2017-2021年北京中考英语真题分类汇编之书面表达(含答案)
展开1.(2021•北京)题目①
北京是一座蕴含着丰富文化的城市,这里的建筑、戏曲、美食、服饰、手工艺品等,都有文化的印记。
假如你是李华,你校英语社团正在开展线上国际交流活动,其公众号计划做关于北京文化的系列推送,现就 "Cultural Symbls f Beijing(北京文化标志)"这一话题在校内收集素材。请你用英语给公众号留言,推荐一个你眼中的北京文化标志,对其作简要介绍,并说明推荐理由。
提示词语:shw,traditinal,lve,treasure,imprtant
提示问题:In yur pinin,what's the cultural symbl f Beijing?
Please describe it.
Why d yu think it can be a symbl?
I'm Li Hua,frm Class 1,Grade 9.
I hpe my idea can be taken.Thanks!
2.(2021•北京)题目②
现实中,大到自然环境和社会环境,小到个人生活和学习,变化无处不在,面对变化,唯有积极适应,才能有所进步和收获。
某英文网站正在开展以"适应变化"为主题的征文活动,假如你是李华,请用英语写一篇短文投稿,谈谈你生活中的一个变化,你是如何应对这个变化的,以及有什么收获。
提示词语:help,enjy,new,challenge,take actin
提示问题:•What is the change that happened in yur life?
•Hw did yu deal with it?
•What have yu learned frm the experience?
There are many changes in a persn's life.
3.(2020•北京)题目②
"不积跬步,无以至千里." 积累,有助于我们达成目标,实现梦想.
某英文网站正在开展以"积累"为主题的征文活动.假如你是李华,请用英语写一篇短文投稿,谈谈你在积累知识方面做过什么,有什么收获.
提示词语:accumulate(积累),read,keep,make prgress
提示问题:●What did yu d t accumulate knwledge?
●What have yu learned frm ding s?
4.(2020•北京)从下面两个题目中任选一题,根据中文和英文提示,完成一篇不少于50词的文段写作.文中已给出内容不计入总词数.所给提示词语仅供选用.请不要写出你的校名和姓名.
题目①
假如你是李华,你不小心把Peter借给你的书弄丢了.为表达歉意,请用英语给他写一封邮件,告知此事,并提出弥补的办法.
提示词语:lse,make up(弥补),buy,send
提示问题:●What happened t the bk?
●What will yu d t make up fr it?
5.(2019•北京)自律,即自我约束,是自我提升的一种途径,有助于我们成长,促使我们不断前行.
某英文网站正在开展以"自律"为主题的征文活动.假如你是李华,请用英语写一篇短文投稿,谈谈为了增强自律意识,你做过什么,以及这样做给你带来的好处.
提示词语: self﹣disciplined(自律的),plan,gal,habit,imprve
提示问题: •What did yu d t be self﹣disciplined?
•What benefits have yu gt frm ding s?
Self﹣discipline plays an imprtant rle in ur life _________.
6.(2019•北京)假如你是李华,你们学校正在开展"安全月"宣传活动,倡议大家制作关于安全教育的主题海报,你们班交换生Peter给你发邮件询问相关事情.请用英语回复一封邮件,告诉他海报上交的时间,并分享你设计海报的一些想法.
提示词语: design,safety rule,careful,prtect,picture
提示问题: When shuld yu hand in the pster?
What wuld yu like t share with Peter abut designing the pster?
Dear Peter,
I'm glad t receive yur email. _________.
If there is anything mre that I can help with, please let me knw.
Yurs,
Li Hua
7.(2018•北京)"静以修身,俭以养德",勤俭节约是中华民族的传统美德,无论生活富足与否,我们都应该提倡节俭,拒绝浪费.
某英文网站在开展以"节约是美德"为主题的征文活动,假如你是李华,请用英语写一篇短文投稿.谈谈生活中你是怎么做的,以及这样做的意义.
提示词语:thrifty(节约的),save,turn ff,mney,virtue(美德)
提示问题:•What d yu d in yur daily life?
•Why d yu d s?
It's ne f ur traditinal virtues t be thrifty.________________.
8.(2018•北京)假如你是李华,你们学校要举办一场关于京剧的讲座,你打算邀请你们班交换生Peter参加,请用英语写一封电子邮件,告诉他讲座时间和地点以及需要做什么准备.
