专题06 应用文写作-【大题小卷】冲刺2022年高考英语大题限时集训（新高考专用）(32537810)

专题06  应用文写作-【大题小卷】冲刺2022年高考英语大题

限时集训（解析版）

应用文写作作为在高考英语中考查最普遍的写作文体，主要是考察考生对于生活中遇到的实际问题的反应，以及对于英语最真实的运用能力。高考应用文写作的基本要求，可以概括为八个字：直接、简洁、合体、得当。“直接”是针对内容的；“简洁”是针对语言的；“合体”是针对类型的；“得当”是针对语气的。

一、邀请信

例1 假定你是李华，你校将在每周进行中国民族舞蹈培训。请你用英语给你班的美国交换生Mike写一封邮件，告诉他相关信息。内容包括：

1. 介绍培训的相关安排;

2. 说明培训的目的;

3. 表达希望对方参加的愿望。

注意：

1. 词数80左右；

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

参考词汇：中国民族舞Chinese national dance，指导guidance

Dear Mike,

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Yours,

Li Hua

【答案】Dear Mike,

I’m writing to share a piece of good news with you.

Our school will hold the Chinese national dance training class for exchange students on weekends, which will start from September 22nd and end on December 22nd, lasting three months. Some famous dancing teachers will offer basic guidance. The reason why our school holds this training class is that foreign students should know more about Chinese culture in order to learn Chinese well, and Chinese national dance plays an important role in Chinese culture.

I do hope you’ll take this chance. Join the training class and know more about China!

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给美国交换生Mike写一封邮件，告诉他关于学校即将进行中国民族舞蹈培训的相关信息。

第一步：审题

体裁：应用文

时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时和一般将来时。

结构：三段式

第一段写来信目的；第二段写培训的相关信息及目的；第三段表达希望对方参加的愿望。

要求：

1. 介绍培训的相关安排;

2. 说明培训的目的;

3. 表达希望对方参加的愿望。

第二步:列提纲 (重点词组)

share sth. with sb., a piece of good news, Chinese national dance, basic guidance, play an important role in sth.

第三步：连词成句

1. I’m writing to share a piece of good news with you.

2. Our school will hold the Chinese national dance training class for exchange students on weekends.

3. The class will start from September 22nd and end on December 22nd.

4. The class will last three months.

5. Some famous dancing teachers will offer basic guidance.

6. Foreign students should know more about Chinese culture in order to learn Chinese well.

7. Chinese national dance plays an important role in Chinese culture.

8. I do hope you’ll take this chance.

9. Join the training class and know more about China!

根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第四步：连句成篇(衔接词)

1.表并列补充关系：and

2.表因果关系：The reason why…is that…

3.表目的关系：in order to

连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，确保句式的多样性。

[高分句型1] Our school will hold the Chinese national dance training class for exchange students on weekends, which will start from September 22nd and end on December 22nd, lasting three months.该句是一个复合句。which引导非限制性定语从句，先行词是the Chinese national dance training class。

[高分句型2] The reason why our school holds this training class is that foreign students should know more about Chinese culture in order to learn Chinese well, and Chinese national dance plays an important role in Chinese culture.该句中why引导定语从句修饰reason，that引导表语从句，in order to作目的状语。

二、道歉信

例1 假定你是李华，原定周六你要去拜访以前的班主任张老师，可是由于某种原因你不能前往了。请给他写一封电子邮件，向他说明取消此次拜访的情况，内容包括：

1. 表示歉意；

2. 陈述原因；

3. 另约时间。

注意：1. 次数80左右；

2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Dear Mr. Zhang,

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Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【答案】

Dear Mr. Zhang,

I am excessively sorry for being unable to visit you this Saturday afternoon because I will be attending a lecture about garbage classification on behalf of my class at that time. So important is the lecture that I can’t afford my absence from it. Consequently, I have to cancel my visit to you. I would appreciate it if you could accept my apology. I will visit you on Sunday morning if it is convenient to you.

