专题05 应用文写作（第01期）-2022届新高考名校英语好题速递分项汇编

专题05 应用文写作（第01期）-2022届新高考名校英语好题速递分项汇编

【重庆市巴蜀中学2022届高考适应性月考卷（一）】假定你是学生会主席李华，刚刚组织了校园活动“传统中国才艺秀”。请给外教Smith写一封信，感谢他的友情参与和精彩表现，同时询问他对这次活动的看法和意见。内容包括：

1.表达感谢；

2.征求反馈。

注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；

2.请按照如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

Dear Smith,

______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Yours,

Li Hua

【答案】Dear Smith,

Thank you so much for having been involved in our annual campus gala: The Traditional Chinese Talent Show. As one of the organizers, I really appreciate the time and effort you have put into this event.

The show is valued by all of us, for its features various programs ranging from singing, dancing, talk shows to dramas,where we can live and breathe the passion of our conventional art. It couldn’t have been a thorough success without your wonderful performance. The audience was blown away by your beautiful singing voice.

Were there any programs that impressed you? I would be grateful if you can share some of your thoughts about this activity. Thanks again for being our honored guest as well as special performer. Looking forward to your reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

这是一篇应用文。要求考生给外教写一封信，对外教参与校园活动“传统中国才艺秀”表示感谢，并询问相关反馈。

词汇积累

参加：take part in→involve in

各种各样：different→various

传统的：traditional→conventional

完全的：total→thorough

句式拓展

原句：The show is valued by all of us for its features various programs ranging from singing, dancing, talk shows to dramas. From its features, we can live and breathe the passion of our conventional art.

拓展句：The show is valued by all of us, for its features various programs ranging from singing, dancing, talk shows to dramas, where we can live and breathe the passion of our conventional art.

【点睛】

[高分句型1] As one of the organizers,I really appreciate the time and effort you have put into this event.（运用了省略that的限定性定语从句）

[高分句型2] I would be grateful if you can share some of your thoughts about this activity. （运用了if引导的条件状语从句）

【福建省泉州市2022届高中毕业班质量检测（一）】假定你是李华，你校交换生Terry有意加入学校阳光志愿者组织（Sunshine Volunteer Club），向你咨询相关情况，请你给他写一封回信，表达支持并介绍活动及申请方式。

注意：

1.写作词汇应为80左右；

2.请按如下格式在答案卡的相应位置作答。

Dear Terry,

__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Yours,

Li Hua

【答案】Dear Terry,

Glad to know your desire to be a volunteer of the Sunshine Volunteer Club. As a member, I do think it is worthwhile to be engaged in volunteering and I’m writing to give you my full support.

Here are some of our regular activities, such as visits to the nursing home, events to promote people’s awareness of environmental protection and working as a tourist guide in a world heritage site.

Once you have decided, please fill in the application form attached and send it to me. Looking forward to your participation.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给交换生Terry写封信，对他想要加入学校阳光志愿者组织的想法表示支持并介绍这个活动及活动的申请方式。

1.词汇积累

高兴的：happy→glad

愿望，意愿：willingness→desire

从事于……，致力于……：be devoted to…→be engaged in…

事情，事件：thing→event

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：Here are some of our regular activities, such as visits to the nursing home, events to promote people’s awareness of environmental protection and working as a tourist guide in a world heritage site.

拓展句：Here are some of our regular activities, which are meaningful and educational, such as visits to the nursing home, events to promote people’s awareness of environmental protection and working as a tourist guide in a world heritage site.

【点睛】

[高分句型1] As a member, I do think it is worthwhile to be engaged in volunteering and I’m writing to give you my full support. (运用了that引导的宾语从句，省略了that)

[高分句型2] Once you have decided, please fill in the application form attached and send it to me. (运用了once引导的时间状语从句)

【江苏省南京市第一中学2021-2022学年高三上学期期初考试】你校上周举办了帮助贫困地区留守儿童的云义卖（online charity sale）活动，请你为学校英文校报写一篇活动报道，内容包括：

1. 活动目的；

2. 活动过程：网上展示和销售闲置物品等；

3. 活动意义和参与者感受。

注意：

1. 写作词数应为100词左右；

2. 开头和结尾已给出，不记在字数内。

An online charity sale was held in our school last week.

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【答案】A Possible Version:

An online charity sale was held in our school last week. This activity was aimed at enhancing students’ sense of social responsibility and helping the left-behind children in the poverty-hit area. More than 3,000 people in total, including students, teachers and parents, took an active part in it. The participants displayed and sold the idle items on line. All the money they earned will be donated to those poor children as their tuition fees. The event has achieved a big hit. On the website’s comment board, some participants said that they benefited enormously from the event and some expressed their hope that more illuminating activities like this could be held in the future.

