(新高考)高考英语二轮复习讲义 书面表达 层级4+第2讲　书信和邮件 (含答案)

这是一份(新高考)高考英语二轮复习讲义 书面表达 层级4+第2讲　书信和邮件 (含答案)，共23页。学案主要包含了求助信，感谢信，道歉信，推荐信，申请信，邀请信，建议信，祝贺信等内容，欢迎下载使用。

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第2讲　书信和邮件
一、求助信
[谋篇布局]

[亮点句式]
●夺人眼球开头句
1．I am Li Hua, captain of the football team in Guangming High School. I'm writing to seek help from you.
我是光明中学足球队队长李华。我写信是为了向你寻求帮助。
2．I am Li Hua, a senior high school student from China. I plan to study at your university after high school, and I'm writing to see if you can give me some advice.
我是李华，一位来自中国的高中生。我打算高中毕业后到贵校学习，今写信请您提些建议。
3．I'm writing in the hope that you can help me to learn English.
我写信希望你能帮助我学习英语。
●亮点出彩篇中间
4．It is difficult for me to stay passionate and energetic all day long.
一整天保持激情和精力充沛对我来说是很难的。
5．I have some difficulty in putting what I have learned into practice.
我很难把学到的知识应用于实践当中。
6．Please help polish my application and check the format of my résumé when it is convenient for you.
请在你方便的时候帮忙修改一下我的申请书，并检查一下我的个人简历的格式。
●韵味无穷结尾句
7．I would be grateful if you could lend me a helping hand.
如果你能帮我一把，我将不胜感激。
8．Your professional advice would be of great help to me. Looking forward to your early reply.
你的专业建议对我会有很大的帮助。期待您的早日答复。
9．I'd appreciate it if you could do me the favour. Looking forward to your reply.
如果您能帮这个忙，我将不胜感激。期待您的回复。
[佳作背诵]
(2020·全国卷Ⅲ)假定你是李华，你和同学根据英语课文改编了一个短剧。给外教Miss Evans写封邮件，请她帮忙指导。邮件内容包括：
1．剧情简介；
2．指导内容；
3．商定时间地点。
注意：1．词数100左右；
2．结束语已为你写好。
Dear Miss Evans，
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Looking forward to your early reply.Best regards!
Yours truly，
Li Hua
Dear Miss Evans，
I'm writing to ask for your help with our English short play adapted from our English textbook.
The story starts with a boy named Huckleberry Finn，who ran away from home and lived with his friend Jim, a former slave，on a raft on the Mississippi River.Then Finn was cheated by two men，with his raft stolen and Jim sold to a farm.Finn and his friend Tom Sawyer made a plan to save Jim from the farm.At last they managed to free Jim.
I wonder if you could give us some guidance on how to perform the play better.The lines of the actors also need to be polished.If possible，shall we meet you in your office at 10：00 a．m. tomorrow?
Looking forward to your early reply.Best regards!
Yours truly，
Li Hua
[针对性训练]
假定你是李津，你的美国朋友Jason准备来北京游学，他对中国的京剧非常感兴趣，发邮件向你询问有关情况。请你回复邮件，内容包括：
1．介绍京剧的历史(影响、地位、特点等)；
2．推荐著名的京剧曲目。
注意：1．词数不少于80；
2．可适当增加细节，使内容充实、行文连贯；
3．文章开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：京剧Peking Opera；《空城计》Empty Fort Strategy；《贵妃醉酒》Drunkened Concubine
Dear Jason，
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Yours，
Li Jin
[参考范文]　
Dear Jason，
How is everything going？I hear you are going to start your study tour in Beijing.I am more than pleased to learn that you are interested in Peking Opera.
As you know，Peking Opera is one of the most influential operas in China，which has a history of more than 200 years.It is rich in interesting ancient Chinese stories，music，dances and costumes and is considered a national treasure.Empty Fort Strategy and Drunkened Concubine are famous masterpieces of Peking Opera，which will be on at many theaters in Beijing.I'm sure you will be fascinated by them.
Best wishes!
Yours，
Li Jin
二、感谢信
[谋篇布局]

[亮点句式]
●夺人眼球开头句
1．I'm extremely grateful/thankful to you for your unselfish assistance during my stay in London.
感谢您在我逗留伦敦期间给予我无私的帮助。
2．I would like to take this opportunity to express my great gratitude for your timely help and support.
我想借此机会表达对您给予我们及时的帮助和支持的感谢。
3．Thank you so much for the gift you sent me. It's one of the most wonderful gifts I have ever got.
