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考向48 应用文写作之道歉信和感谢信

道歉信

【写作示例】

【考场审题】

Step 1: 精准审题　谋篇布局

Step 2: 头脑风暴　字字珠玉

(1)美词: express my heartfelt apology; represent our school to do; available; as a result

(2)佳句: ①I can’t go with you as planned.

②I’m writing to express my heartfelt apology to you.

③How about going to the bookstore this Sunday.

Step 3: 斟酌词句　妙笔生花

要点1: 我很抱歉无法跟你一起去书店。

一般表达: I’m sorry that I can’t go with you to the bookstore.  

句式升级(高级词汇, 名词性从句, 分词作状语)

我诚挚地向你道歉, 这周五不能按计划和你去书店了。

I have to express my heartfelt apology to you that I can’t go with you to the bookstore this Friday as planned.  

要点2: 我入选代表我校参加英语辩论赛。

一般表达: I’m chosen to represent our school to take part in the English debate competition.  

句式升级(定语从句, for引导的并列句)

我入选代表我校参加英语辩论赛, 这对我非常重要, 因为我一直梦想有这样的机会代表我校参赛, 展示我们的实力。

I’m chosen to represent our school to take part in the English debate competition,  which is of great importance to me,  for I have been dreaming of having such a chance to show our strength on behalf of my school.  

要点3: 这个周日去书店如何? 那时你是否有时间呢?

一般表达: How about going to the bookstore this Sunday?  Will you be available then?  

句式升级(高级词汇, 意趣盎然)

Would it be convenient for you if we go to the bookstore this Sunday?  

Step 4: 衔接过渡　斐然成篇

【参考范文】

Dear Bob,

How are you doing?  I’m indeed very sorry that I can’t go to the bookstore with you this Friday as planned.

How I wish I could go with you!  However, I’m chosen to represent our school to take part in the English debate competition, which is of great importance to me, for I have been dreaming of having such a chance to show our strength on behalf of my school. As a result, I have to miss our appointment.

Please accept my sincere apology from the bottom of my heart. Would it be convenient for you if we go to the bookstore this Sunday?

Yours,

Li Hua

感谢信

【写作示例】

【考场审题】

Step 1: 精准审题　谋篇布局

Step 2: 头脑风暴　字字珠玉

(1)美词:  have difficulty in,  under your patient guidance,  not only. . . but also. . . ,  generous

(2)佳句:

①I can well remember there was a time when I had difficulty in learning English.

②It is you who taught me how to learn English well.

③Not only did you help improve my English,  but also gave me more confidence in learning.

Step 3: 斟酌词句　妙笔生花

要点1: 你教给我如何学英语。

一般表达: You taught me how to learn English.  

句式升级 (强调句)

是你教给我如何学英语。

It is you who taught me how to learn English.  

要点2: 你帮助我提高了英语并且给了我更多学习的自信。

一般表达: You helped improve my English and gave me more confidence in learning.  

句式升级 (倒装句)

你不但帮助我提高了英语, 并且给了我更多学习的自信。

Not only did you help improve my English,  but also gave me more confidence in learning.  

Step 4: 衔接过渡 斐然成篇

【参考范文】

Dear Alex,

I’ve heard that you’re leaving China soon,  so I’m writing to express my sincere blessing and thanks.

I can well remember there was a time when I had difficulty in learning English.  It is you who taught me how to learn English.  Under your patient guidance,  I gradually made progress and began interested in English.  Not only did you help improve my English,  but also gave me more confidence in learning.  Thanks again for your generous help.

Wish you a pleasant journey home.

Yours, 

Li Hua

【检测训练】

1．假设你是李明，你因生病没能按时上交李老师安排的作业。请你用英语给他写一封道歉信，内容包括：

1. 向他道歉

2. 解释原因

3. 保证尽快补交作业。

注意：1. 词数100左右；

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯

3. 信的开头和结尾已经给出，但是不计入总词数

Dear Mr.Li

________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Your student

Li Ming

【参考范文】

Dear Mr. Li

I am one of your students in Class Two, Grade Three. I m writing to apologize for not handing in my homework on time

I am one of the students who enjoy your class a lot. And I like doing my homework which is always very interesting as well as practical. However, I caught a bad cold and had a high fever, which made me have a headache and sleep all day. So bad did I feel that I couldn’t do my homework in time. Thus, I didn’t finish it

I am really sorry for giving you so much trouble. I am feeling better now and I will finish my homework as soon as possible.

