08. 应用文 - 日记，书信+电子邮件 备战2023年中考英语书面表达（写作步骤+满分范文+词句积累）

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备战2023年中考英语书面表达
（写作步骤+满分范文+词句积累）
第三章 应用文
日记+书信+电子邮件
应用文是人们在生活、学习、工作中为处理实际事务,有着实用性特点,并形成惯用格式的文章。它最主要的特点是应用性特别广泛,包括便条、通知、日记、书信等。除此以外,应用写作时还要着重注意以下三个方面：
1.明确写作目的.
应用文是目的性特别强的文章,不同的应用文会有不同的目的.因而,在写作时,要清楚地知道这篇应用文是为何目的而写的。
2.遵循格式要求.
应用文写作有着严格的格式要求,不同的应用文类型还会有所不同.在写作之前,要先弄清不同的应用文的格式要求。
3.注意时间的明确.
应用文是在一定的时期内起作用的文章,因而在应用文中,时间要素的明确显得尤为重要。

Part 3日记
写法点拨
日记主要用来记录一天所经历的主要事情和过程,并表达自己的感受.英文日记的写作,要注意以下三个方面：
1.格式要正确.在写日记正文之前,要依次有日期、星期及当天的天气情况.
2.表达要清楚、准确、连贯.判断的标准就是通过阅读你的日记,看能否用简洁明了的英语把一天之中发生的事情以及你的感受准确无误地表达出来.日记记录的事情通常是已经发生了的,故常用一般过去时.
3.文体要口语化.因为日记是写给自己看的,其内容多是记述自己亲身经历和亲眼看到的事或抒发自己的感情等,所以用第一人称写,把该写的东西写清楚即可.

必备词汇
1 月份
January一月
February二月
March三月
April四月
May五月
June六月
July七月
August八月
September九月
October十月
November十一月
December十二月
2 天气情况
sunny晴朗的
cool凉爽的
cold寒冷的
rainy下雨的
windy大风的
cloudy多云的
snowy下雪的
foggy多雾的
3 描述心情
joyful欢喜的
excited激动的
delighted高兴的
pleased开心的
satisfied满意的
comfortable舒适的
bright明亮的
terrible糟糕的
horrible恐惧的
frightened害怕的

必备句型
1 开头部分
(1) It was the first day of our winter holiday.这是我们寒假的第一天.
(2) One of my father's friends invited me to have a picnic today.今天,我爸爸的一个朋友邀请我去野餐.
(3) On this weekend, my brother and I decided to help my mother with the housework.
这个周末,我弟弟和我决定去帮助我妈妈做家务活.
(4) Today, I realized that time was a very cruel thing.今天,我意识到时间是非常残忍的一样东西.
(5) Today, our school had an opening ceremony in the school auditorium.
今天,我们学校在学校礼堂举办了开学典礼.
2 中间部分
(1) It seemed to be an easy task for us, but later we had a hard time finishing it.
它看起来像是一项容易的任务,但之后我们经历一段艰苦的时期才完成它.
(2) I spent the whole day sweeping the floor and washing the clothes.我花了一整天来扫地、洗衣服.
(3)Those red buildings and those green trees formed a beautiful picture.
那些红色的建筑物和绿色的树木构成了一幅美丽的图画.
(4)The night view was so beautiful that we all didn't want to go home.夜景是如此漂亮,我们都不想回家了.
3 结束部分
(1) I will be more diligent in this semester.这个学期我准备更加勤奋地学习.
(2) We will treasure it at the bottom of our hearts.我们会把它珍藏在我们的内心深处.
(3)What a nice day!多么美好的一天！
(4)I was so moved by his speech.我被他的演讲深深感动了.
(5) I did enjoy that game.我非常喜欢那个游戏.

美文引路
题目：请根据下面的内容提示,写一篇不少于80词的英文日记,文章必须包括所有提示要点,可以适当扩充细节.
内容提示：
1.5月2日,星期天,你和几位同学去参观动物园.
2.你们坐了半小时的公共汽车才抵达那里.
3.天气很好,游客很多.
4.你们喜欢那里的大象.
5.碰到了几位外国朋友,聊了一会儿.
6.中午才回家.
思路导航
第1步：例文审题
主体人称
题目要求以日记形式描述“我”和朋友去动物园的经过,故主体人称应为第一人称“I”.
主体时态
由于题目里要求描述的事情是已经发生了的,故主体时态用一般过去时.
写作贴士

