2018-2022年福建中考英语5年真题1年模拟汇编 专题08 书面表达（学生卷+教师卷）

专题08 书面表达

1．（2022·福建·中考真题）假定你是李华，近日你校开展了以“热爱劳动，珍爱粮食”为主题的实践活动。请你结合以下图示，用英语给笔友John写一封信，分享活动过程和感受。词数80左右。

注意事项：

1.必须包含所有提示信息，可适当发挥，开头已给出，不计入总词数；

2.意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范；

3.请勿在文中使用真实的姓名和校名。

Dear John,

How is everything going?

_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Yours,

Li Hua

【答案】参考范文

Dear John,

How is everything going? I’m glad to tell you my one-day experience in rice fields.

On June 18, my classmates and I went to the community farm. When we arrived, we visited the farm and watched videos on farming. Then we worked together with farmers. Some learnt to harvest rice. Some helped to carry rice while others picked ears of rice from the fields. Through the activity, I’ve got the pleasure of hard work and learnt to value each grain.

Have you had any experience of this kind?

 Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

1.题干解读：本文是一篇书信作文。根据图示内容，以“热爱劳动，珍爱粮食”为主题写一篇作文。

2.写作指导：本文时态以一般过去时为主。人称以第一人称为主。写作时需涵盖要点，包括日期、地点、活动和感受，可适当发挥使行文连贯，确保语句通顺，无单词语法错误。

2．（2021·福建·中考真题）假定你是学校英语报小记者李华，上周学校开展了“English Day”活动，请你根据下面的海报和学生参加活动的数据写一篇报道，介绍活动情况以及同学们的感受。词数80左右。

注意事项：

1. 必须包含提示内容，可适当发挥，开头已给出，不计入总词数；

2. 意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范；

3. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名和校名。Our School English Day

Our school English Day was a great success. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

【答案】参考范文

Our School English Day

Our school English Day was a great success. It took place in the school hall from 2: 00 p. m. to 4: 30 p. m. on June 18th.

Three activities were included. Half of us students took part in the singing competition. 30% of us went to the cooking show. And the rest of us enjoyed ourselves in the storytelling.

We spoke highly of the English Day. We learnt a lot through practice. It also made us come to realize the importance of teamwork. We hope there will be more colorful activities in our school.

1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。介绍上周开展的英语日的活动情况。

2.写作指导：本文主要采用一般过去时。分为三段式：第一段介绍活动的地点和时间；第二段介绍学生参加活动的情况；最后一段介绍这个活动给同学们带来的感受。写作时保持主谓一致性，逻辑性要强，无语法和标点错误。

3．（2020·福建·中考真题）假定你是李华，你的新西兰朋友David对中医很感兴趣。请你结合以下图示，用英语写一封电子邮件，向他推荐即将在你校举办的“传统中医进校园”的宣传日活动，说明推荐理由，并请他关注线上相关信息。词数80左右。

注意事项：

1. 必须包含所有提示信息，可适当发挥，开头已给出，不计入总词数；

2. 意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范；

3. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名和校名。

Dear David,

I'm pleased to know that you're interested in Chinese medicine.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Yours,

Li Hua

【答案】Dear David,

I'm pleased to know that you're interested in Chinese medicine. Now, I'd like to share with you some information about Traditional Chinese Medicine Day in our school, which is going to take place on July 31, 2020.

On that day, a famous doctor will give us a talk on Chinese medicine. And there will be a show about its development. Also, the film Li Shizhen will be on. I'm sure the activities would be very helpful to you. I hope you can visit www. intelschool. com and have a better understanding of traditional Chinese medicine.

Best wishes.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

1.题干解读：本文是一篇书信作文。文中向朋友推荐即将举办的“传统中医进校园”的宣传日活动，并说明推荐理由。

2.例文点评：本文主要以第一人称为主，时态主要采用一般将来时。准确运用时态，并保持主谓一致。逻辑性强，句子通顺。

3.高分亮点：

短语：share with sb about sth与某人分享某事；take place举行；be helpful to sb对某人有帮助。

句子：there will be a show about its development句中用的是there be句型；I'm sure the activities would be very helpful to you句中由that引导的宾语从句，引导词that已省略。

4．（2019·福建·中考真题）书面表达

91. 假定你是李华，收到英国笔友 Harry 的邮件，获悉他在机器人制作比赛中获奖。请根据邮件内容给他回复。词数 80 左右。

Dear Li Hua,

I’m glad to tell you that I’ve just won the the first place in a robot- making competition. I love robots! They bring me great fun.