非常感谢您给我寄来的礼物。这是我收到的最好的礼物之一。
●亮点出彩篇中间
4．Your thoughtful service and warm reception really brought great convenience and pleasure to my whole trip.
您们的周到服务和热情招待给我的整个行程增添了极大的方便与快乐。
5．Thank you for your generous/selfless/kind help, without which I wouldn't have made such great progress.
多亏您慷慨的/无私的/友好的帮助，没有您的帮助，我就不会取得这么大的进步。
6．So happy a time did we have that it was not until we went back to the hotel where we stayed that we realized that my husband's wallet was gone.
我们玩得非常高兴，直到返回住的宾馆时我们才意识到我丈夫的钱包丢失了。
●韵味无穷结尾句
7．It was kind and generous of you to do this for me, and I can't thank you enough.
您对我如此友好和慷慨，我真是感激不尽。
8．I wish there were a better word than “thanks” to express my appreciation for your generous help.
要是有比“谢谢”更好的词语来表达我对您的慷慨帮助的感谢之情就好了。
9．Thank you again for your hospitality and I sincerely invite you to visit my hometown at your convenience.
再次感谢您的盛情款待，并诚挚地邀请您方便时到我的家乡做客。
[佳作背诵]
假定你是李华，经常帮助你学习英语的朋友Alex即将返回自己的国家。请给他写一封邮件，内容包括：
1．表示感谢；
2．回顾Alex对你的帮助；
3．临别祝愿。
注意：
1．词数100左右；
2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Alex，
I'm sorry to hear that you are going to return to your country very soon, and I'm writing this email to express my gratitude for your help.
First of all, thank you for helping me learn English.Because of your help，I have improved my spoken and written English. Without your help, I wouldn't have made such great progress in English learning. Besides, what you told me about your country broadened my horizons and aroused my interest in foreign cultures.
I wish you a safe and comfortable journey back home and all the best in the future as well.
Yours，
Li Hua
[针对性训练]
假定你是新华中学的学生李华，上周日不慎把书包遗失在操场上，里面有学生证、手机、钱包等物品，你校外教Mr.Smith捡到后上交给学校。请你用英语给他写封感谢信。
注意：1．词数80左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3．开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。
Dear Mr.Smith，
I'm Li Hua，a student from Xinhua Middle School.
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Yours，
Li Hua
[参考范文]
Dear Mr.Smith，
I'm Li Hua，a student from Xinhua Middle School. I'm writing this letter to thank you for returning my schoolbag.
Last Sunday afternoon，I left my schoolbag there owing to my carelessness. I was worried because my student ID card and cell phone were all in it.Just as I was at a loss，I was informed that my schoolbag was at the school's Lost and Found, where I knew it was you who had picked up my schoolbag and handed it in.
Again, I would like to express my thanks to you and I wish you a happy mood every day.
Yours，
Li Hua
三、道歉信
[谋篇布局]

[亮点句式]
●夺人眼球开头句
1．I'm writing to express/convey my sincere apology to you.
我写信向你表达我诚挚的歉意。
2．Now, I am writing this letter to show you my deep regret.
现在，我写信向你表达我深切的歉意。
3．I hate to say it, but I'm unable to carry on helping you learn Chinese. Words fail me when I want to express my deep regret.
我不愿这么说，不过我不能继续帮助你学中文了。对此我深表歉意。
●亮点出彩篇中间
4．I apologize sincerely for what I said that day. I didn't mean to hurt you.
我诚挚地为那天我说的话向你道歉。我不是有意伤害你的。
5．Please allow me to explain the reason for my absence in detail.
请允许我详细解释我缺席的原因。
6．I suggest we put it off until next Thursday. Will that be fine for you?
我建议推迟到下周四。你看合适吗？
●韵味无穷结尾句
7．I sincerely hope this won't cause you much inconvenience.
我真诚地希望这不会给你带来太多的不便。
8．I feel sorry indeed to have put you in such great trouble.
给你带来这么大的麻烦真的十分抱歉。
9．Once again, I'm sorry for any inconvenience caused.
对于造成的任何不便我再次表示歉意。
[佳作背诵]
(2016·全国卷Ⅲ)假定你是李华，与留学生朋友Bob约好一起去书店，因故不能赴约。请给他写封邮件，内容包括：
1．表示歉意；
2．说明原因；
3．另约时间。
注意：
1．词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Bob，
I am sorry to say that I cannot go to the bookstore with you on Friday afternoon. I have just found that I have to attend an important class meeting that afternoon. I hope the change will not cause you too much trouble.