题目里列出了6个要点,写作时要囊括所有要点,并进行适当扩充,以使文章逻辑连贯；注意文章词数要求,不得少于80词.
第2步：列提纲
(1)开篇点题,概述整体情况；
(2)描述在动物园游玩的经过；
(3)表达你的心情和感受.
第3步：参考词句
(1) visit the zoo; classmate; by bus...
(2) be full of; crowded; pavement; interesting; be interested in; talk with; get home...
(3) have a wonderful time...
第4步：连句成篇
May 2,Sunday Fine
Today I visited the zoo with several classmates. It took us half an hour to get there by bus.
When we got there, the zoo was already full of people. It was very crowded on the pavements. There were many animals in the zoo. They were very interesting, and we were especially interested in elephants. They were very big, So they moved clumsily. We also talked with some foreign tourists in English. When we got home, it was time for lunch.
I really had a wonderful time today.
参考译文
5月2日,星期天 天气晴朗
今天我和几个同学去了动物园.我们坐了半个小时的公交车才到达那里.
当我们到达那里的时候,公园里已经有很多人了.人行道上非常拥挤.动物园里有很多动物.它们非常有趣,我们尤其对大象感兴趣.它们很大,所以它们移动时很笨拙.我们也和一些外国人用英语交谈了一下.当我们回家时,已经是午饭时间了.
我今天过得很愉快.


范文1
May 31,Friday Fine
Today, I saw something unpleasant on the bus.
On my way home on the bus, I saw an old man get on. He was carrying a big thing. I gave my seat to the old man at once. However, a young man standing nearby sat down immediately. So the old man had to stand. After a while, the young man took out a bottle of water, drank it up and threw the empty bottle on the floor.
When I saw this, I got very angry. I think the young man should not only respect and take care of the old man but also keep the environment clean.
参考译文
5月31日,星期五 天气晴朗今天,我在公共汽车上看到一些令人不愉快的事情.在回家的公交车上,我看见一位老人上了车.他拿着一
件大的东西.我马上给这个老人让座.然而,一位站在旁边的年轻男子马上坐了下来.所以这位老人只能站着.过
了一会,年轻男子拿出了一瓶水,喝完后将空瓶子扔在了地上.
当我看到这一幕时,我非常愤怒.我认为这个年轻男子不仅应该尊重和照顾老人,还应该保持环境整洁.
亮点词汇
1 unpleasant /adj.使人不愉快的
2 get on 上车
3 have to必须；不得不
4 take out拿出来；取出来
5 respect /v.尊重
出彩句型
1 I saw something...我看见一些东西······
2 I saw sb. do sth.我看见某人做某事.
3 I gave my seat to the old man.我将座位让给这个老人.
4 When I saw...,I got very angry.当我看见·.·,我非常生气.
5 I think the young man should not only... , but also...我认为这个年轻男子不仅要······,还要···..·
高分点评
本文以日期、星期、天气等作为文章的开头部分,是一篇规范的英文日记.文中主要记叙了年轻男子占位、乱扔垃圾的事情,表达了作者对其的无限愤慨.文中的动作描写非常出色,如句子“The young man took out a bottle of water, drank it up and threw the bottle on the floor”就如同将当时的场景再现了一般,展现了作者扎实的语言基础.

范文2
May 10th,Sunday Rainy
Today is Mother's Day. I prepared a lot of surprises for my mother.
In the morning, I bought some flowers with my pocket money and put them in the vase. In the afternoon, I cooked a simple but delicious dinner for my family. After supper, I sang a love song for my mother and said “Happy Mother's Day” to her. Then I told her to take good care of herself and have a rest sometimes. I also promised to study harder and harder and to get good grades. Hearing my words, my mother was moved to tears.
Today is a special day. It's warm and meaningful.
参考译文
5月10日,星期天 雨
今天是母亲节.我为妈妈准备了很多惊喜.
早上,我用零花钱买了一些花,将它们放到了花瓶里.下午,我为家人煮了一顿简单又美味的晚餐.晚饭后,我为妈妈唱了一首情歌,并且跟她说“母亲节快乐”.然后我告诉她要好好照顾她自己,有时候也要休息一下.我也承诺要好好学习,取得好成绩.听到我的话后,妈妈感动得流下了眼泪.
今天是特别的一天,温暖又有意义.
亮点词汇
1 prepare /v.准备
2 surprise /n.惊喜
3 pocket money 零花钱
4 promise/v.承诺；许诺
5 get good grades 取得好成绩
6 meaningful有意义的
出彩句型
1 I cooked a dinner for...我为······煮了一顿晚饭.
2 I sang a love song for...我为······唱了一首情歌.
3 I told her to do sth.我告诉她要做某事.
4 I promised to do sth.我承诺做某事.
5 My mother was moved to tears.我的妈妈感动得流下了眼泪.
高分点评
本文是一篇格式规范的日记,包含开头各要素－日期、星期和天气,记述了母亲节时为妈妈庆祝节日的经过,蕴含着作者深深的情感.本文出色的另一个原因在于动词短语的使用,如“cook...for...”“sing a love song for...”＂promise to do sth.”等.
Part 4 书信
写法点拨
书信,分为倡议书、感谢信、申请信等类别,写作时要注意以下几点：
1.称呼.称呼就是对收信人的称谓.从左边顶格写,占一行.称呼一般在人名前加Dear,如 Dear Mary, Dear Mr Gao, Dear Miss Li等.
2.正文.正文是书信的主要部分.正文从称呼下隔一行开始,开头空4个字母的位置.正文的开始部分和结束部分通常是一些固定套语.
3.结束语和签名.结束语写在正文下方的2-3行的位置,从信纸中央偏右的地方写起.一般用Yours,后加逗号,然后另起一行,写上写信人的姓名.签名通常要低于结束语一两行,也是从信纸中央偏右的地方开始写起.

