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    第一章 应用文写作
    写作特点
    应用文是人们日常生活和工作中广泛使用的一种文体,也是高考写作的文体之一。命题形式多为文字提示,写作形式有书信(建议信、投诉信、邀请信、道歉信、感谢信、询问信、推荐信、祝贺信、求职信等)、电子邮件、日记、通知、报道、启示和发言稿等。
    评分原则
    1.本题总分为25分,按5个档次给分。
    2.评分时,先根据文章的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次,然后以该档次的要求来衡量,确定或调整档次,最后给分。
    3.词数少于80和多于120的,从总分中减去2分。
    4.评分时,应注意的主要内容为:内容要点、应用词汇、语法结构的数量和准确性以及上下文的连贯性。
    5.拼写与标点符号是语言准确性的一个方面,评分时,应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑。英、美拼写及词汇用法均可接受。
    6.如书写较差,以至于影响交际,将分数降低一个档次。
    评分标准
    档 次
    描 述
    第五档(很好):
    (21-25分)
    完全完成了试题规定的任务
    (1)覆盖所有内容要点;
    (2)应用了较多的语法结构和词汇;
    (3)语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误,但为尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致;具备较强的语言运用能力;
    (4)有效地使用了语句间的连接成分,使全文结构紧凑。
    完全达到了预期的写作目的。
    第四档(好):
    (16-20分)
    完全完成了试题规定的任务
    (1)虽漏掉1、2个次重点,但覆盖所有主要内容;
    (2)应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求;
    (3)语法结构或词汇方面应用基本准确,些许错误主要是因尝试较复杂语法结构或词汇所致;
    (4)应用简单的语句间的连接成分,使全文结构紧凑。
    达到了预期的写作目的。
    第三档(适当):
    (11-15分)
    基本完成了试题规定的任务
    (1)虽漏掉一些内容,但覆盖所有主要内容;
    (2)应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求;
    (3)有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误,但不影响理解;
    (4)应用简单的语句间的连接成分,使全文内容连贯。
    整体而言,基本达到了预期的写作目的。
    第二档(较差):
    (6-10分)
    未恰当完成试题规定的任务
    (1)漏掉或未描述清楚一些主要内容,写了一些无关内容;
    (2)语法结构单调、词汇项目有限;
    (3)有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误,影响了对写作内容的理解;
    (4)较少使用语句间的连接成分,内容缺少连贯性。
    信息未能清楚地传达给读者。
    第一档(差):
    (1-5分)
    未完成试题规定的任务
    (1)明显遗漏主要内容,写了一些无关内容,原因可能是未理解试题要求;
    (2)语法结构单调,词汇项目有限;
    (3)较多语法结构或词汇方面的错误,影响对写作内容的理解;
    (4)缺乏语句间的连接成分,内容不连贯。
    信息未能传达给读者。
    0分
    未能传达给读者任何信息:内容太少,无法评判;写的内容均与所要求内容无关或所写内容无法看清。

    一、邀请信
    技法指导
    邀请信是邀请收信人参加某项活动的书信。在写作时,要注意邀请信的交际性,语气要真挚,避免带有不礼貌或强人所难的字眼。根据邀请信的性质可将其分为普通邀请信和正式邀请信。普通邀请信对内容和格式的要求都不高,只要说明活动的内容、时间、地点等即可。正式邀请信的措辞要正式,语气要热情有礼,态度要诚恳。邀请信的末尾都要表达希望对方参加或出席的愿望。具体写作结构为:

    常用表达
    1.It is a great privilege/honor for me to invite you to participate in...to be held in...on...
    我很荣幸邀请您参加……在……举行的……
    2.I feel it a great honor on behalf of...to invite you to participate in...
    我很荣幸代表……邀请您参加……
    3.Would you give the pleasure of doing...at...
    您能赏光和我们在……做……吗?
    4.You can reach me through my phone number...at your convenience.
    您可以在您方便的时候打我的电话,号码是……
    5.I would feel much honored if you could come.
    如果您能来,我将深感荣幸。
    6.If you are interested in it,please let me know and I’ll send you more information.
    如果你感兴趣,请告诉我,我会给你发送更多的信息。
    典例展示
    假定你是李华,你校将举办外国学生中文演讲比赛,请给你的英国朋友George写封信,邀请他参加。内容包括:
    1.比赛时间;
    2.演讲话题;
    3.报名方式。
    注意:
    1.词数80左右;
    2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
    满分佳作
    名师点评
    Dear George,
    It is a great privilege for me to invite you to participate in the Chinese Speech Contest for foreigners at my school on March 1st,2021.
    The theme of the upcoming speech is British Culture which we sincerely expect to know from a native of Brain.Undoubtedly,your fluent Chinese,excellent public speaking skills,and especially profound knowledge will not fail to impress and inspire the audience.If you accept our invitation,we will be more than pleased to welcome you to register at the Student Organization Office.
    We are looking forward to your stunning performance.
    Yours,
    Li Hua
    1.文章开头扼要地介绍了写信目的,表达邀请对方参加的愿望。使用了邀请信的套句:It is a great privilege for me to invite you to...,而且还自然地介绍了要点1:比赛时间。
    2.文章主体部分介绍了演讲主题和报名方式。使用了一些亮点词汇theme,upcoming,sincerely,especially,profound,impress,inspire,more than和高级句式:定语从句which we sincerely expect to know from a native of Brain和条件状语从句If you accept our invitation。
    3.信的结尾使用了邀请信的套语We are looking forward to...,表达了希望对方接受邀请的愿望。

    实战演练
    1
    假定你是李华,你的家人想邀请你校的英国交换生Peter到你家聚餐。请你给他写封邮件,内容包括:
    1.表明意图;
    2.阐述邀请的原因;
    3.告知时间、地点和乘车方式。
    注意:
    1.词数80左右;
    2.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
    3.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
    Dear Peter,



    I sincerely hope you can come.I’m looking forward to your early reply.
    Yours,
    Li Hua


    参考范文
    Dear Peter,
    How’s everything going?On behalf of my family and myself,I’d like to invite you to have dinner with us.
    I invite you not only because we are good friends and I want to treat you to dinner but also because my brother has some difficulty in learning English,which upsets him very much.Therefore,I hope that you can have a talk with him about English learning after dinner.
    If it is convenient for you,please come to my home at 6 o’clock this Sunday afternoon.You can take the No.666 bus at the west gate of our school and get off at Daxing Road,where I will pick you up.
    I sincerely hope you can come.I’m looking forward to your early reply.
    Yours,
    Li Hua
    2
    假定你是李华,与你的英国朋友Lisa正在学习中国绘画。市艺术馆将招聘暑期志愿者。请你写一封邮件邀请她一起报名。内容包括:
    1.教小学生绘画;
    2.维持游客秩序;
    3.每周工作三天。
    注意:
    1.词数80左右;
    2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
    参考范文
    Dear Lisa,
    I’ve heard that the Art Museum in our city is about to advertise for volunteers for the summer vacation.Would you please have a try with me?
    The job of the volunteers is challenging.Teaching primary students to learn to draw Chinese paintings will offer us a great chance to improve ourselves.
    Then,helping the tourists keep order is another duty of ours.By the way,we only need to work three days a week.
    I guess this is a pretty good opportunity for us.Looking forward to your reply.
    Yours,
    Li Hua



