高考英语书面表达——亲情篇

一、亲情有关的情绪描写：1、亲情有关的开心描写：1. “我想给你一个惊喜！”他指向一个包装精美的盒子，眼里闪烁着光芒。（with结构）（2021.4 湖丽衢三地联考）“I wanted to surprise you!” he pointed at a neatly wrapped box with his eyes gleaming.2.看到他的家人围坐着，和谐地待在一起，卡特感觉到一种幸福感。（doing非谓语）（2021.4 湖丽衢三地联考）Seeing his families sitting together and staying together harmoniously, Cater felt a surge of happiness.欢快的歌唱飘荡在房间里，两姐妹沉浸在音乐的美中。（独立主格）（2020.11温州一模） Cheerful singing floating in the room, the two sisters immersed themselves in the beauty of the music.  一股幸福与温暖流遍全身，妈妈轻轻地亲了两个姐妹。（2020.11温州一模）A surge of happiness and warmth running through her, mom kissed the two sisters gently .  他抬起头，跑去拿来红色的小车，递给Carter，脸上展现着灿烂的笑容。（2021.4 湖丽衢三地联考）He rose his head, bounced to fetch the red car, and handed to Cater with a big smile spread across her face. 2、亲情有关的紧张描写：1. However, in the face of her son’s nervous eyes（面对他儿子充满紧张的双眼） and the suspicious looks of the other family members, Ben’s mother remained calm.（2021年广一模）2. 很快就到演出时间了。我偷偷向外，看着观众，黑暗的剧院里挤满了人。我的心跳得更快了。（2021年南通市二模）Soon, it was the curtain time. I peeked out at the audience and noticed that the darkened theater was full. My heart beat faster.  3、亲情有关的母亲平静的描写：灯光+脸上的表情 1. In the study, calmly bathed in the light, his mother's face showed no sign of anger（没有一点生气的迹象）. （2021年广一模） 4、亲情有关的惊讶描写：1.Astonished as he was at her reward instead of harsh scold,, （尽管Ben对她的奖励而不是严厉的责骂感到震惊，倒装句）, Ben reluctantly received it, not daring to fix his eyes on his mother’s.（2021 广一模）5、亲情有关的生气描写：1. 我妈妈瞪着我，这是在我有一个重组家庭之前她从未做过的事。 “你可以捡起来的。”她说。“那才对。”（本可以，虚拟语气）（2021年南通市二模）My mother glanced at me. Something she never did before I had a stepfamily. “You could have picked it up. ” she said. “That would have been the kind thing to do.”他生气地握紧拳头，但是弟弟却激动地挥着手。（2021.4 湖丽衢三地联考）He folded his fist angrily, but his younger brother waved his hands excitedly.3.Jackson试着说什么，但Carter太生气了，他一个字也听不进去。（对比，夸张）（2021.4 湖丽衢三地联考）Jackson kept saying something, but so angry was Carter that he couldn’t even hear a word .  4. 红色小汽车映入他的眼帘，他突然被生气和愤怒的情绪淹没。（被动）（2021.4 湖丽衢三地联考）With the bright red car coming into his sight, he was suddenly overwhelmed with a feeling of anger and rage.他从来没想过他弟弟会把他的模型车涂成红色。（倒装）（2021.4 湖丽衢三地联考）Never before in his life could he imagined that his brother would paint his model car.Cater咬紧牙，紧紧握住他的拳头，用难以控制的着火般的眼睛怒视着Jackson（doing非谓语）（2021.4 湖丽衢三地联考）Cater clenched his teeth and fold his fist tightly, glaring at Jackson with burning eyes out of control.  6、亲情有关的后悔描写：1. 我意识到我裙子上的蝴蝶结打得很不好。我本应该请妈妈帮忙的。（2021年南通市二模）I realized how poorly I tied the string on my skirt which was over leggings. I should have asked mom for help. 7、亲情有关的内疚描写：一想到我对他所做的一切，遗憾和内疚就像没休止的潮水一样向我袭来。（2021年南通市二模）Thinking about what I had done to him, regret and guilt overwhelmed me like endless tides. 每当我想到亨利湿了的书，我的脸都会变红了。（2021年南通市二模）Whenever I thought of Henry’s wet book, my face turned red.  8、亲情有关的感激描写：1. 