提示词语:lecture(讲座),invite,infrmatin,questin,nline
提示问题:•When and where will yu have the lecture?
•What d yu advise Peter t prepare fr it?
Dear Peter,
Hw is it ging?
There'll be a lecture n Peking Opera in ur schl.
If there is anything that I can d,please let me knw.
Yurs,
LiHua
9.(2017•北京)宽容是一种美德.人与人之间难免会有磕磕绊绊.面对矛盾,多一份包容和谅解,生活就会多一缕阳光.
某英文网站正在开展以"包容、谅解"为主题的征文活动.假如你是李华,请用英语写一篇短文投稿,谈谈生活中你原谅他人的一次经历,主要内容包括:你们之间发生了什么,你为什么原谅对方,以及原谅对方之后的感受.
提示词语:hurt,realize,frgive(原谅),happy
提示问题:What happened between yu and him/her?
Why did yu decide t frgive him/her?
Hw did yu feel after frgiving him/her?
I still remember what happened between.
_____.
10.(2017•北京)从下面两个题目中任选一题,根据中文和英文提示,完成一篇不少于50 词的文段写作.文中已给出内容不计入总词数.所给提示词语仅供选用.请不要写出你的校名和姓名.
题目①
假如你是李华,正在美国参加一个交换生项目.今天下午你应邀和朋友Jim 一家外出,请用英语给接待家庭的妈妈Mrs.Smith 写一个留言条,告诉她你们要去哪里,去做什么,以及你回家的时间和方式.
提示词语:park,mvie theater,g bating,watch a mvie
提示问题:Where are yu ging?
What are yu ging t d?
When and hw will yu get hme?
Dear Mrs.Smith,
My friend Jim asks me t g ut with his family this afternn.
Li Hua.
2017-2021年北京中考英语真题分类汇编之书面表达
参考答案与试题解析
一.书面表达(共10小题)
1.(2021•北京)题目①
北京是一座蕴含着丰富文化的城市,这里的建筑、戏曲、美食、服饰、手工艺品等,都有文化的印记。
假如你是李华,你校英语社团正在开展线上国际交流活动,其公众号计划做关于北京文化的系列推送,现就 "Cultural Symbls f Beijing(北京文化标志)"这一话题在校内收集素材。请你用英语给公众号留言,推荐一个你眼中的北京文化标志,对其作简要介绍,并说明推荐理由。
提示词语:shw,traditinal,lve,treasure,imprtant
提示问题:In yur pinin,what's the cultural symbl f Beijing?
Please describe it.
Why d yu think it can be a symbl?
I'm Li Hua,frm Class 1,Grade 9.
I hpe my idea can be taken.Thanks!
【考点】提纲作文.
【分析】【高分句型一】
I believe that Jingju is a cultural symbl f Beijing .我相信京剧是北京的文化象征。宾语从句
【高分句型二】
That's why I think Jingju can be a cultural symbl f Beijing.
这就是为什么我认为京剧可以成为北京的文化象征。表语从句
【解答】I'm Li Hua.frm Class 1,Grade 9.I believe that Jingju is a cultural symbl f Beijing .Jingju tells time﹣hnred stries thrugh singing and mvements,shwing us what life was like in the past.The perfrmers are in beautiful clthes and with clrful faces.【高分句型一】
Jingju is a traditinal art frm lved by peple f all ages.Besides,as a natinal treasure,it plays an imprtant rle in Chinese culture.That's why I think Jingju can be a cultural symbl f Beijing.【高分句型二】
I hpe my idea can be taken.Thanks!
【点评】这是一篇提纲作文,题目要求围绕提示内容写作,命题既有限制又给予学生发挥的空间。在写作中要综合运用所学知识,适当运用连词、副词等进行过渡。
2.(2021•北京)题目②
现实中,大到自然环境和社会环境,小到个人生活和学习,变化无处不在,面对变化,唯有积极适应,才能有所进步和收获。
某英文网站正在开展以"适应变化"为主题的征文活动,假如你是李华,请用英语写一篇短文投稿,谈谈你生活中的一个变化,你是如何应对这个变化的,以及有什么收获。
提示词语:help,enjy,new,challenge,take actin
提示问题:•What is the change that happened in yur life?