    二、申请信
    技法指导
    申请信有很多种,比如求职申请、加入某组织或活动的申请、报考申请、留学申请等。写申请信的目的在于让对方了解自己的经验、能力、成就、愿望等,所以个人情况的介绍应该是申请信的核心内容,应尽可能向对方说明本人的长处,以便留下好印象,获得面谈的机会。由于此类题目常有较多的文字提示,写作时除应注意格式上的要求外,也应注意审题全面,不能遗漏要点,并要注意人称和时态的变化,避免出现逻辑混乱。具体写作结构为:

    常用表达
    1.Having learned that your office needs...,I would like to apply for the post.
    得知贵公司需要……,我想申请这个职位。
    2.I’m looking for a job as...and would be grateful if you would consider me for such a post in your firm.
    我正在找一份……的工作,如果你能考虑我在贵公司担任这个职位,我将不胜感激。
    3.I’m an excellent student,among the top 5 in my class of 50 students.My grades are among the best ones in my department.
    我是个优秀的学生,在我班50名学生中名列前五。我的成绩在系里名列前茅。
    4.I feel I am competent to meet the requirements you have listed.
    我觉得我有能力满足你所列的要求。
    5.With good academic performance and working practical experience,I feel I’m the right person you’re looking for.
    我有很好的学习成绩和工作实践经验,我觉得我是你要找的人。
    6.I have been learning English for more than 10 years with a good command of oral and written English,which enables me to communicate/interact with foreign friends fluently.
    我已经学了10多年英语,口语和书面语都很好,这使我能够流利地与外国朋友交流。
    7.Being outgoing as well as warm­hearted,I’m always ready to help those in need,which makes me feel good in return.我性格开朗,心地善良,随时准备帮助有需要的人,这让我感觉很好。
    8.Not only am I able to help others but also I can accumulate social experience.
    我不仅能帮助别人,而且能积累社会经验。
    9.I’m firmly convinced that by doing this,I can enhance my oral English and communication skills together with opening up a new range of vision.
    我坚信通过这样做,我可以提高我的英语口语和沟通能力,同时开拓新的视野。
    10.It would be appreciated if you could take my application into account/consideration,looking forward to your earliest/earnest reply.如能考虑我的申请,不胜感激,期待您的早日/认真回复。
    典例展示
    (2019·全国Ⅰ)
    假定你是李华,暑假在伦敦学习,得知当地美术馆要举办国画展览。请写一封信申请做志愿者,内容包括:
    1.写信目的;
    2.个人优势;
    3.能做的事情。
    注意:
    1.词数100左右;
    2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
    满分佳作
    名师点评
    Dear Sir,
    I am Li Hua,a student from China,who is studying in London during the summer holiday. Knowing an exhibition of Chinese paintings will be held at the gallery next month,I am writing to apply to become a volunteer.
    I have the following advantages.First of all,I speak English fluently,which allows me to communicate with visitors without difficulty. Second,as a Chinese painting lover,I know a lot about this art form.If accepted,I can introduce Chinese painting skills to visitors,which can help them know more about Chinese culture.
    I think I am qualified to be a volunteer.I would be grateful if you could give me a chance.
    Yours,
    Li Hua
    1.信的开头扼要地做了自我介绍,了解到要举办画展,表示有意要申请志愿者。使用了复杂结构定语从句和分词作状语。还使用了申请信的套语I am writing to apply to...。
    2.信的主体部分介绍了自身的优势,使用了过渡性词语:First of all,Second。使用了复杂结构非限制性定语从句和条件状语从句的省略结构。
    3.信的结尾使用了申请信的套语I would be grateful if you could give me a chance.表达了感谢和希望。

    实战演练
    1
    假定你是晨光中学的李津,看到校报的英文专栏刊登了一则消息:来自英国的交换生Johnson正在寻找“接待家庭”,你很感兴趣。请你用英文给校报写一封申请信。内容包括:
    1.自我介绍;
    2.家庭条件及个人优势;
    3.安排英国朋友参加的活动。
    注意:
    1.词数80左右;
    2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
    3.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
    参考词汇:接待家庭 host family
    Dear Editor,
    On seeing the information in the school newspaper,I learned that Johnson is scheduled to study as an exchange student in our school.

    I hope you can take my application into consideration.Thank you in advance.
    Yours sincerely,
    Li Jin
    参考范文
    Dear Editor,
    On seeing the information in the school newspaper,I learned that Johnson is scheduled to study as an exchange student in our school.I sincerely hope my family can have the honor to be a host family.
    My parents are caring and friendly.Our home is next to the city center where you can easily get access to shopping and convenient transportation.What’s more,we can offer one separate room for the student.
    As for me,I have a good command of English so that he can feel free to communicate with me in daily life.So I am convinced I will be a qualified host.If given the chance,I’ll invite him to join in my family get­together.Besides,we can show him around the city,getting him to know more about the real life and culture in China.
    I hope you can take my application into consideration.Thank you in advance.
    Yours sincerely,
    Li Jin
    2
    假如下学期即将到你校工作的外教Alice正在寻找一名学生助手,你有意承担这一工作,请给Alice写一封申请信介绍自己的优势:电脑操作;交际能力;英语口语等。
    注意:
    1.词数80左右;
    2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
    3.邮件的开头和结尾已为你写好,不计入总词数。
    Dear Alice,
    I’m Li Hua,a senior 2 student,aged 17.It is great to learn that you are coming to teach in our school next semester.

    Looking forward to your early reply.
    Yours,
    Li Hua
    参考范文
    Dear Alice,
    I’m Li Hua,a senior 2 student,aged 17.It is great to learn that you are coming to teach in our school next semester.On knowing that you are seeking for one student assistant,I’m eager to introduce myself.
    As a diligent person,I always deal with what I encounter in my daily life independently.Having a good knowledge of computer,I believe I can accomplish all the tasks you want me to finish.Additionally,I have a gift for communicating with others,which will help me to get on well with others.Apart from that,I can speak English fluently so that I have no difficulty communicating with you.
    I’m confident that I can be helpful in your work and life.
    Looking forward to your early reply.
    Yours,
    Li Hua






    三、建议信
    技法指导
    建议信是作者就有关问题进行分析并针对这些问题提出自己的看法和建议,以便让对方接受自己的想法、主张并解决有关问题。建议信可以写给个人,就其遇到的某个问题提出自己的看法或观点;也可以写给某个组织或者机构,就改进其服务等提出建议或忠告。具体写作结构为:

    常用表达
    1.开头表达写信目的常用语
    (1)I am writing to give you some suggestions/offer you some advice.
    我写信给你一些建议/忠告。
    (2)I am writing to express my views concerning...
    我写信是要表达我关于……的看法。
    (3)You have asked for my advice about...and I will try to make some useful suggestions here.
    关于……你向我征求意见,在此我尽力提出一些有用的建议。
    2.主体部分表达建议常用语
    (1)I think the most suitable...for you is...
    我认为对你来说最适合的……是……
    (2)I would like to suggest that...
    我想建议……
    (3)You’d better.../It’s better to...
    你最好……/最好是……
    (4)As far as I am concerned/In my opinion,it would be wise to take the following action.
    在我看来,采取如下行动是明智的。
    (5)For one thing...;for another...
    一方面……,另一方面……
    (6)If I were you,I would...
    如果我是你,我会……
    (7)I think it would be more beneficial if you could...
    我认为如果你能……将会更有益。
    3.结尾表达希望常用语
    (1)I hope you will take my advice into account/consideration seriously.
    我希望你会认真考虑我的建议。
    (2)I hope you will find these proposals/suggestions practical/useful/helpful.
    我希望你会发现这些建议实用/有用/有帮助。
    (3)I will be more than happy to see your improvements in this regard.
    看到你在这一方面取得进步我会非常高兴。
    典例展示
    (2017·北京)
    你的英国朋友Jim所在的学校要组织学生来中国旅行,有两条线路可以选择:“长江之行”或者“泰山之旅”。Jim来信希望你能给些建议。请你给他回信,内容包括:
    1.你建议的线路;
    2.你的理由;
    3.你的祝愿。
    注意:
    1.词数不少于50;
    2.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
    Dear Jim,







    Yours,
    Li Hua







    满分佳作
    名师点评
    Dear Jim,
    I’m happy to receive your letter and know you’re coming to China.I am writing to offer you some advice on which route to choose.
    Of the two trips to the Yangtze River and Mount Tai,both are highly recommended.Personally,I prefer the one along the Yangtze,the longest river and one of the mother rivers of Chinese civilization.You can learn a lot about the history of China and Chinese people.Moreover,the scenery along the river is amazing,with many well­known sightseeing spots.That’s why I think the trip along the Yangtze will be a better choice.
    I hope you will take my advice into account/ consideration seriously and will have a good time in China.
    Yours,
    Li Hua
    1.文章开头扼要地介绍了写信的目的,使用了建议信的套语I am writing to offer you some advice...。
    2.书信的主体部分提出了自己的建议,使用了过渡性词语:Personally,Moreover;高级词汇:highly, recommend,prefer,civilization,amazing,well­known, sightseeing;还使用了复杂结构why引导的表语从句。
    3.信的结尾使用了建议信的套语I hope you will take my advice into account/consideration seriously and will have a good time in China.表达了希望。

    实战演练
    1
    假定你是李华,你的英国朋友Nancy将于2022年来中国参加冬奥会,她来信向你咨询如何在短时期内提高汉语口语水平,请你用英语给她写一封回信,提出建议并说明理由。
    注意:
    1.词数80左右;
    2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
    3.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
    Dear Nancy,


    Yours,
    Li Hua
    参考范文
    Dear Nancy,
    Learning that you will come to China for the 2022 Winter Olympic Games,I’m more than delighted.As for how to improve your spoken Chinese in a short time,I’d like to give you some suggestions.
    To begin with,make more Chinese friends in your daily life,with whom you can practice your spoken Chinese.What’s more,listening to Chinese songs and watching Chinese movies are also good ways,which can help you broaden your horizons and gain some Chinese.Last but not least,reading and writing in Chinese can benefit your oral Chinese level.
    I hope you’ll make great progress in oral Chinese.
    Yours,
    Li Hua
    2
    假定你是李华,在你校学习的英国交换生Frank想参加中国诗词电视大赛(Chinese Poetry TV Competition),特地给你写邮件寻求建议。请你给他回一封邮件,要点如下:
    1.乐意帮助;
    2.具体建议;
    3.表达祝愿。
    注意:
    1.词数80左右;
    2.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
    3.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
    Dear Frank,
    It’s amazing that you’re interested in the popular Chinese Poetry TV Competition and want to take part.



    Yours,
    Li Hua
    参考范文
    Dear Frank,
    It’s amazing that you’re interested in the popular Chinese Poetry TV Competition and want to take part.I’m delighted to offer you some tips.
    First of all,you should surf the Internet to learn about the brief history of Chinese poetry to get a better understanding of it.The resources are available on many relevant websites.Secondly,you’d better recite as many poems as possible and seek help from teachers.Additionally,knowing how to enter your name for the competition and watching previous events will make you well prepared.
    Hope these suggestions above will help you get started.Good luck in the competition!
    Yours,
    Li Hua
    四、感谢信
    技法指导
    感谢信是向帮助、关心和支持过自己的集体或个人表示感谢的信件。在收到别人的邀请、受到别人的表扬或帮助后,被邀请者、被表扬者或被帮助者往往需要写一封感谢信。具体写作结构为:

    常用表达
    1.I would like to convey in this letter my heartfelt/sincere/earnest thanks/gratitude to you for your...
    在这封信中,我要对你的……表示衷心的/真诚的/诚挚的感谢。
    2.I’d like to express my thanks for...
    我想感谢您对我……
    3.I would like to take this opportunity to express my great appreciation for your timely support and assistance.
    我谨借此机会感谢您给予我们的及时支持和帮助。
    4.Without your help,...couldn’t have done...
    没有你的帮助,……不会……
    5.It was because of your help that...
    正是由于你的帮助我才……
    6.Please do not hesitate to let me know if there is anything I could do to pay you back.
    如果我能做些什么来回报你,请不要犹豫尽管告诉我。
    7.My true gratitude is beyond the words’ description./Words fail to express my gratitude deep in my heart./No words are strong enough to convey how grateful I am.
    我真正的感激之情无法用言语来形容。/言语无法表达我内心深处的感激之情。
    典例展示
    (2019·浙江)
    假定你是李华,经常帮助你学习英语的朋友Alex即将返回自己的国家。请给他写一封邮件,内容包括:
    1.表示感谢;
    2.回顾Alex对你的帮助;
    3.临别祝愿。
    注意:
    1.词数80左右;
    2.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
    3.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
    满分佳作
    名师点评
    Dear Alex,
    I’m sorry to hear that you are going to return to your country very soon and I’m writing this email to express my gratitude for your help.
    First of all,thank you for helping me learn English.Without your help,I would not have made such great progress in English­ learning.Besides,what you told me about your country broadened my horizons and aroused my interest in foreign culture.
    I wish you all the best in the future and have a good journey.
    Yours,
    Li Hua
    1.文章开头扼要地介绍了写信的目的,使用了感谢信的套语I’m writing this email to express my gratitude for your help。
    2.书信的主体部分陈述了道谢的原因,使用了过渡性词语:First of all,Besides;高级词汇:make great progress,broaden,arouse;感谢信的套语:...thank you for helping me learn English.Without your help,I would not have made such great progress in English­learning.;还使用了复杂结构what引导的主语从句。
    3.信的结尾使用了感谢信的套语I wish you all the best in the future and have a good journey.表达了祝愿。