【解析】

本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给学校上周举办的帮助贫困地区留守儿童的云义卖活动写一篇活动报道。

1.词汇积累

目的是：be aimed at=be intended to

提高：enhance→increase

参加：take part in=participate in

获得：achieve→gain

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：More than 3,000 people in total, including students, teachers and parents, took an active part in it.

拓展句：It was more than 3,000 people in total, including students, teachers and parents that took an active part in it.

【点睛】

[高分句型1]All the money they earned will be donated to those poor children as their tuition fees. (运用了省略that引导的限制性定语从句)

[高分句型2] On the website’s comment board, some participants said that they benefited enormously from the event and some expressed their hope that more illuminating activities like this could be held in the future. (第一个that引导宾语从句，第二个that引导同位语从句)

【广东省深圳市七校联合体2022届高三第一次联考试卷8月】假如你是李华，你于3月13日参加了学校学生会组织的植树活动，请你就此事写一篇英文日记。内容包括：

1.活动组织（参加人员、时间、地点）；

2.植树过程；

3.个人感受。

注意

1.写作词数应为80左右；

2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

参考词汇：树苗seedling

March 13. Saturday

Fine

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【答案】       March 13, Saturday                             Fine

Today witnessed a rewarding activity—Tree Planting organized by the Student Union of our school.

Early in the morning, my classmates and I headed for a hill nearby with tools and seedlings. On our arrival, we got down to working together as planned. Some dug the pits and put seedlings in, some filled the pits with earth, and others watered them. Through our joint efforts the hillside was lined with rows of seedlings, bathed in the sunshine.

Exhausted as we were, we tasted the joy of labor.

【解析】

本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一篇英文日记，介绍学校学生会组织的植树活动。

词汇积累

前往：head for→leave for

有益的：rewarding→meaningful

见证：witness→see with one’s own eyes

按计划：as planned →as scheduled

句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：On our arrival, we got down to working together as planned.

拓展句：As soon as we arrived there, we got down to working together as planned.

【点睛】

[高分句型1]  Today witnessed a rewarding activity—Tree Planting organized by the Student Union of our school. (运用了过去分词作后置定语)

[高分句型2] Exhausted as we were, we tasted the joy of labor. (运用了让步状语从句的倒装句式

【广东省新高考2022届新高三省级8月份摸底联考】假定你是某国际学校的学生会主席李华，4月23日“世界读书日”即将来临，请你用英语写一封倡议书。要点包括：

1. 阅读的好处；

2. 如何培养良好的阅读习惯；

3. 号召同学们多读书，读好书。

注意：

1. 写作词数应为80左右；

2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

Dear fellow students,

__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

【答案】One possible version:

Dear fellow students,

In order to build a scholarly campus, I’ m writing to call on everyone to spend more time in reading books.

Reading not only provides knowledge for us, but also inspires us to become better individuals. Each of us should form a good habit of reading. First, we should make good use of our spare time to read. Besides, a reading plan is favorable for us to read persistently.

Read more books and read good books. Choose books wisely and absorb the essence from the books. Let’s take action now.

【解析】

本文是一篇应用文，在“世界读书日”即将来临，用英语写一封倡议书来呼吁大家多读书，读好书。

1.词汇积累

建设：build→construct

培养：form→foster

坚持地：persistently→insistently

号召：call on→appeal to

2.句式拓展

同义句改写

原句：Reading not only provides knowledge for us, but also inspires us to become better individuals.

拓展句：Not only does reading provide knowledge for us, but also reading inspires us to become better individuals.

【点睛】

[高分句型1] Choose books wisely and absorb the essence from the books. (运用了祈使句和并列句)

[高分句型2] In order to build a scholarly campus, I’ m writing to call on everyone to spend more time in reading books. (运用了不定式作目的状语)

【辽宁省铁岭市2022届高三上学期开学考试】假定你是高二学生李华，下周六3月23日晚6:00-8:00你校将在礼堂举办一场融合中西文化元素的音乐会。你的外籍老师Linda非常喜欢音乐，请你发一封email邀请她参加此次活动。内容包括以下要点：

1.发出邀请；2.活动时间和地点；3．活动内容和意义。

Dear Linda，

How are you doing recently?

________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Yours,

Lihua

【答案】One possible version:

Dear Linda，

How are you doing recently? Our school will hold a musical concert next week.I’m writing this letter to invite you to attend it , because I know you have great interest in music.