必备词汇
1 常用结束语
Yours sincerely您真诚的
Yours truly您忠实的
Yours faithfully您忠实的
Yours ever你永久的朋友
Your loving granddaughter你亲爱的外孙女

2 提出建议
advise建议
suggest建议
demand要求
require要求
request请求
propose提议
Call for呼吁
recommend提倡
3表达感谢
thank感谢
appreciate感激
grateful感激的
repay回报

必备句型
1 书信开头常用语
(1) I'm very excited to learn that you will come to my home next week.知道你下周要来我家做客,我非常高兴.
(2)How are you getting along with your classmates recently?你最近和你的同学相处得怎么样?
(3) Now I tell you what I am going to do in the vacation.现在我要告诉你我假期将要做什么.
(4) I'm writing to express my interest in your company.我写信来是表达我对你的公司感兴趣.
(5) How is everything going on with you?你一切都顺利吗?
(6) I'd like to tell you something about...我想要告诉你一些关于······的事情.
(7) Here is the information about...这是关于······的信息.
(8) I'm glad/happy/pleased to receive your letter.收到你的来信,我非常高兴.
2书信结尾常用语
(1)I’m looking forward to your letter.我期待你的回信.
(2)I will never forget those days that we spent together.我不会忘记我们在一起度过的那些日子.
(3) I wish you to have a happy holiday. 我希望你有一个愉快的假期.
(4) Hope to see you again.希望再次见到你.
(5)As the season grows colder, I hope you will take good care of yourself.
天气越来越冷了,我希望你可以照顾好你自己.
3 祝福语
(1) Please give my best wishes to your parents.请转告你的父母我对他们最好的祝福.
(2) Best wishes/regards to...最好的祝福给··...
(3)I wish you a happy New Year.我祝你新年快乐.
(4) I congratulate you upon your success.我祝贺你成功.
(5) I wish you still further success.我希望你可以更加成功.

美文引路
题目:学校广播台开辟了“Thank you letter”英语专栏.假设你叫 Chen Feng,你想在初中三年生活即将结束之际,向你的同学Lin Wei 表达一下感谢之情.请按下面的要求给你的同学 Lin Wei 写一封感谢信,词数不得少于80词.
要求：1.简述感谢的原因：
2.适当举例说明Lin Wei 对你的帮助；
3.谈谈自己的感受或想法、
思路导航
第1步：例文审题
主体人称
题目要求写一封感谢信,以表达“我”对同学的感谢之情,故主体人称应为第一人称“I”.
主体时态

由于题目里要求举例说明Lin Wei对“我”的帮助,这是就过去的事情进行阐述,故主体时态用一般过去时.
写作贴士

文章给出了三大叙述要点,写作时要围绕其展开；要点2要求举例说明,写作时尤其要注意例子的生动性和典型性.
第2步：列提纲
(1)简单描述感谢的原因；
(2)举例子说明Lin Wei对“我”的帮助；
(3)表达自己的看法和感受.
第3步：参考词句
(1) thank you; at the end of; helpful; each other...
(2)forget; catch a high fever; stay at home; worry about; catch up with; close friends...
(3) different; success...
第4步：连句成篇
Dear Lin Wei,
I would like to thank you at the end of middle school life. You have been very kind and helpful since we knew each other.
I will never forget that you have given me so much help. Last semester, I caught a high fever and had to stay at home for a week. When I was worrying about my lessons, you came to my home after school and helped me with every subject. With your help, I caught up with the others. Since then, we have been close friends.
Thank you again. Even though we may go to different schools, we' ll be friends forever. I wish you success in the future.
Yours,
Chen Feng
参考译文
亲爱的林薇：
在初中生活即将结束之际我想向你表达我的谢意.自从我们认识以来,你一直非常友好,给了我很大的帮助.
我将永远不会忘记你给了我很大的帮助.上个学期,我发高烧,必须在家待一个星期.当我担心功课的时候,你放学后来到我家,帮助我学习每一门课.在你的帮助下,我跟上了其他同学.从那以后,我们成为了亲密的朋友.
再次感谢你.尽管我们可能会去不同的学校,我们将永远是朋友.我希望你以后取得成功.
你的,
陈风