Shall we go on Saturday morning? We can set out early so that we will have more time to read and select books. If it is convenient for you，let's meet at 8：30 outside the school gate. If not, let me know what time suits you best. I should be available any time after school next week.
Yours，
Li Hua
[针对性训练]
(2020·浙江温州适应性测试)假定你是李华，上周从外教Jackson处借得一本英文杂志，原定本周六下午归还，但你因某种原因不能按时还书。请给他写一封电子邮件说明情况，内容包括：
1．表示歉意；
2．说明原因；
3．另约时间。
注意：1．词数80左右；
2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Mr. Jackson，
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Yours，
Li Hua
[参考范文]
Dear Mr. Jackson，
I'm indeed sorry to say that I can't return you the English magazine which I borrowed last week this Saturday afternoon. I hope you can forgive me for not keeping my word. Just now my monitor informed me that we would have a class meeting on that day. As the final examination is coming, we intend to have a meeting about the arrangement for the exam.
If it's convenient for you, we can make it next weekend, or let me know when you are available.
Please allow me to say sorry again.
Yours，
Li Hua
四、推荐信
[谋篇布局]

[亮点句式]
●夺人眼球开头句
1．Learning that you are coming to visit China, I'd like to recommend several places of interest to you.
得知你将来中国游玩，我向你推荐几处名胜。
2．Having learned that our library is planning to buy new books, I'm willing to recommend some books to you.
得知我们图书馆准备买新书，我愿意向您推荐一些书。
3．I'm more than glad/pleased/delighted to learn that you are going to Beijing, and I'd like to offer my recommendation.
得知你要去北京我很高兴，我想向你提出我的建议。
●亮点出彩篇中间
4．It offers you an opportunity to do something interesting and creative. Meanwhile, it provides you a source of pleasure.
它提供给你一个做有趣且富有创意的事情的机会。同时也能给你带来快乐。
5．I recommend that you sleep in a tent at night so that you can get close to nature.
我建议你晚上在帐篷中睡觉，这样可以亲近大自然。
6．There are all kinds of courses for you to choose from. You can visit the website for detailed information.
有许多课程可供选择。你可以登录网站了解详细信息。
●韵味无穷结尾句
7．I do hope you can take my recommendations into account/consideration and make a final decision.
我真希望你能考虑我的建议并作出最后的决定。
8．I'll be more than happy if you can take my recommendations/ideas into consideration.
如果你能考虑我的建议/想法，我会非常高兴。
[佳作背诵]
(2020·广东、福建等省联考)假定你是李华，你最近经常用一款手机app帮家里在网上买菜，觉得这既方便又实惠。请你写信把它推荐给你的外籍老师Jack，内容包括：
1．功能介绍：产品推荐，收藏产品，查看物流信息；
2．它的优势：蔬菜新鲜且价格合理，服务快捷。
注意：
1．词数80左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考词汇：物流信息tracking information
Dear Jack，
I'm writing to recommend a mobile app where I have bought vegetables several times for my family. The features are as follows.
Firstly, it's a practical app. It helps you place an order for vegetables according to your preference. What's more, the tracking information can be checked on the app. The whole process is like shopping online but the speed is faster. If you order vegetables in the morning, you can receive them in the afternoon.
So I recommend it to you. I believe you'll fall in love with the wonderful app. I would be glad if it's helpful to you.
Yours，
Li Hua
[针对性训练]
(2020·河北衡水中学调研)假定你是李华，你的新西兰朋友Terry即将参加学校组织的介绍中国的演讲比赛，发邮件请你帮忙推荐一个主题并作简单介绍。请回复邮件，内容包括：
1．推荐主题；
2．简单介绍；
3．推荐原因。
注意：1．词数80左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Terry，
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Yours，
Li Hua
[参考范文]
Dear Terry，
I learn from your last letter that you are going to take part in a speech contest aimed at introducing China. I am more than pleased to offer my suggestions.
First, Chinese calligraphy is a unique art with beautiful images of Chinese characters. Additionally, the Chinese culture is embedded in the spirit of calligraphy. By introducing calligraphy, you will open up the opportunity for your schoolmates to learn more about Chinese culture and history.
I hope these suggestions would be beneficial to you.
Yours，
Li Hua
五、申请信
[谋篇布局]

[亮点句式]
●夺人眼球开头句
1．I am happy to know you are advertising for some volunteers, so I'm writing to apply for this job.