•Hw did yu deal with it?
•What have yu learned frm the experience?
There are many changes in a persn's life.
【考点】提纲作文.
【分析】【高分句型一】
When I entered middle schl,I felt lnely.当我进入中学时,我感到孤独。when引导时间状语从句
【高分句型二】
When change cmes,we shuld face it and take actin.当变化来临时,我们应该面对它并采取行动。when引导时间状语从句
【解答】There are many changes in a persn's life.When I entered middle schl,I felt lnely.【高分句型一】(什么变化)I missed my ld friends,but I knew I had t fit in.I ffered help t my class,jined in the after﹣schl activities and invited my classmates t my birthday party.Gradually,I made sme friends and enjyed the cmpany f my new classmates.(怎么面对的)
Frm this experience,I get t knw change brings challenges as well as pprtunities.When change cmes,we shuld face it and take actin.【高分句型二】(感受)
【点评】这是一篇提纲作文,题目要求围绕提示内容写作,命题既有限制又给予学生发挥的空间。在写作中要综合运用所学知识,适当运用连词、副词等进行过渡。
3.(2020•北京)题目②
"不积跬步,无以至千里." 积累,有助于我们达成目标,实现梦想.
某英文网站正在开展以"积累"为主题的征文活动.假如你是李华,请用英语写一篇短文投稿,谈谈你在积累知识方面做过什么,有什么收获.
提示词语:accumulate(积累),read,keep,make prgress
提示问题:●What did yu d t accumulate knwledge?
●What have yu learned frm ding s?
【考点】提纲作文.
【分析】【高分句型一】
First f all, I attentively listened t the teachers, parents, and the thers wh culd prvide me with much knwledge, cnsidering that it was ne f the mst effective ways t enrich myself. 首先,我认真地听老师、家长和其他可以给我提供很多知识的人讲,认为这是最有效的充实自己的方法之一.
wh引导的定语从句;that引导的宾语从句.
【高分句型二】
S I have learned that nly by gaining knwledge step by step can we achieve ur gal and realize ur dream. 所以我明白了只有一步一步地获取知识,我们才能实现我们的目标和梦想.
that引导的宾语从句;以nly by开头的倒装句.
【解答】Withut accumulating, we can hardly achieve anything. (点题)As fr me, I have taken lts f measures t accumulate knwledge. First f all, I attentively listened t the teachers, parents, and the thers wh culd prvide me with much knwledge, cnsidering that it was ne f the mst effective ways t enrich myself.【高分句型一】 In the secnd place, I used t bserve smething carefully and tk nte at the same time s that I wuld nt miss anything imprtant. Last but nt least, when having spare time, I chse t read varius bks and reviewed what I had gained regularly.(如何积累知识的)
In a wrd, I have learned a lt during the prcess f accumulating knwledge. Just as an ld saying ges, Rme was nt built in ne day. That is t say, ne cannt succeed withut persistent accumulatin. S I have learned that nly by gaining knwledge step by step can we achieve ur gal and realize ur dream.【高分句型二】 In the future, I will cntinue t keep accumulating knwledge and make greater prgress.(学到了什么)
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达,能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等,清楚连贯地表达自己的思想,进而完成写作任务.
4.(2020•北京)从下面两个题目中任选一题,根据中文和英文提示,完成一篇不少于50词的文段写作.文中已给出内容不计入总词数.所给提示词语仅供选用.请不要写出你的校名和姓名.
题目①
假如你是李华,你不小心把Peter借给你的书弄丢了.为表达歉意,请用英语给他写一封邮件,告知此事,并提出弥补的办法.
提示词语:lse,make up(弥补),buy,send
提示问题:●What happened t the bk?
●What will yu d t make up fr it?
【考点】提纲作文.
【分析】【高分句型一】
Unfrtunately, I wn't make it because I lst it by accident. 不幸的是,我做不到,因为我不小心弄丢了它.
because引导的原因状语从句.
【高分句型二】
Unexpectedly, when I went back n that afternn, the bk was nt where it had been befre. 那天下午我回去的时候,没想到书不在原来的地方了.
when引导的时间状语从句;where引导的表语从句.