I’m looking forward to your reply.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【解析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一封取消拜访信。假定你是李华，原定周六你要去拜访以前的班主任张老师，可是由于某种原因你不能前往了，请写邮件说明取消此次拜访的情况。写作时首先进行道歉，再详细说明无法赴约的理由，最后提出另约时间。需侧重注意语气和词汇的选用。文章条理清晰，理由描述恰当，态度诚恳，行文流畅。准确地使用了较多高级句式，如：I am excessively sorry for being unable to visit you this Saturday afternoon because I will be attending a lecture about garbage classification on behalf of my class at that time.这句使用了because引导原因状语从句；So important is the lecture that I can't afford my absence from it.这句使用了so…that(太……以至于)的倒装句式引导结果状语从句；以及I will visit you on Sunday morning if it is convenient to you.这句使用if引导条件状语从句。同时运用高档词汇，例如 excessively sorry；garbage classification；on behalf of sb；can’t afford；absence；Consequently；convenient等。范文内容符合题目要求，原因合理，运用的语言和句式合乎英语的表达规范，是一篇值得参考的作文。

三、通知

假定你是李华，你校下周二将邀请 Green 教授做一个关于西方礼仪的讲座。请你以学生会的名义用英文写一份通知，内容包括：

1.讲座的主题；

2.时间和地点；

3.听讲座时的注意事项。

参考词汇：西方礼仪 western etiquette

Notice

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The Students’ Union

【答案】                                 

Notice

There will be a lecture on western etiquette by Professor Green, who comes from a famous British university. The lecture will be given in the Meeting Hall from 2:00 to 4:00 in the afternoon next Tuesday. All the students in our school are to attend it. Everyone must keep quiet and make notes while listening to the lecture attentively. After the lecture, Professor Green will answer the questions raised by the teachers and students. Be sure not to be late.

The Students' Union

【解析】本篇书面表达是应用文，要求写一则通知。第1步：根据提示可知，假定你是李华，你校下周二将邀请 Green 教授做一个关于西方礼仪的讲座。请你以学生会的名义用英文写一份通知，内容包括：1.讲座的主题；2.时间和地点；3.听讲座时的注意事项。第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词(组)：western etiquette (西方礼仪)；come from(来自)；attend(参加)；keep quiet(保持安静)；make notes(做笔记)；listen to(听)；be sure not to do sth.(一定不要做某事)；be late(迟到)等。第3步：根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。此处文章主要应用一般将来时。第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。

应用文写作必须做到的几点：

1. 认真审题：看一下文章要求的题材、时态、人称以及写作要点。
2. 仔细琢磨文章的开头和结尾句：做到语气比较地道，没有中式英语的感觉。
3. 美化文章中的句子：多使用从句，尤其是定语从句、状语从句或者名词性从句，也可以使用非谓语动词结构、强调句、倒装句、虚拟语气等等，句式用的原则是在好不在多。
4. 写完后仔细检查：看有没有语法、单词拼写、标点符号等方面的错误，及时修正再进行誊写。

假定你是李华。上周日你校邀请本市环保专家王明为全校师生做了一场关于垃圾分类的演讲，大家深有启发。请你就本次活动给校园英语报写一篇报道。内容包括:

1. 活动时间和地点；

2. 活动内容；

3. 活动的反响和意义。

垃圾分类 garbage classification

注意:

1、词数:80 左右；

2、可以适当加入细节，以使行文流畅。

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【答案】

Last Sunday I witnessed a wonderful speech at our school lecture hall delivered by Mr. Wang, a specialist in Garbage classification who made great contributions to popularizing the new policy. He explained the policy in detail and encouraged each individual to do his part. All the teachers and students learned a lot from the speech and had a new perspective of garbage classification. At the end of his speech, we showed our respect for Mr. Wang with applause. The speech was also warmly received outside our school especially students’ parents.

