初中英语中考复习 热点 06 校园欺凌 -2021年中考英语作文热点素材+精彩范文

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校园欺凌无疑是今年的火爆热点之一，它为我们的生活带来了极大的便利。今天，选择的2021年中考英语写作预测话题是：校园欺凌。
【预测题目】
（一）
以“Hw Can We Prtect Ourselves at Schl?”为题，写一篇80-100词的英语短文。文中不得出现真实校名和人名。
提示：
1. 谨慎交友。
2. 不参与打架斗殴。
3. 面对校园欺凌怎样自我保护。
参考词汇：1. self-prtectin (自我保护) 2. bully (n./v.欺凌)
3. persnal safety(人身安全)
4. have vilent behavirs (打架斗殴)
Hw Can We Prtect Ourselves at Schl?
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【答案】
Hw Can We Prtect Ourselves at Schl?
Schl bullies happen in almst every schl. In my schl, we smetimes have bullies and sme students are hurt, s it is really bad fr us t bully thers r be bullied at schl.
We are suppsed t stp any schl bully when we are in the truble f it. Fr example, we shuld stay calm befre a bullying behavir happens. We shuld always be friendly and helpful when making friends with thers. Here are sme f my ideas abut stpping schl bullies. Firstly, we will learn hw t have a self-prtectin because ur persnal safety is the mst imprtant. Secndly, we shuld be peaceful with thers at all times and can’t have any vilent behavir. Finally, beying schl rules is als a way t avid schl bullies.
I’m hping that n schl bullies will happen at schl in the future ,d yu think s?
（二）
近年全国发生数起严重的校园暴力事件，某中学初三8班围绕校园安全问题召开主题班会.假定你是班长李华，以Hw t prtect urselves in campus vilence为标题写一篇发言稿.
主要包括如下内容：
校园暴力事件已引起广泛关注.
要求每个学生都学习相关知识，增强自身防范能力.
遇到校园暴力时要采取适当措施，包括：保持冷静，判断清楚自己的处境和可能的危险；尽一切可能避免人身伤害；及时报警.
注意：1．词数100左右；2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯. 参考词汇：增强—enhance
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【答案】
Hw t prtect urselves in campus vilence
Dear friends,
This year, sme seriusly vilent incidents happened in campus, resulting in very bad results. The incidents f campus vilence have drawn widespread attentin in ur cuntry. As
a student, we shuld learn sme knwledge abut hw t deal with the vilence and enhance
the ability f self-prtectin. Of curse, if we meet the vilence, we shuld take apprpriate measures t prtect urselves. At first, we’d better keep calm, judge the situatin and be
aware f the pssible dangers. Then, we shuld try ur best t escape r prevent the vilence.
At last but nt least, we shuld call the plice r teachers as sn as pssible t avid the physical injury. That’s all. Thank yu.
（一）
目前，校园暴力时有发生，已经危害到中学生的身心健康。作为中学生应该懂得如何规范自身的行为习惯，保护自身安全，远离学校暴力。请以“规范自我行为，做个合格中学生”为主题写一篇短文。
要点：
1）遵守学校纪律，听从老师和家长的教育，严格要求自己；
2）远离网吧，按时上学和回家；
3）待人礼貌友好，不与同学打架；
4）遇到困难多与父母及老师沟通。
2.要求：
1）文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称；
2）词数 80 左右，开头已经给出，不计入词总数。
Campus vilence (校园暴力) happens frm time t time nwadays. It is harmful t students. It hurts nt nly ur bdies but als ur minds. As a student, _________________________________________________________
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【答案】
Campus vilence happens frm time t time nwadays. It is harmful t students. It hurts nt nly ur bdies but als ur minds. As a student, we shuld fllw the schl rules t behave well at schl. It's gd fr us t bey the teachers and parents. Als, we must be strict with urselves. T be safe, we shuld keep away frm Internet bars, g t schl and g back hme n time. Besides, we shuld be plite and friendly t thers, and dn't fight with classmates. If we have any difficulties in life, it's best t cmmunicate with ur teachers and parents. In this way, ur schl can becme safer and safer.