The concert will be held in our school hall from 6pm.to 8 pm.on March 23 next Saturday.During the concert, we can not only appreciate classical folk music of China and western countries, but some music originally composed by our students.And you will be impressed by the combination of Chinese folk music with western musical instruments.

I believe you will enjoy yourself then.Looking forward to your coming.

Yours,

Lihua

【解析】

本篇书面表达属于应用文。考生是高二学生李华，下周六3月23日晚6:00-8:00考生所在学校将在礼堂举办一场融合中西文化元素的音乐会。考生的外籍老师Linda非常喜欢音乐，请考生发一封email邀请她参加此次活动。内容包括以下要点：1.发出邀请；2.活动时间和地点；3．活动内容和意义。

1词汇积累

参加：join in→ attend

感兴趣：show great interest in →have great interest in

欣赏：enjoy→ appreciate

过得愉快：have a good time→ enjoy yourself

合并简单句

原句：The concert will be held in our school hall from 6pm.to 8 pm. on March 23 next Saturday. During the concert, we can not only appreciate classical folk music of China and western countries, but some music originally composed by our students.

拓展句：The concert will be held in our school hall from 6pm.to 8 pm. on March 23 next Saturday, during which time we can not only appreciate classical folk music of China and western countries, but some music originally composed by our students.

【点睛】

[高分句型1] I’m writing this letter to invite you to attend it, because I know you have great interest in music. (运用了because引导的原因状语从句)

[高分句型2] we can not only appreciate classical folk music of China and western countries, but some music originally composed by our students.(运用了not only ……but also句型以及过去分词作后置定语)

【广东省广州市省实、执信、广雅、六中2022届高三上学期8月四校联考】假定你是李华。北京时间2021年6月17日9时22分，神舟十二号载人飞，请你写一封邮件向同为航天爱好者的英国笔友Mike分享这个消息，内容包括：

1. 神舟十二号载人飞船的历史意义（空间站建造阶段的首次载人飞行任务、三名航天员将完成为期三个月的天和核心舱驻留等）；

2. 你的感想。

参考词汇： 神舟十二号飞船 Shenzhou XII spacecraft；

空间站建设阶段 space station construction phase;

天和核心舱 Tianhe core module

注意：

1. 写作词数应为80左右；

2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

Dear Mike,

______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

【答案】One possible version:

Dear Mike,

As a space enthusiast like you, I really can’t wait to share with you a most stirring news that China’s Shenzhou XII spacecraft was launched into space successfully at 9:22 am.,June 17,2021 Beijing time.

The successful launch of Shenzhou XII spacecraft is without doubt of great historic significance. Not only does it mark the first manned spaceflight during China’s space station construction phase,carrying three astronauts to Tianhe core module,where they are to complete a three-month mission, but it also plays a critical role in testing the technologies and equipment for the construction of the space station.

It is this groundbreaking achievement that makes me realize that China is always undertaking its responsibility in fulfilling the global dream of exploring the space,which is what I am proud of. And I’m eagerly expecting more good news about the Shenzhou XII program.

Looking forward to your reply.

Yours, 

Li Hua

【解析】

本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给英国笔友Mike写封信，与他分享神舟十二号载人飞船的消息。

1.词汇积累

激动人心的：exciting→stirring

意义：meaning→significance

完成：finish→complete

决定性的：decisive→critical

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：The successful launch of Shenzhou XII spacecraft is without doubt of great historic significance.

拓展句：Shenzhou XII spacecraft was lanuched successfully，which is without doubt of great historic significance.

【点睛】

[高分句型1]Not only does it mark the first manned spaceflight during China’s space station construction phase,carrying three astronauts to Tianhe core module,where they are to complete a three-month mission, but it also plays a critical role in testing the technologies and equipment for the construction of the space station.（Not only置于句首的倒装句；where引导的定语从句）

[高分句型2] It is this groundbreaking achievement that makes me realize that China is always undertaking its responsibility in fulfilling the global dream of exploring the space,which is what I am proud of.（强调句；which引导的定语从句）

【重庆市第八中学2022届高三英语开学摸底】假如你是李华，你校的图书馆正准备进行改造优化，现向全校师生征求改造建议。请你给图书馆管理员写一封建议信，内容包括：

1.丰富藏书数量，提供多种服务；

2.改造硬件设施，优化阅读体验；

3.其他建议（至少一条）。

注意：

1.词数80左右；

2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Dear Sir or Madam,

I am Li Hua, a student in our school.

________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Hopefully my ideas will be helpful.

Yours,

Li Hua

【答案】Possible version:

Dear Sir or Madam,

I am Li Hua, a student in our school. I am rather willing to offer you my suggestions for perfecting our library and increasing its popularity.