很高兴知道你们在公开招聘志愿者，我写信是想申请这份工作。
2．I'm writing in reply to the notice for volunteers, hoping that I may have an opportunity to act as a guide.
我写信以回复招聘志愿者的启事，希望我能有机会担任向导。
3．Having heard that you are recruiting volunteers to teach in the countryside, I am writing to apply to be one of them.
听说你们在招募下乡支教志愿者，我想申请做志愿者。
●亮点出彩篇中间
4．Not only am I outgoing and energetic but also I am optimistic and enthusiastic.
我不仅开朗活泼，而且乐观热情。
5．My education and work experience will qualify me for your advertised position.
我的学历和工作经验会使我胜任您招聘的职位。
6．In addition, I participate in various social activities in my spare time to seize every opportunity to enhance my personal ability as well as to enrich my business experiences.
此外，为了抓住每个提升我的个人能力和丰富我的工作经历的机会，在业余时间里，我也参加各种社会活动。
●韵味无穷结尾句
7．I would appreciate it if I could be offered the chance. I am sure I can be of great help to you.
如果我能得到这个机会，我将不胜感激。我确信我能对您有很大帮助。
8．Should you treat my application favorably, I would spare no effort to offer my best service.
如果您看中我的申请，我将不遗余力地提供最佳服务。
9．I would appreciate it if you could take the trouble to provide me with some information and send me the necessary application materials.
如果您能给我提供一些信息并寄给我必要的申请材料，我将不胜感激。
[佳作背诵]
(2019·全国卷Ⅰ)假定你是李华，暑期在伦敦学习，得知当地美术馆要举办中国画展览。请写一封信申请做志愿者，内容包括：
1．写信目的；
2．个人优势；
3．能做的事情。
注意：
1．词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3．结束语已为你写好。
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Yours，
Li Hua
Dear Sir/Madam，
I am Li Hua, a Chinese student who is taking a summer course in London. I'm more than thrilled to learn that a Chinese painting exhibition will be held in your local gallery. I am writing to apply for the post of a volunteer.
I have a good command of English as well as being keen on Chinese paintings, which enables me to introduce visitors to Chinese paintings easily. Besides, I would like to spread Chinese culture and strengthen world cultural exchange through this activity. My aim is to let China go to the world and let the world understand China. I would appreciate it if you could take my request into account.
Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours，
Li Hua
[针对性训练]
假定你是高三学生李华，你在校园网上看到一则招募暑假英语夏令营志愿者的广告，请你写一封信申请参加。内容包括：
1．自身的英语情况；
2．相关经验。
注意：1．词数80左右；
2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3．开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：英语夏令营 English Summer Camp
Dear Sir/Madam，
My name is Li Hua and I'm a student in a high school.____________________
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Yours truly，
Li Hua
[参考范文]
Dear Sir/Madam，
My name is Li Hua and I'm a student in a high school.I'd like to apply to be a volunteer of the English Summer Camp.
First of all, I'm very fond of English and take an active part in all kinds of activities related to English. Second, I've taken part in plenty of voluntary work since Senior 1． Lastly, I've got a great deal of experience in organizing English activities.
I'd be honored if you can choose me. I'll make every effort to do my job and you won't regret it.
Yours truly，
Li Hua
六、邀请信
[谋篇布局]

[亮点句式]
●夺人眼球开头句
1．I'd like to invite you to visit the nearby nursing home along with us on the Double Ninth Festival.
我想邀请您重阳节那天与我们一起去探访附近的养老院。
2．A Chinese Classics Reciting Contest will be held in my school. Knowing that you are really into Chinese culture, I'm writing to invite you to participate in it.
我校将要主办“中华经典文学诵读比赛”，知道你对中国文化很感兴趣，我写信邀请你参加。
3．I'm writing to share with you the news that a charity party will take place in our school next Wednesday. On behalf of the Students' Union, I sincerely invite you to come.
我写信是想和你分享下星期三由我们学生会举行的慈善聚会的消息，我代表学生会诚挚地邀请你的到来。
●亮点出彩篇中间
4．The exhibition will take place in our school art gallery on April 26th, aimed to encourage students to respect knowledge and advocate science.
展览将于4月26日在我们学校美术馆举行，目的是鼓励学生尊重知识，崇尚科学。
5．I think it is a good chance to appreciate local operas, which surely help you learn more about Chinese culture.