Your student

Li Ming

【写作步骤】

第1步：根据提示可知，本篇为一封电子邮件；你因生病没能按时上交李老师安排的作业。请你用英语给他写一封道歉信，内容包括：1. 向他道歉2. 解释原因3. 保证尽快补交作业。

第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如： apologize for （为某事道歉），on time（按时），interesting as well as practical（有趣又实用），have a high fever（发高烧），have a headache（头痛），in time（及时），as soon as possible（尽快）等。

第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。

本文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。另外全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。

【写作亮点】

范文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式，如And I like doing my homework which is always very interesting as well as practical. 运用定语从句修饰先行词homework；So bad did I feel that I couldn’t do my homework in time. 运用了倒装句。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。

2．假设你是李华，是一名在Eric家里的交换生(exchange student)。昨晚，你和几位同学在房间里大声讨论周末班级出游事宜，影响了Eric一家休息。

请给Eric写一封道歉信，内容包括：

1.表示道歉; 2.说明原因; 3.提出解决办法。

注意：1.词数80左右;2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Dear Eric,

_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Yours,

Li Hua

【参考范文】

Dear Eric,

I’m writing to apologize for the disturbance that our loud discussion may have caused for you and your family.

Last night my classmates and I heatedly discussed the trip our class were to take at the weekend. However, absorbed in the discussion, we were entirely unaware that we made such loud noise. We promise to choose a more suitable place next time.

I am truly sorry for what I did and hope you can accept my sincere apology. More importantly, I’ll try to be a considerate exchange student.

Yours,

Li Hua

【写作步骤】

第一步：应用文表达，开头结尾给出，注意格式规范，根据提示，整篇文章应使用一般时态。

第二步：根据提纲依次表示道歉；说明原因；提出解决办法；内容包含全面，关键词选用合理，如apologize for，absorbed in，we were entirely unaware that…I am truly sorry for等等。

第三步：连词成文，结构衔接得体。

【写作亮点】

第一段，开门见山，表达歉意，清晰明确，简单明了。

第二段，说明原因并提出解决办法，结构清晰，However…连接结构的短语和词运用得体恰当。

第三段，符合应用文结尾格式，结构严谨。

文章内容完整，提纲要点全面，格式规范，语篇连贯，使用复合句，显示考生有很高的英语驾驭能力，如I’m writing to apologize for the disturbance that our loud discussion may have caused for you and your family. I am truly sorry for what I did and hope you can accept my sincere apology.

3．假如你是李华，你约好昨天去公交车站接你的朋友 Dylan，但你却迟到了 10 分钟，令他很失望。 请用英语给他写一封道歉信，要点如下:

1.  向他表示道歉; 2. 表达你对此事的认识; 3.  请求他的原谅。

注意:1.词数 80 左右;

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯;

3. 开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。

Dear Dylan，

______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Yours,

Li Hua

【参考范文】

Dear Dylan,

I apologize for not arriving on time to pick you up from the bus station yesterday. I have no excuse for keeping you waiting for so long.

Next time, I’ll make sure to leave early enough in order to arrive as scheduled, or even ahead of schedule.

I humbly ask your forgiveness. I hope my mistake won’t prevent you from seeking my help in the future. I’m always happy to be of service.

Yours,

Li Hua

【写作步骤】

第1步：根据提示可知，本文要求写一封道歉信：假如你是李华，你约好昨天去公交车站接你的朋友 Dylan，但你却迟到了 10 分钟，令他很失望。 请用英语给他写一封道歉信，要点如下:1.  向他表示道歉; 2. 表达你对此事的认识; 3.  请求他的原谅。时态应为一般现在时。

第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如； apologize（道歉），humbly（谦逊地），forgiveness（原谅），mistake（错误）， prevent（阻止）及seek（寻求）等。

第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持卷面的整洁美观。

本文内容完整，层次分明，结构紧凑，表达准确。另外全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。

【写作亮点】

范文语言地道，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级词汇和句式，高级词汇有on time（按时），pick up sb（接某人），make sure (确保)，in order to（为了……），as scheduled（按照预定时间）及ahead of（提前），而且还使用了宾语从句“I hope my mistake won’t prevent you from seeking my help in the future.”，非谓语动词“I apologize for not arriving on time to pick you up from the bus station yesterday.”及“I have no excuse for keeping you waiting for so long.”，全文没有语法错误，上下句转换自然流畅。

4．毕业季也是感恩季，来自澳大利亚的Feinstein在她的网站上发起感谢信接力的活动。假设你是红星中学高三学生李华，请写一封感谢信参加接力，内容包括：

1. 感谢的人或事物；

2. 感谢的原因；

3. 你的美好愿望。

注意：1.词数100左右 字。 2.不得透露个人信息及感谢人信息

Dear ___________,

_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Yours,

Li Hua

【参考范文】

Dear Samantha,

    I am writing to you to let you know how lucky I am to have you as a teacher. From day one, I enjoyed each and every class of yours. You could always make your lessons informative, educational and enjoyable all at the same time. Every day I looked forward to your class, which was a surprise from a student who hated and dreaded English. It was you who awakened my interest in English and restored my confidence in myself. I enjoyed everything you taught us, from the English language to American culture. The smell of the pancakes we made together in your class is still clear in our minds, and it simply makes my mouth water.

    You are a special teacher whom I will always remember with fond memories. You are a great inspiration to us all!