Firstly, it benefits a lot to diversify the categories of books and organize more reading-related lectures, thus enabling students to make proper choices and stimulate our reading interest. Secondly, more spacious room along with comfortable seats should be designed to provide better reading experience. Also, why not hold meaningful activities like donating second-hand books from students for the children in poverty-stricken areas, which can greatly reduce the degree to which resources are wasted.

Hopefully my ideas will be helpful.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生对于你校的图书馆正准备进行改造优化给图书馆管理员写一封建议信。

1.词汇积累

愿意：be ready to → be willing to

很：very → rather

选择：option → choice

此外：besides → also

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：Firstly, it benefits a lot to diversify the categories of books and organize more reading-related lectures, thus enabling students to make proper choices and stimulate our reading interest.

拓展句：Firstly, it benefits a lot to diversify the categories of books and organize more reading-related lectures, which enables students to make proper choices and stimulate our reading interest.

【点睛】

[高分句型1] Firstly, it benefits a lot to diversify the categories of books and organize more reading-related lectures, thus enabling students to make proper choices and stimulate our reading interest. (这句话运用了现在分词作状语的结构)

[高分句型2] Also, why not hold meaningful activities like donating second-hand books from students for the children in poverty-stricken areas, which can greatly reduce the degree to which resources are wasted. (这句话运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)

【湖南省长沙市第一中学2022届高三上学期月考卷（一）】你学校的英文校报正在征稿，要求为以下插图配一篇短文。 请为校报撰稿，其内容应包括：

1.图片的内容；

2.图片表达的含义。

注意:1.写作词数应为80左右；

2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

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【答案】one possible version:

As we can see in the picture, a boy is standing high on top of many books looking far into the distance.

Such a picture reminds me of a Chinese poem “to enjoy a grander sight, climb to a greater height”. Like the steps to the greater height, books can help broaden our horizons and improve our understanding of the world. The more books we read, the more knowledge we will gain, the more learned we will be, and the broader horizons we will have. So pick up books and read! A more exciting world is waiting for us to explore.

【解析】

本篇书面表达属于图画作文，要求作者根据插图配一篇短文为校报撰稿。

1.词汇积累

提醒某人某事：warn sb. of sth. → remind sb. of sth.

获得：get→ gain

拿起：take up→ pick up

令人兴奋的：thrilling→ exciting

2.句式拓展

同义句转换

原句：Like the steps to the greater height, books can help broaden our horizons and improve our understanding of the world.

拓展句：Like the steps to the greater height, not only can books help broaden our horizons but also improve our understanding of the world.

【点睛】

[高分句型1] As we can see in the picture, a boy is standing high on top of many books looking far into the distance.（运用了由as引导的定语从句）

[高分句型2] The more books we read, the more knowledge we will gain, the more learned we will be, and the broader horizons we will have.（运用了the+比较级…，the+比较级…句式）

【湖南省长沙市雅礼中学2021-2022学年高三上学期入学考试】假定你是李华两周前你从网上买了一双耐克鞋，昨天才到货，且鞋子看起来旧，气味难闻。请就此向网店客服写邮件投诉。要点如下：

1.介绍购物情况；

2.反映存在问题，

3.提出解决方案。

注意：1.写作词数应为80左右(开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)；

2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位查作答。

参考词汇：耐克鞋Nike shoes

Dear sir/madam,

I am one of your customers.

_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Sincerely,

Li Hua

【答案】Dear sir/madam,

I am one of your customers. I ordered two pairs of Nike shoes on your website one month ago, but I didn't receive them until today.

Much to my disappointment, the shoes were so poorly packed up that the cover of them was torn. To make matters worse, they are of the wrong size. I am sorry to have received such poor service, and I believe I have the very right to ask you to deal with this problem. I hope that you either return my money or deliver new ones to me. What is more, I'd like to be informed of the process of your dealing with my complaint.

Looking forward to your reply.

Sincerely,

Li Hua

本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生就购物遇到的问题给网店客服写邮件投诉。

【详解】

1.词汇积累

收到：get→receive

坏了的：broken→torn

处理：solve→deal with

告知某人：let sb. know→inform sb.

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：I am one of your customers.

拓展句：I am one of your customers, who is writing you a complaint.

【点睛】

[高分句型1] Much to my disappointment, the shoes were so poorly packed up that the cover of them was torn. (运用了so…that…句型)

[高分句型2] I hope that you either return my money or deliver new ones to me. (运用了that引导的宾语从句)