我认为这是欣赏当地歌剧的好机会，这无疑有助于你更多地了解中国文化。
6．By participating in the activity, not only can we gain confidence in English learning, but also broaden our horizons.
通过参加活动，我们不仅可以在英语学习方面增强自信，而且还可以拓宽我们的视野。
●韵味无穷结尾句
7．I do hope you will accept my invitation if it is convenient to you.
我真心希望您方便的话能接受我的邀请。
8．I would appreciate it if you could confirm your participation at your earliest convenience.
如果您能尽早确认参加，我将不胜感激。
9．I sincerely hope you can join us and have fun. Looking forward to your reply.
我真诚地希望你来加入我们度过一段愉快的时光。期待你的答复。
[佳作背诵]
(2019·全国卷Ⅲ)假定你是李华，你校将举办音乐节。请写封邮件邀请你的英国朋友Allen参加，内容包括：
1．时间；
2．活动安排；
3．欢迎他表演节目。
注意：
1．词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Allen，
I'm Li Hua，I'm glad to tell you that a Chinese music festival will be held in the music hall of our school on November 8th. According to the concert poster, many masterpieces will be played by a famous band. Knowing that you are fond of classical music, I'd like to invite you to come and show your talent. I'm sure it is a good chance to perform your favorite music.
If it is convenient for you, I'll meet you at the entrance of the music hall at 7: 00 that evening.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours，
Li Hua
[针对性训练]
(2020·辽宁省辽南协作体模拟)假定你是李华，你的城市为迎接2022冬奥会开展了“冰雪运动进校园”的活动，现在请你以电子邮件的形式向你的网友Jack介绍活动情况，并邀请他一起体验。内容包括：
1．活动的目的；
2．活动的内容；
3．活动的意义。
注意：1．词数80左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考词汇：冰雪运动ice and snow sports；滑雪场ski resort；溜冰场ice rink
Dear Jack，
I'm delighted to tell you that with the 2022 Beijing Winter Olympic Games approaching, ________________________________________________________
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Yours，
Li Hua
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Dear Jack，
I'm delighted to tell you that with the 2022 Beijing Winter Olympic Games approaching, Beijing government has recently launched a series of activities aimed to popularize ice and snow sports on campus.
The campaign which can arouse students' interest in ice and snow sports has begun at schools. Students will be admitted for free to some ski resorts and outdoor ice rinks, where they can practice and improve their skating and skiing skills. Not only will these activities promote ice and snow sports but they can help students to build themselves up.
You are sincerely invited to join in and have fun with ice and snow.
Yours，
Li Hua
七、建议信
[谋篇布局]

[亮点句式]
●夺人眼球开头句
1．I know from your letter that you have trouble in learning English. I am writing to offer some advice.
从你的来信中得知你在学习英语方面遇到了困难。我写信给你提供一些建议。
2．I am sorry to learn that you have trouble/difficulty communicating with others and that you often feel lonely because of this.
得知你与他人交流有困难，经常感到孤独，我很难过。
3．I have received your letter saying that you plan to pay a ten­day visit to China next month. Perhaps the following suggestions are helpful to you.
我已经收到了你的来信。信上说你打算下个月对中国进行十天的访问。可能下面的建议对你有所帮助。
●亮点出彩篇中间
4．In addition, it makes good sense to read a book or listen to some music.By doing this, you will calm yourself down.
另外，看书或听音乐是明智的选择。这样做会使你自己平静下来。
5．Only in this way will you deepen your understanding of Chinese and adapt to the life here more easily.
只有用这种方式，你才能加深对汉语的理解并更容易适应这里的生活。
6．As to how to get along well with your classmates, you should just remember that kindness is essential.
至于如何与同学和睦相处，请谨记，友善至关重要。
●韵味无穷结尾句
7．I am convinced that you can manage to get over these difficulties through your own effort.
我坚信，通过你自己的努力，你会成功克服这些困难的。
8．I hope these suggestions will be of use to you. Remember: The man who has made up his mind to win will never say “impossible”．
我希望这些建议会对你有用。记住：一个决心要成功的人从来不说“不可能”。
9．I hope that my suggestions are helpful to you anyway. I would be more than happy to see your improvement.
无论如何，我希望这些建议能对你有所帮助。看到你的进步我会非常高兴。
[佳作背诵]
假定你是李华，你的留学生朋友Otis对你校将要举行的中文歌曲大赛很感兴趣，但是他不知道是否该参加，因此给你写了一封邮件。请你回复邮件，内容包括：
1．建议参加；
2．给出理由。
注意：1．词数80左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Otis，
I'm glad to hear that you are interested in the Chinese Singing Contest to be held in our school.Personally, you should participate without any hesitation.