如果没有亨利的帮助，我就不会顺利地完成我的演出了。（2021年南通市二模）But for Henry’s help, I wouldn’t have finished my performance smoothly. 2. I looked at her, tears of love and gratitude welling(well) up in my eyes.(独立主格结构)（2021年沈阳市一模）3. Afterwards, it was my turn to give a small lecture,in which I expressed my sincere gratitude to my mom and friends, bowing(bow) to them several times. （定语从句，非谓语）（2021年沈阳市一模） 9、亲情有关的烦恼描写：Watching Shirley’s smile fading away, Peter frowned(frown).（2020-2021年汕头市高三第一学期质量监测） 10、亲情有关的伤心描写：当她望过她三岁妹妹的桌子时，Amanda感觉她的心情像天空一样灰暗。（比喻）（2020.11温州一模）Amanda felt as gray as the sky outside when she looked across the table at her three-year-old sister.  11、亲情有关的害怕描写：Li一看到Amanda靠近，她的眼睛就会睁大，从椅子中跳下来，然后跑到她的房间。（2020.11温州一模）As soon as Li saw Amanda reaching over, her eyes widened. She jumped down from her seat and raced to her room.  12、亲情有关的兴奋描写：1. 一年前，当Amanda的父母说他们收养了来自中国的女儿，Amanda兴奋地跳起舞来。（2020.11温州一模）Over a year ago, Amanda’s parents said that they were adopting a daughter from China, and Amanda had danced with excitement. 2.Sheer excitement radiating from her lightened cheeks(她那明亮的脸颊散发出无比的兴奋)，Amanda searched her souvenirs from China thoroughly for a doll which could sing Chinese songs. （2020.11温州一模）    二、亲情类有关的动作描写：1、亲情类有关的表示犯错的动作描写To cover his terrible action（为了掩盖他糟糕的行为，不定式作状语）, the terrified boy glued the pieces together hastily and put the vase back to its place.（2021 广一模）Fearing punishment（害怕惩罚，现在分词作状语）, the suddenly inspired boy said that a neighbour’s cat jumped in from the window and he couldn’t drive it away no matter how hard he tried.（2021 广一模）Glancing at the chocolates with hesitation,(犹豫地看着着巧克力,非谓语), the boy timidly raised his head before his mother. （2021 广一模）4. 时间似乎静止了，我屏住呼吸，等待着我应得的残酷惩罚。 （用系动词+ing作伴随状语 ；定语从句。（2021 广一模）Time seemed to stop as I held my breath, waiting for the harsh punishments that I deserved.   2、亲情类有关的表示道歉的动作描写1.“对不起，”他说到，轻轻的摸摸Jackson的头。（2021.4 湖丽衢三地联考）“I’m so sorry.”he said, gently petting Jackson’s head.2.他放下手，小心翼翼的看了Carter 一眼，然后低下了头。（动作链）（2021.4 湖丽衢三地联考）He put down his hand, glanced cautiously at Carter and lowered his head.3.To her surprise, she smiled at me and expressed her apology for ignoring my loneliness （为她忽略我的孤独道歉）as well as my difficulty with English communication.（2021年沈阳市一模）Approaching his little brother（走近他的弟弟）, he gently petted Jackson’s head, saying, ”I’m so sorry for losing my temper, because I preferred blue at first, but now I think red is also a good choice. ” （2021.4 湖丽衢三地联考） 3、亲情类有关的表示原谅的动作描写1. 他妈妈把手指放在他嘴唇让他停止说话，在他额头上吻了一下，然后走出了书房。（动作链）（2021 广一模）His mother silenced him by gently putting her finger on his lips，gave a soft kiss on his forehead and walked out of the study.  4、亲情类有关的表示帮助的动作描写1.就在这时，Henry注意到我的尴尬，前来帮助我。他帮我擦去眼泪，弯下腰来，为我系了一个漂亮的蝴蝶结。“搞定。”（动作链）（2021年南通市二模）At that time, Henry, who noticed my embarrassment, came to my aid. He wiped away my tears, bent down and tied a beautiful knot. “It’s done.”2.Henry轻轻拍拍我的肩膀/耸耸肩（V-ing），笑着对我说：“没什么。