What do yo think of robots? Do you want to have your own robot? Why? Looking forward to hearing from you.

Yours,

参考词汇：congratulation 祝贺

注意事项：

1. 回复邮件时可适当发挥，邮件格式已给出，不计入总词数；

2. 意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范；

3. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名及地名。

Dear Harry,

____________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Yours, Li Hua

【答案】Dear harry

Congratulations! How glad I am to share your good news!

I think robots are helpful in many ways. And in the future they’ll play more important roles in our daily life. Plus, I’m dying to have a robot of my own. I can have it take care of my grandparents when we are not at home. You see, my grandparents are old and cannot move easily. It can help them do some housework such as cooking, cleaning the house and so on.

【解析】

本文属于应用文体，就英国笔友哈利在机器人制作比赛中获奖写一封回信。根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑，可适当增加内容。

亮点说明：这是一篇优秀的作文，很好的完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态、主谓一致，特别使用一些亮点词句，如play roles in, daily life, be dying to, take care of, help sb do, such as, and so on以及how glad I am中how引导的感叹句，增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，用词准确，句子通顺，行文连贯。

【点睛】

写作时可以从以下几个方面做起：

认真审题。审好题是写好书面表达的关键。审题时要注意试题的要求，抓住要点，词数符合要求。

构思提纲。有了提纲，我们就可以根据提纲和主题确定相关的写作材料。通常书面表达给出的话题是开放的，而具体的内容要求学生自己发挥，因此选择恰当的素材也是使短文中心突出、明确的关键。

初写短文。一切都准备就绪，就可以动笔写作了，在写作的过程中我们要注意句子的准确性、连贯性以及简洁性。使用的词语、短语及句型尽量用自己有把握的词。同时还要注意使用恰当的连词，使句子衔接自然。

修改润色。修改润色是获取高分的必要步骤。这一步我们除了检查短文的各种错误外，还要检查语法结构是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，格式是否正确，词数是否符合要求等。

5．（2018·福建·中考真题）假如你是李华，你的英国笔友 Henry对武术感兴趣。请你根据图表提示，用英语给他写一封电子邮件，邀请他暑期来观摩你校举办的首届武术节，感受中华武术文化。词数80左右。

注意事项：

1.必须包含所提示的信息，可适当发挥，开头已给出，不计入总词数；

2.意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范；

3.请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名及提示信息以外的地名。

参考词汇：practice Wushu练武

Dear Henry,I am glad that you are interested in Wushu. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Yours,

Li Hua

【答案】范文：

Dear Henry,

I am glad that you are interested in Wushu. Here I’ve got good news for you. The first Wushu festival of our school is going to be held from July 7 to 9, 2018. I’d like to invite you to the festival. You can watch many Wushu competitions and enjoy wonderful shows.

Chinese Wushu has a history of thousands of years. Practicing Wushu is a good way to improve our health. Besides, it helps us to develop strong wills. Most of us like it very much. I hope you will come and experience Chinese Wushu culture.

Looking forward to seeing you soon.

Yours

Li Hua

【解析】

1.题干解读：该题目属于应用文写作，但写作时要按邮件格式来写。在写作时应承接短文开头，根据图表提示，介绍武术节的时间、内容、武术的历史以及练习武术的益处等。

2.写作指导：本文应该用第三人称为主来介绍内容，时态采用一般现在时、一般将来时和现在完成时。在介绍内容时，力求语言准确，内容全面，保证行文连贯，条理清晰。

6．（2022·福建·模拟预测）由于新型冠状病毒肺炎疫情影响，多省市学校推迟开学。最长寒假，线上教学，这对学生的饮食、学习和心情都是一种考验。假如你是李华，你的好朋友Jim 返校后对线下学习产生了学习焦虑。请你给Jim写封信，分享返校后你是如何化解学习焦虑，保持好心情的。词数 80 词左右。