【详解】
1.题干解读：该题目要求根据“校园暴力”这一社会现象进行讨论，就“规范自我行为，做个合格中学生”为主题写作，写作时要包含题目要点提示，可适当发挥。
2.例文点评：例文开篇提出校园暴力这一想象，并提出了校园暴力的危害。接下来紧扣题目要点提出了作为学生该如何做才能使得校园越来越安全。信件结构清晰，行文连贯，逻辑关系缜密，是一篇优秀的例文。
3.高分亮点：
单词和短语：bey；als；besides；fllw the schl rules；behave well；be strict with；keep away frm；n time；fight with；cmmunicate with；in this way。
句型：It's + adj. + fr sb. t d sth.；祈使句；if引导的条件状语从句。
（二）
同学之间的友谊本该是纯真的，但是最近在少数校园里出现了一些不和谐的现象，有些学生欺凌(bully)自己的同学，对同学造成了伤害，请你写一篇80词左右文章，说说你对此事的看法， 要求如下：
1.写写你身边曾经发生过的或你听说过的校园欺凌事件(schl-bullies )，以及你对这件事的看法。
2.请给那些被欺凌的同学三点建议，该如何面对同学的欺凌。
3.呼吁大家都来阻止校园欺凌，共建平安美好校园。
注意：词数不少于80。
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Recently, I heard that there was an incident f many peple beating up a girl. Mst f the peple invlved were between 12 and 16 years ld. This is a terrible schl-bullies. The incident nt nly damaged the physical and mental health f girls, but als challenged the mral bttm line f schls, the public and the law.
First f all, if yu've ever experienced schl bullying r are experiencing it, we shuld be brave enugh t say “n” t this kind f behavir. Besides, we can ask teachers and parents fr help when we can't handle it urselves. What’s mre, take up the weapn f law and fight against this unhealthy phenmenn.
It’s everyne’s duty t make schl safe. I hpe all f us shuld be friendly t thers and say n t schl-bullies.
【详解】
1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文，要求就社会中的校园欺凌现象写一篇文章。根据题目要点可知，第一段讲述自己听说或身边发生过的校园欺凌事件，并谈谈自己对事件的看法；第二段阐述我们应该怎样应对校园欺凌行为，提出至少三点建议；最后一段升华主题，呼吁人们构建良好的校园环境。
2.写作指导：本文主题为“校园欺凌”；文章需以第一人称为主，浅谈自己的建议和看法；以一般过去时叙述校园欺凌事件，用一般现在时阐述建议观点；文章要点要齐全，逻辑要清晰，可使用what’s mre、besides等词汇厘清文章脉络，使读者一目了然。
（三）
学校欺凌现象在各个国家都很常见。这种行为无论是对受害者还是加害者都造成了严重的心理影响，有些甚至导致悲剧性的结果。
话题：
1、你认为学校欺凌现象的原因是什么？
2、你有没有好的方法来阻止类似现象的发生？
3、你曾经有过类似的经历吗？（无论是加害者、受害者、旁观者或阻止者）说说你的故事。
注意：以上话题选择一个回答即可。注意紧扣话题本身。
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【答案】
Bullying seems t be an issue we hear abut in the media mre ften in recent times. Perhaps because f the ppularity f scial media n the internet, many peple can express their feelings, experiences and pinins a lt easier. What defines bullying is als changing. It used t be the mst basic frm: physical vilence. New students t the schl getting pushed against lckers is a cmmn depictin. Nwadays, psting mean messages n smene's internet page can als be cnsidered bullying. Sme peple's feelings were hurt badly by these ill-intended messages, leading t dire cnsequences.
（四）
近年来,校园欺凌事件频发,备受社会关注。紧扣校园欺凌，自由发挥。
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【参考范文】
There is a news that makes me shcked. It is said that there happened a vilent event in campus which cause 4 students injured and 2 dead. Sme reasns aruse in this event.First schls shuld try t avid things like this if the students are injured r dead the schls have respnsibility t them; secnd families especially parents shuld educate their children well give them a gd guide and take care f them; third the sciety shuld cntrl vilent events. If the abve three try their best and pay enugh attentin t them things like this shuld be avided.