普通书信
范文1
Dear Tracy,
I'm glad that you'll come to Guangzhou to learn Chinese. Chinese is very useful, but you will find it a little difficult because Chinese is quite different from English. You have to remember as many Chinese characters as possible. It's also important to do lots of reading and writing. Watching TV and listening to the radio will be helpful to your listening. You can learn Chinese not only from books but also from people around you. For example, you can talk with your Chinese neighbors in Chinese. If you have any question, please ask me. I'm sure you' ll learn Chinese well.
Hope to see you soon in Guangzhou.
Yours,
Xiao Ming
参考译文
亲爱的特蕾西：
我很高兴你将要来广州学习中文.中文非常有用,但是你会发现它有点难,因为中文和英文有很多的不同.你必须记住尽可能多的汉字.做大量的阅读和写作也很重要.看电视和听广播会对你的听力有帮助.你不仅可以从书本学习中文,还可以向身边的人学习中文.例如,你可以用中文和你的中国邻居交谈.如果你有任何的问题,请向我询问.我相信你会学好中文的.
期望不久后在广州见到你.
你的,
肖明
亮点词汇
1 useful /adj.有用的
2 (be) different from...与······不同
3 Chinese character 汉字
4 listen to the radio 听广播
5 be helpful to...对···.··有帮助
6 for example 例如
出彩句型
1 I'm glad that...我很高兴···...
2 You will find it...你会发现···...
3 It's also important to...做······也很重要.
4 You can learn...not only from...but also from...你不仅可以从·····学习·,还可以从····学习·....·
5 If you have any question, please ask me.如果你有任何问题,请向我询问.
高分点评
本文主要记述了给外国朋友学习中文的一些建议,叙述有条有理,逻辑连贯.规范的书信写作应包含称呼、开头套语、正文、祝福语、结束语和署名等部分,这些在本文也有所体现.本文使用了一系列提出建议的句型,如“You have to...”“It's also important to...”等,使文章内容更丰富并具有条理性.

范文2
Dear Tony,
I have just received your letter. I am really excited that you are going to come to China to see me. In your letter, you asked my suggestions about your travel plan. I strongly advise you to go to Beijing and Guangzhou. There are many places of interest in Beijing, like the Palace Museum, the Great Wall. Guangzhou is famous for its delicious food. You can have a general understanding of China by visiting these two places.
I hope you will enjoy your trip in China. I am looking forward to your coming.
Yours ever,
Chen Jie
参考译文
亲爱的托尼：
我刚刚收到了你的来信.知道你将要来中国看我,我非常激动.在你的信中,你问我关于你的旅行计划的建议.我强烈建议你去北京和广州.北京有很多名胜古迹,比如故官、长城.广州因它的美食而著名.通过参观这两个地方,你可以对中国有个全面的了解.
我希望你可以享受在中国的旅程.我期待你的到来.
你永远的朋友,
陈洁
亮点词汇
1 receive one's letter收到某人的来信
2 suggestion /n.建议
3 travel plan 旅行计划
4 be famous for...因······而著名
5 general/adj.一般的,大体的
出彩句型
1 I am really excited that...我对······感到激动.
2 You asked my suggestions about...你询问我关于······的建议.
3 I strongly advise you to...我强烈建议你去······
4 ... is famous for...······因·····而著名.
5 Yon can have a general understanding of...你可以对······有个大致的了解.
高分点评
这是一篇回信,作者在信中回复了对朋友旅游计划的建议,格式符合规范要求,语气亲切而友善.文章词句使用地道,读起来流畅连贯,如句型“I am really excited about that...”“I strongly advise you to...”,显示了作者扎实的语言功底.

倡议书
范文1
Dear Students,
As we know, safety is the most important thing in our lives. So we should try our best to keep our safety.
Firstly, we mustn't bring restricted knives or things to our school because these things may cause serious problems. Besides, do not have a bath in rivers or ponds without our parents' permission. And we should be friendly to others, so fighting is strongly banned. Moreover, we should always pay attention to the traffic on our way to school or home. Furthermore, if we meet some emergency, we must call for help from the police or our teachers.
In a word, it is very important for us to keep the safety rules above.
Yours,
Wang Qiang
参考译文
亲爱的同学们：
正如我们所知,安全是我们生活中最重要的东西.所以我们应该尽可能地保证我们自己的安全.
首先,我们不能带管制刀具或管制物品到学校,因为这些物品可能会造成严重的问题.除此以外,没有父母的允许,不要在湖泊或池塘里洗澡.我们应该对别人友好,所以打架是被强烈禁止的.还有,我们在上学或回家的路上,要注意交通安全.还有就是,如果我们遇到紧急情况,我们一定要向警察或我们的老师寻求帮助.
总而言之,遵守以上的安全规则对我们来说很重要.
你的,
王强
亮点词汇
1 safety/n.安全
2 try our best to...尽我们最大的努力··....
3 restricted /adj.受限制的
4 permission /n.许可；允许
5 ban /v.禁止
出彩句型
1 As we know,...就我们所知,··...·
2 These things may cause serious problems.这些东西可能会造成严重的后果.
3 We should be friendly to...我们应该对·····友好.
4 We should pay attention to...我们应该注意······
5 We must call for help from...我们一定要向······寻求帮助.
高分点评
本文从学生的安全问题入手,选题具有创新性,贴近学生们的生活,与学生们息息相关.在倡议方面,文章以有条理的逻辑顺序,提出了几项具有实用性的倡议.文章使用了较多精彩的句型,如“We should pay attention to...”“We must call help from...”等,具有很大的可鉴性.

