人教新目标中考英语复习--话题写作--科普知识与现代技术（课件）

人与社会话题八科普知识与现代技术话题写作·第一步 细审题 定要点·第二步 分段落 列要点·第三步 扩句子 润加工·第四步 连句子 成短文·第五步 查全文 得高分［2019 福建］假定你① 是李华，收到英国笔友 Harry 的邮件② ，获悉他在机器人制作比赛中获奖。请根据邮件内容③ 给他回复④ 。词数 80 左右。第一步 细审题 定要点To: Lihua 2019@163.com From: Harry@hotmail.com Dear Li Hua, I’m glad to tell you that I’ve just won the first place in a robot-making competition. I love robots! They bring me great fun. ⑤定要点：对机器人的看法、是否想有一个机器人及原因。What do you think of robots? Do you want to have your own robot? Why? Looking forward to hearing from you. Yours, Harry 参考词汇：congratulation 祝贺注意事项1. 回复邮件时可适当发挥，邮件格式已给出，不计入总词数；2. 意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范；3. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名及地名。Dear Harry, _________________________________________________Yours,Li Hua第二步 分段落 列要点首段：祝贺对方（congratulations）。中间段： 回答对方在邮件中提到的三点。对机器人的看法、是否想有一个机器人和原因(helpful)。结尾：表达祝愿。希望对方取得更大进步（make progress）。【易错句】 Congratulation! I am glad share your good news!【一般句子】 Congratulations! I am glad to share your good news!【美化句子】 1. ______________________________________________________________________________第三步 扩句子 润加工首段Congratulations! How glad I am to share your good news!对机器人的看法【易错句】 Robot is helpful. They’ll play a important role in our daily life.【一般句子】 Robots are helpful. They’ll play an important role in our daily life.【美化句子】 2. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________中间段 I think robots are helpful in many ways. And in the future they'll play more important roles in our daily life. 是否想有一个机器人【易错句】 I wish have a robot of my own one day.【一般句子】 I wish to have a robot of my own one day.【美化句子】 3. ___________________________________中间段 I'm dying to have a robot of my own. 原因【易错句】 They can help us do some housework like cook, clean the house and so on.【一般句子】 They can help us do some housework like cooking, cleaning the house and so on.【美化句子】 4. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________中间段 Robots can help my grandparents do some housework such as cooking, cleaning the house and so on. 【易错句】 I hope you make many progresses.【一般句子】 I hope you’ll make great progress.【美化句子】 5. ___________________________________结尾Hoping you'll make greater progress. 在单词拼写和语法正确的前提下，把适合自己水平的句子连成完整的短文。第四步 连句子 成短文优秀范文Dear Harry,Congratulations! How glad I am to share your good news! ① I think robots are helpful in many ways. And ② in the future they’ll play more important roles in our daily life. What’s more, ② I’m dying to have a robot of my own.I can have it take care of my grandparents when we are not at home. You see, my grandparents are old and cannot move easily. It can help them do some housework such as cooking, cleaning the house and so on.Hoping you’ll make greater progress.Yours,Li Hua亮点点评: ①过渡句，引出下文。②用And 和What’s more 分别引出机器人在人们日常生活中的作用及作者的态度。依次检查：人称、时态、文体、主题是否正确，要点是否齐全；然后检查句型、单词拼写、标点是否正确。第五步 查全文 得高分随着智能手机的逐渐普及，人们可以用手机做的事情越来越多。很多人喜欢玩手机，尤其喜欢用免费 Wi-Fi 上网。用手机上网的确能做很多事情，比如聊天、查询信息、购物等。但是手机上网也存在一定的弊端和风险，比如个人信息泄露，遭遇网络攻击或者网络诈骗。请你结合自身经历，用英语写一篇短文，谈谈你对用免费Wi-Fi 上网的看法。注意事项1. 词数80 左右;2. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名。It’s true that many people like getting online by using free Wi-Fi.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________It's true that many people like getting online by using free Wi­Fi. It's very convenient. However, there are many risks of using free Wi­Fi. I used to use free Wi­Fi when I was out. But later, many useless messages came to my phone. And one day, I was told that I won a prize that was worth 5, 000 yuan and they needed my bank account. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Of course I didn't believe it. But it was clear that some of my personal information had been exposed to someone. So we should learn to keep ourselves safe online. First, we'd better not use free Wi­Fi in public places especially in strange places. Second, we shouldn't put too much personal information on the Internet. Finally, we should be careful when we lend our mobile phones to others.