【参考译文】
有一个消息让我震惊。这是说，发生在校园，造成4名学生受伤，2人死亡的暴力事件。一些原因引起这个事件。首先，学校应该尽量避免这样的事情，如果学生受伤或死亡，学校有责任的人;其次，家庭，特别是家长要教育好自己的孩子，给他们一个很好的引导和照顾他们;第三，社会应该控制暴力事件。如果上述三个尽最大努力，并给予足够的重视，这样的事情应该避免。
Meanwhile, yu can talk t them wh bully yu, ask why they d it and put them in yur shes.
I am sure everything will be better.
There is smething unpleasant happening at schl.
Let’s play a rle in building a harmnius schl
I think students shuld always walk but nt run in the hallways.
I hpe all the students shuld pay attentin t their safety in schl.
beying schl rules is als a way t avid schl bullies.
it is nt a gd idea t d any bad things t the bullies n my wn
If I meet bullying at schl, I will first bey their rders and give them my pcket mney t prtect myself. I think we shuld respect each ther.
I will tell what happened t bth my parents and my teachers s that they can help me.
The tpic f ①-----------------（主题）is becming mre and mre ppular recently. There are tw sides f pinins abut it.
Sme peple say A is their favrite. They hld their view fr the reasn f ②-----------------（支持A的理由一）What is mre, ③-------------理由二). Mrever, ④---------------(理由三).
While thers think that B is a better chice in the fllwing three reasns. Firstly,-----------------(支持B的理由一). Secndly (besides),⑥------------------（理由二）. Thirdly (finally),⑦------------------(理由三).
Frm my pint f view, I think ⑧----------------（我的观点）. The reasn is that ⑨--------------------(原因). As a matter f fact, there are sme ther reasns t explain my chice. Fr me, the frmer is surely a wise chice .
（一）
学校欺凌现象在各个国家都很常见。这种行为无论是对受害者还是加害者都造成了严重的心理影响，有些甚至导致悲剧性的结果。
话题：
1、你认为学校欺凌现象的原因是什么？
2、你有没有好的方法来阻止类似现象的发生？
3、你曾经有过类似的经历吗？（无论是加害者、受害者、旁观者或阻止者）说说你的故事。
注意：以上话题选择一个回答即可。注意紧扣话题本身。
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【参考范文】
Bullying, as far as I knw, is prevalent in secndary schls. Mst f us have seen r even experienced that mre r less. Sme bullying leads t tragedy cnsequences, which draw public attentin natinwide. I believe there are sme factrs that cntribute t the prevalence f schl's bullying.
Naturally, ‘schling' shuld be the mst bvius and uninsurable reasn that cmes int ur mind at the beginning, because ur children spend mst f their time in schl and it's the schl's respnsibility t prtect them and eradicate any frms f bullying. Secnd, ‘parenting' is anther imprtant factr that can't be neglected. As we all knw, parents are the best teachers fr children in this wrld. Our ffspring will imitate everything frm wrding t the way their parents treat thers. Therefre, ne can't expect a cuple f dminating and vilent parents will have a gentle and curteus child. And last, media influence has gradually becme an influential frce that prjects negative impact t children's mind. Sme juvenile delinquents wh had cmmitted serius crime by bullying their schlmates cnfessed that the vilence n TV had greatly changed their mind as well as behaviur.
（二）
请结合下面两幅图片所示内容,写ー篇短文。
要求：
1.用约30词概括上文主要内容:
2.用约120词发表你的观点，内容包括:
(1)校园欺凌的危害(至少两点) :
(2) 你对改变这一现象的建议(至少两点)。
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【参考范文】
Schl bullying, thanks t the film Better Days, is nw cming under the sptlight. Despite sme successful attempts t tackle it, it still takes jint effrts t prevent it happening. (30 wrds)
Schl bullying can definitely threaten individuals’ grwth and undermine scial harmny. Fr ne thing, it causes severe psychlgical trauma t the victims, subjecting them t lng-term depressin. Wrse still, what a vicius cycle if victims fllw in the bully’s ftsteps! Fr anther, schl bullying can make the bully g further t believe in vilence and cmmit crimes.