Firstly, you are fond of Chinese songs, and the competition allows you to show yourself up on stage.Besides, through this competition, you will know your strengths and weaknesses so that you can make improvements on singing Chinese songs.In addition, the contest will help you to make more friends and learn more about Chinese songs.
Yours，
Li Hua
[针对性训练]
(2020·湖南六校联考)假定你是李华，你的美国朋友Jamie来信说他对中国传统文学非常感兴趣，但在阅读时遇到了困难，比如很多汉字不认识，读不懂文章的意思等，希望得到你的帮助。请你给他回信，内容包括：
1．表示理解并给予安慰；
2．提出建议。
注意：1．词数80左右(开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考词汇：中国传统文学traditional Chinese literature；汉字Chinese character
Dear Jamie，
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Best wishes!
Yours，
Li Hua
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Dear Jamie，
I am more than glad to know that you are interested in the traditional Chinese literature. It's never easy to learn Chinese characters and essays but you don't have to feel upset. Here are some useful tips.
First, turn to the Internet for help when you have a problem. Second, you can learn from Chinese people around and I'm always here to help. But the most important is to keep on learning and practicing. You are sure to make progress!
Best wishes!
Yours，
Li Hua
八、祝贺信
[谋篇布局]

[亮点句式]
●夺人眼球开头句
1．I am pleased/delighted/happy/excited to hear/learn/know that you have won first prize in the contest, so I'm writing to express/convey my congratulations.
得知你在比赛中获得一等奖我真的非常高兴/兴奋，因此我写信表示祝贺。
2．I'd like to congratulate you on your success in organizing the activity in your school.
我祝贺你成功地在你校组织了这次活动。
●亮点出彩篇中间
3．A man of ability and intelligence like you is certain to be a success.
像你这样聪明能干的人一定会成功。
4．It comes no surprise to me because I know how talented you are and how hard you have worked to reach the goal.
我一点也不吃惊，因为我知道你的天赋和为实现目标所付出的努力。
5．In my view/As far as I am concerned, it is your talent and efforts that lead to your brilliant achievement.
依我看，是你的天赋和努力使你取得了巨大的成就。
6．I'm proud of your years of hard work, which has finally paid off.
我为你多年的努力感到骄傲，你的努力最终有了回报。
●韵味无穷结尾句
7．Please accept our sincere congratulations and best wishes.
请接受我们真诚的祝贺和最美好的祝福。
8．Congratulations to you again and I am looking forward to your further achievements.
再次向你表示祝贺，我盼望着你拥有更大的成就。
[佳作背诵]
假如你是李华，你的英国朋友Michael在学校举办的中国诗词大赛中获得了外国选手组一等奖。请根据以下提示发邮件向他表示祝贺。
1．祝贺他获奖；
2．肯定他付出的努力；
3．询问何时方便，一起交流一下中国古诗词学习心得。
注意：
1．词数80左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考词汇：中国诗词大赛 Chinese Poetry Contest
Dear Michael，
I am writing to offer you my sincere congratulations on being the winner of your group in the Chinese Poetry Contest.
You're interested in Chinese poetry and you have gained a deep understanding of many Chinese poems. Your unique insights into some poems have left a deep impression on the audience. So you deserve this prize.
By the way，when will it be convenient for you to meet me？I want to exchange views with you on how to learn Chinese poetry. Looking forward to your reply.
Yours，
Li Hua
[针对性训练]
假如你是李华，你的新西兰笔友 Eric 在汉语演讲比赛中荣获一等奖。请你给他写一封祝贺信，内容包括：
1．表示祝贺；
2．表扬他为此付出的努力；
3．表达对他未来的祝愿。
注意：
1．词数80左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考词汇：汉语演讲比赛 the Chinese Speech Contest
Dear Eric，
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Yours，
Li Hua
[参考范文]
Dear Eric，
Learning that you have won the first prize in the Chinese Speech Contest, I'm writing to express my sincere congratulations to you.
I am well aware that it is your diligence, perseverance and effective learning methods that contribute to your success. I am deeply impressed with your standard pronunciation and fluent Chinese. There is no doubt that having a good command of Chinese enables you to see the world through a new window. I strongly believe that you will have a promising career future!
Wish you greater progress and further success in learning Chinese!
Yours，
Li Hua