【解析】

本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生以李华的身份就环保专家王明所做的关于垃圾分类的演讲写一篇报道。

第一步：审题

体裁：应用文

时态：根据提示，时态为一般过去时。

结构：总分法

总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。

要求：

1. 介绍活动时间和地点；

2. 说明活动内容；

3. 表达活动的反响和意义。

第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）

witness a wonderful speech；delivered by；make great contributions；popularize the new policy；in detail，do his part；have a new perspective of garbage classification；at the end of

第三步：连词成句

1. Last Sunday I witnessed a wonderful speech at our school lecture hall delivered by Mr. Wang, a specialist in Garbage classification who made great contributions to popularizing the new policy.

2. He explained the policy in detail and encouraged each individual to do his part.

3. The speech was also warmly received outside our school especially students’ parents.

根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）

表文章结构顺序：At the end of...

连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。

[高分句型1] Last Sunday I witnessed a wonderful speech at our school lecture hall delivered by Mr. Wang, a specialist in Garbage classification who made great contributions to popularizing the new policy. （含有who引导的限制性定语从句）

[高分句型2] The speech was also warmly received outside our school especially students’ parents.（含有被动语态）

1.【2021年江苏省无锡市高三英语模拟卷】

61. 假如你是李华，正在美国留学。你计划出去旅游两周，想请当地好友Catherine 帮忙照看你租的房子和你的德国牧羊犬(German Shepherd)。另外，帮忙浇浇花草，拿拿信件和报纸。请你用英文给她写封邮件，内容包括:

1. 写信目的；

2. 具体嘱托；

3. 期待答复。

注意:

1. 词数 80 左右；

2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

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【答案】Dear Catherine,

I wonder if you could do me a favor to attend to my home while I am away for my holiday from Dec.25 to Jan. 7th.

Would you please take the trouble to feed and walk my German Shepherd on a daily basis? Besides it can't be better if you're willing to water the plants at regular intervals. If time permits, please pick up my letters and subscribed newspaper. By the way, the keys are in the mailbox.

I would be greatly grateful to you if you could lend me a helping hand. Looking forward to your early reply.

Yours,

Li Hu

【解析】这篇书面表达是一篇应用文写作。假如你是李华，正在美国留学。你计划出去旅游两周，想请当地好友Catherine 帮忙照看你租的房子和你的德国牧羊犬(German Shepherd)。另外，帮忙浇浇花草，拿拿信件和报纸。请你用英文给她写封邮件。分析可知，应该以第一人称和第二人称为主，一般现在时进行写作。考生要先想好写哪几点，运用合适的语法规则和词汇把各要点都准确表述出来。描述要尽量选择简洁的语言，难点在于选择词汇和句型，可以灵活运用高级词汇和固定短语准确表述。还要用适当的连接词把句子连接起来，这样文章显得更连贯。

2.【2021年江苏省南京市高三英语模拟卷】

46. 行起学生会主席李华，上周你校来了一批英国的交换生，为了帮助他们更好地学习汉语，你校刘老师准备开一个进座，请你根据以下要点写一则书面通知，以使告知交换生。

内容包括：

1. 主讲人、讲座目的：

2. 讲座内容、时间、地点：

3. 注意事项。

注意：

1. 词数80左右：

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

【答案】

Notice

In order to help exchange students have a better command of Chinese,Mr.Liu will give a lecture on the major differences between Chinese and English at the lecture hall this evening.

The lecture,which will last about 2 hours,will start at 6 p.m..It will cover many useful Chinese-learning skills.After the lecture,Mr.Liu will answer your questions on the spot.You are welcome to be present on time.And please don't make noise while listening.