    实战演练
    1
    (2021·广东茂名五校联考)
    假如你是李华,在上周举办的全市中学生英语演讲比赛中获得第一名。你很感激访问教授Mr Ronald对你的帮助和指导,为表谢意,你送他一把很有中国特色的折扇。请你给他写封电子邮件,内容包括:
    1.对Mr Ronald表示诚挚的感谢;
    2.告知他你已寄了礼物;
    3.介绍你送给他的折扇(材质、图案、文字和象征意义等)。
    注意:
    1.词数80左右;
    2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
    3.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
    参考词汇:折扇 folding hand fan
    Dear Mr Ronald,



    Again,I would like to express my warm thanks to you! Please accept my gratitude and the little gift!
    Yours truly,
    Li Hua
    参考范文
    Dear Mr Ronald,
    I’m writing to extend my sincere gratitude to you for your assistance and guidance.
    In acknowledgement of your valuable help,I have sent you a typical Chinese folding hand fan.The fan,made of bamboo,is convenient to take and use.In Chinese culture,it is a work of art rather than a tool so it can be also suitable for hanging on the wall as decoration.On one side of the fan is a beautiful handwritten poem which conveys the harmony of nature while on the other side is a Chinese painting of bamboos which symbolizes tranquility and safety.I hope you like it.
    Again,I would like to express my warm thanks to you! Please accept my gratitude and the little gift!
    Yours truly,
    Li Hua
    2
    假定你是李华,即将结束在英国的交换生学习并返回中国。请根据下面的内容,给你的老师Mr Jones写一封邮件:
    1.写信目的;
    2.感谢他的授课和帮助;
    3.邀请他来中国旅游。
    注意:
    1.词数80左右;
    2.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
    2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
    Dear Mr Jones,



    Yours,
    Li Hua
    参考范文
    Dear Mr Jones,
    I’m going back home next week,so I’m writing to express my gratitude to you.
    During my stay here,your wonderful teaching impressed me deeply.Not only did you prepare your lessons carefully in advance,but you also behaved like a director in class,encouraging us to share our ideas.What moves me most is that you always talked to me patiently when I turned to you for help.With your encouragement,I became more confident and joined in class activities more actively.
    I sincerely invite you to visit China one day.
    Yours,
    Li Hua
    五、道歉信
    技法指导
    道歉信通常是在因自己的过失或疏忽给别人带来了麻烦或损失并发觉的情况下,为了向对方表示歉意而写的信件。具体写作结构如下:

    常用表达
    1.I’m terribly/awfully sorry I couldn’t...
    十分抱歉我不能……
    2.It is much to my regret that...
    我感到很遗憾……
    3.I feel it a great pity to...我感到非常遗憾……
    4.I have no choice but to say sorry to you.
    我别无选择,只能向你道歉。
    5.Anyhow,I sincerely hope that we can fix another time for...Will you be available this Sunday morning?
    无论如何,我真心希望我们可以再找一个时间……这个星期天早上你有空吗?
    6.Shall we put it off till...?
    我们把它推迟到……好吗?
    7.Please allow me to say sorry again.
    请允许我再次道歉。
    8.Will you please accept my apologies?
    请你接受我的道歉,好吗?
    9.I sincerely hope that you will kindly accept my apologies.
    我由衷地希望你能宽容地接受我的歉意。
    10.Once again,I’m sorry for my inconvenience caused.
    对于造成的任何不便我再次表示歉意。

    典例展示
    (2016·全国Ⅲ)
    假定你是李华,与留学生朋友Bob约好一起去书店,因故不能赴约。请给他写封邮件,内容包括:
    1.表示歉意;2.说明原因;3.另约时间。
    注意:
    1.词数100左右;
    2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
    满分佳作
    名师点评
    Dear Bob,
    I am sorry to say that I cannot go to the bookstore with you on Friday afternoon.I have just found that I have to attend an important meeting that afternoon.I hope the change will not cause you too much trouble.
    Shall we go on Saturday morning?We can set out early so that we will have more time to read and select books.If it’s convenient for you,let’s meet at 830 outside the school gate.If not,let me know what time suits you best.I should be available any time after school next week.
    Once again,I’m sorry for my inconvenience caused.
    Yours,
    Li Hua
    1.文章开篇表明写作意图,表达歉意,使用了道歉信的套语I am sorry to say that I cannot...。随后解释不能赴约的原因,使用了that 引导的宾语从句。
    2.书信的主体部分提出了补救措施,再次相约。使用了高级词汇:convenient,available;还使用了复杂结构so that 引导的目的状语从句和if引导的条件状语从句,以及状语从句的省略形式if not。
    3.信的结尾使用了道歉信的套语Once again,I’m sorry for my inconvenience caused.再次道歉以表达其诚意。
                       
    实战演练
    1
    假设你是新华中学的学生李华,你和在上海上学的英国朋友Tom约好下周末去北京旅游,但你因故不能赴约。请根据以下要点用英语给他写一封电子邮件:
    1.表示歉意;
    2.解释原因;
    3.另约时间。
    注意:词数80左右。
    参考范文
    Dear Tom,
    I am writing to express my heartfelt apology to you for my being unable to travel with you.
    Unexpectedly,I am chosen to take part in the CCTV national English speech contest next weekend,which really means a lot to me.As a result,I have no choice but to break my promise.I would appreciate it if you could fix another time.I’ll be available at any time after the contest.Please drop me a line to let me know your decision soon.
    I sincerely hope you will understand my choice and accept my apology.
    Yours truly,
    Li Hua
    2
    假定你是李华,下周一至周三因故不能上外教Mr Smith的英语课,需要向他请假。请你用英文给他写一封电子邮件,内容包括:
    1.解释原因;
    2.请求允许;
    3.弥补措施。
    注意:
    1.词数80左右;
    2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
    参考范文
    Dear Mr Smith,
    I’m writing to ask for a three­day leave,for I can’t attend your English classes from Monday to Wednesday next week.
    Owing to a severe headache,I have made an appointment with a specialist,and my mother will take me to see him.It’s a great pity that I will miss your interesting lessons but I hope you will excuse my absence.I promise to make up for the missed lessons after I return to school.
    Your kind permission will be greatly appreciated!
    Yours,
    Li Hua
    六、求助信
    技法指导
    写英文求助信的原因是目前自己遇到了一些困难,需要请求对方帮助。因此整篇文章应用一般现在时表达文义,当描述自己得到帮助后的进步时应用一般将来时。具体写作结构如下:

    常用表达
    1.I’m writing the letter to you to ask you to do me a favor.
    我给你写信想请你帮我一个忙。
    2.I have some difficulty in doing...which bothers me a lot.So I have no choice but to turn to you for help.
    我在做……方面有困难,这很困扰我。所以我别无选择只能向你求助。
    3.What bothers me is that I don’t know what to do.
    困扰我的事是我不知道做什么。
    4.I’ve found that my problem lies chiefly in two aspects.For one thing,...;for another thing...
    我发现我的问题主要在两个方面。一方面……另一方面……
    5.But unfortunately,I encounter some difficulty in preparing for the English competition.
    但是不幸的是,我在准备英语竞赛的时候遇到了一些困难。
    6.Not only do I have some difficulties in reading but also in writing.
    我不仅在阅读方面有困难,而且在写作方面也有困难。
    7.Hardly have I had any experience in coping with the situation due to the fact that I am a green hand.
    由于我是一个新手,我在处理这样的情况方面几乎没有什么经验。
    8.So difficult is the situation that I don’t know how to face it.
    情况是如此的复杂以至于我都不知道怎么去面对。
    9.I believe I will benefit a lot from your valuable and timely advice.
    我相信您的宝贵而及时的建议会使我受益匪浅。
    10.I’m sure with your help I can make great progress.
    我相信在你的帮助下我会取得很大的进步。
    11.I will appreciate any of your help.
    我将非常感谢你的任何帮助。
    12.I would greatly appreciate your timely help.
    我会非常感激你及时的帮助。
    典例展示
    (2016·全国Ⅰ)
    假定你是李华,暑假想去一家外资公司兼职,已写好申请书和个人简历(resume)。给外教Ms Jenkins 写信,请她帮你修改所附材料的文字和格式(format)。
    注意:
    1.词数100左右;
    2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
    满分佳作
    名师点评
    Dear Ms Jenkins,
    I’m Li Hua and I plan to take a part­time job in a foreign capital company during the summer holiday.I have already filled in the application form and had my resume ready for it.However,I’m not sure about the words and format.Therefore,I’m writing to ask for your help and professional advice.Would you please spare some time to read through the materials attached?Would you mind finding out the mistakes in terms of words and format?Besides,I’d like you to correct the mistakes found in the materials.I’d be most grateful if you could do me the favor.
    I’m looking forward to your reply.
    Yours,
    Li Hua
    1.文章开篇自我介绍并表明写信意图,随后说明求助的具体内容,最后表达希望和感激。
    2.书信中使用了过渡词语However,Therefore,Besides。使用了高级词汇:professional,attached,in terms of,correct;求助信常用的套语:I’m writing to ask for your help and professional advice.和 I’d be most grateful if you could do me the favor.;也使用了复杂结构过去分词短语作定语found in the materials。

    实战演练
    1
    假定你是英国某校留学生李华,昨天晚上在图书馆自习回来后,发现你的一本英语字典不见了,现写一封80词左右的邮件给图书管理员Ms Jenkins,请她帮忙寻找。要点如下:
    1.写信的目的;
    2.英语字典对你的意义;
    3.如果找到请她帮忙保管好。
    注意:开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
    Dear Ms Jenkins,


    Looking forward to your reply.And I would be really thankful.
    Yours sincerely,
    Li Hua
    参考范文
    Dear Ms Jenkins,
    I am Li Hua,and I studied in the library last night.But when I came back to my dorm it occurred to me that I had left my English dictionary behind in the library.
    It is a precious gift from my American teacher.Now I wonder whether I could ask you a favor.Would you please be so kind as to look for the dictionary for me?If you can find it,please keep it.And I will get it back tomorrow afternoon.I will appreciate it if you can offer me a hand.
    Looking forward to your reply.And I would be really thankful.
    Yours sincerely,
    Li Hua
    2
    假设你是学生会主席李华,你将在学校英文报上刊登一篇以“保护大自然”为主题的文章,文章已写好,想写信请外籍教师Tom帮忙修改润色。
    注意:
    1.词数80左右;
    2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
    3.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
    Dear Tom,


    Yours,
    Li Hua
    参考范文
    Dear Tom,
    I’m writing to ask you for advice,hoping that you can do me a favor.
    As you know,our school has held an English writing competition about protecting nature recently,which has appealed to many students to take part in it.I’m keen to write articles,so I has written an article,hoping that the article can be published in the school English newspaper.Would you please help me polish the article? If you agree,I’ll come to your house at your convenience.
    I’d appreciate it if you’d like to offer me a helping hand.Looking forward to your reply.
    Yours,
    Li Hua
    七、推荐信
    技法指导
    写英文推荐信是向对方推荐一个人、一个地方或一件东西等。应提出推荐的理由,介绍自己推荐的内容的优点。因此整篇文章应用一般现在时表达文义。具体写作结构如下:

    常用表达
    1.I am both honoured and pleased to recommend...
    我荣幸地推荐……
    2.I am writing to you to recommend...
    我给你写信是要推荐……
    3.It is with great pleasure that I take this opportunity to give...a recommendation.
    我很荣幸地抓住这次机会推荐……
    4.Awarded with the title of the Excellent Graduate,he is an enthusiastic and progressive young man with high potentiality.
    他获得了优秀毕业生的称号,是一位热情积极向上的年轻人,具有很强的潜力。
    5.In addition to her excellence in academic study,she also performs very well in her job.
    除了学术上的出色,她在工作中也表现得很出色。
    6.Her academic record was constantly maintained at the top level,which resulted from her devotion to study and intelligent nature.
    她的学习成绩始终保持在顶尖水平,这得益于她对学习的投入和她聪慧的天性。
    7.I have found him to be hard­working,competent,honest,diligent and reliable.
    我发现他是一个勤奋、有能力、诚实、勤奋和可靠的人。
    8.If he can join the company,he will give full play to his potential/talent.And your company will be greatly benefited.So I strongly recommend...to you.
    如果他能加入公司,他将充分发挥他的潜力/才能。而您的公司将会大大受益。所以我强烈推荐……给您。
    9.Should this recommendation gain your favorable consideration,it would be highly appreciated.
    如果您能考虑此推荐信,我将不胜感激。
    典例展示
    假定你是红星中学的李华,你的英国朋友Peter热爱体育运动,他将作为交换生到你校学习一年。请你给他写封邮件,主要内容包括:
    1.介绍你校体育课程及活动;
    2.推荐一项中国传统体育项目。
    注意:
    1.词数80左右;
    2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
    满分佳作
    名师点评
    Dear Peter,
    I’m glad to hear that you will come to our school on a one­year exchange program.Since you enjoy sports,I would like to introduce the sports courses in our school as well as a traditional Chinese sport.
    First of all,for each class in our school,there are two to three periods of PE class every week. Basic courses,including playing basketball and running,are offered to students.Besides,the school sports meeting is held annually,which students can take part in according to their interests.What I recommend to you to learn is Chinese kungfu,a traditional sport in China.Practicing it regularly will help you stay fit in a fantastic way.
    Looking forward to your arrival!
    Yours,
    Li Hua
    范文内容完整,语言规范,文章词数适当。作者在文中使用了较多的高级表达方式:定语从句Besides,the school sports meeting is held annually,which students can take part in according to their interests.;名词性从句What I recommend to you to learn is Chinese kungfu,a traditional sport in China.;动名词短语作主语Practicing it regularly will help you stay fit in a fantastic way.另外文章思路清晰,层次分明,上下句转换自然,为文章增色添彩。

