山东省潍坊市三年（2020-2022）中考英语真题分题型分层汇编-04作文

山东省潍坊市三年（2020-2022）中考英语真题分题型分层汇编

04作文

一、书信作文

1．（2022·山东潍坊）Teens Around the World是一个国际青少年交流网站，近日有人发了一个关于“礼物”的帖子。假设你是李华，请阅读原帖后，结合自己的生活经历，用英语回帖。

注意：

1. 不要出现考生本人信息；

2. 70词左右。

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2．（2021·山东潍坊）Teens Around the World是一个国际青少年网站，近日有人发帖，讨论“发现生活中的小欢喜”。假设你是李华，请结合自己的生活体会，用英语跟帖。

注意：

1. 不要出现考生本人信息；

2. 80词左右。

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3．（2020·山东潍坊）Teens Around the World是一个国际青少年网站，近日有人发帖，询问有关网课的事情。假设你是李华，请结合自己上网课的体会，用英语回帖。

注意：

1.不要出现考生本人信息；

2.80词左右。

Hi Leo,

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China

参考答案：

1．例文

Dear Becky,

Everyone receives many gifts on some special days, so do I. Of all the gifts, I like books very much.

That was on my twelfth birthday party. I invited many friends to come to the party. My best friends Lily sent me a book about history. The history book made me know more about the history and culture. From then on, I began to like reading. I think reading can not only help me relax, but also open a new world for me. I will read more and more books frow now on.

Li Hua, China【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇书信作文。围绕“礼物”写一篇短文。

2.写作指导：本文采用一般过去时和一般现在时为主，人称以第一人称为主。分为两段式：第一段引出主题；第二段介绍自己收这个礼物的经历，喜欢这份礼物的原因以及自己的感受。写作时保持主谓一致性，做到无语法和标点错误。

2．例文

Dear Emily,

I think you’re right. I have volunteered in Old People’s Home, and this experience made me happy.

Last term, our school held an activity to volunteer in Old People’s Home. I joined it. I helped old people there to clean their rooms, made their beds, told stories, sang and danced with them. We all enjoyed ourselves on that day. I got a lot of fun helping others. So I decide to take part in more volunteer activities.【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇书信作文。分享曾经让自己开心的生活点滴。

2.写作指导：本文主要采用一般现在时和一般过去时，描述过去的经历要用一般过去时。先引出主题；再分享自己的经历和感悟。写作时保持主谓一致性，逻辑性要强，无语法和标点错误。

3．例文：

Hi Leo,

Students in our school have taken two-month online learning because of novel coronavirus. The serious disease has a great influence on both our life and our study. We have no choice but to adapt ourselves to online learning.

Actually, online learning has its own advantages. First of all, we have a comfortable learning environment while learning online at home. Secondly, there are lots of free courses online so we can choose what we like to learn. Thirdly, it is convenient for us to go over our lessons because we can replay them.

However, online learning also has some disadvantages. For example, spending too much time learning online is bad for our eyes. What’s more, we are easy to be influenced by computer games while learning online. In addition, if the network is poor, we can’t communicate with teachers fluently.

In my opinion, online learning is a new way of learning. We should make use of its advantages and try to make great progress during such a special period.

Li Hua,

China【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于议论文写作。在写作时应根据贴的内容提示讲述网课的优势和劣势并发表自己的看法。

2.例文点评：例文主要用第三人称进行写作，主要采用一般现在时态来写作。介绍网课的优势和劣势叙述完整且条理清晰。

3.高分亮点：

短语：because of；has a great influence on；have no choice；adapt ourselves to；first of all；go over；is bad for；be influenced by；in addition；communicate with；in my opinion; make use of; make great progress。

句型：there be+名词的句型；it做形式主语的句子；because引导的原因状语从句；if引导的条件状语从句。