【解答】Dear Peter,
Hw are yu getting n? I'm writing this email t say srry.(写信目的)Recently,I planned t return the bk that yu lent t me. Unfrtunately, I wn't make it because I lst it by accident.【高分句型一】 I tk several bks t the park nearby t read last Saturday mrning. After finishing reading, I hurried hme withut putting the bk int my bag. Unexpectedly, when I went back n that afternn, the bk was nt where it had been befre.【高分句型二】 I searched and searched but failed t find it. (发生了什么)
Hw I wish I wuld give it back t yu! Hwever, I have n chice but t break the bad news t yu. I really hpe t make up fr yur lss and have bught the same bk nline. I will send the bk t yu as sn as pssible.(怎么弥补) Hpefully, yu will understand my situatin and accept my aplgy.
I'm lking frward t yur reply.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达,能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等,清楚连贯地表达自己的思想,进而完成写作任务.
5.(2019•北京)自律,即自我约束,是自我提升的一种途径,有助于我们成长,促使我们不断前行.
某英文网站正在开展以"自律"为主题的征文活动.假如你是李华,请用英语写一篇短文投稿,谈谈为了增强自律意识,你做过什么,以及这样做给你带来的好处.
提示词语: self﹣disciplined(自律的),plan,gal,habit,imprve
提示问题: •What did yu d t be self﹣disciplined?
•What benefits have yu gt frm ding s?
Self﹣discipline plays an imprtant rle in ur life _________.
【考点】提纲作文.
【分析】【高分句型一】
And I culd nt nly respect all my teachers but als get n well with my classmates.
我可以不仅尊重我所有的老师,而且和同学相处得很好.nt nly …but als…不仅…而且…
【高分句型二】
Secndly, my life and my study have been f high efficiency s that a lt f time has been saved.
其次,我的生活和我的学习效率高,所以节省了很多时间.s that引导目的状语从句.
【解答】Self﹣discipline plays an imprtant rle in ur life. (点题)
T be hnest,I am a persn wh is self﹣disciplined. I used t fllw all kinds f rules and hand in the tasks appinted n time at schl. And I culd nt nly respect all my teachers but als get n well with my classmates.【高分句型一】At hme, I was able t balance husewrk and hmewrk. I usually made a plan in advance t make it easier t achieve my gal. After finishing all the task, I develped the habit f getting up early and ging t bed early. In the sciety, I spared n effrt t imprve myself all the time.(如何自律的)
In a wrd, I have benefited a lt frm being self﹣disciplined. First f all, I have had many gd habits,which makes my life easier and mre regular. Secndly, my life and my study have been f high efficiency s that a lt f time has been saved.【高分句型二】 Thirdly, being self﹣disciplined has prepared me fr a better and brighter future. In the future, I will cntinue t be a self﹣disciplined persn.(自律的好处)
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达,能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等,清楚连贯地表达自己的思想,进而完成写作任务.
6.(2019•北京)假如你是李华,你们学校正在开展"安全月"宣传活动,倡议大家制作关于安全教育的主题海报,你们班交换生Peter给你发邮件询问相关事情.请用英语回复一封邮件,告诉他海报上交的时间,并分享你设计海报的一些想法.
提示词语: design,safety rule,careful,prtect,picture
提示问题: When shuld yu hand in the pster?
What wuld yu like t share with Peter abut designing the pster?
Dear Peter,
I'm glad t receive yur email. _________.
If there is anything mre that I can help with, please let me knw.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【考点】提纲作文.
【分析】高分句型一:
First , the basic safety rules are f great imprtance, which shuld be included in yur pster.
首先,基本安全规则非常重要,这应该包括在你的海报里.be f great imprtance非常重要,which shuld be included in yur pster. 非限制性定语从句
高分句型二:
In additin, it is a gd idea fr yu t draw a few pictures n yur pster s as t make it mre lively and acceptable.