    实战演练
    1
    假设你是红星中学高三学生李华,你的英国朋友Jim在给你的邮件中提到他对中国文化感兴趣,计划明年来北京上大学。他向你咨询相关信息。请给他回复邮件,内容包括:
    1.表示欢迎;
    2.推荐他上哪所大学;
    3.建议他做哪些准备工作。
    注意:
    1.词数80左右;
    2.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
    Dear Jim,


    If you have further questions,please feel free to let me know.
    Yours,
    Li Hua
    参考范文
    Dear Jim,
    I’m so glad to hear your future education plan in Beijing in your last letter.First I’d like to express my warmest welcome to you and I am sure you will have the most unforgettable experience during your college in Beijing.
    Learning your keen interest in Chinese culture,I suggest you apply for Peking University.Its Chinese Literature major is perfect for you where you can be completely soaked in profound Chinese history and rich culture.As for preparation,some reading in advance is needed like The Story of the Stone while some online courses of spoken Chinese can be helpful for you to adapt to the Chinese language environment.
    If you have further questions,please feel free to let me know.
    Yours,
    Li Hua
    2
    (2020·浙江杭州第二中学月考)
    假定你是李华,得知你校外籍教师Peter计划在暑假回国,他想送给母亲可以代表中国文化特色的礼物,请给他写一封邮件,向他推荐礼物。内容包括:
    1.推荐礼物;
    2.推荐原因;
    3.表达祝愿。
    注意:
    1.词数80左右;
    2.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
    3.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
    Dear Peter,
    I’m glad to hear that


    Yours,
    Li Hua
    参考范文
    Dear Peter,
    I’m glad to hear that you want to buy some gifts for your mother that represent Chinese culture.And I am writing to give you some advice.
    Personally,I think you should buy the following two gifts:Qipao and Chinese knot.Qipao,a very beautiful traditional dress for Chinese women,can show the real beauty of a woman.I am sure your mother will like it very much.What’s more,it is also a good choice for you to buy the Chinese knot.It is usually hung in the sitting room or cars,which represents good luck.
    Wish you could get a satisfying gift for your mother!
    Yours,
    Li Hua
    八、普通电子邮件
    技法指导
    英文e­mail和普通书信的写法和格式大体相同,电子邮件类试题的要求一般都是只写正文,其写法比较简单,开头第一行写称呼,顶格写,称呼后面用逗号;正文部分从称呼下一行开始写起,从左边起空两格。正文后面是署名,署名写在正文下一行或二行处,靠右写(同信件的署名)。具体写作结构如下:

    常用表达
    1.Thank you for your letter.谢谢你的来信。
    2.I’m very glad/pleased to tell you that...
    我很高兴地告诉你……
    3.I am very glad to have received the letter you sent me two weeks ago.
    我非常高兴收到你两周前寄给我的信。
    4.How are you getting along with your study?
    你近来学习进展怎样?
    5.I’m very glad to tell you something about...
    我很高兴告诉你一些关于……的事情。
    6.Please write to me soon and tell me about your...
    请马上写信给我,告诉我关于你的……
    7.I’m looking forward to your reply.
    我盼望着你的回复。
    8.If so,please e­mail me in response...
    如果是这样,请给我回复邮件……
    典例展示
    (2017·全国Ⅰ)
    假定你是李华,正在教你的英国朋友Leslie学习汉语。请你写封邮件告知下次上课的计划。内容包括:
    1.时间和地点;
    2.内容:学习唐诗;
    3.课前准备:简要了解唐朝的历史。
    注意:
    1.词数100左右;
    2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
    满分佳作
    名师点评
    Dear Leslie,
    I am delighted to know you are interested in Tang poems.Now I’m writing to tell you the plan for the next class.
    Actually I am very fond of Tang poems.I think it great fun to learn the poems written in the Tang Dynasty with you.We are to meet on Sunday morning in the People’s Park,where the air is fresh and the scenery is beautiful.We will learn from 800 am to 1000 am.Besides,I advise you to go to the library to borrow a history book and learn the history of the Tang Dynasty in advance,which can help you better understand the poems to be learned.
    If you have any questions,please let me know.Looking forward to your early reply.
    Yours,
    Li Hua
    1.第一段点出写信目的,使用了套语Now I’m writing to tell you the plan for the next class.
    2.主体部分交代了邮件的主要内容,上课的时间、地点和内容以及课前准备。使用了过渡词语Besides;高级词汇:be fond of,advise,in advance;还使用了高级句式过去分词作定语和定语从句。
    3.结尾部分表达了希望,使用了套语Looking forward to your early reply.

    实战演练
    1
    假设你叫李华,你的朋友John沉迷于抖音(Tik Tok)而不能自拔,写邮件向你寻求帮助,请你给他回一封电子邮件。内容包括:
    1.表示理解和关心;
    2.沉迷抖音的影响;
    3.提出具体建议。
    注意:
    1.词数80左右;
    2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
    3.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
    参考词汇:沉迷于(做)某事be addicted to (doing) sth.瘾;入迷n.addiction
    Dear John,



    Best wishes!
    Yours,
    Li Hua
    参考范文
    Dear John,
    I am sorry to hear that you are suffering from Tik Tok addiction.Actually,it is commonly seen that more and more teenagers get crazy about Tik Tok and spend a lot of time watching and sharing videos online,which makes them unable to focus on study.Therefore,I think it is a must for you to take action.You should start some other hobbies,such as reading,listening to music or playing chess.Besides,you had better make more friends through face­to­face communication.
    I sincerely hope that these ideas can help you with the problem.
    Best wishes!
    Yours,
    Li Hua
    2
    假定你是李华,你的英国朋友Peter看了你在社交平台上发布的“全国爱眼日(National Sight Day)”班级活动图片后,向你了解相关情况。请根据以下内容,写一封邮件。
    1.介绍全国爱眼日;
    2.活动安排;
    3.活动感受。
    注意:
    1.词数80左右;
    2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
    参考范文
    Dear Peter,
    I’m glad my pictures interest you.National Sight Day is an annual holiday falling on June 6th,whose topic is always around caring for eyesight.
    This year,our class organized a series of activities.We first held a theme class meeting,where we made speeches and discussed effective ways to protect eyes.Then we went to the street to distribute brochures to pedestrians,expecting to raise people’s awareness of protecting eyes.
    With such activities,we realize having good eyesight is very important to everyone and we should form good habits when using eyes.
    Yours,
    Li Hua
    九、演讲稿
    技法指导
    演讲稿是参加会议者为了在会议或重要活动上表达自己的意见、看法或汇报思想工作情况而事先准备好的文稿。它能节省时间,集中、有效地围绕议题把话讲好,而不至于走题或把话讲错。演讲稿分为:欢迎辞、欢送辞、倡议书等。具体写作结构如下:

    常用表达
    1.My name is...Today I am very glad to have the opportunity to make this presentation.I shall be speaking about...
    我是……今天很高兴能有机会做这个演讲。我演讲的内容是……
    2.Good morning,everyone! It is my great honor to share with you my opinions on...
    大家上午好!很荣幸能和你们分享我对……的看法。
    3.It’s my great honor to be here/to have the opportunity to say something about...
    很荣幸能在这里/能有机会谈论一下关于……
    4.It was with sincerity and faithfulness that we created a harmonious atmosphere.
    我们是用真诚和忠诚创造了一个和谐的环境。
    5.I am sure that with your great efforts,you will enjoy a colorful life here.
    我相信凭着你的努力,你将会在这里享受丰富多彩的生活。
    6.I hope what is mentioned above might be helpful to you! Thank you for your listening!
    我希望上面提到的对你们有帮助!谢谢聆听!
    典例展示
    (2016·天津)
    假设你是晨光中学的学生会主席李津。一批来自英国的高中生与你校学生开展了为期两周的交流活动。现在,他们即将回国,你将在欢送会上致辞。请根据以下提示写一篇发言稿。
    1.回顾双方的交流活动(如学习、生活、体育、文艺等方面);
    2.谈谈收获或感想;
    3.表达祝愿与期望。
    注意:
    1.词数不少于100;
    2.可适当加入细节,使内容充实、行文连贯;
    3.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
    Dear friends,
    How time flies!



    Thank you.
    满分佳作
    名师点评
    Dear friends,
    How time flies!I am Li Jin,president of the Students’ Union.It’s my great privilege to be here,sharing this moment with our fellow friends from England.
    During the two­week activities,we surely exchanged our ideas on learning,sports,talent and cultures.One of the highlights was the sports meeting where we competed with each other in the basketball match.The past two weeks witnessed our growth and our friendship.It is not only your enthusiasm but also your teamwork and good spirits that impress us deeply.After the precious exchange activity,we now have a better understanding of each other on a whole new level.
    Now,on behalf of my schoolmates,I wish you a safe return.I also hope that there will be more events of this kind in the future.
    Thank you.
    1.在结构安排方面:文章开篇自我介绍并引入话题。随后表述演讲具体内容,最后感谢倾听并表达希望。
    2.在语言运用方面:范文中使用了大量亮点句型:现在分词短语作状语,sharing this moment with...;定语从句where we competed with each other...;无灵主语句The past two weeks witnessed...;not only...but also...和强调结构It is not only...but also...that...这些都是提升文章档次的句子,也显示了作者较强的语言运用能力,增加了文章的得分点。

    实战演练
    1
    你们学校英语社团将在下周六晚上举行题为“Protecting Wild Animals”的演讲比赛,你将作为代表参加比赛。因此,你现在要准备一份演讲稿。内容主要包括:
    1.野生动物的生存现状;
    2.举例说明保护野生动物的重要性;
    3.你是怎么做的及我们应该如何做。
    注意:
    1.词数80左右;
    2.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
    3.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
    Good evening,everyone,
    I’m glad to stand here and give a short speech on protecting wild animals.



    Thanks for your listening.
    参考范文
    Good evening,everyone,
    I’m glad to stand here and give a short speech on protecting wild animals.
    According to many statistics,we have realized that a large number of wild animals have been killed for their meat,skins and fur.As a matter of fact,protecting wild animals benefits not only those animals but us humans.For example,if too many frogs are killed,our corn and grain will be destroyed by harmful insects.It is those frogs that prevent the number of harmful insects from increasing.As for me,I have volunteered to call on more people to protect them and at the same time we should ask our students to take part in the activities of protecting wild animals.Meanwhile,our government should also take active measures.
    Thanks for your listening.
    2
    在成长的过程中,我们总是对未来的职业充满憧憬。近期你班将以“My Dream Career” 为题举行演讲比赛。请你根据以下要求写一篇英语演讲稿,内容包括:
    1.你的理想职业;
    2.选择它的理由;
    3.实现的途径。
    注意:
    1.词数80左右;
    2.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
    3.可根据内容要点适当发挥,以使行文连贯。
    参考词汇:mould v.塑造;industrious adj.勤勉的
    My Dream Career
    Good morning,everyone! Today,please allow me to deliver a brief speech on the career I will take up in the future.

    Thank you for listening.
    参考范文
    My Dream Career
    Good morning,everyone! Today,please allow me to deliver a brief speech on the career I will take up in the future.My dream career is to be a tour guide.
    Since my early age,I have been admiring tour guides who travel worldwide and enjoy the spectacular scenery.Besides,this career is financially rewarding as well so that I can live a well­off life.Additionally,I will have more opportunities to meet people from all walks of life,which is both challenging and interesting.
    To be a good guide is not an easy job.It is the wide range of knowledge,professionalism and dedication that mould a highly qualified tour guide.Therefore,my dream cannot be fulfilled without industrious work to pave the way.
    Thank you for listening!
    十、书面通知
    技法指导
    书面通知又称为通告或布告(Notice),是部署工作、传达事情、召开会议所使用的一种文体。其格式如下:
    1.标题。书面通知要在正文的正上方写上Notice或大写NOTICE。
    2.正文。即通知的内容。
    3.落款。书面通知要标明通知的时间和单位名称。书信式通知的日期可写在右上角;布告式通知的时间一般放在正文的左下角,要低于落款(单位名称)。
    常用表达
    1.开头用语
    May I have/call your attention,please?
    请大家注意一下,好吗?
    Attention,please,everybody!请大家注意!
    I have an announcement to make.
    我有一件事情要宣布。
    I have something to tell you.
    我要告诉大家一些事情。
    2.正文部分常用语
    There will be a talk this afternoon.
    今天下午将有一场讨论会。
    The Student Union has decided that...
    学生会已决定……
    We shall have a lecture on...
    我们将举行关于……的研讨会。
    It has been decided that we’ll pay a visit to...
    已经决定我们将参观……
    3.结尾部分常用语
    I hope you can have a good time.
    我希望你们玩得开心。
    Everyone is welcome to attend/take part in it.
    欢迎所有人参加。
    That’s all.Thank you.就这些,谢谢。

    典例展示
    (2018·全国Ⅱ)
    你受学生会委托为校宣传栏“英语天地”写一则通知,请大家观看一部英文短片Growing Together,内容包括:
    1.短片内容:学校的发展;
    2.放映时间、地点;
    3.欢迎对短片提出意见。
    注意:
    1.词数100左右;
    2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
    满分佳作
    名师点评
    NOTICE
    An English short film,called Growing Together,will be shown in the school hall at 730 pm.Everyone is welcome to watch the film.It tells about the development of our school.
    The film is believed to be instructive and full of emotion.It tells the story of a school growing up,from small to large,from weak to strong.After the film,each class is supposed to have a discussion and all the students are welcome to make comments and express their views about the film.
    We will witness the glory of our school,and we are growing together.
    The Students’ Union
    1.在结构安排方面:有标题NOTICE。正文部分详细介绍了通知的内容即时间、地点、内容和注意事项。落款为The Students’ Union。
    2.在语言运用方面:范文中使用了高级词汇development,instructive,emotion,be supposed to,make comments,witness , glory 和一些亮点句型:过去分词作定语called Growing Together;“据……”结构:The film is believed to be instructive and full of emotion.这些都是提升文章档次的表达,也展示了作者较强的语言运用能力。
                       
