09 习惯养成与个人成长 2022年中考英语满分作文赏析

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（2022·贵州黔东南·中考真题）每个人都有不同的生活习惯，养成良好的生活习惯能帮助我们拥有健康的体魄和美好的生活。临近毕业，校团委正在向九年级学生征文，请结合自身实际，以Hw t Develp Gd Living Habits为题，从日常起居，卫生习惯，健康饮食，体育锻炼，交通安全等方面进行阐述，写一篇英语短文投稿。
写作要求：
1. 意思连贯，表达准确，书写规范，适当发挥；
2. 文中不能出现任何真实的人名、校名及所在地等信息；
3. 词数80左右，文章的开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Hw t Develp Gd Living Habits
Everyne has different living habits. Gd habits can help us keep healthy and have beautiful lives. As teenagers, what shuld we d?
In my pinin, ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【满分作文赏析】
Hw t Develp Gd Living Habits
Everyne has different living habits. Gd habits can help us keep healthy and have beautiful lives. As teenagers, what shuld we d?
In my pinin, everyne shuld get up and g t bed n time every day. Dn’t stay up t late. Everyne shuld wash hands befre meals. Everyne shuld eat mre vegetables and fruit. Dn’t eat t much junk fd. What’s mre, everyne shuld d exercise. N littering and spitting. It is nt allwed t play n the rad. When crssing the rad, everyne shuld bey the traffic rules.
In a wrd, we must develp gd living habits s as t keep healthy.
【解析】
1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。以“如何养成良好的生活习惯”为题写一篇短文。
2.写作指导：本文采用一般现在时，人称以第三人称为主。分为三段式：第一段开头已给出；第二段从日常起居，卫生习惯，健康饮食，体育锻炼，交通安全等方面进行阐述；最后一段总结概括。写作时保持主谓一致性，做到无语法和标点错误。
NO.2
（2022·黑龙江黑龙江·中考真题）转眼间，你已经是一名九年级学生了。你还记得刚升入初中时的自己是什么样子吗？这两年在你身上发生了哪些变化？请以“My changes”为题写一篇英语作文，请你根据下面的要求完成这篇作文。
要求:
1. 写你三个方面的变化，用上used t结构；
2. 紧扣作文题目、语言表达准确、语意通顺连贯；
3. 词数90词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）
My changes
I’m in Grade 9 and I have changed a lt. First, ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【满分作文赏析】
My changes
I’m in Grade 9 and I have changed a lt. First, I used t be thin, but nw I am a little fatter. I used t have curly hair, but nw I have shrt straight hair, because I am busy with my study. Secnd, I have made much prgress in English, I used t be weak in it. But with my English teacher’s help, nw I ften get gd scres n my English exams. What’s mre, I’m mre utging than I used t be. I used t be afraid f speaking in frnt f peple. But nw I can give a speech in public. I’ve als made many friends.
These are my changes. What abut yurs?
【解析】
1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。围绕“我的改变”写一篇短文，要求从三个方面描写自己的变化。
2.写作指导：本文采用一般过去时和一般现在时，人称以第一人称为主。本文分为两段式：第一段从身形，英语学习以及性格方面介绍自己的变化；最后一段总结概括。写作时保持主谓一致性，做到无语法和标点错误。
NO.3
（2022·湖南岳阳·中考真题）某英语网站开展关于“Hw t Imprve Myself”的征稿活动，倡导同学们提升自我，努力成为“终生运动者，责任担当者，问题解决者，优雅生活者”，请根据以下图示内容积极投稿。
要求：
1.词数80~100；
2.请根据以上提示信息，结合实际情况叙述，可适当发挥；
3.文稿中不得出现真实的人名、校名；
4.字迹工整，语言流畅，表达正确，逻辑清晰。
Hw t Imprve Myself
Life is really a lng lessn, s I have t imprve myself.
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【满分作文赏析】
Hw t Imprve Myself
Life is really a lng lessn, s I have t imprve myself.
First, I need t exercise ne hur every day. It is bad t stay at hme and play games fr a lng time. Secnd, I shuld be respnsible fr myself and my family. I shuld be independent instead f depending n my parents t ften. Third, in face f the prblems, I have t take up the challenges and wrk them ut rather than run away frm them. Next, I will develp my interest in many things, such as playing basketball, and knitting, instead f being interested in nthing. Last but nt least, I will cmmunicate with thers and be a gd team player.
【解析】
1.题干解读：该题目属于议论文写作。在写作时应紧接开头继续写作，根据题目要求讲述运动，责任担当，问题解决和兴趣爱好方面提升自己的方法。
2.写作指导：本文时态以一般现在时为主，人称以第一人称为主，讲述提升自己的方法，要叙述完整，条理清晰。
NO.4
（2022·吉林·中考真题）随着年龄的增长，青少年需要在生活中不断提高自我管理能力，以便在衣、食、住、行等方面更好地管理自己。请以“Learning t Manage Our Own Lives”为题，用英语写一篇短文。
内容包括：
1.结合实际，谈谈在生活中提高自我管理能力的重要性。
2.列举在生活中自我管理能力薄弱的现象(至少两个)，并提出合理化建议。
3.发出在生活中提高自我管理能力的号召。
写作要求：
1.语言流畅，层次清晰，内容可以适当发挥。
2.词数80-100，开头与结尾部分已经给出，不计入总词数。
3.书写规范，卷面整洁。
4.文中不能出现考生姓名和学校名称。
Learning t Manage Our Own Lives
These days, we Chinese teenagers ften depend n ur parents in ur daily lives. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
In shrt, the earlier we manage ur wn lives, the better it is fr ur future.
【满分作文赏析】
Learning t Manage Our Own Lives
These days, we Chinese teenagers ften depend n ur parents in ur daily lives. we can’t deal with difficulties by urselves. S it’s imprtant fr us t learn t manage ur wn lives.
I think ur parents shuld believe in us and never d everything fr us. Smetimes it’s OK t give us prper advice and they shuld allw us t make ur wn decisins. Als, I think parents shuld encurage us t face the prblems bravely and try t slve them.
Fr me, I seldm did husewrk in the past, because I thught it is ur parents’ wrk. This is a wrng pinin. We shuld learn t d husewrk like sweeping the flr and taking ut the rubbish. I hardly cked either. When my mther was n business, I realized I must learn t ck by myself. After that, I find that cking is nt as difficult as it seems.
In shrt, the earlier we manage ur wn lives, the better it is fr ur future.
【解析】
1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。以“学习管理我们自己的生活”为题写一篇短文。
2.写作指导：本文采用一般现在时和一般过去时，人称以第一人称和第三人称为主。本文分为四段式：第一段引出主题；第二段谈谈在生活中提高自我管理能力的重要性；第三段列举在生活中自我管理能力薄弱的现象；第四段发出在生活中提高自我管理能力的号召。写作时保持主谓一致性，做到无语法和标点错误。