另外,为了使之更生动、更可接受,在海报上画几张图片也是好想法.s as t 目的是,为了,make it +adj,make it mre lively and acceptable使之更生动、更可接受
【解答】Dear Peter,
I'm glad t receive yur email.As it is required, yu are suppsed t hand in the pster befre next Friday.(海报上交的时间)
Being yur clse friend, I am extremely willing t share sme ideas abut designing the pster with yu. First , the basic safety rules are f great imprtance, which shuld be included in yur pster. 【高分句型一】Secnd, fllwing the safety rules is s meaningful and crucial that yu had better remind yur readers f its imprtance and advise them t be careful bth in and ut f schl. Third, adding a few suggestins abut safety awareness is necessary. In additin, it is a gd idea fr yu t draw a few pictures n yur pster s as t make it mre lively and acceptable.【高分句型二】(设计海报的一些想法)
If there is anything mre that I can help with, please let me knw.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【点评】在解答写作这类试题时,要根据短文的中心思想考虑如何开头、展开和结尾,设想几个承上启下的连词,将主要句型、关键词语草草记下,形成提纲,写时切忌结构分散,废话连篇,严重跑题.
7.(2018•北京)"静以修身,俭以养德",勤俭节约是中华民族的传统美德,无论生活富足与否,我们都应该提倡节俭,拒绝浪费.
某英文网站在开展以"节约是美德"为主题的征文活动,假如你是李华,请用英语写一篇短文投稿.谈谈生活中你是怎么做的,以及这样做的意义.
提示词语:thrifty(节约的),save,turn ff,mney,virtue(美德)
提示问题:•What d yu d in yur daily life?
•Why d yu d s?
It's ne f ur traditinal virtues t be thrifty.________________.
【考点】提纲作文.
【分析】高分句型:
It's a gd idea t start n in ur daily life.在我们的日常生活中提倡它是个好主意.这里It's a gd idea t d sth表示做某事是一个好主意.
I think everyne shuld take actins t stick t this virtue.我认为每个人都应该采取行动来坚持这一美德.这里think后面跟的是一个宾语从句.
【解答】It's ne f ur traditinal virtues t be thrifty.Being thrifty is a gd virtue which has been passed dwn frm generatin t generatin. It's a gd idea t start n in ur daily life(高分句型).(提出话题:节约是美德 )
First f all , I cnstantly check the lights and the taps t make sure that they are ff when leaving the huse , Besides, never have I wasted any fd, what's mre, I dn't spend t much mney n unnecessary things and save mney regularly.(介绍在日常生活中做了什么)
The reasn why I d s is that I want t make a difference t my life, As the ld saving ges, "Waste nt, want nt"I make up my mind t be thrifty as much as pssible. I think everyne shuld take actins t stick t this virtue(高分句型).(论述这样做的原因)
【点评】本篇为议论文话题作文,主题为"节约是美德",考生需要从两个方面作答,第一个方面是介绍日常生活中你都做了什么?第二个方面 你为什么这样做?
8.(2018•北京)假如你是李华,你们学校要举办一场关于京剧的讲座,你打算邀请你们班交换生Peter参加,请用英语写一封电子邮件,告诉他讲座时间和地点以及需要做什么准备.
提示词语:lecture(讲座),invite,infrmatin,questin,nline
提示问题:•When and where will yu have the lecture?
•What d yu advise Peter t prepare fr it?
Dear Peter,
Hw is it ging?
There'll be a lecture n Peking Opera in ur schl. The Peking Opera will start at 10:00 this Friday mrning in the schl hall.I am writing t invite yu t take part in the meaningful lecture.
In the lecture ,we can nt nly get sme useful infrmatin abut the Peking Opera,but als get clse t the traditinal Chinese culture,which can benefit us a lt.
There are sme suggestins fr yu t prepare fr it.First f all,remember t be there n time,what's mre,dn't frget t bring a camera with yu ,which can recrd the precius mment,last but nt least,it's a glden chance fr yu t cme up with sme questins that yu are willing t learn abut.
If there is anything that I can d,please let me knw.
Yurs,
LiHua
【考点】提纲作文.
【分析】高分句型:
I am writing t invite yu t take part in the meaningful lecture.我写信是想邀请你参加这个有意义的演讲.这里invite sb t d sth表示邀请某人做某事.
If there is anything that I can d please let me knw.如果有什么我能做的,请告诉我.这里let sb d sth表示让某人做某事.
【解答】Dear Peter,
Hw is it ging?
There'll be a lecture n Peking Opera in ur schl.(引出话题)The Peking Opera will start at 10:00 this Friday mrning in the schl hall.I am writing t invite yu t take part in the meaningful lecture.(高分句型)(讲座时间和地点)
In the lecture ,we can nt nly get sme useful infrmatin abut the Peking pera ,but als get clse t the traditinal Chinese culture,which can benefit us a lt.