范文2
Dear Friends,
In order to make the environment more beautiful, we should do everything we can to protect it. Firstly, we should plant more trees and flowers to make our city more beautiful. And always remember not to throw rubbish or pour waste water everywhere. As we all know, water is becoming less and less. So it's quite necessary to save water. For example, turn the tap off after washing. At last, we'd better ride a bike or take the bus when going out instead of driving a car.
In my opinion, if everyone tries his best to protect the environment, our city will become nicer and cleaner!
Yours,
Chen Liang
参考译文
亲爱的朋友：
为了使我们的环境更加美丽,我们应该尽我们所能来保护它.首先,我们应该种更多的树和花,来让我们的城市更加美丽.切记不要随处倒垃圾或废水.正如我们所知道的,水(资源)越来越少了.所以节水相当有必要.例如,洗手之后要关掉水龙头.最后,我们外出时最好骑自行车或乘坐公共汽车,而不是开车.
就我看来,如果每个人都尽力去保护环境,我们的城市将会变得更漂亮、更干净.
你的,
陈亮
亮点词汇
1 protect /v.保护
2 throw rubbish 扔垃圾
3 less and less 越来越少
4 turn off关掉
5 instead of而不是；相反
6 in my opinion 就我看来
出彩句型
1 In order to...,we should...为了···,我们应该··....
2 Always remember not to...记住不要......
3 As we all know,...正如我们所知道的,....
4 It's quite necessary to.........是相当有必要的.
5 We'd better...我们最好·.....
6 Our city will become nicer and cleaner!我们的城市将会变得更漂亮、更干净.
高分点评
本文抓住保护环境这一主题展开,这和我们的生活息息相关,从而拉近了与读者的距离.文章语言朴素简洁,通俗易懂,增加了倡议的力度.文中的句型丰富多彩,如祈使句“Always remember not to...”＂It's quite necessary to...”等,增加了文章的风采.


感谢信
范文1
Dear Father,
The Father's Day is coming and I would like to say “Happy Father's Day” to you.
To support our family, you have to work very hard. Sometimes you are so busy that you can't even get home to have a meal. I feel very grateful for what you have done. I am very sorry that I can't spend that day with you at home. Please don't worry about me, for I will take care of myself at school. By the way, I am doing very well in my study.
Anyway, I hope you will have a wonderful Father' s Day.
Your son,
Mai Liang
参考译文
亲爱的爸爸：
父亲节就要到了,我想对您说“父亲节快乐”.
为了养活我们的家,您必须努力工作.有时候您忙得甚至不能回家吃饭.我非常感激您所做的一切.我非常抱歉不能在家和您过这个节日.不要担心我,我在学校会照顾好自己的.顺便提一下,我现在的学习非常好.
无论如何,我希望您可以过一个很棒的父亲节.
您的儿子,
麦亮
亮点词汇
1 support /v.养活,供养；支持；支撑
2 have a meal 吃饭
3 grateful /adj.感激的；感谢的
4 worry about 担心；担忧
5 by the way 顺便提一下
6 anyway /adv:无论如何；不管怎样
出彩句型
1 I would like to say...to...我想要对······说···..·
2 You are so busy that...你是如此忙碌,以至于······
3 I feel very grateful for...我对······非常感激.
4 I am very sorry that...我很抱歉······
5 I am doing very well in... 我在······上做得很好.
高分点评
本文以感谢信的方式,对爸爸为家庭所做的一切表达了感谢之意,饱含着对爸爸的浓浓深情.文章思路清晰,语气和缓并富有深情.作者有着扎实的英文运用功底,这都体现在文章各式各样的句式中,如“so...that...”“I am very sorry that...”等.