    实战演练
    1
    (2020·山东青岛上学期调研)
    假定你是学生会主席李华,你校将于本周日举行开学典礼暨教师节庆祝大会,请你给外教和留学生写一则书面通知,内容包括:
    1.时间、地点;
    2.活动内容;
    3.注意事项。
    注意:
    1.词数80左右;
    2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
    参考范文
    NOTICE
    The opening ceremony,also the celebration of Teachers’ Day,is going to be held in our lecture hall on the first floor in the teaching building at 2 p.m.this Sunday.
    And there will be many activities.Firstly,our headmaster will deliver a speech.Then the teachers who made outstanding contributions to the school last semester will be rewarded.And all of the students will sing a song together to show our gratitude to our teachers.
    Pay attention to it that students who take part in it are supposed to wear school uniforms and should arrive 30 minutes earlier.
    The Students’ Union
    2
    假定你是李华,是某国际学校的学生会主席,你校将举行食品安全知识竞赛。请根据提示写一则通知,内容包括:
    1.竞赛目的;
    2.竞赛时间和地点;
    3.竞赛方式。
    注意:
    1.词数80左右;
    2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
    参考范文
    Notice
    Aimed at raising students’ awareness of food safety,a knowledge contest concerning the subject is to be held in our school.
    The contest is scheduled in the school hall from 200 pm to 400 pm on November 27th.It mainly consists of two rounds.First,all competitors are required to answer five questions about food safety.The top 20 competitors will have the opportunity to compete in the second round,where they will be asked another five more challenging questions.If you are interested,please sign up at the Student Union office before November 20th.
    Looking forward to your active participation.
    Student Union
    十一、报道
    技法指导
    新闻报道是对最近发生的事情的报道,其目的是为人们提供最新信息。新闻报道的结构一般分为四个部分:标题、导语、主体和结语。
    1.标题:标题是新闻的题目,是编辑对最有新闻价值的内容的浓缩、概括。为了撷取新闻要点、诠释新闻意义、吸引读者阅读,好的标题应该简洁明了。
    2.导语:导语是消息开头的第一句话或第一段,它扼要地提示出新闻的核心内容。
    3.主体:主体是新闻的主要部分,它用充足的事实表现主题,是对导语内容的进一步展开和阐述。
    4.结束语:一般是最后一句话或者一段话,通常对全文内容作概括性的总结,有时作者根据报道在结束语中提出令人深思的问题。
    要注意新闻报道的特点:
    1.真实性:新闻是对事实的客观描述和写真。真实是新闻的生命,也是新闻的基本要义;
    2.客观性:客观地叙述新闻事实是坚持新闻报道真实性的前提,所以不能随意发挥,也不宜过早下结论。
    因此,在写作过程中不要夹杂任何个人的主观色彩,时态以一般过去时为主。另外,新闻要简练,多采用短句,复杂句尽量少用。
    常用表达
    1.In order to encourage the students to get close to nature,our school organized a mountain­climbing activity.为了鼓励学生们走进大自然,我们学校组织了一次登山活动。
    2.They said it was such a beautiful day that they would remember it forever.
    他们说这是多么美好的一天,他们会永远铭记。
    3.What they did has brought joy to others and enriched their own lives.他们所做的给他们带来了快乐,而且丰富了他们自己的生活。
    4.Apart from knowledge,we also learned to cooperate with each other and came to realize the importance of teamwork.除了知识,我们也学会了和他人合作,也逐渐意识到合作的重要性。
    5.The activity benefited us a lot./The activity was of great benefit to us./The activity was very beneficial to us.这次活动对我们很有好处。
    典例展示
    (2020·新高考全国Ⅰ)
    假定你是李华,上周日你校举办了5公里越野赛跑活动。请你为校英文报写一篇报道,内容包括:
    1.参加人员;
    2.跑步路线:从校门口到南山脚下;
    3.活动反响。
    注意:写作词数应为80左右。
    满分佳作
    名师点评
    A Cross­Country Running Race
    Last Sunday,our school held a five­kilometer cross­country running race.All students in Senior 3 took part in it.The purpose of this race was to inspire us students to pay more attention to physical exercise.
    At 7 a.m.we started at the school gate.And then we ran all the way to the foot of South Hill.On the way,although some students fell behind,they kept running until the finishing line.
    From this activity,we have realized that building up our body is of great importance,and we have also learned more about “persistence leads to success”.
    1.在结构安排方面:文章标题是A Cross­Country Running Race;导语是Last Sunday,our school held a five­kilometer cross­country running race.主题部分介绍了活动的时间、地点以及参加人员,还有活动的过程。结束部分介绍了活动的意义。
    2.在语言运用方面:范文中使用了高级词汇:purpose,inspire,pay attention to,fall behind,realize,of great importance;大量亮点句型:although引导的让步状语从句although some students fell behind;that引导的宾语从句 that building up our body is of great importance;还有谚语persistence leads to success。这些都是提升文章档次的表达,也展示了作者较强的语言运用能力。

    实战演练
    1
    假定你是李华,上周一你校举行了高三成人礼仪式。请你为校英文报写一篇报道,内容包括:
    1.活动时间、地点;
    2.活动内容:走龙门、成人宣誓等;
    3.个人感悟。
    参考词汇:龙门Longmen;宣誓take an oath
    注意:
    1.词数80左右;
    2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
    3.标题已给出,不计入总词数。

    The Coming­of­Age Ceremony




    参考范文
    The Coming­of­Age Ceremony
    Last Monday witnessed an exciting coming­of­age ceremony.
    All the Senior Three students gathered on the playground at 700 sharp in the morning.There were various activities to celebrate the coming 18­year­old birthday.One of them was walking across Longmen,which means a brilliant future waiting for us diligent students.What impressed me most was the moment when all of us took an oath about what should be done as civilized youths.
    Thanks to the ceremony,I realize I have grown up and I should be self­disciplined and responsible for my behavior.
    2
    最近你市发现了一处唐朝文化遗址。人们就是否应当开发它展开了激烈的讨论。假如你是一名记者,请就此写一篇80词左右的报道,并发表自己的看法。
    参考词汇:开发explore;旅游业tourism
    注意:
    1.不可逐条翻译;
    2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
    3.文章开头已给出,不计入总词数。
    Recently,citizens in our city have had/held a heated debate on whether we should explore the cultural relic,which was discovered in our city.


    参考范文
    Recently,citizens in our city have had/held a heated debate on whether we should explore the cultural relic,which was discovered in our city.Different people have different opinions.
    Some people are in favor of the idea.They think the cultural relic is worth exploring,which will make people learn more about the great history of our country.What’s more,this cultural relic can attract more visitors to our city,which will improve our tourism.
    However,others hold an opposite opinion,thinking that we should keep it as it is and protect it properly.Only in this way can it not be destroyed by people.
    As far as I am concerned,we should ask the experts for advice to find a better way to make full use of this cultural relic.

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