我们是一家人，不是吗？”（2021年南通市二模）Patting me gently on my shoulder / Shrugging his shoulder, he smiled/ grinned, "Not a problem. We are family, aren't we?"3.演出一结束，我就冲到亨利身边，紧紧地拥抱着他，向他表示感谢。（2021年南通市二模）The instant the performance was over, I rushed to Henry, huggedhim tightly and said thanks to him. 4.He tiptoed(踮起脚尖) to reach for the doll, and like a responsible elder brother, gave the precious doll to Shirley.（2020-2021年汕头市高三第一学期质量监测）What’s more, my mom even invited my friends home to learn English, play games and taste delicious food cooked(cook) by herself, making(make) us feel involved in the new life.（非谓语） （2021年沈阳市一模） 5、亲情类有关的表示尴尬的动作描写1. “But, Mum, I…”, attempting to make something clear, Ben awkwardly uttered nothing but some words（尴尬地挤出几个字）. （2021 广一模）2. 我想去系好带子，但是无论我怎么努力我都没办法弄好。我站在舞台上不知所措, 泪水夺眶而出.（2021年南通市二模）I wanted to fasten the knot, but however hard I tried, I just couldn’t make it.  Standing on the stage, I was at a loss what to do next（茫然不知所措）, with tears rolling down.  6、亲情类有关的表示回忆的动作描写1. 在这时，毫无预料地，Carter突然想起Billy躺在地上哭的回忆，一直在他脑海回旋，提醒着他一些事情。（无灵主语句；doing非谓语；and连接两个同时进行的动作）（2021.4 湖丽衢三地联考）At that moment, unexpectedly, the memory of the sight of Billy crying on the ground occurred to Carter, hovering in his mind and reminding him something .2.看着Jackson，Carter忍不住想象他的弟弟花整天小心涂好那辆车的情景。（2021.4 湖丽衢三地联考）Looking at Jackson, Carter couldn’t help imagining his little brother spending the whole day carefully painting the car.（2021.4 湖丽衢三地联考）3. “I just wish I knew how to help her,” Amanda said to herself, thinking of Li’s frightened eyes（想到Li害怕的双眼）. （2020.11温州一模） 7、亲情类有关的动作描写1. 我在房间里慢慢地准备和家人一起去社区剧院（V-ing伴随）。我还没有心情登上舞台。（2021年南通市二模）I was in my room slowly getting ready to head to the community theater with the rest of my family. I wasn't in the mood for being onstage.2. 我发现我妈妈在浴室外面，拿着一本湿漉漉的书（V-ing伴随）。（2021年南通市二模）I found my mom outside the bathroom, holding a wet book. 3. 当亨利走在我们前面，往车走去时，妈妈把我拉到一边。（时间状语从句）（2021年南通市二模）As Henry walked ahead of ours to the car, my mom took me aside. 4.“Surprise!” his brother Jackson said, throwing his arms (挥舞着手臂) into the air.（2021.4 湖丽衢三地联考）5. Dexter was yelling(喊叫) and waving his hands at(向...挥舞着手) his little brother. （2021.4 湖丽衢三地联考）Dexter yelled(喊叫), gave his younger brother a hard shove(给...狠狠一幢) and knocked him to the ground(撞倒在地).（2021.4 湖丽衢三地联考）“Make a wish,” my mom said in a sweet whisper(温声细语的说). （2021年沈阳市一模） 三、亲情类话题的结尾句1、亲情类话题结尾的主题升华句1. From then on, the three chocolates rang the alarm in his heart every time he intended to lie, reminding him to be honest提醒他要诚实(非谓语).（2021 广一模）2. I nodded firmly, knowing a flower of kindness and friendship began to blossom（善良和友谊之花开放） in both of our hearts.（2021年南通市二模）3.This experience transformed my attitude towards Henry and our relationship has also been harmonious（我们的关系变得和谐） since then.