There are sme suggestins fr yu t prepare fr it.First f all,remember t be there n time,what's mre,dn't frget t bring a camera with yu ,which can recrd the precius mment,last but nt least,it's a glden chance fr yu t cme up with sme questins that yu are willing t learn abut.(需要做的准备)
If there is anything that I can d ,please let me knw.(高分句型)
Yurs,
Li Hua
【点评】在解答写作这类试题时,要根据短文的中心思想考虑如何开头、展开和结尾,设想几个承上启下的连词,将主要句型、关键词语草草记下,形成提纲,写时切忌结构分散,废话连篇,严重跑题.
9.(2017•北京)宽容是一种美德.人与人之间难免会有磕磕绊绊.面对矛盾,多一份包容和谅解,生活就会多一缕阳光.
某英文网站正在开展以"包容、谅解"为主题的征文活动.假如你是李华,请用英语写一篇短文投稿,谈谈生活中你原谅他人的一次经历,主要内容包括:你们之间发生了什么,你为什么原谅对方,以及原谅对方之后的感受.
提示词语:hurt,realize,frgive(原谅),happy
提示问题:What happened between yu and him/her?
Why did yu decide t frgive him/her?
Hw did yu feel after frgiving him/her?
I still remember what happened between.
_____.
【考点】提纲作文.
【分析】高分句型:
句型一:
My father bught it fr me last year,and I like it very much.去年我爸爸给我买的,我非常喜欢它.
buy sth fr sb为某人买某物
句型二:
Keeping smething unpleasant in mind des n gd t us.记住一些不愉快对我们没有好处.
keep sth in mind记住
des n gd t sb对某人没有好处
【解答】Yesterday,I had a fight with my friend Tm.He tk away my pen withut my agreement.(我们之间发生的事)My father bught it fr me last year,and I like it very much.【高分句型一】His behavir hurt me.I was very angry.Fr his srry,he wrte a card:"Srry,please frgive me".He felt ashamed fr what he d.At last I realised that I was t stingy.I chse t frgive him.(我为什么原谅他)He was very happy fr my frgiveness.I was very happy,t.(我的感受)Thrugh this matter,we became gd friends.
As the Chinese ld saying ges"T err is human".In ur whle lng life,I believe,nbdy can make n mistakes.Children may brke bwls,students may cheat r d smething against the teacher,and grwn﹣ups may d smething wrng n their wrk r even smething against the law.Keeping smething unpleasant in mind des n gd t us.【高分句型二】Letting the unhappy matters g brings happiness and pleasure back t ur life.(建议)
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达,能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等,清楚连贯地表达自己的思想,进而完成写作任务.
10.(2017•北京)从下面两个题目中任选一题,根据中文和英文提示,完成一篇不少于50 词的文段写作.文中已给出内容不计入总词数.所给提示词语仅供选用.请不要写出你的校名和姓名.
题目①
假如你是李华,正在美国参加一个交换生项目.今天下午你应邀和朋友Jim 一家外出,请用英语给接待家庭的妈妈Mrs.Smith 写一个留言条,告诉她你们要去哪里,去做什么,以及你回家的时间和方式.
提示词语:park,mvie theater,g bating,watch a mvie
提示问题:Where are yu ging?
What are yu ging t d?
When and hw will yu get hme?
Dear Mrs.Smith,
My friend Jim asks me t g ut with his family this afternn.
Li Hua.
【考点】提纲作文.
【分析】高分句型:
句型一:
Finally,we are ging t g bating in the lake.最后,我们在湖里划船.
be ging t d sth 打算做某事
g bating 划船
in the lake在湖里
句型二:
I'm sure t have a lt f fun.我肯定会玩得很开心.
be sure t d sth一定会做某事
have fun玩得开心
a lt f 许多
【解答】Dear Mrs.Smith,
My friend Jim asks me t g ut with his family this afternn. I'm writing t tell yu that we will meet in the park.(在哪见面)Then we will g t the mvie theater t watch a mvie.Finally,we are ging t g bating in the lake.【高分句型一】(做什么)Dn't wrry abut me.We will be back at 6:00 p.m.. Jim's father will send me hme by taxi.(回家时间和方式)I'm sure t have a lt f fun.【高分句型二】Waiting fr my back.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【点评】写作主要考查学生综合运用英语语言的能力,涉及学生的词汇量,正确运用单词的能力,对所学语法的掌握程度,能否按照英语习惯正确表达所要表达的意思的能力等等.
