人教新目标中考英语复习--话题写作--文学艺术与体育（课件）

人与社会话题九文学艺术与体育话题写作·第一步 细审题 定要点·第二步 分段落 列要点·第三步 扩句子 润加工·第四步 连句子 成短文·第五步 查全文 得高分福建省第十七届运动会①将在南平举办，现在组委会(organizing committee) 正在招募志愿者，假如你是王晓乐，你②希望成为其中一员，请阅读以下招聘信③ ，并作应聘回复④ 。第一步 细审题 定要点Dear friends,The 17th Games of Fujian will be held in Nanping in the year 2022. Lots of guests are coming to Nanping during the big events. Are you willing to be a volunteer? Do you know a lot about Nanping? Are you good at communicating with others?…Please introduce yourself to us and let us know what you can do. Many thanks!Organizing Committee of the 17th Games of Fujian⑤定要点：是否愿意做志愿者；是否很了解南平；是否擅长交流；要补充的内容。注意事项1. 词数80 左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。2. 回复时可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Dear Sir/Madam,My name is Wang Xiaole. ________________________Please consider my request and I’m looking forward to your early reply.Yours faithfully,Wang Xiaole第二步 分段落 列要点首段：自我介绍，回复愿意做志愿者。中间段： 介绍自己适合做志愿者的优点：外向、善于沟通、了解南平、喜爱运动、乐于助人。结尾：请求考虑并期望答复（已给出）。【易错句】 I’m junior high school student. I would like be a volunteer at the 17th Games of Fujian.【一般句子】 I’m a junior high school student. I would like to be a volunteer at the 17th Games of Fujian.第三步 扩句子 润加工首段【美化句子】 1. __________________________________________________________________________________________________I would like to work as a volunteer for the 17th Games of Fujian. I'm studying at a junior high school now. 个人优点1【易错句】 I am outgoing but I can communicate with other.【一般句子】 I am outgoing and I can communicate with others.【美化句子】 2. _____________________________________________________________________中间段 I am outgoing and I am good at communicating with others. 个人优点2【易错句】 I know many about Nanping, and I can introduce the city for the guests.【一般句子】 I know a lot about Nanping, and I can introduce the city to the guests.中间段 【美化句子】 3. __________________________________________________________________________________________________I know a lot about Nanping. And I can introduce the city to the guests and show them around. 个人优点3【易错句】 I like sport. I’m glad to help other people in need.【一般句子】 I like sports. I’m glad to help other people in need.【美化句子】 4. _____________________________________________________________________________中间段 I like sports. I'm ready to give help whenever it is needed. 在单词拼写和语法正确的前提下，把适合自己水平的句子连成完整的短文。第四步 连句子 成短文优秀范文Dear Sir/Madam,My name is Wang Xiaole. I would like to work as a volunteer for the 17th Games of Fujian. I am a boy of 15 and I’m studying at a junior high school now.I believe I can do a good job for the games. First, I am outgoing and I am good at communicating with others. Second, I know a lot about Nanping. And I can introduce the city to the guests and show them around. Third, I like sports. I’m ready to give help whenever it is needed.Please consider my request and I’m looking forward to your early reply.Yours faithfully,Wang Xiaole亮点点评： 正文的主体部分用First, Second 和Third 分别介绍三个优点，使文章具有层次感，条理清晰。依次检查：人称、时态、文体、主题是否正确，要点是否齐全；然后检查句型、单词拼写、标点是否正确。第五步 查全文 得高分［2022 泉州质检］假如你是李华，你即将在学校英语角活动中分享一则童话故事（fairy tale）。请你根据提示，用英语简要介绍故事内容，并谈谈自己的感想。词数：80 左右。Hello, everyone! I’m so glad to share my favorite fairy tale with you all._____________________________________________ _____________________________________________I hope all of you can enjoy it. Thanks for listening.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Hello, everyone! I'm so glad to share my favorite fairy tale with you all. The fairy tale, The Ugly Duckling, written by Andersen is very popular with young children. As we know, the ugly duckling looks so different that his brothers and sisters dislike him. Nobody nearby likes to play with him. The poor duckling feels sad. Even after he leaves home, he is still lonely and helpless. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________But one day, he grows up and becomes a beautiful big swan. Thanks to the tale, I become more confident and stick to my dream. Whatever difficulties we may face in our life, just keep going on! I hope all of you can enjoy it. Thanks for listening.