范文2
Dear the anonymous schoolmate,
I don't get your name, but I want to express my sincere gratitude to you.
Yesterday, I lost my school card on the playground. I didn't realize it until l got home after class. I was so upset, because it would be bothersome to register another one. But today, when I got to school ,the school guard told me that someone picked up my card and gave it to him. I was so excited to hear the news. You did not leave your name and I don't know who you are. But I am really grateful for what you did.
Best wishes to you!
Yours,
Wang Xin
参考译文
亲爱的不知名的同学：
我不知道你的名字,但是我想要对你表达我真诚的感激之情.昨天,我将我的校园卡落在了操场.直到我放学回到家后,我才意识到这件事.我非常难过,因为另外注册一张(校园卡)会很麻烦.但是今天,当我到达学校的时候,校警告诉我有人捡到我的卡,并交给了他.我听到这个消息时非常激动.你没有留下你的名字,我也不知道你是谁.但是我非常感激你所做的一切.
致以你最好的祝福！
你的,
王欣
亮点词汇
1 sincere /adj.真诚的
2 gratitude /n. 感激；感谢之情
3 after class课后；放学后
4 bothersome/adj.麻烦的；烦人的
5 register /v.登记；注册
出彩句型
1 I want to express my gratitude to...我想向··..··表达我的感激之情.
2 I didn't realize it until...我没有意识到这件事,直到···..·
3 The school guard told me that...校警告诉我··...
4 I was so excited to hear the news.我听到这个消息时非常激动.
5 I am really grateful for...我真的对······很感激.
高分点评
对同学帮助“我”的过程的回述是本文最为出彩的地方,不仅将前因后果有条理地呈现出来,还描述得非常生动.本文作为一篇感谢信,基本符合书信的写作要求,语气上也较为亲切真诚.文章词句十分精彩,例如“I didn't realize it until...”“I was so excited to hear the news.”等句式.


申请信
范文1
Dear Sir or Madam,
Thank you for taking your time to read my letter. I'd like very much to be a volunteer of the coming Chinese Culture Exhibition.
In the beginning, I promise I would try my best to serve our distinguished guests from all over the world with enthusiasm. Besides, I have a rich knowledge about Chinese culture, so I will be more familiar with the whole event, and I can better introduce the exhibition to our guests. What's more, I can express myself fluently and clearly in English, which will be a great help for communicating with international friends.
To sum up, I believe I can be a qualified volunteer. I will do all I can if I could be accepted to be one.
Yours,
Li Yi
参考译文
亲爱的女士或先生：
谢谢你抽出时间来阅读我的信.我非常想成为一名即将到来的中国文化展览会的志愿者
首先,我保证我会尽力热情地服务我们来自世界各地的尊贵的客人.另外,我有着丰富的中国文化知识,所以我会对整个展览更加熟悉,并且我可以更好地向我们的客人介绍这个展览.更重要的是,我能用英语流利清晰地表达自己,这将对与国际友人沟通大有帮助.
总之,我相信我能成为一名合格的志愿者.如果我可以成为其中的一名志愿者,我一定会尽我所能.
你的,
李怡
亮点词汇
1 volunteer /n. 志愿者
2 enthusiasm /n. 热情
3 distinguished /adj.著名的；尊贵的
4 be familiar with...对······熟悉
5 exhibition /n.展览会
6 fluently /adv.流畅地；流利地
7 qualified /adj.合格的
出彩句型
1 Thank you for taking your time to...谢谢你抽时间来··...
2 I'd like very much to be...我非常想成为···..
3 I promise...我承诺··..
4 I have a rich knowledge about...我对·····有丰富的知识.
5 I can better introduce...to...我可以更好地向·.·介绍··....
6 ...will be a great help for...将对·····大有帮助.
高分点评
本文的整个脉络非常清晰,可以清楚地看到作者的三个优势－服务热情、知识丰富和英语能力强,这无疑是申请信成功的第一步.第二,文章的书信格式非常正确,从称呼、固定套语到正文到结束语和署名,都给读者留下了完美的印象.

范文2
Dear Mrs. Brown,
I'm Feng Yin from Dong Fang Junior High School. I'm very interested in your project and want to be a volunteer to help the students learn Chinese. I am warm-hearted and always ready to help others. I do well in Chinese. Last year, I won the first prize in the Chinese Speech Competition of my city. And I have many good ways to learn Chinese well. For example, we can listen to the radio and watch Chinese programs. Moreover, talking with local people is a fun and effective way to learn Chinese and its culture.
If l can get the job, I can be a great helper. Thank you for your consideration.
Yours truly,
Feng Yin
参考译文
亲爱的布朗太太：
我叫冯茵,来自东方中学.我对你的项目非常感兴趣,想成为一名志愿者,帮助学生学习中文.我很热心,总是乐意帮助别人.我的中文很好.去年,我在城市的中文演讲比赛中获得一等奖.我有很多学好中文的好方法.例如,我们可以听广播、看中文节目.还有就是,和当地人交谈是一个学习中文和中国文化的有趣又有效的方法.
如果我能成为志愿者,我会是一个很好的帮手.谢谢你的考虑.
你真诚的,
冯茵
亮点词汇
1 be interested in...对······感兴趣
2 (be)ready to...准备好(乐意做)
3 .....for example 例如
4 effective /adj.有效的
5 consideration /n.考虑
出彩句型
1 I want to be a volunteer to...我想成为志愿者···.·
2 I won the first prize in...我在···.··中获得一等奖.
3 I have many good ways to...我有很多··..··的好方法.
4 ...is a fun and effective way to........是.·····有趣又有效的方法.
5 If I can get the job, I...如果我能得到这份工作,我·.....
高分点评
作者能紧紧围绕自己要申请的岗位,就自己的优势展开描述,这是抓住申请信的精髓的表现.其次,文章明晰的条理、清楚的结构也是使这篇申请信脱颖而出的重要原因.再者,文章的句型、短语多变,表达地道流畅,更是大大为本文加了分.

