初中英语中考复习 51 社会热点作文之课外实践 2021年中考英语书面表达高分作文攻略（全国通用版）

这是一份初中英语中考复习 51 社会热点作文之课外实践 2021年中考英语书面表达高分作文攻略（全国通用版），共9页。试卷主要包含了上午游览人民公园，下午参观市民广场等内容，欢迎下载使用。


（一）
为丰富初三学生课余生活，上周末你校组织了一次社会实践活动。请根据以下内容提示，用英语写一篇短文，介绍此次活动，并谈谈自己的感想。
活动内容：
1．上午游览人民公园：欣赏美景、歌舞联欢、拍照留念；
2．下午参观市民广场：观看图片展，了解祖国和家乡70年巨变。
你的感想：
1．师生情深，感谢老师和同学的帮助；
2．倍受鼓舞，决心勤奋学习报效祖国；
3. ……（考生自己发挥）
要求：
1．词数100左右。开头已给出，不计人总词数。
2．所写内容必须包括内容提示中所提供的信息，并可作适当的发挥。
3．不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名等相关信息。
参考词汇：市民广场Civic Square
In rder t enrich Junir 3 students' after-schl life, ur schl rganized a scial practice activity last weekend. All the teachers and students f ur grade tk part in it. _______________________________________________
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【写作思路】
这是一篇材料作文，根据材料中的相关信息介绍一下上周末你校所组织的一次社会实践活动。所提供的材料中列举了活动内容和你的感想。主要从：1．上午游览人民公园：欣赏美景、歌舞联欢、拍照留念；2．下午参观市民广场：观看图片展，了解祖国和家乡70年巨变。以及表达师生情深，感谢老师和同学的帮助；倍受鼓舞，决心勤奋学习报效祖国；（自己在发挥一些）。这几个方面去介绍。时态为一般过去时，人称为第一人称。注意作文中必须包含材料上的所有信息，并适当发挥。写作时，避免使用汉语式的英语，尽量使用我们熟悉的句子或短语。语法要正确，表达要符合英语习惯，注意时态、时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系，表达具有条理性。
【参考范文】
In rder t enrich Junir 3 students' after-schl life, ur schl rganized a scial practice activity last weekend. All the teachers and students f ur grade tk part in it. In the mrning, we visited the Peple’s Park. In the park, we enjyed the beautiful scenery, danced and sang, and tk pictures. I wuld like t thank my teachers and classmates fr their help. In the afternn, we visited the Citizen’s Square. In Peple's Square, we watched the pht exhibitin and learned abut the great changes f ur cuntry and hmetwn in the past 70 years. After seeing these pht exhibitins, I was inspired and determined t study hard t serve my cuntry.
【名师点评】
【高分句型一】
I wuld like t thank my teachers and classmates fr their help. 我要感谢我的老师和同学们的帮助。该句话用到了wuld like t d sth. 丰富了语言。
【高分句型二】
In Peple's Square, we watched the pht exhibitin and learned abut the great changes f ur cuntry and hmetwn in the past 70 years. 在人民广场，我们看了70年来的摄影展，了解了祖国和家乡的巨大变化。该句话的语言简练，层次分明，语意明确，用简单的句子表达了丰富的内涵。使人读起来朗朗上口。
（二）
假如你参加了学校组织的“走近乡村”寒假社会实践活动。请根据要求，向某英语网站投稿，分享活动经历。
要求：1.80~120词，可适当发挥，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。
参考信息：
Have yu ever gt clse t the cuntryside and had a special experience? Let me share mine!
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【写作思路】
本文属于一篇图表作文，根据表格提供的信息来介绍“走近乡村”寒假社会实践活动的经历。人称为第一人称，时态主要为一般过去时。动笔前先要注意认真阅读材料确定写作内容；文章必须包括要点中所给的信息，既要写活动的过程，又要总结活动感受与收获。并补充两条个人的观点。表达要符合英语习惯，注意时态、时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系，表达具有条理性。多种句式交叉使用来丰富文章的文采。高分句型：1.We experienced the life in the cuntryside, learned smething that we culdn’t get frm bks befre. 我们经历了农村的生活，学到了一些我们以前从书中得不到的东西。that we culdn’t get frm bks befre.是定语从句，修饰不定代词smething。2. We really hpe we’ll have anther activity like that this winter vacatin! 我们真的希望今年寒假还能有这样的活动！hpe后面是省略that的宾语从句。
【参考范文】
Have yu ever gt clse t the cuntryside and had a special experience? Let me share mine.