The Students' Union

Aug 20th  ,2020

【解析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，根据要求写一则书面通知。第一步：应用文表达，开头结尾，注意格式规范，根据提示，整篇文章应使用一般时态。第二步：根据提纲依次主讲人、讲座目的；讲座内容、时间、地点；注意事项；内容包含全面，关键词选用合理，如In order to为了，have a better command of更好地掌握，between … and…两者之间，cover many useful Chinese-learning skills.包含很多汉语学习技能，on the spot 在现场.等等。第三步：连词成文，结构衔接得体。

3.【2021年江苏省苏锡常镇四市高三英语模拟卷】

假如你是李华，你校上周举行了主题是“太空”的年度“科学节”活动，持续一周。请你为校英文报写-篇报道，内容包括:

1.活动目的;

2.具体活动;

3.活动反响。

注意:

1.写作词数应为80左右;

2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

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 【答案】

 Science Festival goes off with a bang!

      Our annual school Science Festival finished on Friday and once again it was amazing fun.

    To encourage students to take an interest in space exploration, this year’s theme was “Space”. On Monday afternoon, we attended a lecture about whether life can exist on other planets. In Thursday’s Science Workshop, students tried different experiments with great interest. On Friday afternoon, every class decorated their classroom and designed activities according to the theme of space.

    The festival attracted much interest from students and everyone is looking forward to next year’s ScienceFestival. 

4.【2021年江苏省南通市高三英语模拟卷】

第一节  应用文写作（满分15分）

假定你是李华，上周末你们班在附近社区的老年人活动中心组织了一次义工活动。请你为校英文报写一篇报道，内容包括：

1.陪伴老人，教老人智能手机的生活应用等；

2.活动反响。

注意：

1.写作词汇应为80左右；

2.请按如下格式在答案卡的相应位置作答。

A Significant Voluntary Activity

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【答案】

A Significant Voluntary Activity

Last weekend, our class attended a voluntary activity in a community senior center nearby.

Some of us entertained the elderly by singing Nanyin and doing magic tricks. Others chatted with them. They were overjoyed for our coming and the senior center was full of laughter. Besides, we also taught them how to use smartphones in everyday life, such as showing the health QR code, calling a taxi and making an appointment with the doctor. They were impressed by the convenience technology brings.

The activity is so meaningful that we all feel rewarded and determined to visit them regularly.

1.【2021年全国高考I卷】

52. 假定你是李华。你校计划举办介绍中国传统文化的主题班会，并在英文网站展示。请你写一封邮件给外国朋友Chris，向他了解哪些中国传统文化更吸引外国友人。邮件内容包括：

1.阐明写信事由；

2.征求建议；

3.表示感谢。

注意：

1. 词数100左右；

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

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【答案】Dear Chris,

Word came that our school is going to hold a class meeting whose topic is related to Chinese traditional customs. Because this activity will be presented on the English website, I sincerely want you to offer me some advice.

As far as we know, there is a huge cultural difference between China and the western countries. In order to get more clicks, you’d better tell me which Chinese culture you westerners prefer. What’s more, if I want to decorate my website with some Chinese elements, what should I do? Knowing you are interested in China, I do believe you can help me solve these puzzles.

If possible, you can reply to me as soon as possible. I will take your advice into consideration. I really appreciate your help.

Yours,

Li Hua

2. 【2021年全国高考II卷】

72. 你校将举办英语演讲比赛。请你以Be smart online learners为题写一篇发言稿参赛，内容包括：

1. 分析优势与不足；

2. 提出学习建议。

注意：

1. 词数100左右;

2. 题目和首句已为你写好。

【答案】

Be smart online learners

Network learning has increasingly become an important means for people to acquire knowledge and solve problems.But being smart online learners has its advantages and disadvantages.

 First of all, as smart online learners, we can make full use of the most extensive educational resources to broaden the horizon. Besides, We can take the initiative in our study by ourselves without time and space limit.

 Of course, these disadvantages are as follows.Faced with all kinds of information on the internet, We can't tell the difference between the true and the false, which may be harmful to our study and life. On the other hand, online learning itself has some imperfections, making it difficult for us not to be affected.

In conclusion , we should have a good understanding of its advantages and disadvantages and find a proper way to make our study more efficient.