（2021年南通市二模）4. 正是亨利的善良让我感受到了我们家庭的温暖。我会用心珍惜它的。（2021年南通市二模）It was Henry’s kindness that made me feel the warmth from our family. I will treasure it with all my heart.  2、亲情类话题结尾的感悟式结尾：1.All Ben's pride and selfishness went away and it dawned on him that “Honesty is the best policy.”（他突然想到“诚实是最好的做法”）（2021 广一模）2.It was then that I came to the realization that families are not bonded by blood relationships but by love（家人不是由于血缘而是因为爱联结在一起）.（2021年南通市二模）3.From then on, I came to know a truth --- the string knot on the skirt could go untied but the family knot couldn’t and never（家庭的联结永远不会散开）.（2021年南通市二模）4.The brightness in his brother’s eyes （他弟弟眼里的光亮）was more valuable than the color of the car. （2021.4 湖丽衢三地联考）5.It was Amanda's persistence and love for her sister that brought about such a harmonious and sweet family scene(和谐甜美的场面).（2020.11温州一模）    3、亲情类话题结尾的常见对话结尾1. His mum said, “My son, honesty values more than any antique(诚实比任何古董都有价值).” （2021 广一模）2.Watching the lovely kids until they were out of sight, he continued, "When he grows up, he will remember he purchased a doll for his sister with the shells from a shopkeeper. He will cherish love and warmth in life(珍惜生命的爱和温暖)--cherish every little shining sea shell in his heart.（2020-2021年汕头市高三第一学期质量监测）3. “Darling, it doesn’t matter”, Daddy said in such a warm voice that I stopped crying and lifted my head. “It's love that counts(爱更重要).” （2021浙江省“七彩阳光”新高考研究联盟期中联考） 4、亲情类话题结尾的自然结尾1. I put my right arm around his neck, and we laughter together. We are real family(真正的家庭) now.（2021年南通市二模）2. At the same time, all of them laughed with excitement, the laughter echoing in the room(在房间里回荡).  （2020.11温州一模）    5、亲情类话题结尾的环境衬托式结尾1. Outside the window, the birds perching on the top of the branches chirruped happily(开心地唧唧叫), as if celebrating his wise choice.（2021 广一模）2. A golden shaft of sunlight(一大片金黄的阳光) , filtering in through the window and, together with love between family members, warmed up two young souls.（2020.11温州一模）  6、亲情类话题结尾的展望未来式结尾：Many years have passed, but the valuable lesson Ben's mum taught him about honesty will remain in his memory(留在他的记忆里).（2021 广一模）Maybe it won’t be so bad to have a new person in my corner of the world(我世界的角落) after all.（2021年南通市二模）虽然我们不是血亲，但我们之间的关系甚至比那更紧密。（2021年南通市二模）Although we are not blood relatives,the tie between us is even stronger than that. 7、亲情类话题结尾的回首反思式结尾：Looking back(回想起来), Ben congratulated himself on making the right decision, which was taught by his mother with several chocolates. （2021 广一模）       8、亲情类话题结尾的原文呼应式结尾：1. Radiant laughter burst out from the room constantly, and the whole family was enveloped in overwhelming happiness(包围在强烈的幸福中). （2020.11温州一模） 2. From then on, Amanda and Li embarked on(开始) a life as Amanda imagined——going to park together, reading books together. （2020.11温州一模）