初中英语中考复习 23 地方介绍 2021年中考英语书面表达高分作文攻略（全国通用版）

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相关话题解读与写作指导
【话题解读】
地点介绍类的写作对象涉及公园、博物馆等具体的场所，也包括城市、国家等。对一般性的场所进行介绍，首先要注意安排好介绍顺序。空间顺序使用居多，常用的有：从外到内，从左到右，由远及近，由高到低，从整体到局部等。也可以以参观者的行踪为顺序进行介绍。而对于城市、国家等，介绍层面通常包括位置、历史、名胜古迹、今昔变化等。不论是哪种类型，最后在结尾处通常都需要作者发表一下个人观点或意见。
【实例讲解】
假如下图是你学校的平面建筑示意图。请你根据所给提示，以"My Schl" 为题，写一篇80词左右的英语短文，介绍你学校的建筑布局情况并谈谈你对学校的看法。
【分析】
该写作任务要求介绍学校的建筑布局，属于地点介绍类的说明文。写作前先确定介绍顺序，可以从校门开始，按照从前到后、从左到右的顺序依次介绍。谈谈对学校的看法是写作任务中明确要求的，可以表达自己的喜爱之情，也可以表达不满或意见等。
My Schl
This is a map f my schl. Walking int the schl gate, yu can see a big playgrund in the middle f the schl. Behind it is the teaching building. On the left side f the playgrund, yu can see the ffice building. A stadium is t the nrth f it.In the nrthwest crner is the dining hall. On the right side f the playgrund,there is the science building. And the library is lcated in the nrtheast crner.
I lve my schl. It's the best schl I have ever seen.
高分突破:
My Schl
This is a map f my schl. The schl gate faces the suth. Tw lines f big tall trees stand n each side f the gate, welcming every student. Right in frnt f the gate is a big playgrund. It is a center fr fun. Behind the playgrund is the teaching building where I study. On the left side f the playgrund, yu can see the ffice building.
And a stadium is t the nrth f it. In the nrthwest crner stands the dining hall. Nw let's turn t the right side f the playgrund. As yu can see, there are tw buildings. The science building is near the schl gate and the library is lcated in the nrtheast crner.
I lve my schl. It is nt nly a place fr learning, but als a place fr fun.
【高分揭秘】
1. 习作按照从前到后、从左到右的顺序依次介绍了学校的建筑布局，结构紧凑，层次合
理。
2. 习作中用了不同的词语来描写位置关系，避免了单调和重复，如in frnt f, behind, t the nrth, in the nrthwest crner, near the schl gate等。
3. 习作不仅介绍了建筑布局，也穿插了一些个性化的、情感化的表达，使习作生动有
趣，如welcming every student, a center fr fun等。
【素材积累】
1. 词汇
位置：n the right / left, in frnt f, behind, at the ft f, n the tp f, near, next t, clse t, inside, utside, acrss, thrugh
存在：be, lie, stand, lcate
特征：large, small, huge, deep, lng, mdern, ancient, ppular, attractive
2. 句子
★ I like my schl very much and I am prud that I belng t it.
★ My favrite thing abut my city is the fact that it has s many wnderful parks.
★ The museum is just like a huge bk t tell yu the histry f China.
★ My hmetwn has left many sft and sweet memries in my heart.
★ It's beauty is beynd wrds. I really hpe yu culd get a chance t cme and experience it fr yurself.
相关话题写作模拟练习
（一）
每年的六一儿童节都会有很多孩子前往上海迪斯尼乐园游玩。假如你是一名乐园的志愿者，请你根据下列表格中的要点提示，用英语向孩子们介绍乐园并提醒他们文明游园。
注意：
1. 词数90左右。短文的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数；
2. 短文须包括所有要点，不要逐词解释，可适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺；
3. 短文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
参考词汇：theme n.主题；firewrk n.烟火
Gd mrning, children!
As a vlunteer frm Shanghai Disneyland, I'd like t say smething abut the park and tell yu hw t behave well in it.





The park is wrth yur visit. I hpe yu will have fun.
习作范文
Gd mrning, children!
As a vlunteer frm Shanghai Disneyland. I'd like t say smething abut the park and tell yu hw t behave well in it.
The Disneyland is in the east f Shanghai. Yu can get there by undergrund. It's made up f six theme parks. Yu can jin in different kinds f activities there, such as enjying wnderful musicals r plays. Als, there' re lts f nice presents in the shpping area fr yu t chse. At night, yu can watch firewrks.
Hwever, it's imprtant t behave well in the park. Littering isn't allwed. Yu shuld keep the park clean. Remember t wait fr yur turn anytime. Mrever, it's implite t shut ludly in public.
The park is wrth yur visit. I hpe yu will have fun.