Part 5 电子邮件

写法点拨
在进行电子邮件写作时,我们可以采取三步走的方法：
1.与联系人寒暄,表明写作意图,引出话题.若与收信人较亲密,可以直呼其名,然后简单说明写信目的；若与联系人较为陌生,可以先说明自己的身份再引出写信的目的.
2.详细阐述邮件内容,主次分明,详略得当.内容即写信人具体要说的话.可以是通知、致谢、叙事、致贺、邀请、提建议等,可以是一件事,也可以是几件事.
3.首尾呼应,再次点明主旨,表示问候.简单概括邮件的主题,表达对收信人的美好祝愿,再次表明自己的写作意图,呼应开头,使文章结构更加严谨.

必备词汇
sincerely/truly真诚地
regards问候
wishes祝愿；希望
Look forward to期待
As soon as possible尽快
congratulation祝贺；恭喜
suggestion建议
advice提议；建议
inform通知
reply回信

必备句型
1 开头常用句式
(1) How have you been recently?你近来怎样?
(2) How are you getting on with your English?你的英语学得怎么样?
(3) I wonder if everything is going well with you.我想知道你最近是否一切顺利.
(4) I haven't heard from you for ages.我很久没有收到你的来信了.
(5) I'm writing to you for some help.我写邮件给你是希望得到你的帮助.
(6) I am sorry for delaying the e-mail so long.耽误了这么久才给你回邮件,我很抱歉.
(7) Thanks for your e-mail.谢谢你的邮件.
(8) I'm glad to receive your e-mail. 很高兴收到你的邮件.
(9) You must be surprised to receive my e-mail.收到我的邮件你一定很意外.
2 常用于阐述事件或提出建议、邀请等
(1) Something bad happened to me.有件倒霉事发生在我身上.
(2) I am going to tell you something serious.我想告诉你一件很严肃的事情.
(3) I would like to share my success on the competition with you.我想和你分享我比赛得奖的消息.
(4) The party is on Saturday morning. 聚会在周六早上.
(5) I want to invite you to have dinner with me this Friday.这个星期五我想邀请你共进晚餐.
(6) Would you like to join us in the picnic?你愿意和我们一起野餐吗?
(7) I have got 3 pieces of advice for you, just as follows:我有三点建议给你,正如下文所示：
(8) You should follow these 3 steps. Firstly,...Secondly,...And last,...你应该按照这三个步骤,第一··第二···第三··.
(1) 结尾常用句式
(1) I would be grateful if you could provide me with some information.
如果你能给我提供一些信息,我会很感激的.
(2) I wonder if you could help me out ofit. 我想知道你能否帮我一把.
(3) I hope that you can show me what to do next.我希望你能告诉我下一步该怎么做.
(4) I'm looking forward to hearing from you.我期待收到你的回信.
(5)Please write me back as soon as possible.请尽快给我回信.
(6) I hope to see you at the party.我希望能在聚会上见到你.
(7) Please take good care of yourself and have a good time. 请照顾好自己,并玩得开心.
(8) Please do let me know if you have decided it.如果你决定了,一定要让我知道.
(9) Thank you again for your help.再次感谢你的帮助.
(10) I would appreciate it if you could write me back.如果你能回信,我会很感激的.
(11) I need to go to school, so I have to quit it.我要去学校了,所以只能搁笔了.

美文引路
题目：根据中文提示,写一封意思连贯、符合逻辑的回信.词数在80-100之间.
假如你是李明,你的美国笔友Tony给你写了一封电子邮件说他最近过得很不错,希望你给他写一封回信,说一下你的生活近况.
内容包括：
1.一个星期前,发烧请了五天假,直到期末考才回学校；
2.期末考成绩不理想,心情低落,但得到了父母的安慰；
3.期待Tony的回信.
思路导航
第1步：例文审题
主体人称
题目要求“你”以李明的身份来写回信,因此主体人称为第一人称“I”.
主体时态
由于回信要介绍的生活近况发生在过去,故主体时态用一般过去时.
写作贴士