参考词汇：COVID-19 新型冠状病毒；online learning 在线学习；offline learning 线下学习；learning anxiety 学习焦虑

要求：

1. 必须包含所提示的信息，可适当发挥，其他方法至少要补充 2 点，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；

2. 意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范；

3. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名及地名。

Dear Jim,

How are you doing? I’m very happy to come back to school. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Yours,

Li Hua

【答案】例文

Dear Jim,

How are you doing? I’m very happy to come back to school. But I’m sorry to hear that you are worried about your offline learning because of COVID-19. In fact, it’s very important for us to be in a good mood for both offline and online learning. If we are in good spirits, we can study better. Here are some suggestions for you.

Firstly, you had better do sports after school. It can help you keep fit and relax. Secondly, you should eat healthy food. It’s good for your health. Thirdly, you can listen to relaxing music when you are tired. What’s more, don’t keep silent when you are in trouble. You can talk to your friends, parents or teachers. They will be glad to help you. Finally, you must get back to your everyday activities. It will give you a sense of happiness to overcome the learning anxiety.

I hope you will be happy again.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

1. 题干解读：本文属于书信写作，按信件格式来写。根据题目要求，提出合理的化解学习焦虑的建议，需要自己进行拓展。

2.写作指南：本文主要采用第一人称和第二人称相结合的方式来写，陈述现状用第一人称为主，提建议用第二人称为主；时态采用一般现在时。在提建议时，要分点列举，巧用衔接词，使条理清晰。在进行拓展的时候，要言之有物，切合实际，切忌泛泛而谈。

7．（2022·福建三明·二模）“中国红”在本次冬奥会中频频出现，让世界再一次感受到了中华文化的魅力。假设你是李华，你的英国朋友Peter对“中国红”很感兴趣，请你根据以下图示，用英语在QQ中给他留言，介绍“中国红”在中国人日常生活中的体现，词数80左右。

注意事项：1.   必须包含提示内容，可适当发挥，开头已给岀，不计入总词数；

2.意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范；

3. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名和校名。

Hi, Peter! I’m glad that you’re interested in Chinese culture. I would like to tell you something about Chinese red.

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I truly hope I can help you understand better about Chinese red. And I hope you can come to China for a visit one day!

【答案】One possible version：

Hi, Peter! I’m glad that you’re interested in Chinese culture. I would like to tell you something about Chinese red.

Red is the favorite color of Chinese people. It stands for happiness, warmth, and we believe that it can bring us good luck.

Chinese red is popular with us. We use many red objects in the important events or special occasions. For instance, in a wedding, you can see the red wedding dresses. The wedding room is also decorated with red paper cuttings. During the Spring Festival, you can see Chinese red around you. The houses are filled with red lanterns and Chinese knots. Children will get red pockets for best wishes as well. Obviously, Chinese red plays an important role in China.

I truly hope I can help you understand better about Chinese red. And I hope you can come to China for a visit one day!

【解析】

题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文，按照图示从位置、意义、形式和使用情况介绍中国红。注意要点齐全，条理清晰。

写作指导：本文以第三人称书写，时态是一般现在时。开头结尾已给出，为了使上下文连贯，可以多使用连词、副词和固定短语等，同时注意主谓一致。

8．（2022·福建福州·二模）假如你是Kangkang，你正在给你的笔友Kelly写一封电子邮件，把疫情期间苏翊鸣仍在自家小区练习单板滑雪的视频分享给他，同时结合下表信息，简单介绍苏翊鸣，并着重谈谈你的感想。词数80左右。

注意事项：1.必须包含表格中的信息，可适当发挥，开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数；

2.意思清楚，表达通畅，行文连贯，书写规范；

3.请勿在文中使用个人真实的姓名、校名及地名。

Dear Kelly,How are you these days? I’m writing to share a video of Su Yiming with you. Do you know him?______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Do you agree with me?

Yours,

Kangkang

【答案】例文

Dear Kelly,

How are you these days? I’m writing to share a video of Su Yiming with you. Do you know him?

Su was born in Jilin Province on February 18th, 2004. He started to learn snowboarding when he was 4. In 2022, he won a gold medal in Men’s Snowboard Big Air at the Beijing Winter Olympic Games.

