外研版英语八年级下册期中复习---写作专训课件PPT

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同学们经常会和家人外出游玩，上个暑假你和家人去哪儿了呢？根据内容提示，写一篇短文介绍你去年暑假游玩的经历和游玩的感受。提示内容：1.Where have yu been t?2.What have yu dne?3.Hw did yu feel during the trip? 提示词：visit, g sightseeing, enjy neself写作要求：1.语句通顺，意思连贯，语法正确，书写规范2.写作要点齐全，并做适当发挥。所有提示词必须全部用上3.文中不得出现人名、校名，4.词数：80词左右。标题已给出，不计入总词数。
四个 “ When , wh , where , what ”一个 “ H ”
Where : Beijing
When : Last summer hliday.
What: g sightseeing; visit; travel ; take pht; talk with freigners; enjy neself
Wh : I , parents
H : lking frward t
I have been t Beijing many times. I have travelled all ver Beijing city. I have visited the Great Wall, the Summer Palace and the Palace Museum.
I am lking frward t visiting Beijing again.
Last summer hliday, I went sightseeing in Beijing with my parents.
I have taken many phts. I have talked with freigners in English. We enjyed urselves in Beijing.
用不同的单词或短语用不同的句式用连词用过渡语根据题目要求酌情写一些亮点句
1、规范书写。2、不能涂改。3、一旦写错，用一条斜线划掉。
A Wnderful Trip n Last Summer HlidayLast summer hliday, I went sightseeing in Beijing with my parents. Beijing is in the nrth f China. It’s the capital f China. Many peple visit it every year. I have been t Beijing many times. I have travelled all ver Beijing city. I have visited the Great Wall, the Summer Palace and the Palace Museum. I have taken many phts and I have talked with freigners in English. We enjyed urselves in Beijing. I am lking frward t visiting Beijing again.
1.卷面字迹书写及涂改 。2.文章主题不准确；文章内容不充实，没有涵盖所要求的所有内容，要点有遗漏。3.没有看清题目要求，文章的时态和主语运用有误。4.句子表达错误5.句子结构和词汇单一，简单句的堆砌，没有连词。6.没有画龙点睛的亮点句 。