重要，哪个方面你花时间最多，哪个做得最少；哪个方面你最感到困难或最有成功经验；你将如何改进学习方法才能取得更大的进步。

（注意：1、信的格式与开头已给，这些文字不计入你所写的总数。2、信中不得出现任何姓名、校名以及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。）

Dear Mr. Li,

In response to your survey, I’d like to tell you something about how I learn English after school._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Yours,

XXX

参考答案：

1．例文

Keep patient when facing difficulties

I still remember the first time I rode a bicycle when I was seven. My sister pushed the bicycle to help me. A few minutes later, she let it go, and I fell to the ground. She asked me to try one more time, while I was extremely impatient after failing several times. The way she told didn’t suit me quite well. At last I took a deep breath, and tried my best to have the final time. Unbelievable, I succeeded.

When I am in trouble now, I always tell myself “keep patient and don’t give up.” Maybe just try another time, everyone will taste the fruits of victory.

【详解】1. 题干解读：这篇作文要求考生以“Keep patient when facing difficulties”为题，根据写作要求，谈一谈怎样面对困难保持耐心。

2. 写作指导：审题可知，这篇短文应以第一、三人称和一般过去时为主，以一般现在时为辅来叙述，要写出自己在生活或学习中遇到的困难，自己又是如何保持耐心的；写作时注意主谓一致，保证无语法和单词拼写错误。

2．例文

Online study makes me study better

During the anti-epidemic period, we have to have online classes in order to ensure the normal progress of teaching. Online study is good for me. It not only can save time that I can do more other things, but also can be convenient for my daily life and study. Moreover, after class I can find the videos which I didn’t understand and then study again. It can help me study better. Online study is more interesting. So I am more confident in my study. Although everything has two sides.Online study is harmful to our eyes. If we keep doing exercise for our health, the harm is less. I prefer online study. It makes me study better.

【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇话题作文。文中以“网上学习使我……”为题，来围绕疫情期间网上学习的经历，并谈谈自己在这方面的心得和收获。

2.写作指导：本文采用的是第一人称，时态采用的是一般现在时。准确运用时态，保持主谓一致。文中多处运用比较级来说明网课对自己的帮助。句子通顺，逻辑性强。

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例文

Dear Mr. Li,

In response to your survey, I’d like to tell you something about how I learn English after school. Personally, I find memorizing new words most important, for vocabulary is the basis of any language learning, not just English. Besides, reading out loud is what I spend most of my time doing while I seldom recite any texts, which is too boring for me. As for written homework, it is truly my biggest headache because it seems endless. To progress more in English learning, I think it necessary to do some pleasure reading and that is exactly what I am about to do.

Yours,

Helen

【详解】1.题干解读：本题是一篇书信作文，谈谈自己英语学习的情况，具体包括单词、课文、作业以及课外阅读等方面。

2.写作指导：时态用一般现在时，人称用第一人称；写作时承接开头，具体叙述自己认为英语学习哪个部分最重要、哪个部分还有所欠缺，以及将如何改进学习方法来取得更大进步。注意信件的写作格式，要正确运用语言句式和语法，注意标点符号使用恰当。