考点卡片
1.提纲作文
【概念】
提纲作文是近几年中考英语书面表达的热点题型.命题者通常把提纲作文与其他常用文体形式(如书信、报道、通知、日记等)有机结合在一起进行考查,使该类书面表达试题综合性越来越强.
1.提纲作文的特点
提纲作文就是把文章的情景和内容要求分成块,以条目的形式列出,请考生据此进行写作.这实际上是对考生思路和文章写作范围所作的明确限定.因此,提纲中所列举的要点要全部涉及到,一个也不能遗漏.
2.思维空间灵活、开放
为了提高文章档次,考生应在保证内容要点齐全的同时进行合理而又紧扣主题的发挥.因此,该类型的书面表达具有一定的灵活性,能较好地体现考生的英语思维能力.
3.提纲作文的写作步骤一般分为:审题,明确文体形式;构思,根据提纲全面构思文章内容,根据内容构思词语和句型结构;写作完稿,根据构思的词语和句型结构,按照合理的顺序和语言要求,连句成文.注意句子间的正确联系,注意词语的丰富和句型的多样.
【写作举例】
假定你们学校英语报社征集以"我最感激的人﹣﹣妈妈"为主题的英语作文,请你根据要求写一篇英语短文,谈谈你的妈妈.
要点:1、简单介绍妈妈.
2、感激妈妈的理由.
3、如何感激.
注意:1、词数100左右.
2、可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯.
3、开头已为你写好,但不计入总词数.
Everyne has a persn he wants t say thank﹣yu t in his
deep heart.I we my great gratitude t my mther. .
案例分析
第一步:审题
本篇书面表达属于提纲类作文,根据提示信息假定你们学校英语报社征集以"我最感激的人﹣﹣妈妈"为主题的英语作文,请你根据要求写一篇英语短文,谈谈你的妈妈, 写作时注意以下几点:一、仔细阅读有关提示,弄清试题提供的所有信息,要点包括:1、简单介绍妈妈. 2、感激妈妈的理由. 3、如何感激. 二、提纲是文章的总体框架,要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象.要依据提示情景或词语,按照一定逻辑关系来写.本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写.三、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态.四.注意使用高级词汇和句式,以增加文章的亮点.
第二步:构思
文章应该按照"总述﹣﹣分述"的结构分为四段段.
第一段:点题,说明要感激的人.
第二段:简单介绍妈妈.
第三段:感激妈妈的理由.
第四段:如何感激.
第三步:完稿
根据要点,按照逻辑顺序重新组织材料,力求拼写正确,行文连贯,连接自然,语言规范,词语丰富,句型多样,语法结构准确无误,表达简明扼要,慎用长难句.
高分范文
Everyne has a persn he wants t say thank﹣yu t in his deep heart.I am very grateful t my mther.
My mther is a primary schl teacher wh graduated frm a nrmal university.(高分句型一)She is a devted mther as well as a kind and patient teacher.(简单介绍妈妈)She takes gd care f me every day,especially this year when I am in Junir Three.She ften cks delicius fd fr me and helps me clean up my rm.
What's mre,she even accmpanies me deep int the night every time I am ding my hmewrk.(高分句型二)Mst imprtant f all,whenever I get upset r lse heart,she will encurage me until I have been cheered up.She always says, "Heaven will always leave a dr pen.As lng as yu wrk hard,yu will definitely succeed."(感激妈妈的理由)
Nw I try my best t study and spend almst all my time n my lessns in rder t get int a gd high schl next year.This is the best way fr me t thank my mther.(如何感激) Withut accumulating,we can hardly achieve anything.__________________________.
Dear Peter,
Hw are yu getting n? I'm writing this email t say srry._____________.
Yurs,
Li Hua
Withut accumulating,we can hardly achieve anything.__________________________.
Dear Peter,
Hw are yu getting n? I'm writing this email t say srry._____________.
Yurs,
Li Hua
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