During the winter vacatin my classmates and I jined in the schl activity “Get clse t the cuntryside”. We live in the famers’ hmes. Their great living cnditins surprised us a lt. D yu knw where vegetables cme frm? We gt the answer when wrking with the farmers. Besides, we learned abut ther plants and sme farm animals. Hw interesting!
We experienced the life in the cuntryside, learned smething that we culdn’t get frm bks befre, and felt the wnderful changes f the cuntryside. We realized hw hard the farmers wrked and decided t save fd. We were happy t see the farmers’ life was getting better and better.
We really hpe we’ll have anther activity like that this winter vacatin!
（三）
人生中有很多第一次：第一次学游泳；第一次跟家人外出旅行；第一次做家务；第一次赢得比赛；第一次……。请根据提示，就你的第一次……写一篇短文。 内容包括：
1. 第一次……的整个过程；
2. 你的感受。
要求：
1. 词数：80-100（开头已给出，不计入总词数）；
2. 文中不得出现真实的校名和人名。
As we all knw, everyne has his unfrgettable memries. I still remember the first time ________________
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【写作思路】
这是一篇材料作文，根据提示信息，选择给你印象深刻的第一次活动进行描述并谈谈自己的感受。时态主要为一般过去时，人称主要为第一、三人称。写作思路：考生需要首先审清主题，围绕主题展开作文。首先开门见山，介绍自己的第一次活动是什么，接下来详细介绍第一次活动的整个过程，最后谈一谈自己的感受。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系，表达具有条理性。注意： 注意紧扣主题，意思连贯，语言通顺，书写规范，避免出现拼写错误；词数在80—100。
【参考范文】
The first time t learn t swim
As we all knw, everyne has his unfrgettable memries. I still remember the first time t learn t swim.
Last summer vacatin, my father tk me t the swimming pl in ur neighbrhd and taught me t swim. It was the first fr me t swim. At first, I culd nt swim at all. My father was very patient. He encuraged me and taught me hw t swim. He taught me hw t breathe in the water first. Then, He threw me int the deepest part f the swimming pl. I was s frightened that I culdn’t mve. But I never gave up. I felt safe with my dad arund. Three hurs later, with the help f my father, I culd swim by myself. Althugh I culdn't swim very well, I was very happy.
I will never frget this experience, because I nt nly learned hw t swim, but als learned t be brave!
（四）
5月18日是国际博物馆日，下图是你班同学参观博物馆的情况。请你结合调查结果、自己的参观经历和感受，写一份报告，并在英语课上汇报。
注意：1. 词数：80-100 (短文首句已给出，不计入总词数)；
2. 文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名。
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【写作思路】
这是一篇图表，是同学参观博物馆的情况，结合调查结果、自己的参观经历和感受，写一份报告，并在英语课上汇报。动笔前先要认真阅读要点，围绕要点组织材料，然后用正确的英语句子把这些内容表达出来，在此基础上亦可适当发挥，注意不要遗漏材料中给出的要点。根据材料注意人称和时态的不同，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
【参考范文】
Visiting museums has becme ne f the mst ppular ways fr us students t spend ur spare time. Accrding t the survey made in ur class, almst all the students have been t museums, such as science museums, tea museums and film museums, etc.
Amng them, the science museum is ur favrite.
I've been t Huzhu Science Museum and Lu Yu Tea Museum. I like the tea museum very much, because I can learn abut the histr and develpment f tea and watch the tea art perfrmances there as well. What I'm interested in mst is the shw f beautiful tea sets, which has left a deep impressin n me.
Museums make it pssible fr us students t learn knwledge and experience cultures at the same time. Why nt visit mre?
（五）
近几年，旅游已经成为一项全民活动。初中生们旅游的机会也有很多，因此，旅游也是初中生们津津乐道的话题。
你的美国朋友Tm非常喜欢中国文化，去年暑假你和他一起从桂林出发去北京旅游了几天，你们参观了一些著名景点，还品尝了一些有名的小吃，请把你们的旅游经历写成一篇不少于80词的短文。
参考范文：
A Trip t Beijing My American friend Tm and I went t Beijing by plane last summer. On the first day，we visited the Palace Museum and Tian'anmen Square. The next day，we climbed the Great Wall. We tk lts f phts. Althugh we felt tired，it was a fantastic experience. The third day we relaxed. Then we had the Beijing rast duck fr lunch. I think it is the mst delicius fd in the wrld. Tm is interested in Chinese culture，s we drank tea and saw Beijing Opera in La She Teahuse in the evening. Finally，we did sme shpping and flew back t Guilin. The trip t Beijing was shrt，but it was wnderful. Tm said that he wuld never frget it.