I thought Su gained success because he was talented until recently I saw the video about his practicing snowboarding in his community. Now I’ve got to know him better and come to realize that only through hard work can we achieve our dream.

Do you agree with me?

Yours,

Kangkang

【解析】

1. 题干解读：题目要求根据提示要点，分享苏翊鸣在自家小区练习单板滑雪的视频，介绍苏翊鸣的一些情况，可以适当发挥，写作时要运用正确的英语表达，要选用恰当的词汇和短语。

2. 写作指导：写作时要与已给出的开头和结尾融合起来，本文应该用第一人称、第三人称来介绍内容；时态采用一般过去时；在介绍内容时，力求语言准确，内容完整，保证行文连贯，条理清晰。

9．（2022·福建漳州·二模）我校将举行以“How to be a qualified (合格的) student”为主题的演讲比赛。假设你是李华，请根据以下图示，完成一篇英语演讲稿，谈谈我们应该如何成为一名合格的中学生。

要求：词数80左右。

注意事项：

1.必须包含提示内容，可适当发挥，开头、结尾已给出，不计入总词数；

2.意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范；

3.请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名及地名。

Good morning, everyone. I am Li Hua. It’s my great honor to give a speech on how to be a qualified student.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Thank you for your listening.

【答案】例文

Good morning, everyone. I am Li Hua. It’s my great honor to give a speech on how to be a qualified student.

I have some opinions to share with you. First of all, I believe taking part in labor activities, like doing some cleaning and growing plants, can make our school life more colorful and meaningful. What’s more, having healthy hobbies like doing some running and reading in our spare time can improve our health physically and mentally. Besides, students at our age should study hard for a brighter future. Last but not least, we should obey the school rules and respect our teachers.

All the above are my opinions of being a qualified student.

Thank you for your listening.

【解析】

1.题干解读：题目要求以李华的名义，写一篇题为“How to be a qualified student”的演讲稿，根据提示要点讲述我们如何成为一名合格的中学生。

2.写作指导：本文以第一人称和第三人称进行叙述；时态是一般现在时；文章可分为四段式：第一段开门见山，引出话题。第二段从劳动、健康的爱好、学习以及遵守校规，尊重老师四个方面阐述如何成为合格的中学生。最后两段总结全文。在写作时要做到无标点符号和语法错误，正确运用衔接词。

10．（2022·福建三明·模拟预测）假如你是李华，下周一学校英语社团将举办一场以“Teamwork Makes Us Better”为题的演讲活动。你将参加此次活动，准备讲述上周与其他同学一起清理学校图书馆的经历，并发表你对团队合作这件事情的看法。请你结合以下表格内容和要求，写一篇演讲稿。

要求：1. 要点齐全，适当发挥；

2. 行文连贯，语法正确，书写规范；

3. 词数80左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。Teamwork Makes Us Better

Hello, everyone! I’m glad to make a speech about “Teamwork Makes Us Better” here.

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【答案】One Possible Version:

Teamwork Makes Us Better

Hello, everyone! I’m glad to make a speech about “Teamwork Makes Us Better” here. Last week I helped clean our school library with nine classmates. Three of us cleaned the dust off the books. Two classmates and I swept the floor, three cleaned the windows and one classmate took out the rubbish. After I finished my work, I helped others. We finished cleaning in just 40 minutes. It’s impossible for one person to finish the work.

In my opinion, first, teamwork saves time. Second, in a team, a person can learn from others and improve oneself. Third, when working as a team, we’d like to help others and then we’ll become closer.

【解析】

1.题干解读：该题目属于讲稿作文。题目要求是请你以“Teamwork Makes Us Better”为题写一篇英文演讲稿，讲述上周你与其他同学一起清理学校图书馆的经历，并发表你对团队合作这件事情的看法。

2.写作指导：本文要使用第一人称讲述，时态以一般过去时为主。文中已给出了作文的开头，我们要做的就是用正确的英语，把文中给出的写作要点表达出来；写作中，应注意描述的全面性，尽量将提示的内容利用上，提示的要点就是写作的基本方向；然后围绕要点，适当发挥；语言表述要符合语法结构，造句要符合英语表达习惯，不要出现语法错误，同时要保证语句通顺，意思连贯，逻辑合理。