2022-2023学年江苏地区五年级上学期期末备考--作文真题汇编二

2022-2023学年江苏地区五年级上学期期末备考--作文真题汇编二

学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________考号：___________

一、命题作文

1．（2022·江苏盐城）请以“My friend’s hobbies”为题写一篇小短文，介绍你朋友的业余爱好。

提示：Anna是我的好朋友。她有很多业余爱好。她喜欢读书和唱歌。她能唱歌，唱得非常好。她也喜欢跳舞，并且擅长跳舞。她总是在周日有舞蹈课。

My friend’s hobbies

Anna is my good ________. She has a ________ of hobbies. She likes ________ and ________. She can ________ very ________. She also likes ________ and she is ________ ________ it. She ________ has dancing lessons on Sundays.

2．（2022·江苏扬州）请以At weekends为题写一篇作文，介绍你和你家人周末做些什么，不少于5句话。

At weekends

We are very happy at weekends. ___________________________________

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3．（2021·江苏）请以“My e-friend”为题，向你的同学介绍你的一个网友，不少于5句话。

My e-friend

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4．（2021·江苏）请你以“At Christmas”为题写一篇小短文，介绍一下圣诞节。不少于5句话。

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5．（2021·江苏南京）今天是个美好的星期六，天气晴朗，全家人都休息。请根据表格中的信息以“At weekends”为题写一篇短文。

要求：

1. 语句通顺，条理清楚，注意人称和时态。

根据提示写全信息点。30~50词，已给出的句子不计入总词数。At weekends

It is Saturday morning. ________________________________________________________

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二、提纲作文

6．（2022·江苏淮安）Mike认识了一位新网友，他迫不及待地想和同学们介绍这位新朋友，请你根据下列提示，帮他完成关于Alice的介绍，不少于五句话。

My e-friend

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7．（2022·江苏连云港）苏海认识了一位新朋友，她想给大家介绍这位新朋友。请你根据信息，帮她完成新朋友的介绍，所给信息不能有遗漏，不少于5句话。

This is Amy. ____________________________________________________________________Her father is a driver. __________________________________________________________________________

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She usually makes Christmas cards at Christmas.

8．（2022·江苏无锡）你想交一个外国朋友吗？这里有三位外国小朋友，请你根据卡片信息，选择一位来了解并介绍。

要求：正确使用动词的第三人称单数形式：语句通顺、表达有条理、书写规范；不少于5句话(不含第一句)。

I want to make friends with _______. He / She __________________________________________________

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9．（2022·江苏徐州）以“After school”为题，写一篇关于你课后生活的短文，不少于五句话。要求：

1. 使用“First/ Next/ Then/ Finally”等连词；

2. 注意书写规范。

After School

I always have a lot of things to do after school.

First, ___________________________________________________________________________

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Do you think my after school life is busy?

参考答案：

1．范文：

My friend’s hobbies

Anna is my good friend. She has a lot of hobbies. She likes reading and singing. She can sing very well. She also likes dancing and she is good at it. She always has dancing lessons on Sundays.

【详解】1. 题干解读：该题目要求以“My friend’s hobbies”为题写一篇小短文，介绍朋友的兴趣爱好。题目中提示比较完整，作文大部分已给出。

2. 参考词汇与句型：

参考单词：read阅读，sing唱歌，be good at擅长，always总是

参考句型：She has ...；She (also) likes …；

2．范文：

At weekends

We are very happy at weekends. I usually play football with my friends at weekends. I sometimes go to the park with my family. We usually fly a kite and have a picnic there. My mother often cooks a big dinner for us at weekends. My father often helps her.

【详解】1.题干分析：该题目要求以At weekends为题写一篇作文，介绍你和家人周末做些什么。可以根据自己的实际情况写周末经常做的事情，如：和朋友踢足球，跟家人去公园野餐等。注意文章为一般现在时态，句子数量要符合要求。

2. 参考词汇与句型：

参考词汇：usually通常，play football踢足球，sometimes有时，go to the park去公园，fly a kite放风筝，have a picnic野餐，cook a big dinner做一顿丰盛的晚餐。

参考句型：I usually...at weekends.；I sometimes...；We usually...at weekends.；My mother often...；

【点睛】

3．范文：

My e-friend

I have a pen friend. Her name is Linda. She is tall and thin. She is thirteen years old. She is from the UK. She likes singing and dancing. She often has singing lessons and dancing lessons. She can write e-mails in Chinese. She often writes e-mails to me in Chinese.

