江苏省南通市2023英语中考一轮专题复习导学案——书面表达：图表提示类

书面表达----图表提示类

【课前导学】

思考平时总分25分的作文你能得几分，扣分的主要原因有哪些？

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【课堂导学】

一、了解评分标准

二、考情分析

1. 考查形式：以图表或图片呈现主要内容，同时带有自由想象的空间。

2. 话题：以发表建议为主，题材贴近学生的日常和学校生活。

3. 词数：均90词左右，一般会给出开头

三、方法点津（以2022年南通中考作文为例）

1.写出你的审题过程：

体裁：____________________________________________

时态：____________________________________________

人称：____________________________________________

Para1 _____________________________________

结构：Para2 _____________________________________

      Para3 ______________________________________

2.列提纲，增加细节_________________________________

3.选词组句

  a)学会扩句

I admire Yuan Longping very much. He is great.

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  b)合并简单句

He has increased rice production . He has spent all his life on the research.

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  c)巧用被动语态和经典句型

We built the Great Wall 2,000 years ago.

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4.连句成篇，句式升华________________________________

5. 适当添加衔接词

【Practice】为下篇文章填写恰当的词

We have classes about traditional Chinese culture this term. The reason _______ it is necessary to have these classes is that it is a good chance for us to know more about Chinese culture. 

In the classes, we’ve learned something interesting and meaningful. The first we learn is the history of tea and how to make tea perfectly. __________, we also learn paper cutting, _______ seems simple _____ is actually difficult to make, for it needs to be folded carefully before it is cut with scissors. _____ many practice and with my teachers’ help, I can cut some beautiful paper flowers now. __________, what I like most is calligraphy, the art of elegant handwriting. While learning calligraphy, I find myself become more quiet and patient.

_________, the traditional Chinese culture gives me a chance to feel the beauty of our culture and embrace the traditional customs. I am proud of being a Chinese and proud of our wonderful culture.

6. 复查纠错

  （a）内容有无遗漏或误词，最好一一对应检查。

（b）体裁格式对不对。

（c）句子是否有语法结构错误，特别要检查句子中的冠词、代词、名词复数、动词的时态、语态、主谓一致等方面是否有错误。

（d）句子是否合乎英语表达习惯，是否达意。

（e）书写字迹和标点符号是否规范清晰，词数是否基本上符合要求。

【Practice】如果你是评卷老师，参考中考书面表达评分标准，下面这篇书面达该评多少分？画出文中你认为比较好的一些表达。

We have classes about traditional Chinese culture this term. The reason why it is necessary to have these classes that it is a good chance for us to know more about Chinese culture. 

In the classes, we’ve learned something interesting and meaningful. The first we learn is the history of tea and what to make tea perfectly. What’s more, we also learn paper cutting, which seems simple but is actually difficult make, for it needs to folded carefully before it is cut with scissors. After numerous practice and with my teachers’ help, I can cut some beautiful paper flowers now. In addition to, what I like most calligraphy, the art of elegant handwriting. While learning calligraphy, I find myself become more quiet and patiently.

By having these classes, we not only has fun but also learn a lot. And I am proud of being a Chinese and proud of our wonderful culture.

四、话题梳理

A．健康生活篇

随着生活水平的提高，健康越来越受到重视。你办准备组织一个关于“健康”主题的演讲活动，请你根据下面内容，准备一篇题为How to live a healthy and happy life的演讲稿。

1. 短文须包含所有信息，语句通顺，句意连贯，可适当发挥。

2. 词数90左右，题目与开头已给出，不计入总词数。短文中请勿提及真实校名

Writing tips:

1.文章可分为三段，一段写身体健康，一段写心理健康，最后一段写希望。2. 时态可用一般现在时 3. 人称可用第一人称 4. 加上恰当的衔接词

How to live a healthy and happy life

Hi, my dear classmates,

  With the improvement of living conditions, we are paying more and more attention to our health, which includes both physical and mental health. Then how can we students live a healthy and happy life?

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That’s all. Thank you!

B．观点态度篇

当今社会，很多家长对孩子过分溺爱，导致当他们面对问题时手足无措。因此对孩子们来说，学会自立相当重要。请根据以上所述，结合表格所提供的文字信息，以“Learn to Be Independent”为题写一篇90词左右的短文。

要求：1. 短文须包含所有信息，语句通顺，句意连贯，可适当发挥。

2. 题目与开头已给出，不计入总词数。

Writing tips:

1.这篇文章结构很清楚，第一段写社会现象。第二段写观点，可以将家长和孩子结合起来，层层递进，做到无缝对接，过渡自然，切不忘补充个人观点。第三段为总结陈词。2.本文主要是第三人称，适当使用连词，做到上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。

                       Learn to Be Independent

     Nowadays, many children are treated as “little emperors” at home. _____________________________________________________________________________

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C．素质教育篇

教育部近日通知要求控制中小学生的书面作业总量，合理布置不同类型的作业。为此，某英文杂志社正在开展以“My creative English homework”为题的征文活动。请你写一篇征文讲述自身亲身经历，提出合理建议。

                           参考作业类型

write a letter to        ____     creative English         ——   draw a

a foreigner homework mind map

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1. 短文须包含所有信息，语句通顺，句意连贯，可适当发挥。

2. 词数90左右，题目与开头已给出，不计入总词数。

3. 短文中请勿提及真实校名

Writing tips:

1.根据图标信息，至少写出三点创意作业，每一点写上好的理由 2. 时态可用一般现在时 3. 人称可用第一人称 4. 加上恰当的衔接词

My creative English homework

Doing English homework helps us practice and use what we’ve learned in class.______________________________________________________________

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D．安全问题篇

“南通市安全教育平台”让广大中小学生学到了很多安全知识，假如你是Jack，请你根据下表提示写一篇英语短文，从提供的六个类别里选择两个，和英国朋友Simon谈谈相应保护措施，并分享你的体会。

要求：1. 短文须包含所有信息，语句通顺，句意连贯，可适当发挥。

2. 词数90左右，题目与开头已给出，不计入总词数。
3. 短文中请勿提及真实校名

Writing tips:

1.明确主题，如何增强安全意识，提高自我保护能力2. 选2个问题展开阐述 3. 时态：一般现在时 4. 人称用第一人称

Dear Simon,

Safety is very important. Our government especially pays attention to teenage safety. A website called nantong.safetree.com helps us gain a lot of knowledge of safety. On the website, I have learned a lot.

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