（二）
假如你是李强，有一天在上学路上，你看到赵王河公园河岸边的道路损坏严重，一些彩砖不见去向，影响人们的出行。请用英语给China Daily 山东菏泽频道写一封信，反映这一问题，并提出你的看法和建议。
(一)参考词汇destry毁坏；clr bricks彩砖；disappear消失；repair修复；take measures采取措施；prtect保护；public facilities公共设施
(二)其他要求：100字左右，开头和结尾己给出，不计入总字数。
Dear Editr,
I'm a high schl student.
_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Li Qiang
习作范文
Dear Editr,
I'm a high schl student. I'm writing t tell yu smething bad abut Zhagnghe Park. One day, n my way t schl, I fund that the rad alng the bank f Zhagnghe Park was destryed badly. Sme clr bricks disappeared. It is said that sme bricks were thrwn int the river and sme were taken hme by villagers nearby. The rad has had a bad influence n peple's cming and ging. I think it shuld be repaired as sn as pssible. We shuld take measure t prtect the rad. It is imprtant and necessary t take gd care f the public facilities in the park.
I hpe China Daily can care abut the matter and give us sme advice n hw t prtect the park.
Li Qiang
相关话题满分作文解析
（一）
Dear Laura,
Thanks fr yur letter.
Nw I'll tell yu smething abut ur schl and ur schl
life. Our schl is very big, with ver 2, 500 students and abut
200 teachers. There are many high buildings in it. On the campus,
yu can see many green trees and beautiful flwers. In ur schl, there are many clubs. Every afternn, we can take part in all kinds f activities, such as basketball, table tennis, and painting. We can read newspapers and bks in the schl library. And we can als g nline in the schl cmputer labs. I've been in the schl fr mre than tw years. I am deeply attracted by everything in the schl.
Yurs,
Vera
参考译文
亲爱的劳拉:
谢谢你的来信。
现在我将跟你说说我们的学校和校园生活。我们的学校很大，有超过2500名学生和大约200位老师。学校里有很多高的建筑物。在校园里，你可以看到很多绿树和美丽的花朵。在我们的学校，有很多社团。每天下午，我们可以参加各种各样的活动，比如说篮球、乒乓球和画面。我们可以在学校图书馆里看报纸和书。我们还可以在学校的电脑房上网。我已经在这个学校超过两年了。我被学校里的一切深深地吸引着。
你的，
薇拉
亮点词汇
building 建筑物
campus .校园
take part in参加
g nline上网
出彩句型
I'll tell yu smething abut..我要告诉你一些关
There are many buildings in it.校园里有很多高的建筑物。
We can take part in all kinds f activities. 我们可以参加各种各样的活动。
I am deeply attracted by...我被...深深地吸引着。
高分点评
本文采取动静结合的描述手法，向读者展现了“我” 的校园的美丽风光以及丰富多彩的校园生活，条理清晰，清楚具体。此外，句式、短语的多样运用，也是一大成功之处。
（二）
Australia
Australia lies n the west f the Pacific Ocean. It cvers an area f 7.6 millin square kilmeters. And it has a ppulatin f ver 10 millin.
Mst f them live in the east f the cuntry by the sea,because the weather in thse places is mre favrable and cmfrtable. In the center f Australia, there is a large area f desert, Canberra, the capital f Australia, is a beautiful city. Sydney is ne f the biggest cities in Australia. It has many places f interest. The Sydney Opera Huse is famus all ver the wrld.
If yu ever visit Australia, yu will be fascinated by it.
参考译文
澳大利亚
澳大利亚位于太平洋的西边。它有着760万平方公里的面积。它还有着超过一千万的人口。
很多人住在澳大利亚东面的海边，因为那些地方的天(更加适宜和舒服。在澳大利亚的中部，有很大面积的沙漠。堪培拉，澳大利亚的首都，是一个漂亮的城市。悉尼是澳大利亚最大的城市之-。它有很多风景名胜。悉尼歌剧院就闻名于全世界。
如果你游览过澳大利亚，你就会被它吸引。
亮点词汇
Pacific Ocean太平洋
cver覆盖
favrable讨人喜欢的
desert.沙漠
places f interest凤景名胜
出彩句型
It cvers an area f.它有的面积。
It has a ppulatin f...它有...的人口
The weather in thse places is mre favrable and cmfrtable.那些地方的天气更加适宜和舒服。
In the center f Australia, there is.在澳大利亚的中部，有
Sydney s ne f the biggest cities in Australia.悉尼是澳大利亚最大的城市之一。
高分点评
本交选取了澳大利亚作为介绍的主体，其中采取了由面到点的叙述手法，将澳大利亚的位置、面积、气候、人文风情一呈现在了我们面前。 值得提的是， 作者的写作语言非常地道，原汁原味，如面积的表达“cvers an area f..，又如人口的表达“It has a ppulatin f ver 10 millin"等。