2023届高考英语复习：湖丽衢应用文—推荐信 课件

这是一份2023届高考英语复习：湖丽衢应用文—推荐信 课件，共15页。PPT课件主要包含了Content，Coherence，complete，coherent，句式词汇单一，想到方面较少，语言不地道，审题精准，推荐信，开头切题等内容，欢迎下载使用。
Grammar & vcabulary
Handwriting
Crrect & diverse
Clean & Clear
（13-15分：语法结构或词汇有些许错误，但为尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致；具备较强的语用能力。）
耗时长(>15min)
Students’prblems
recite + practice
应用文写作(满分15分)假定你是李华，你校的外籍交换生Henry给你发了一封邮件，想让你为他推荐一种词典，用来学习汉语，请你用英语给他回复。内容包括：1. 词典名称；2. 推荐理由；3. 表达祝愿。注意：1．词数80左右；2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Suggest: t put frward an idea r a plan fr ther peple t think abut
建议信是提供几种建议或者提议供对方选择，答案是不确定的
recmmend: t tell sb. that sth. is gd r useful, r that sb. wuld be suitable fr a particular jb,etc.
推荐信是直接告诉对方被推荐的人/物是好的，有用的，合适的。答案是确定的
The definitins f “suggest” and “recmmend”
假定你是李华，你校的外籍交换生Henry给你发了一封邮件，想让你为他推荐一种词典，用来学习汉语，请你用英语给他回复。内容包括：1. 词典名称；2. 推荐理由；3. 表达祝愿。
Backgrund infrmatin
Writing purpse
Hearing\Learning\Cnsidering\Given that
make a recmmendatin (t sb.)n/abut sth.
in urgent need f
Pleased t knw yur keen interest in\passin fr Chinese learning
书名首字母大写，不加《》和“”
主体：理由充分，句式多样
When it cmes t a tl fr learning Chinese, Xinhua Dictinary enjys great ppularity amng Chinese learners.As fr an ideal tl t learn Chinese, Xinhua Dictinary is undubtedly yur first ptin.Xinhua Dictinary has a reputatin fr nt nly its adequate vcabulary but als its precise anntatin(注解). S cmprehensive and vivid are the cntents f it that yu can have a deeper appreciatin f Chinese by taking advantage f it.
In my pinin, Mdern Chinese Dictinary is secnd t nne. This dictinary, in which prvides varius meanings f the same character are exemplified in detail, is bund t suit everyne’s need. My tp recmmendatin is Xin Hua Dictinary, which is widely acknwledged as the mst prfessinal Chinese dictinary.
Equipped with it, yu are surely t gain prgress in learning Chinese.It cntains bth English and Chinese meanings, helping yu learn easily and strengthen yur understanding.
T begin with/What cmes first is…Mrever/ Besides/additinally…
I hpe my recmmendatin will be f help and wish yu great prgress in learning Chinese.Wish yu every success in yur Chinese learning.Hpefully, yu can harvest a fruitful and meaningful learning experience.Hpe yu’ll find my recmmendatin helpful.
A pssible versin:Dear Henry, Pleased t knw yur passin fr learning Chinese, I’m writing t recmmend Xinhua Dictinary t yu. As an ideal tl fr learning Chinese, Xinhua Dictinary enjys great ppularity amng Chinese learners, nt nly fr its wide range f vcabulary but als fr its precise explanatin f each wrd. S cmprehensive and vivid are the cntents f it that yu can have a deeper appreciatin f Chinese by taking advantage f it. Besides, its reasnable price is undubtedly an appealing factr. Hpe my recmmendatin can be f help and wish yu great prgress in learning Chinese. Yurs, Li Hua
CmpleteCrrectDiverseCherent
主体：理由充分， 句式多样
这是推荐信，不是建议信
but als yu can get
第二段该生很努力的在尝试一些高级句型，也达到了一定的效果。但是基本语言错误较多，而且推荐的理由表达方式有点不自然。如：with the prfessinal dictinary,diverse idims, peple's speaking patterns
学生习作点评：1. 该文章目的明确，推荐理由充分，祝福到位。2. 语言不够简洁，逻辑不够紧凑
Mdern Chinese Dictinary enjys great ppularity amng Chinese learners. The reasn why it is s ppular is that it nt nly has abundant vcabulary but als prvides detailed and precise explanatins.