Undubtedly, nly when nipped in the bud can schl bullying stp snwballing. First, laws shuld be in place and give explicit guidelines n what will be dne if it ccurs. Secnd, it is urged that schls shuld maintain clear channels f cmmunicatin fr bth victims and bullies s that they d nt bttle up their feelings. It is never t late t face schl bullying by taking preventive steps. (126 wrds)
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请结合下面两幅图片所示内容, 以“Hw t behave(表现）at schl?”为题写ー篇短文。
要求：
1.简要描述两幅图片, 并针对这些校园欺凌现象谈谈自己在学校应该如何做(至少2点）；
2.文中不得出现考生真实的姓名和学校名称；
3.80个词左右, 已给出的部分不计人总词数。
参考词汇：beat, kick, laugh at, respect(尊重), harmnius(和谐的)
Hw t Behave at Schl?
There is smething unpleasant happening at schl. In Picture One,__________________________________
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【参考范文】
Hw t Behave at Schl?
There is smething unpleasant happening at schl. In Picture Tw, tw girls are beating their classmate. In Picture One, a grup f students are laughing at a pr by because he failed in the exam.
Hw rude they are! We shuld say n t such things. As a student, I think we shuld respect each ther and be friendly t thers. If we have different ideas, we’d better discuss instead f fighting. Besides, we shuld help ur classmates when they are in truble. Let’s play a rle in building a harmnius schl
【解析】
这是一篇给材料作文，简要描述两幅图片, 并针对这些校园欺凌现象谈谈自己在学校应该如何做。结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时和现在进行时，人称为第一、三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：There is……，tw girls are beating ……，I think we shuld……，Let’s……等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。
【点睛】
本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头介绍了两幅画的内容，接下来介绍针对这些校园欺凌现象谈谈自己在学校应该如何做，最后我们在营建和谐校园应起作用。此处a grup f, laugh at, each ther, be friendly t, be in truble, play a rle in ding sth等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。
（四）
假如你是李华,校园英文报的编辑,近日收到读者Jhn的来信，谈论到他被一些同学欺负的经历，请根据以下提示，用英文给Jhn写一封回信。
写作要点: 1. 安慰他不要害怕和差愧；
2. 学校也正在采取相关措施:1月16日(周四) 晚上8点在学校会议室有一个关于如何应对校园欺凌的讲座。
3. 你的建议: (至少两点)
写作要求: 1. 80词左右，第一句已给出，不计入总词数。
2.必须包含以上写作要点，可适当发挥。
3.文中不能出现真实的姓名和学校名。
4.语句通畅，语法正确，书写工整。
参考词汇:欺凌 n. bullying 欺凌者 n. bullies 措施n. measures
Dear Jhn,
I am srry t learn what has happened t yu.____________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
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Dear Jhn,
I am srry t learn what has happened t yu. I think yu shuld be brave t face it and dn't be afraid r shamed because it is nt yur fault.
Our schl is taking actin t slve schl bullying. What's mre, a lecture n hw t deal with bullying will be held in the schl cnference rm n Thursday, Jan.16th, at 8 p.m.
In my pinin, yu shuld tell yur experience t yur teachers and parents, they are adults and they will help yu. Meanwhile, yu can talk t them wh bully yu, ask why they d it and put them in yur shes. Tell bullies nbdy shuld be bullied and bullying itself is wrng. I am sure everything will be better.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【解析】
题干解读：这是一篇书信作文。要求根据针对Jhn的问题和提示的内容给Jhn回信。写作时要注意语句通顺，语意连贯，紧扣要点，注意句子之间的连接与过渡，要注意涵盖所给提示。
例文点评：例文采用三段式；时态选用一般现在时；将题目要求的要点都很好地融入到文章当中，表达出自己的观点态度。
高分亮点：
短语：happen t；take actin；In my pinin；Meanwhile等。
句型：Meanwhile, yu can talk t them wh bully yu, ask why they d it and put them in yur shes. 使用了定语从句和宾语从句。
I am sure everything will be better. 使用了宾语从句。
【点睛】
首先认真审题，看清文章的要求和要点；其次，理顺自己的行文思路；再次紧扣要点，注意句子之间的连接与过渡；最后要仔细检查是否有单词拼写错误和标点的误用等，还要注意是否出现语法错误，有无重复遗漏，大小写是否正确，词数是否符合要求等。