道谦信写作 课件

这是一份道谦信写作 课件，共20页。PPT课件主要包含了Clarity，Coherence，Courtesy，Accuracy ，Neatness ，Beginning，Ending，Body，apology， reason等内容，欢迎下载使用。
Criteria f assessing writing
Experience f assessing writing
Imprvement f yur writing
General descriptin f nline writing
Descriptin f submissin
Descriptin f mistakes
Descriptin f scres
Assessment criteria f writing
Brainstrming: What is a gd piece f writing?
Cmpleteness
Adpt an aplgetic tne.
Cver all the required pints.
Apply mre grammatical structure and vcabulary.
Diversity
Have few mistakes in grammar r vcabulary.
Use the cnjunctins between sentences prperly.
Cntain a clear framewrk as a letter f aplgy.
Accmplish it within limited wrds.
Write beautifully.
Writing task
假定你是李明，前几天由于感冒发烧，未能完成英语老师 Mr. Chen 布置的作业。请给Mr. Chen 写一封信说明情况，内容包括：1、表达歉意；2、说明原因；3、保证补交作业。注意：1. 词数80左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
A letter f aplgy
1. What’s the structure f a letter f aplgy?
2. What are the key pints in each parts?
further aplgy
Secndary pints
+ cnsequence
Tip 1: Organize the cntents by means f writing structure.
+ wish
3. What are the secndary pints in each parts?
3. Have a discussin in grups abut reasns and suggestins in detail.
1. Have a severe cld caught in the heavy rain2. Be infected with a flu
1. Finish hmewrk carefully2. Allw me t finish it in tw days
Tip 2: Think abut details assciated with reality.
1. Stay in bed2. Receive treatments
Have a discussin in grups: Is it a gd writing? Why?
Accuracy vs curtesy
1. Accrding t the aplgetic tne, try t tell whether the language is prper in the beginning part. If nt, hw will yu plish it?
I am extremely srry t admit that I failed t hand in hmewrk yu assigned.
I am writing t cnvey my aplgy t yu fr having failed t ding my hmewrk in time.
Accrding t the aplgetic tne, try t tell whether the language is prper in the ending part. If nt, hw will yu plish it?
Yur pardn and understanding will be appreciated.
Different expressins fr a letter f aplgy
Beginning Aplgy
BdyReasn & slutin
EndingWish & further aplgy
I am writing t cnvey my aplgy fr nt ding the assignment yu have given me in time.I am excessively srry that I failed t accmplish the hmewrk yu assigned the ther day.I am exceedingly srry t aplgize t yu fr nt managing t submit my hmewrk punctually.I am writing t make an aplgy fr nt being able t finish yur assignment befre the deadline.Shamefaced, I am writing t aplgize fr my tardy respnse t yur assignments.I am srry t admit that I have delayed handing in my hmewrk.
Yur pardn and understanding will be highly appreciated.Hpefully, yu can accept my aplgy and yu will grant me t anther tw days.I hpe yu can frgive me. I wuld appreciate it if yu culd pardn me.
Tip 3: Make an aplgy in a sincere way.
Descriptin f vcabulary
Descriptin f cllcatin
make a + adj. + aplgy
prfuse aplgies
make my aplgy fr +
n. ving/ nt ving the fact that what clause
hmewrk/ assignment
catch a feverfall int a feverhave a cnstant feverbecme a fever patientsuffer frm a fever with severe symptmsdevelp a fever with an upset stmach
prmise t finish it carefullymake a cmmitment t cmplete it thrughlyguarantee t hand in as sn as pssibleassure yu that I will submit it early
causing yur displeasurent being able t finish my hmewrkdelaying submitting my assignment
Try t cmplete the mind map in grups by searching the crpus.
my half-finished hmewrkmy tardy respnd t yur assignment
fr the fact that clause
fr what clause
that I failed t cmplete the hmewrk yu assigned three days ag.
what I have missed ding.
written hmewrktranslatincmprehensiveImprtanttime-cnsumingtughawkward
d my hmewrkget my hmewrk dneget dwn t/ start my hmewrkg thrugh my hmewrkcmplete my hmewrkcncentrate n / fcus n my hmewrkwrry abut carry ut/ undertakehand in / turn in / submitskip/ miss/ pstpne/ put ff
1. I will get invlved in an imprtant meeting tmrrw, fr which I have n ptin but t make preparatin in advance.
Diversity & Cherence
Try t rewrite the fllwing sentences in different ways.
2.Because f the exam which will be held tmrrw, I have n spare time t enjy dinner with yu.
3. The English speech cmpetitin which is scheduled t be held next Friday is put frward s I have t prepare fr it .
With an imprtant meeting t attend, I have t make full preparatins in advance.
Owing t the appraching exam, I will be ccupied in preparing fr it.
I am in urgent need f time t prepare fr the English speech cmpetitin t be held a week ahead f schedule.
Dear Mr. Chen, I am writing t cnvey my aplgy fr nt ding the assignment yu have given me in time. Suffering frm a cld and having a high fever, I received varius treatments s that I eventually failed t d my assignment in time. Guilty abut it, I assure that I will accmplish my assignment carefully and hand it in as sn as pssible. Yur pardn and understanding will be appreciated. Yurs sincerely, Li Ming
Pssible versin
Organize ideas lgically
Plish writingrepeatedly
State ideas accurately
Try t plish yur writing nline again based n the assessment criteria f writing.