A big and warm “Thank you!” from your beloved student! May you continue to inspire greatness in all of your students!                   (157 words)

Yours,

Li Hua

【写作分析】本文为提纲类作文。首先，学生要仔细阅读提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确有哪些要点。 其次，要注意提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象。要依据提示情景或词语， 按照一定逻辑关系来写。 最后，要根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；语言表达要符合英语习惯。本文是一封感谢信，按照内容要求可以确定文章的框架结构，三段式。第一段写需要感谢的人或事情；第二段写原因，也是本文的主体部分；第三段写自己的个人感想及美好愿望。写作时要注意准确运用时态、语态、上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。根据句意适当使用并列连词，同时也要合理运用高级词汇和高级句子为文章增色添彩。

【亮点说明】本文内容齐全，结构严谨，层次分明，布局合理，语言精练，同时运用高级句子。宾语从句的使用：I am writing to you to let you know how lucky I am to have you as a teacher.非限制性定语从句中继续使用定语从句：……，which was a surprise from a student who hated and dreaded English.强调句型的使用：It was you who awakened my interest in English and restored my confidence in myself.

5．你是李华，父亲节即将来临，在父亲节这天，需要说哪些话语来感谢自己的父亲呢？请根据以下要点用英文给父亲写一封感谢信。内容包括：

1. 感谢养育之恩；

2. 感谢父亲在你遇到挫折时给你鼓励和安慰；

3. 感谢父亲在你成功时以你为荣；

4.爱父亲。

注意：1. 词数80左右;

2. 可以适当增加细节，已使行文连贯。

Dear Father,

With Father’s Day approaching,

________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

【参考范文】

Dear Father,

With Father’s Day approaching, I want to express my gratitude to you for bringing me up from the bottom of my heart.(要点一) Never will I forget the timely encouragement and comfort you gave to me whenever I was faced with difficulties(要点二) and the pride in your eyes when I achieved my goals(要点三). Without you, I would not go further confidently and bravely.

Your love can never be repaid but I am determined to work hard and never make you disappointed. I love you, Father(要点四)!

Yours,

Li Hua

【写作步骤】

第1步：根据提示可知，本文是一封书信：你是李华，父亲节即将来临，在父亲节这天，需要说哪些话语来感谢自己的父亲呢？请根据以下要点用英文给父亲写一封感谢信。内容包括：

1. 感谢养育之恩；

2. 感谢父亲在你遇到挫折时给你鼓励和安慰；

3. 感谢父亲在你成功时以你为荣；

4.爱父亲。

第2步：根据写作要求确定关键词，如：bringing sb up,be faced with, achieve one’s goal, be determined to do sth 等。

第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态语态问题。

第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。

【写作亮点】

本篇范文语言优美，情真意切。其中使用了一些高级句型让人眼前一亮。如：“Never will I forget the timely encouragement and comfort you gave to me whenever I was faced with difficulties”否定词位于句首的倒装句，增强语气。“Without you, I would not go further confidently and bravely.”虚拟语气，渲染气氛。这些句型是使用大大增强了本文的感染力，可供大家借鉴。

6．假定你是李华，是某市外国语学校的学生。请你用英语给外教Mr. Green写一封感谢信，感谢他捡到并归还你的钱包。内容包括:

1. 写信目的；

2. 解释事情经过；

3. 表示感谢。

注意:

1. 词数100左右；

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

【参考范文】

Dear Mr. Green,

I’m Li Hua. I’m writing to thank you for picking up my lost wallet and returning it.

Last Saturday, I played table tennis with my friends in the gym. However, my wallet dropped out of my pocket when I left. I was rather anxious when I found my wallet gone. My student card, meal card and bank card were all in the wallet, without which I would get into trouble. You don’t know how excited I was when they told me you had returned my wallet to the school office.

Your kind behavior means a lot to me. Thank you again for your kindness.

Yours,

Li Hua

【写作步骤】

本文为书信体作文。请用英语给外教Mr. Green写一封感谢信，感谢他捡到并归还你的钱包。书信体作文，一般包括三个部分。第一部分叙述写信的原因或目的。本文为感谢外教Mr. Green捡到并归还你的钱包。第二部分是正文。本部分主要内容为解释事情的经过及表示感谢。因为所给的信息较少，所以本部分要适当加以发挥，如写出钱包里的东西有什么，如何重要。因此对于对方归还钱包非常感谢。第三部分再次感谢对方，并期待对方的来信。

【写作亮点】

本文结构完整，涵盖所有要点，语气恰当，符合书信体作文的要求。文中运用了一些较高级的词汇如thank …for… ；pick up；drop out；get into trouble，使文章的内容更加丰富多彩。文章的句式相对灵活多变，运用了较多的长句。 文章以简单句为主，辅之一个复杂句You don’t know how excited I was when they told me you had returned my wallet to the school office.。文中多处运用了复合句，如状语从句my wallet dropped out of my pocket when I left.和定语从句My student card, meal card and bank card were all in the wallet, without which I would get into trouble.。这使得文章很有档次。