人教新目标中考英语复习--话题写作--计划与愿望（课件）

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人与自我话题三计划与愿望话题写作·第一步细审题定要点·第二步分段落列要点·第三步扩句子润加工·第四步连句子成短文·第五步查全文得高分［2022 丽水改编］假如你是李明，你的美国朋友David 向你了解暑假①社会实践活动的计划② ，请结合下表内容写一封信③向他介绍你④的计划。词数：80 左右。第一步细审题定要点⑤定要点：时间、地点（自拟）、活动、活动理由注意事项1. 文中必须包含至少两项活动的内容要点，可适当发挥；2. 文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息；3. 信件的开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数。Dear David,Glad to share my social practice plan with you._________________________________________________Looking forward to your reply.Yours,Li Ming第二步分段落列要点首段：开门见山，提出分享这次暑假社会实践活动计划（开头已给出）。中间段：详细介绍这次社会实践活动的时间、地点、活动内容及其理由(have a trip, volunteer)。结尾：概述这次暑假社会实践活动的意义(not only...but also)。【活动一】have a graduation trip to...【易错句】1. I and my classmates plan travel to Hangzhou this summer.【一般句子】1. My classmates and I plan to travel to Hangzhou this summer.第三步扩句子润加工中间段【美化句子】 1. __________________________________________________________________________________________________Some classmates and I plan to go on a graduation trip to Hangzhou, the capital city of Zhejiang. 【易错句】2. We will visit place of interests and enjoy colorful cultures there so that we could open our eyes.【一般句子】2. We will visit places of interest and enjoy colorful cultures there so that we can open our eyes.【美化句子】 2. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________By enjoying the beautiful scenery and colorful cultures there, we can open our eyes and bring home unforgettable memories. 【活动二】volunteer to do...【易错句】In a city library, I will help sort out book and guide readers to the right bookshelves and talk with different peoples.【一般句子】In a city library, I will help to sort out books and guide readers to the right bookshelves and talk with different people.中间段【美化句子】 3. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________After the trip, I will volunteer to help in our city library, sorting out books, guiding readers to the right bookshelves, and of course, communicating with different people. 【概述】实践活动的意义【易错句】 This experience can my life rich and colorful. It also helps me understand the true meaning of learning.【一般句子】This experience can make my life rich and colorful. It’ll also help me understand the true meaning of learning.结尾【美化句子】 4._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________I'm sure this experience can not only enrich my life but also help me understand the true meaning of learning by doing. 在单词拼写和语法正确的前提下，把适合自己水平的句子连成完整的短文。第四步连句子成短文优秀范文Dear David,Glad to share my social practice plan with you. As ① it will be the last summer holiday in our junior high school, some classmates and I plan to go on a graduation trip to Hangzhou, the capital city of Zhejiang. By enjoying the beautiful scenery and colorful cultures there, we can open our eyes and bring home unforgettable memories. After the trip ②, I will volunteer to help in our city library, sorting out books, guiding readers to the right bookshelves, and of course③, communicating with different people.I’m sure this experience can not only ④ enrich my life but also ④ help me understand the true meaning of learning by doing.Looking forward to your reply.Yours,Li Ming亮点点评： ① As 表示原因，即毕业之旅的理由。② After the trip 表示活动的时间先后。③ and of course 表示后面的动作与前面两个动作的顺接。④ not only...but also 表示递进关系，强调这次活动的意义不止一个。依次检查：人称、时态、文体、主题是否正确，要点是否齐全；然后检查句型、单词拼写、标点是否正确。第五步查全文得高分［2022 广元改编］近来，某英文报刊将举行以“如何做一名有理想的时代新人” 为主题的征文活动。请你结合以下表格的提示要点和自己的认识，写一篇英文稿件。词数：80 左右。注意事项1. 文中须包含以上要点；2. 文中不能提及本人的真实姓名、地名和校名；3. 标题和开头语已给出，不计入总词数。My IdealIt’s very important for us middle school students to have an ideal.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________My IdealIt's very important for us middle school students to have an ideal. My ideal is to become an excellent doctor. I am patient and I would like to try my best to help the patients. To realize my ideal is not easy, so I must study hard all the time and never give up. I may meet difficulties, but I won't be afraid of them. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Success belongs to the person who has courage to overcome the difficulty. As the saying goes, “Being confident is half of success. ”I will learn more medical knowledge. I must be a good doctor. I hope my ideal can come true.