【详解】1.题干解读：该题目要求用第三人称写出自己的笔友。然后再阐述她的年龄，身高，兴趣爱好及能力等。注意文章为一般现在时态并要符合句子数量要求。

2.参考词汇与句型：

参考单词：pen friend笔友，tall and thin又高又瘦，Chinese中文

参考句型：She is...；She likes...；She often has/writes...

4．范文:

At Christmas

I want to have a lot of fun at Christmas. First, I buy many presents and a Christmas tree. Next, I put some pretty things on the Christmas tree and put some presents under the tree. Then, Christmas Eve comes. I put a stocking on my bed and wait for my presents. Finally, it is Christmas Day. I wake up early and open my presents. I have a big dinner. I eat a big turkey and some Christmas pudding. I am very happy.

【详解】1. 题干解读：该题目要求用第一人称自己介绍圣诞节要做的事。然后再阐述首先，其次，最后要做的具体事情及感受等。注意文章为一般现在时态并要符合句子数量要求。

2. 参考词汇与句型：

参考单词：presents礼物，pretty漂亮的，Christmas Eve圣诞节前夕，stocking长筒袜，turkey火鸡，pudding布丁

参考句型：I want to...；First, I...；Next， I...；Then， I...；Finally， I ...；I am...

【点睛】

5．范文：

At weekends

It is Saturday morning. My grandfather is reading newspapers in the living room. My father is cleaning his car. My mother is cooking a meal in the kitchen. My brother is cleaning the windows. I am doing my homework in the study.

【详解】1. 题干解读：该题目要求以第一人称根据表格中的信息以“At weekends”为题写一篇短文。然后再阐述家庭各个成员正在做什么。注意文章为现在进行时态并要符合单词字数要求。

2. 参考词汇与句型：

参考单词：read newspapers看报纸，clean his car清洁他的汽车，cook a meal做饭，clean the windows擦窗户，living room客厅，kitchen厨房

参考句型：My grandfather/father/mother/brother is …； I am …；

【点睛】

6．范文:

My e-friend

I have an e-friend. Her name is Alice. She is from Australia. She is thirteen. She has small eyes. She likes reading books. She reads books ande have swimming lessons at weekends. She likes playing the piano. She plays the piano after school every day.

【详解】1.题干解读：该题目要求用第三人称写自己的笔友。然后再阐述她的年龄，外貌特征，周末活动及爱好等。注意文章为一般现在时态并要符合句子数量要求。

2.参考词汇与句型：

参考单词：Australia澳大利亚，swimming lessons游泳课，play the piano弹钢琴

参考句型：Her name is…；She is…；She has…；She likes…

7．范文：

This is Amy. She is eight years old. Her father is a driver and her mother is a nurse. Amy's favourite subjects are Chinese and Music. She likes drawing and skating. She can draw very well. She often has a picnic with this family at weekends. She usually makes Christmas cards at Christmas.

【详解】题干解读：该题目要求介绍苏海的一位新朋友。不少于五句话，所给信息不能遗漏。注意文章为一般现在时态，主语是第三人称。

参考词汇：eight八，driver司机，nurse护士，Chinese语文，Music音乐，drawing画画，skating溜冰，have a picnic野餐，make Christmas cards制作圣诞贺卡。

参考句型：She is...years old；Her favourite subjects ...；She likes...；She often...

8．范文

I want to make friends with Jack. He is from Australia. He is twelve years old. His father is a doctor, but his mother is a nurse. His favourite subjects are Maths and Science. His hobbies are drawing and going boating. Do you like him?

【详解】1. 题干分析：要求根据卡片信息，选择一位外国小朋友来了解并介绍。主要用第三人称的角度介绍，要介绍他或她的姓名、国家、年龄，父母的职业，喜欢的科目和业余爱好等。要用一般现在时，要满足句子数量要求和题干的其他要求。

2. 参考词汇和参考句型：

参考词汇：Australia澳大利亚，doctor医生，Maths数学，going boating划船。

参考句型：He is from…；His father is…；His favourite subjects are…；His hobbies are…。

9．范文：

After School

I always have a lot of things to do after school. I like playing basketball. First, I play basketball on the playground. Next, I usually draw in the park with my friends. Then I go home for dinner. Finally, I play the piano for an hour.

Do you think my after school life is busy?

【详解】1. 题干解读：该题目要求用第一人称写出自己的课后生活。注意文章为一般现在时态并要符合句子数量要求。

2. 参考词汇与句型：

参考单词：play basketball打篮球，in the playground在操场上，draw画画，friends朋友，go home回家，play the piano弹钢琴

参考句型：First I ...；Next I ...；Then I ...；Finally I ...；I play … in the …； I usually …