题目要求主要包含三个方面,但这是一封回信,因此在开头要概括题目设定的背景内容；第三点的期待回信要用一般现在时.
第2步：列提纲
(1)简单概括Tony写给李明的邮件的内容.
(2)根据题目要求详细讲述李明的生活近况.
(3)表明期待Tony的回信.
第3步：参考词句
(1)Tony;glad;have a good time; not feel well...
(2) fever; upset;attend school; a 5-day leave; final examination; fail; prepare for...
(3)look forward to; reply...
第4步：连句成篇
Dear Tony,
I am glad to learn that you had good days recently. But I am not feeling well these days.
One week ago, I had a high fever and was unable to attend school.Therefore, I had to ask for 5 days' leave. I didn't return to school until the final exam came. It didn't surprise me that I failed my exam, but I still felt upset about it. My parents didn't blame me. Instead, they comforted me that I would do well the next time.
Please take good care of yourself. And I'm looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
参考译文
亲爱的托尼：
我很高兴知道你最近过得很开心.但是这些天我并不开心.
一个星期前,我发高烧了,不能去上学.因此,我只好请了5天假.直到期末考试到了,我才回到学校.考试不及格并没有令我惊讶,但我还是对此感到难过.我的父母并没有责备我,相反地,他们安慰我说我下次会考好的.
请照顾好你自己.我期待你的回信.
你真诚的,
李明

范文1
Dear Lucy,
I hope everything is all right with you. I am really upset these days and would like to get some help from you. That is about my parents.
My parents pay too much attention to my study. On the one hand, they are strict with me. I cannot watch TV even on weekends. On the other hand, my mother makes a detailed plan for me. I have to do what they want me to do. I hate it.
I have ever told them how I felt before, but it didn't work. What should I do?
Lovely yours,
Juliet
参考译文
亲爱的露西：
我希望你一切都好.这些天我真的很难过,希望能从你这儿得到一些帮助.那是关于我父母的.
我的父母过于重视我的学习.一方面,他们对我很严格.甚至在周末我都不能看电视.另一方面,我妈妈为我制订了一个详细的计划.我不得不做他们希望我做的事情.我讨厌这样.
之前我曾经告诉他们我是怎么想的,但并没有用.我应该怎么办呢?
爱你的,
朱丽叶
亮点词汇
1 pay attention to 注意；重视
2 on the one hand..., on the other hand... 一方面··...·,另一方面··...
3 striet /adj.严格的；绝对的；精确的；详细的
4 detailed /adj.详细的；精细的；复杂的；详尽的
5 hate /v.憎恨；厌恶；遗憾
出彩句型
1 Everything is all right with sb.某人一切都好.
2 They are strict with me.他们对我很严格.
3 It didn't work.这没有用.
4 What should I do?我应该怎么做?
高分点评
这是一封求助邮件.作者详细地讲述了自己遇到的问题,并明确地表明自己希望从朋友那里得到帮助.作者在写作过程中使用了“on the one hand..., on the other hand, pay attention to,strict”等高级词汇,使文章表达丰富多彩.另外,what和how 引导 的宾语从句的正确使用充分彰显了作者扎实的语言功底.

范文2
Dear Ben,
How are you? I want to tell you something about our city, Guangzhou.
Guangzhou is trying to set up a national civilized city. We have many nice places and beautiful sceneries and people here are really kind and friendly. We are always ready to help others. And we respect the old and care for the young children. Besides, we are working together to make our city more beautiful.
I hope you can visit Guangzhou someday. I am sure you will enjoy it.
Best regards.
Zhang Hong
参考译文
亲爱的本：
你好吗?我想告诉你有关我所在城市－广州的一些情况.
广州正在努力(把自己)建设为国家文明城市.我们有很多漂亮的地方和美丽的景色,而且我们这里的人都是善良和友好的.我们很乐于助人,我们也尊老爱幼.此外,我们正在共同努力,把我们的城市建设得更美好.
我希望有一天你能来广州参观.我保证你一定会喜欢它的.
致以美好祝福.
张宏
亮点词汇
1 set up建立
2 national /adj.国家的；国民的；民族的
3 civilized /adj.文明的；有礼貌的
4 scenery /n.风景；景色
5 (be) always ready to help others 乐于助人
6 respect the old and care for the young children 尊老爱幼
7 someday/adv.有一天；有朝一日
出彩句型
1 How are you?你好吗?
2 Guangzhou is trying to set up a national civilized city.广州正在努力(把自己)建设为国家文明城市.
3 We are working together to make our city more beautiful.我们正在共同努力,把我们的城市建设得更美好.
高分点评
这是一篇介绍自己家乡广州的文章.文章篇幅不长,但整体上重点突出,详略得当,内容具体,且作者在用词上很讲究,譬如使用了“national civilized city”“respect the old and care for the young children”等高级词汇,值得同学们参考.