【解析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生以 Be smart online learners为题写一篇发言稿参赛。

【详解】1. 词汇积累

充分利用：make full use of→ make the most of

扩宽,丰富：broaden→ enrich

各种各样： all kinds of→ varieties of

不完美：imperfection→ defect

2. 句式拓展

合并简单句

原句：In conclusion , we should have a good understanding of its advantages and disadvantages and find a proper way to make our study more efficient.

拓展句：In conclusion , we should have a good understanding of its advantages and disadvantages ， finding a proper way to make our study more efficient.

[高分句型1] Faced with all kinds of information on the internet ,We can't tell the difference between the true and  the false, which may be harmful to our study and life.（非谓语作状语和which引导的非限制性定语从句）

[高分句型2]On the other hand ,online learning itself has some imperfections, making it difficult for us not to be affected.（现在分词作状语）

3. 【2021年新高考I卷】

第一节（满分 15 分）

你校英文报 Youth 正在庆祝创刊十周年。请你写一篇短文投稿，内容包:

1.读报的经历;

2.喜爱的栏目;

3.期望和祝福。

注意:

1.写作词数应为80左右;

2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

【答案】

Dear Editor-in-Chief,

Congratulations on the 10th anniversary of Youth.

I have been a devoted reader since I subscribed to the newspaper. Obsessed with it, I read each issue from cover to cover. It boasts a variety of columns, of which Chinese culture is my favorite. The series of contents not only introduces abundant cultural knowledge but also values the inheritance of brilliant culture and strengthens our cultural confidence.

As a fan of Youth, I recommend that it will be better if it carries some articles about the life of foreign teens and I hope that it will become even more popular.

Sincerely yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

人称∶ 第一人称为主，第二人称为辅

时态∶ 一般现在时为主，一般将来时为辅

文章主体∶

要点一∶

①For the 10th Anniversary of YOUTH, I want to share my reading experience. Youth has

accompanied me for three years during my high school. It involves all topics that senior students

are interested in and leads us to feel the wonderful outside.

②On the occasion of the 10th Anniversary of YOUTH, I would like to share my reading

experience. When I was in high school. YOUTH accompanied me for three years. It covers all

topics of interest to senior students, and guides us to experience the outside world.

要点二∶ ①As a regular reader of YOUTH, I am always absorbed in columns on teenagers,

from which I can get inspiring stories and gain much pleasure from exciting news.

②As a loyal reader of YOUTH, I am often attracted by the wonderful content of the column

for young people, which not only inspires me, but also makes me get pleasure from the exciting

news.

要点三∶ ①I sincerely hope that Youth can make greater progress and attract more readers to

share their stories.

②I sincerely hope that Youth will develop further and attract more readers to interact and

share their stories.

4. 【2021年浙江高考卷】

第一节应用文写作（满分15分）

46. 昨天你参观了学校举办的学生国画作品展。请给校英文报写一篇宣传，内容包括：

1. 展览时间、地点；

2. 观展感受；

3. 推荐观展。

注意：1. 词数80左右；

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

【答案】
     ln order to enrich students’ after-school life ,an exhibition of students' traditional Chinese paintings is being held by our school , which sparks a growing love for traditional art .The exhibition is held on the first floor of the school litrary.Most of the students think highly of this exhibition，which provides a platform for them to explore the beauty of China and experience the charm of Chinese art.
    Through the exhibition, not only can you admire wonderful pictures, but also enable you understand the art of traditional Chinese painting better. The exhibition will last for two weeks,every student is welcome to visit.

【解析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求写一篇关于学校举办的学生国画作品展的宣传稿。

【高分句型1】

an exhibition of students' traditional Chinese paintings is being held by our school , which sparks a growing love for traditional art .本句是which引导的非限制性定语从句。

【高分句型2】

Most of the students think highly of this exhibition，which provides a platform for them to explore the beauty of China and experience the charm of Chinese art.本句是which引导的非限制性定语从句。

【高分句型 3】

 Through the exhibition, not only can you admire wonderful pictures,but also enable you understand the art of traditional Chinese painting better. not only...but also连接的并列句。